I'm sooooo sorry that I'm updating this late but I had my reasons. It was a
stupid reason but I didn't really have a choice. Let me explain: My brother
(who is 13 years) threw a knife at me and that's why I locked the door. My
parents came home and they punished me for locking the door even though
there was proof that my bro threw the knife because it was broken in half!
'sigh' then, the exms came and I could't go on the computer anyways so
yeah. Well, now I'm finally updating but I have to nswer the reviewers
first right? This is gonna take a while though...
Xi Na1: Aaaaaaaw, so sweet ^^ thank you. I will ask help if I need some, thanks eh, you're great ^^
Pavchka: Ok, I get it, I won't write anymore raping-scènes unless someone asks me to. Well, thanks for defending me, you're the best...'sigh' I love my reviewers...^^
Kaiiko-chan: I know, poor Kai...but i'm gonna stop the raping-scènes and just torture him, there are lots of other ways...Mwuhahahahahaha "cough".
Bloody Mary: Okay, okay, it was gross, i understand completely! No more rapings unless someone asks me too, don't worry.
Wo-ai-ni-kai-hiwatari: it wasn't that soon after all now was it? Oh well, you can read why in the beginning of this story. Anyways, you might say it's the best but most people just say it's gross but anyways, I'm really glad at least someone liked it ^^
Dragonblade: too bad that i didn't update this chapter as fast as the others right? You thought it was good? Thank you! Someone else who says it's good, I'm so gratefull.
Nights Child: You made me start this day with a big smile. I'm so glad that I have the support of all my reviewers, you are the best, I love you all =^^= don't think i'm psycho okay? Well, here's the update
Keiko: Really, great? Thanks you, well, I never stop writing anyways so yay ^^
Ali1000: Okay, no more rapings. Lolz, but more torture will happen. Thanks you two, you're the best. I'm not that brilliant, just look at my rapport- card and you'll take that words back very quik. Lolz ^^ Over and out.
Charter mage Z: Hey, thanks for the review and for your japanese. Well, it could be handy in...some freaky ways, right? I think...yeah. "cough" I think it's weird...you reviewed chappie two? What's wrong with the other 3? Lolz...anyways, i'll try to spell Rai right but everyone seems to spell it differently...
MasterFranny: * hears you cheering * thank you, thank you very much. ^^ lolz. You don't care? Really? I'm glad to hear that, thanks Franny ^^
Devil-tiger: Wahahahaha, very interesting, thanks for clearing that up to me, I think i'll never, ever forget that ^^ Anyways, thanks for the compliment, it means a lot to me, really, I hope you enjoy this chappie ^^
Lise-lott: Aaaaaaw,; you are so nice ^^ Can I ask you something? Is lise- lott your real name and if it is, are you dutch? Just asking. Well, amazing might sound like you give me too much credit really, i'm not that good, i mean, i've seen better but i'm still proud of my work. Lolz...wahahahahaha * cough * gnorf,gnorf,gnorf (wrong word eh?)
Shingai kai: Thanks for the tip and I will follow your advice. I'll check the story's for sure when I have time, but now, I need to work on this chappie before you all get mad at me right? About my spelling, I did get help so yeah...it's not that great at all...^^
Ellen: All right! 5 reviews at once...let's see...Yeah, right trough his leg, I saw that once you know? Really creepy. And the maid didn't confront him as you might've allready noticed... You like to say DUN DUN DUN a lot, right? Lolz. Yeah, poor kid, evil Boris but hey, he's nuts ^^ And my english...I got help. But yeah, i might be improving a bit though...and yeah, there's Tala but Kai is still the most important character. And Tala....he might get a little...accident later ....DUN DUN DUN DUN! Wahahaha ^^ Yeah, i know it's gross...kids from all over the world told me so. Lolz ^^ anyways, here's the next chapter (without rapings)
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Chapter 6: Endless nights.
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When kai woke up the next morning, he felt as if he had been torn apart. He was cold and he shivered with every breeze that slid trough the tiny cracks in the walls. He looked at his body and saw the bruises, scrathes and the dried blood. He noticed some old toys laying in the other corner of the dungeon and saw how they were covered in blood as well. Kai's hair was full of dust and it was so dark that it was hard to see.
Sometimes, kai saw something move in the dungeon and he knew that he wasn't alone. He heard how a few kids were crying and he smelled the horrible sent of blood. When his eyes were used to the darkness, he saw that the kids in here were still very young. They all still had their clothes on and even though they were bruised, none of them was bruised as badly as Kai. Kai forced himself to sit up and he saw how some of the kids were staring at him with horror in their eyes. He looked at his hands and closed his eyes for a second. He looked even worse than he expected.
He wished that he was still walking around with his aching leg. He wished that he had never seen tala and he even wished that he had never met his team. He always knew they would betrayed him and they had proven that when they left him in the abbey. They couldn't be that stupid to not realize there were terrible things going on there. Kai sighed and tried to smile at the younger kids but they were to affraid to smile back. Kai looked around and noticed that there was a boy sleeping in the cage next to him. He was about his age and he had black hair. He had a big scar across his face and his arms were covered in blood. Even though he was scarred, he was still a nice-looking youngman and kai felt sorry for the boy.
Kai tried to stand up but his legs couldn't carry him. A few girls across the room covered their faces when they saw how Kai tried to stand up. All his bruises were showing and his old wounds weren't looking that good either. They were recovering surprisingly well but they still looked terrible. Kai grabbed a rock and started bangging on the iron bars that blocked his path. He wanted to get out of here as soon as possible but soon enough, he realized that the bars were too strong.
The boy next to him woke up by the echoing sound and looked at the strange boy next to him. He was shocked by the bruises but not scared. He noticed a few tears sparkling in Kai's eyes and he tried to put his hands trough the bars that were avoiding him from going to the other room. He managed to put his hand on kai's back and made him flinch. Kai punched the hand away and backed off to the other side of his cage. When he noticed that the boy was awake he mumbled something like an apoligize for the noise he had made and he looked at the boy's hands that were covered in blood.
The boy looked at kai with worry in his eyes and he sighed. He introduced himself as Anatsaku and was glad to get Kai's name as response. Anatsaku explained that he had been in this abbey almost his entire life. He explained how the punishments and tortures became harder and harder every year. He told Kai that children died every year and that they were scared to even breath the wrong way.
Kai listened Anatsaku's life-story and noticed that it was all a big tragedy. When Anatsaku was ready, kai explained his own life. How his grandfather was running this abbey, how he lived in the abbey long ago and how he escaped. He explained how he became a part of the bladebreakers and how they left him. He explained why he was here and he told Anatsaku what they had done to him this night.
Anatsaku wanted to comfort Kai and he closed his eyes, trying to avoid his tears from falling. He just couldn't imagine how your own grandfather could do something like that to his own grandchild.
Anatsaku knew everyone in the abbey and he introduced kai to every kid in the dungeon. They all got less scared and they started to talk to him. Soon enough, they forgot about his pain and they started to create friendships. Kai was feeling better but was still too hurt to stand up. He didn't really wanna create friendships because he had a hard time trusting anyone but he didn't wanna hurt these kids by saying that he needed no one.
Suddenly, the big, heavy door opened and the talking stopped. A guard came in and walked passed the cages. He stopped with Kai and opened his door. He threw a blaket at him and ordered him to come with him. Next, he opened the door from Anatsaku and pulled him out too. Anatsaku tried to bite him but the guard put a rope around his neck and pulled him with him. Kai was first surprised by this but then, he became his old, lonely self. He wouldn't say a thing, not even look at anyone, he just walked with the guard as if he was a good puppy-dog.
The guard brought them to a room with a big glass wall. Someone was allrady there. Tala was sitting on his knees and he was bleeding badly from his back. He spit some blood on the wall and turned his head to the knew victims. He was shocked when he saw Kai but when he saw the look on the guard's face, he quikly turned his head to the ground again.
Kai just closed his eyes and obeyed every comand. Soon, he was sitting on his knees between Tala and Anatsaku and they had to wait for a few minutes until someone would arrive. The guard left and Kai looked at Tala with concern. But when tala looked back, he quikly looked away. Anatsaku noticed this and sighed. He hoped that kai wouldn't be like this for ever.
"What have they done to you kai?" asked Tala in a soft voice. Kai didn't answer but tears were sparkling in his eyes again. The three boys said nothing anymore and they just waited for their death to come walking trough the door.
Soon, three guards came in. They each held different things and they all walked over to one of the boys. The guard that had to torture Tala, held a small but sharp knife. Kai would be tortured with a whip and Anatsaku with a hammer.
A signal was heard and soon, all three of them started to cry out in pain. Tala was cut in his legs and arms. Kai's back was cut open with the swift slashes of the whip and Anatsaku's fingers were broken with the hammer, one by one.
This went on for the rest of the day, the rest of the weeks, and every day, they changed their weapons. They kept going like this until...
One day, when tala fell down, the guard tried to put him up again, but he didn't succeed. When the boy was turned over, Kai saw how the boy was staring at nothing, not blinking, not crying, not even breathing.
Anatsaku watched this with terror but kai just closed his eyes and tried to hold back his tears. Tala was wrapped in a blanket and thrown between some bags of dirt. They would dump him in a container. All they wanted was to get rid of him, quik.
When this was done, the torture was over for kai. Soon, his team would pick him up again. They sepparated kai from Anatsaku and put Kai in the shower. The water stinged kai's wounds but it felt good to feel the cold water wash all the dirt away.
When kai was clean, they bandaged him with care and dressed him. After this, they put him in a big bed, in one of the biggest rooms of the abbey. The room was completely lit and Kai's eyes hurt from the light.
Boris had been right, the next moring, the bladebreakers arrived to pick up kai. All they could see was that the wounds in his leg were healed, but his invisible bruises weren't discovered so all they could do was bring kai to the hotel with the thought that kai was fealing better, but they didn't know, that they had lost kai's trust.
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Phew. Okay, I did my best so don't hurt me if you hated it.
Please review ^^
Xi Na1: Aaaaaaaw, so sweet ^^ thank you. I will ask help if I need some, thanks eh, you're great ^^
Pavchka: Ok, I get it, I won't write anymore raping-scènes unless someone asks me to. Well, thanks for defending me, you're the best...'sigh' I love my reviewers...^^
Kaiiko-chan: I know, poor Kai...but i'm gonna stop the raping-scènes and just torture him, there are lots of other ways...Mwuhahahahahaha "cough".
Bloody Mary: Okay, okay, it was gross, i understand completely! No more rapings unless someone asks me too, don't worry.
Wo-ai-ni-kai-hiwatari: it wasn't that soon after all now was it? Oh well, you can read why in the beginning of this story. Anyways, you might say it's the best but most people just say it's gross but anyways, I'm really glad at least someone liked it ^^
Dragonblade: too bad that i didn't update this chapter as fast as the others right? You thought it was good? Thank you! Someone else who says it's good, I'm so gratefull.
Nights Child: You made me start this day with a big smile. I'm so glad that I have the support of all my reviewers, you are the best, I love you all =^^= don't think i'm psycho okay? Well, here's the update
Keiko: Really, great? Thanks you, well, I never stop writing anyways so yay ^^
Ali1000: Okay, no more rapings. Lolz, but more torture will happen. Thanks you two, you're the best. I'm not that brilliant, just look at my rapport- card and you'll take that words back very quik. Lolz ^^ Over and out.
Charter mage Z: Hey, thanks for the review and for your japanese. Well, it could be handy in...some freaky ways, right? I think...yeah. "cough" I think it's weird...you reviewed chappie two? What's wrong with the other 3? Lolz...anyways, i'll try to spell Rai right but everyone seems to spell it differently...
MasterFranny: * hears you cheering * thank you, thank you very much. ^^ lolz. You don't care? Really? I'm glad to hear that, thanks Franny ^^
Devil-tiger: Wahahahaha, very interesting, thanks for clearing that up to me, I think i'll never, ever forget that ^^ Anyways, thanks for the compliment, it means a lot to me, really, I hope you enjoy this chappie ^^
Lise-lott: Aaaaaaw,; you are so nice ^^ Can I ask you something? Is lise- lott your real name and if it is, are you dutch? Just asking. Well, amazing might sound like you give me too much credit really, i'm not that good, i mean, i've seen better but i'm still proud of my work. Lolz...wahahahahaha * cough * gnorf,gnorf,gnorf (wrong word eh?)
Shingai kai: Thanks for the tip and I will follow your advice. I'll check the story's for sure when I have time, but now, I need to work on this chappie before you all get mad at me right? About my spelling, I did get help so yeah...it's not that great at all...^^
Ellen: All right! 5 reviews at once...let's see...Yeah, right trough his leg, I saw that once you know? Really creepy. And the maid didn't confront him as you might've allready noticed... You like to say DUN DUN DUN a lot, right? Lolz. Yeah, poor kid, evil Boris but hey, he's nuts ^^ And my english...I got help. But yeah, i might be improving a bit though...and yeah, there's Tala but Kai is still the most important character. And Tala....he might get a little...accident later ....DUN DUN DUN DUN! Wahahaha ^^ Yeah, i know it's gross...kids from all over the world told me so. Lolz ^^ anyways, here's the next chapter (without rapings)
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Chapter 6: Endless nights.
............................................
When kai woke up the next morning, he felt as if he had been torn apart. He was cold and he shivered with every breeze that slid trough the tiny cracks in the walls. He looked at his body and saw the bruises, scrathes and the dried blood. He noticed some old toys laying in the other corner of the dungeon and saw how they were covered in blood as well. Kai's hair was full of dust and it was so dark that it was hard to see.
Sometimes, kai saw something move in the dungeon and he knew that he wasn't alone. He heard how a few kids were crying and he smelled the horrible sent of blood. When his eyes were used to the darkness, he saw that the kids in here were still very young. They all still had their clothes on and even though they were bruised, none of them was bruised as badly as Kai. Kai forced himself to sit up and he saw how some of the kids were staring at him with horror in their eyes. He looked at his hands and closed his eyes for a second. He looked even worse than he expected.
He wished that he was still walking around with his aching leg. He wished that he had never seen tala and he even wished that he had never met his team. He always knew they would betrayed him and they had proven that when they left him in the abbey. They couldn't be that stupid to not realize there were terrible things going on there. Kai sighed and tried to smile at the younger kids but they were to affraid to smile back. Kai looked around and noticed that there was a boy sleeping in the cage next to him. He was about his age and he had black hair. He had a big scar across his face and his arms were covered in blood. Even though he was scarred, he was still a nice-looking youngman and kai felt sorry for the boy.
Kai tried to stand up but his legs couldn't carry him. A few girls across the room covered their faces when they saw how Kai tried to stand up. All his bruises were showing and his old wounds weren't looking that good either. They were recovering surprisingly well but they still looked terrible. Kai grabbed a rock and started bangging on the iron bars that blocked his path. He wanted to get out of here as soon as possible but soon enough, he realized that the bars were too strong.
The boy next to him woke up by the echoing sound and looked at the strange boy next to him. He was shocked by the bruises but not scared. He noticed a few tears sparkling in Kai's eyes and he tried to put his hands trough the bars that were avoiding him from going to the other room. He managed to put his hand on kai's back and made him flinch. Kai punched the hand away and backed off to the other side of his cage. When he noticed that the boy was awake he mumbled something like an apoligize for the noise he had made and he looked at the boy's hands that were covered in blood.
The boy looked at kai with worry in his eyes and he sighed. He introduced himself as Anatsaku and was glad to get Kai's name as response. Anatsaku explained that he had been in this abbey almost his entire life. He explained how the punishments and tortures became harder and harder every year. He told Kai that children died every year and that they were scared to even breath the wrong way.
Kai listened Anatsaku's life-story and noticed that it was all a big tragedy. When Anatsaku was ready, kai explained his own life. How his grandfather was running this abbey, how he lived in the abbey long ago and how he escaped. He explained how he became a part of the bladebreakers and how they left him. He explained why he was here and he told Anatsaku what they had done to him this night.
Anatsaku wanted to comfort Kai and he closed his eyes, trying to avoid his tears from falling. He just couldn't imagine how your own grandfather could do something like that to his own grandchild.
Anatsaku knew everyone in the abbey and he introduced kai to every kid in the dungeon. They all got less scared and they started to talk to him. Soon enough, they forgot about his pain and they started to create friendships. Kai was feeling better but was still too hurt to stand up. He didn't really wanna create friendships because he had a hard time trusting anyone but he didn't wanna hurt these kids by saying that he needed no one.
Suddenly, the big, heavy door opened and the talking stopped. A guard came in and walked passed the cages. He stopped with Kai and opened his door. He threw a blaket at him and ordered him to come with him. Next, he opened the door from Anatsaku and pulled him out too. Anatsaku tried to bite him but the guard put a rope around his neck and pulled him with him. Kai was first surprised by this but then, he became his old, lonely self. He wouldn't say a thing, not even look at anyone, he just walked with the guard as if he was a good puppy-dog.
The guard brought them to a room with a big glass wall. Someone was allrady there. Tala was sitting on his knees and he was bleeding badly from his back. He spit some blood on the wall and turned his head to the knew victims. He was shocked when he saw Kai but when he saw the look on the guard's face, he quikly turned his head to the ground again.
Kai just closed his eyes and obeyed every comand. Soon, he was sitting on his knees between Tala and Anatsaku and they had to wait for a few minutes until someone would arrive. The guard left and Kai looked at Tala with concern. But when tala looked back, he quikly looked away. Anatsaku noticed this and sighed. He hoped that kai wouldn't be like this for ever.
"What have they done to you kai?" asked Tala in a soft voice. Kai didn't answer but tears were sparkling in his eyes again. The three boys said nothing anymore and they just waited for their death to come walking trough the door.
Soon, three guards came in. They each held different things and they all walked over to one of the boys. The guard that had to torture Tala, held a small but sharp knife. Kai would be tortured with a whip and Anatsaku with a hammer.
A signal was heard and soon, all three of them started to cry out in pain. Tala was cut in his legs and arms. Kai's back was cut open with the swift slashes of the whip and Anatsaku's fingers were broken with the hammer, one by one.
This went on for the rest of the day, the rest of the weeks, and every day, they changed their weapons. They kept going like this until...
One day, when tala fell down, the guard tried to put him up again, but he didn't succeed. When the boy was turned over, Kai saw how the boy was staring at nothing, not blinking, not crying, not even breathing.
Anatsaku watched this with terror but kai just closed his eyes and tried to hold back his tears. Tala was wrapped in a blanket and thrown between some bags of dirt. They would dump him in a container. All they wanted was to get rid of him, quik.
When this was done, the torture was over for kai. Soon, his team would pick him up again. They sepparated kai from Anatsaku and put Kai in the shower. The water stinged kai's wounds but it felt good to feel the cold water wash all the dirt away.
When kai was clean, they bandaged him with care and dressed him. After this, they put him in a big bed, in one of the biggest rooms of the abbey. The room was completely lit and Kai's eyes hurt from the light.
Boris had been right, the next moring, the bladebreakers arrived to pick up kai. All they could see was that the wounds in his leg were healed, but his invisible bruises weren't discovered so all they could do was bring kai to the hotel with the thought that kai was fealing better, but they didn't know, that they had lost kai's trust.
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Phew. Okay, I did my best so don't hurt me if you hated it.
Please review ^^