Wow, you are all very good chickens. Very good! Just look at my reviews,
i'm very happy ^^ just a little depressed because I'm stuck in this good-
for-nothing country that most people don't even know off. Argh! Don't you
just hate Belgium? Anyways, let's answer my little chickens their reviews
shall we? Oh, and one last thing, if anyone knows about the movie: spirited
away, please contact me ^^
Kaiiko: Yeah, but Kai acts as if he wants to be left alone so maybe his team can't help it? What am I saying, you're absolutely right! Well, you'll see how they behave in this chapter.
Kai/Ray: Your sis? Huh? Who is your sister then? Oh well, i'm glad you like it, and say hi to your sis for me then ^^
Wo-ai-ni-Kai-Hiwatari: I can't wait to see the word ^^ No, I don't mind at all, you write the longest reviews I get and I love long reviews, it keeps me busy. Yeah...it does, I have a boring life so I need to have something to do right? Well, i hope you like this too
Trinity of the phoenix: No, i don't think i'm gonna pare anyone this story, it's mostly Kai torture ^^ I know you like yaoi, and off cours, I can't blame you.
Bloody Mary: an egg? You serieus? What colour? Is it a babychick? Lolz, tell me all about it! And yes, here is hid friendship speech, because you wouldn't stop asking about it...lolz^^
Nights Child: Is this soon enough? I hope so. You don't have eggs? How is that possible? You are a chick from now on! Lolz ^^
Hiwatari-gurl: yeah, keep on pecking my little chick ^^ anyways, here it is, enjoy
Pavchka: Well hello Myriam ^^ Still a star-trek fan I see. Kai is....dying, yep, he's dead...sad isn't it? Just kidding^^ he'll live, you'll see (for now)
Lychee Fairy: Wow, i think you are a big fan of my stories, you read a lot didn't you? Well, that makes me happy ^^ And yes, he wanted to die but he didn't stay in the snow on purpose but can you imagine how hard it has to be to walk trought the snow when your body hurts all over? I wouldn't be able to walk either. I know he needs help but you'll see if they'll know what happened, you'll see...
Dragonphoenix77: why thank you ^^ anyways, the chicken thing, all of my reviewers are chickens! ^^ yay
Blader Fairy Everlasting: a speech is allways hard to survive, isn't it? 'sigh' No, you can allways give me the chocolate eggs, thank you sooo much ^^ (is on a sugar-high again) oops, better save these for my humor-fics.
KaiHiwatari-7: Yeah well, if you don't like it, that's bad because this is a kai-torture fic you know and there will be lots more, just to warn you.
ChibiSmiles: Wow, you are truly a very kind person^^....sorry (sweatdrop) I had to tell you that, lolz ^^ anyways...if you ar online when i want to update, THEN I will take your offer, but if it's finished, i wanna update it as soon as possible. I'm an awesome person? Oh, thank you ^^ love allways, bye (hope to talk again, soon)
Zaluki: so, a new fan eh? ^^ great, the more chickens, the more eggs and reviews, right? Lolz. Yeah, nice eh? I love to read Kai-torture but writing it is even better. Thank you, i never heard that my techniques were good, I'm surprised but thanks ^^ So here is chappie 10, enjoy my chickie
MasterFranny: Oh, come on, being a chicken isn't that bad, they are cute and they can fly, lucky you. I hope this update is soon enough.
Star Twillight: i'm sorry about my spelling then but i am trying you know, and Rei is a hard thing for me. Lolz ^^
Okay, that was everyone. I hope you will all like this chappie too, normally, i allways write, just write and I'll see what happens but now I have an idea, let's see if it works out. So...
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Chapter 10: The burning soul
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Kai felt the warm waves of the fire coming towards him. He was bathing in the warmth and wasn't willing to open his eyes just yet. He was feeling as if he was run over by a truck but he didn't want the warming feeling to end. He hasn't felt this good in days. Kai was afraid to move, afraid to make the feeling go away, so he stayed where he was and listened to the voices that were echoing in his head. Voices, that seemed to come from a far place that somehow seemed only mere inches away from him.
Suddenly, kai remembered what had happened. He had been to tired to move on and he just let himself drop into the snow. He was almost sure that he would die but somehow, he seemed to be saved. Either that, or he was in hell. But the awefull smell could also be Tyson's socks and the fire wasn't as warm as hell at all.
Kai opened his eyes a bit and noticed that his team was sitting around the fire. No one was looking at him and Kai was thankfull for that. He saw that everyone seemed pretty pissed off and he saw how Rei had a hard time to shut up. Kai knew that he wanted to tell everything but Rei wouldn't break his promise.
Kai knew that he couldn't stay on the ground forever. He heard Tyson yelling and let out a sigh that stayed unheard. He felt how cold the ground was and the pain seemed to increase. Kai leaned on his arms and felt how the pain struck him some more but he didn't let out a scream or moan. He tried to stand up but failed a few times and when he was about to try it for the third time, Rei finally noticed that kai was awake. He rushed over to him and helped him on his feet while the others stood up too.
Kai's legs were trembling and he had to lean against the wall to avoid falling over. Rei saw this and tried to help him again but Kai refused to take anymore help. He looked at his team and saw that they were all angry with him. Tyson stepped forward and grabbed Kai by his shoulder. He forced him to sit down again and Kai couldn't stand up very long so he had no choice at all. It hurt to sit too but kai wasn't complaining.
Tyson was red from anger and wanted to scream but Max put his hand in front of his mouth just in time. He tried to calm tyson down and removed hid hand again. Tyson took a deep breath. He inhaled and exhaled a few times and then, he sat himself right in front of Kai. He grabbed his hands and felt how kai wanted to pull them back but he wouldn't let him go. "Kai" started tyson "listen carefully to me." Kai's hands were aching but he was to week to pull them back. "What you did was wrong. We are your friends and you should trust us. I don't know what's wrong with you but you keep gettig hurt, are you trying to kill yourself or something? We are your team and you are supposed to be our leader, act like one!" Kai growled a bit and looked at rei who stepped forward, trying to say something. "Kai, you have to tell us what's wrong or we won't be able to help you" said Tyson a little worried. "Now, speak, and we'll see what we can do"
Kai was finally able to pull his hands back and he crawled to the other side of the cave. While he was sitting there he stared at his hands, thinking what he should do, while Rei was staring in the fire, thinking the same thing. Max looked at both of them, noticing some connection while Tyson just started to yell and kick the cave.
Rei walked over to Max and called Tyson and kenny. "i'm sorry kai, but I can't keep my mouth shut anymore" Kai wanted to stop him but couldn't walk proparly and just fell flat on his face. That was it, he didn't wanna move anymore and the tears couldn't be held in anymore.
Rei sighed and started to tell teh story while kai just cried himself to sleep, not knowing what the enxt day would bring for him, except for more pain.
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a little short but I think you all know the feeling of a writers-block, right?
Now, fly my little chickens and bring me as many reviews as you can!
Kaiiko: Yeah, but Kai acts as if he wants to be left alone so maybe his team can't help it? What am I saying, you're absolutely right! Well, you'll see how they behave in this chapter.
Kai/Ray: Your sis? Huh? Who is your sister then? Oh well, i'm glad you like it, and say hi to your sis for me then ^^
Wo-ai-ni-Kai-Hiwatari: I can't wait to see the word ^^ No, I don't mind at all, you write the longest reviews I get and I love long reviews, it keeps me busy. Yeah...it does, I have a boring life so I need to have something to do right? Well, i hope you like this too
Trinity of the phoenix: No, i don't think i'm gonna pare anyone this story, it's mostly Kai torture ^^ I know you like yaoi, and off cours, I can't blame you.
Bloody Mary: an egg? You serieus? What colour? Is it a babychick? Lolz, tell me all about it! And yes, here is hid friendship speech, because you wouldn't stop asking about it...lolz^^
Nights Child: Is this soon enough? I hope so. You don't have eggs? How is that possible? You are a chick from now on! Lolz ^^
Hiwatari-gurl: yeah, keep on pecking my little chick ^^ anyways, here it is, enjoy
Pavchka: Well hello Myriam ^^ Still a star-trek fan I see. Kai is....dying, yep, he's dead...sad isn't it? Just kidding^^ he'll live, you'll see (for now)
Lychee Fairy: Wow, i think you are a big fan of my stories, you read a lot didn't you? Well, that makes me happy ^^ And yes, he wanted to die but he didn't stay in the snow on purpose but can you imagine how hard it has to be to walk trought the snow when your body hurts all over? I wouldn't be able to walk either. I know he needs help but you'll see if they'll know what happened, you'll see...
Dragonphoenix77: why thank you ^^ anyways, the chicken thing, all of my reviewers are chickens! ^^ yay
Blader Fairy Everlasting: a speech is allways hard to survive, isn't it? 'sigh' No, you can allways give me the chocolate eggs, thank you sooo much ^^ (is on a sugar-high again) oops, better save these for my humor-fics.
KaiHiwatari-7: Yeah well, if you don't like it, that's bad because this is a kai-torture fic you know and there will be lots more, just to warn you.
ChibiSmiles: Wow, you are truly a very kind person^^....sorry (sweatdrop) I had to tell you that, lolz ^^ anyways...if you ar online when i want to update, THEN I will take your offer, but if it's finished, i wanna update it as soon as possible. I'm an awesome person? Oh, thank you ^^ love allways, bye (hope to talk again, soon)
Zaluki: so, a new fan eh? ^^ great, the more chickens, the more eggs and reviews, right? Lolz. Yeah, nice eh? I love to read Kai-torture but writing it is even better. Thank you, i never heard that my techniques were good, I'm surprised but thanks ^^ So here is chappie 10, enjoy my chickie
MasterFranny: Oh, come on, being a chicken isn't that bad, they are cute and they can fly, lucky you. I hope this update is soon enough.
Star Twillight: i'm sorry about my spelling then but i am trying you know, and Rei is a hard thing for me. Lolz ^^
Okay, that was everyone. I hope you will all like this chappie too, normally, i allways write, just write and I'll see what happens but now I have an idea, let's see if it works out. So...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Chapter 10: The burning soul
.............................................
Kai felt the warm waves of the fire coming towards him. He was bathing in the warmth and wasn't willing to open his eyes just yet. He was feeling as if he was run over by a truck but he didn't want the warming feeling to end. He hasn't felt this good in days. Kai was afraid to move, afraid to make the feeling go away, so he stayed where he was and listened to the voices that were echoing in his head. Voices, that seemed to come from a far place that somehow seemed only mere inches away from him.
Suddenly, kai remembered what had happened. He had been to tired to move on and he just let himself drop into the snow. He was almost sure that he would die but somehow, he seemed to be saved. Either that, or he was in hell. But the awefull smell could also be Tyson's socks and the fire wasn't as warm as hell at all.
Kai opened his eyes a bit and noticed that his team was sitting around the fire. No one was looking at him and Kai was thankfull for that. He saw that everyone seemed pretty pissed off and he saw how Rei had a hard time to shut up. Kai knew that he wanted to tell everything but Rei wouldn't break his promise.
Kai knew that he couldn't stay on the ground forever. He heard Tyson yelling and let out a sigh that stayed unheard. He felt how cold the ground was and the pain seemed to increase. Kai leaned on his arms and felt how the pain struck him some more but he didn't let out a scream or moan. He tried to stand up but failed a few times and when he was about to try it for the third time, Rei finally noticed that kai was awake. He rushed over to him and helped him on his feet while the others stood up too.
Kai's legs were trembling and he had to lean against the wall to avoid falling over. Rei saw this and tried to help him again but Kai refused to take anymore help. He looked at his team and saw that they were all angry with him. Tyson stepped forward and grabbed Kai by his shoulder. He forced him to sit down again and Kai couldn't stand up very long so he had no choice at all. It hurt to sit too but kai wasn't complaining.
Tyson was red from anger and wanted to scream but Max put his hand in front of his mouth just in time. He tried to calm tyson down and removed hid hand again. Tyson took a deep breath. He inhaled and exhaled a few times and then, he sat himself right in front of Kai. He grabbed his hands and felt how kai wanted to pull them back but he wouldn't let him go. "Kai" started tyson "listen carefully to me." Kai's hands were aching but he was to week to pull them back. "What you did was wrong. We are your friends and you should trust us. I don't know what's wrong with you but you keep gettig hurt, are you trying to kill yourself or something? We are your team and you are supposed to be our leader, act like one!" Kai growled a bit and looked at rei who stepped forward, trying to say something. "Kai, you have to tell us what's wrong or we won't be able to help you" said Tyson a little worried. "Now, speak, and we'll see what we can do"
Kai was finally able to pull his hands back and he crawled to the other side of the cave. While he was sitting there he stared at his hands, thinking what he should do, while Rei was staring in the fire, thinking the same thing. Max looked at both of them, noticing some connection while Tyson just started to yell and kick the cave.
Rei walked over to Max and called Tyson and kenny. "i'm sorry kai, but I can't keep my mouth shut anymore" Kai wanted to stop him but couldn't walk proparly and just fell flat on his face. That was it, he didn't wanna move anymore and the tears couldn't be held in anymore.
Rei sighed and started to tell teh story while kai just cried himself to sleep, not knowing what the enxt day would bring for him, except for more pain.
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a little short but I think you all know the feeling of a writers-block, right?
Now, fly my little chickens and bring me as many reviews as you can!