My apoligies for the last very short chapter, I'll try to make it up to
ya'all by making this chapter as long as possible but that means you'll
have to wait for it a little longer.
You've been all very good chickens, just look at the reviews I have gotten, wait, i'll answer them fisrt and then i'll start chappie 11 ok?
Lychee Fairy: o_O He can't kill Rei, I still need him for the rest of my story. You seem like someone who likes happy endings right? Well, anyone who read my other stories knows that I don't allways let my stories end happily, most of them end tragically, so I wouldn't count on it too much even though everything is still possible.
Bloody Mary: Dark blue? Oooh, pretty colour! Tell me what it is okay? And by the way, who is the father? And yep, that was the friendship speech, i'm not very good at speeches so i guess it wasn't entirely what you expected but oh well...here's chappie 11 then, for your pleasure. Lolz^^
Pavchka: talons in stead of hands? What are you talking about? Yeah, this is supposed to be different, it has to be unique or people won't read it. And I hate when that happens ;_;
Kai/Ray: thank you =^^=
Nights Child: stop hurting? When this story is over off cours, otherwise it wouldn't be a Kai-torture fic, remember that. Yeah, Rei broke his promise, but he had to do it right? I mean...Kai's past needs to be revealed sometimes too and it was taking to long for me so the simple answer: break a promise. Well...good luck with the flying ^^
Kaiiko: My update won't be soon, i have a lot of stories to take care of right now. But i'll try to finish this first, unless I get the sudden urge to continue hidden scars...ooh, i love Ryou-torture even more....but anyways, I hope this will be soon enough, but I just fell into the water with school, it was very cold and wet so I don't know how long it'll take before the computer electrifies me.
Trinity of the phoenix: Some chickens can! ;_; Right chickie? (pets her flying chicken) Well, you'll see their reaction right here, enjoy.
Devil_tiger: All right, a new chicken to read this story ^^ welcom! So, you live in Ireland? That sounds great, wanna mail me somtimes? Please? Anyways, I know it's hard to find good Kai-torture and there aren't much stories that have good torture but I have a few others and if you look at my favorite stories, you'll find a few between them too. I don't know a single chicken that owns a cat really ^^" Anyways, I hope you'll like this chapter too, i'll do my best to write it because my reviewers have been super! ^^ lotsa luv back ^^
ChibiSmiles: Kai? A normal life? That would be boring, wouldn't it? Lolz, anyways, i feel sorry for him too but I can't dissapoint my fans so I'll just have to continue to write all those tortures. 'grins maniacally' okay, so enjoy!
Hiwatari-gurl: hello sweet girl ^^ come on, fly! Spread your wings! Anyways, this chapter will be longer, I hope...again, my apoligies.
Wo-ai-ni-Kai-Hiwatari: Need some help ? Why don't you use the Marry-Poppins- word? I dunno if everything will turn out for the best but who knows? I don't ^^
Zaluki: aha, another new chicken, welcome in the club^^ And it's a chicken from the netherlands, those are very rare, so welcom in the club neighbour^^ this chappie will be longer for sure so enjoy.
Curtis Zidane Ziraa: and another new chickie, welcom, welcom ^^hmmm..maybe I will kill Boris and Voltaire but i'm not sure...and i think i'm the weirdest, and I'm proud of it, whooo!!!!
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chapter 11: Redhot flames
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** dream **
Kai was walking into the dunes. He could easily see the ocean, this was his most favorite place. A few trees were swaying peacefully in the wind and the sand was blown into the blue water. Kai sat himself on a rock to watch how the grass was getting greener with the second and how the ocean seemed to come closer to him.
Suddenly, clouds started to gather very fast and rain started to fall. You could see the lightning that was followed by a loud crash, the thunder. The rain started to pour down on Kai faster and faster. All the sand was washed away and the dunes started to loose hight. The ocean started to go away from kai again until you couldn't see it any longer.
The rain stopped but the lightning kept coming. Now, kai was in the desert, surrounded by a few withered flowers and some dried trees. Then, the lighting struck one of the trees wich immediatly was set on fire. It only took a few seconds before the fire started to make a cirkel that surrounded Kai. The flames were getting higher and higher and even the sky was suddenly red. The sun was gone, only the fire was still there.
The fire was coming closer and closer, Kai fell to his knees and covered his head, trying to ignore the fire, trying to believe this wasn't all real. But then, he heard the cruel laughter of his own grandfather and a loud shriek. He saw his Dranzer, and Voltaire was riding him. Then, kai realized it, the fire was coming from his Dranzer, he had turned against him. His beatifull phoenix had betrayed him, just like he had betrayed him once too.
A single tear hit the ground and kai bowed to the fire, accepting his fate. He took his beyblade and saw that Dranzer was truly gone. Suddenly, a loud crash was heard and Kai saw how two large claws suddenly stood before him. He looked up and saw Black Dranzer taking a deep breath and shooting his black flames right in his face
** end dream **
Kai woke up with a scream and he saw that Tyson was shaking him. Kai pushed him away and looked around him. It was raining and the fire was allmost out, but Voltaire was nowhere to be seen. Kai grabbed his blade and saw his own Dranzer, as proud as ever. Kai closed his crimson eyes and grinned. Since when was he afraid of dreams? He put his blade away again and wanted to stand up, but to no avail. His legs couldn't carry him any longer. Kai had forced himself to come this far, but to what price? He was hurt and defenceless.
The temperature had increased a bit and the snow was allmost entirely gone. Kai looked at Rei who was silent. He stared back at Kai and then Kai knew, that Rei had told his secret. He had promised to shut his mouth but he did it anyways. Kai wanted to scream but knew that it was way too late for that so all he could think of was...to laugh. He laughed hard and saw how his team was getting worried about him again. Probably, they thought he had gone mad.
"So Rei" said Kai happily. Rei was clearly very confused. "You broke your promise didn't you?" asked Kai and Rei stared at the fire again. "Kai closed his crimson eyes and leaned against the wall. "I knew you couldn't be trusted, but hey, I don't blame you, it's my own fault for being so stupid!" Kai hit the wall with his fist wich started to bleed immediatly.
Tyson was clearly stressed out and started to scream at kai. "You heartless bastard! Why couldn't we know?" Kai glared daggers at Tyson and growled. Then he screamed back at him "Do you really think that this was so easy to tell?!" yelled Kai "It's not exactly something to tell at the diner-table and besides, why tell someone who can use it against you?" With this, Kai crossed his arms and looked the other way. Clearly, he was feeling defenceless for not being able to walk away.
Max layed a hand on Kai's shoulder and started to whisper a bit. "We would never do that, how can you think we are like that?" asked Max a bit hurt. Kai looked into the normally happy blue eyes and saw sadness. He sighed and stared at the ground, not being able to face Max. "Because you allready..." Kai couldn't finish the sentence. It felt as if his throat was suddenly shut down. "No Kai" said Rei who had come towards kai very slowly. "We never knew about your past in the abbey, you should've told us" said Rei while he played with a tiny stick.
Kai smiled a bit and looked at Rei. He wanted to say something but he really wasn't able to, so he just nodded while his eyes were filling with tears. Tyson layed his hand on kai's shoulder. "Now I know why you were acting that way but promise that you won't ever do that again." Kai just stared at Tyson. "You are our friend and we would feel terrible if something happened to you, so promise." Kai smiled and nodded again "...I promise"
Tyson smiled. He looked outside and saw that the rain had stopped. The sun was rising and some early birds allready started to sing their songs. The fire in the cave had gone out and you could see some tears of happiness shine on kai's face, sparkling in the fresh sunlight. Kenny took Dizzy and looked at his team. "Come on guys, we can go now" he said with a yawn. "Can you handle it Kai?" asked Tyson and he turned to Kai.
Tyson gasped and ran towards his teamleader who had past out, still wearing that smile on his face. Tyson shook him again but to no avail. Kai wouldn't wake up. Max and Rei started to check on kai and noticed that he was still alive, but barely. They carefully picked Kai up and layed him on Tyson's back who immediatly sped outside, hoping that he would reach the hospital very soon.
Rei layed his hand on kai's back, keeping him from falling. Max ran at the other side of Tyson followed by Kenny who could hardly keep up with them. Rain was still dripping from the trees and every now and then, the bladebreakers felt an icy chill in their neck. The birds were silent as they watched how the bladebreakers were running as hard as they could, not knowing why, not understanding what they were going trough.
Finally, hours and hours later they could see their next destination. The town was dooming up out of the mist and they allready saw the hospital as soon as they walked into the quiet town. Most of the people were still sleeping but the hospital was open.
The bladebreakers ran inside, making everyone else look at them. They ran towards a yawning docter who was getting ready to go home and stopped him in the hallway. "Please sir" panted Tyson "You have to help us" The doctor looked at Kai, who was pretty pale and nodded. He was clearly wanting to go home but he knew that he should help Kai.
He led the bladebreakers towards a room and told Tyson to lay Kai in the bed. He was shocked when he saw his face. The boy was only 15 jears old and he looked terrible. "What happened to him?" asked the doctor. "That's a long story" said Tyson who was staring at kai's face.
The doctor quikly pushed a button and a nurse came running in a few seconds later. She was shocked too and pressed her hand in front of her mouth. The doctor told her to go search for another doctor and said that he was going home. He said goodbye to the bladebreakers and ran away.
Tyson growled a little, not understanding what he was going home for when his best friend was laying in the hospital but he just forgot it and decided to wait for the next doctor. He looked at kai and saw that he was having another bad dream, but he didn't wanna wake him up this time. He knew that Kai needed his rest.
After a few minutes, another doctor came running in. He immediatly told the bladebreakers to go away and rolled Kai away on another bed to go do some tests, to see what's all wrong. Tyson still had to fill in some papers and then he would have to go to the hotel because the hospital was allready full with people who were wounded because of last nights snowstorm.
When Tyson was all done, he just walked to the hotel, followed by his friends. He didn't say a word and just went to sleep immediatly, not wanting to talk about what happened, just wanting to go to the hospital again as fast as possible.
The doctors were all getting worried about Kai. He had gone trough a lot and he was clearly abused by someone. They started to clean out his wounds and treated them as good as possible. They all did their best but they knew it was all up to kai. He needed the will to get trough this, if he didn't want too survive, all their work was for nothing and since he was abused, their hopes were not very high.
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The next day, Kai woke up again. The first thing he saw was a man with glasses and a hidious white coat. He saw some lights and blinked a few times, trying to get used to it. He looked to the bottle of water next to him and quikly grabbed it. He was very thirsty, and he was drink so fast that the water was running down his chin. The doctor saw this and quikly grabbed the bottle and gave Kai a glass. He smiled a bit while he was watching how Kai enjoyed the fresh water. When he was finished, the doctor put the glass away and sat himself next to kai.
"Kai, can you please tell me what happened?" asked the doctor friendly. "We really have to know that" Kai suddenly turned the other way and stared at the closet in the corner of the room. "Ask my team" said kai and that was all that the doctor could get out of Kai. He left with a sigh, leaving Kai all alone in the room. Everything was white and Kai looked at himself to avoid all the whiteness. He saw that they had given them other cloaths. Hospital-cloaths. Kai sighed, he knew that they had all seen it. He was allready hoping to get out of there very soon.
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Weeks later, Kai was allmost ready to go, he had to stay in the hospital for one more day. His friends had visited him several times and they had allways brought him a present. Kai had acted more open to them then usual but he still found it very hard to do. Kai sighed and stared at the ceiling, waiting for the last hours to pass by. It was all going very slow and Kai just played with his Dranzer a bit.
Then suddenly, he heard a scream. "FIRE, FIRE!!!" Kai immediatly jumped out of his bed and wanted to get away until he saw several kids, sitting in the corner, scared and not able to move.
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Sorry people, i'm stopping here or the story will be over to soon.
Please review, the sooner, the better, for you too, trust me 'grins'.
Bye everybody ^^
Oh and eum...for those who like yu-gi-oh too. I need reviews for my story: hidden scars. Wanna read it sometimes? Thx ^^ it's no Kai-torture but more...Ryou-torture.
You've been all very good chickens, just look at the reviews I have gotten, wait, i'll answer them fisrt and then i'll start chappie 11 ok?
Lychee Fairy: o_O He can't kill Rei, I still need him for the rest of my story. You seem like someone who likes happy endings right? Well, anyone who read my other stories knows that I don't allways let my stories end happily, most of them end tragically, so I wouldn't count on it too much even though everything is still possible.
Bloody Mary: Dark blue? Oooh, pretty colour! Tell me what it is okay? And by the way, who is the father? And yep, that was the friendship speech, i'm not very good at speeches so i guess it wasn't entirely what you expected but oh well...here's chappie 11 then, for your pleasure. Lolz^^
Pavchka: talons in stead of hands? What are you talking about? Yeah, this is supposed to be different, it has to be unique or people won't read it. And I hate when that happens ;_;
Kai/Ray: thank you =^^=
Nights Child: stop hurting? When this story is over off cours, otherwise it wouldn't be a Kai-torture fic, remember that. Yeah, Rei broke his promise, but he had to do it right? I mean...Kai's past needs to be revealed sometimes too and it was taking to long for me so the simple answer: break a promise. Well...good luck with the flying ^^
Kaiiko: My update won't be soon, i have a lot of stories to take care of right now. But i'll try to finish this first, unless I get the sudden urge to continue hidden scars...ooh, i love Ryou-torture even more....but anyways, I hope this will be soon enough, but I just fell into the water with school, it was very cold and wet so I don't know how long it'll take before the computer electrifies me.
Trinity of the phoenix: Some chickens can! ;_; Right chickie? (pets her flying chicken) Well, you'll see their reaction right here, enjoy.
Devil_tiger: All right, a new chicken to read this story ^^ welcom! So, you live in Ireland? That sounds great, wanna mail me somtimes? Please? Anyways, I know it's hard to find good Kai-torture and there aren't much stories that have good torture but I have a few others and if you look at my favorite stories, you'll find a few between them too. I don't know a single chicken that owns a cat really ^^" Anyways, I hope you'll like this chapter too, i'll do my best to write it because my reviewers have been super! ^^ lotsa luv back ^^
ChibiSmiles: Kai? A normal life? That would be boring, wouldn't it? Lolz, anyways, i feel sorry for him too but I can't dissapoint my fans so I'll just have to continue to write all those tortures. 'grins maniacally' okay, so enjoy!
Hiwatari-gurl: hello sweet girl ^^ come on, fly! Spread your wings! Anyways, this chapter will be longer, I hope...again, my apoligies.
Wo-ai-ni-Kai-Hiwatari: Need some help ? Why don't you use the Marry-Poppins- word? I dunno if everything will turn out for the best but who knows? I don't ^^
Zaluki: aha, another new chicken, welcome in the club^^ And it's a chicken from the netherlands, those are very rare, so welcom in the club neighbour^^ this chappie will be longer for sure so enjoy.
Curtis Zidane Ziraa: and another new chickie, welcom, welcom ^^hmmm..maybe I will kill Boris and Voltaire but i'm not sure...and i think i'm the weirdest, and I'm proud of it, whooo!!!!
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chapter 11: Redhot flames
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** dream **
Kai was walking into the dunes. He could easily see the ocean, this was his most favorite place. A few trees were swaying peacefully in the wind and the sand was blown into the blue water. Kai sat himself on a rock to watch how the grass was getting greener with the second and how the ocean seemed to come closer to him.
Suddenly, clouds started to gather very fast and rain started to fall. You could see the lightning that was followed by a loud crash, the thunder. The rain started to pour down on Kai faster and faster. All the sand was washed away and the dunes started to loose hight. The ocean started to go away from kai again until you couldn't see it any longer.
The rain stopped but the lightning kept coming. Now, kai was in the desert, surrounded by a few withered flowers and some dried trees. Then, the lighting struck one of the trees wich immediatly was set on fire. It only took a few seconds before the fire started to make a cirkel that surrounded Kai. The flames were getting higher and higher and even the sky was suddenly red. The sun was gone, only the fire was still there.
The fire was coming closer and closer, Kai fell to his knees and covered his head, trying to ignore the fire, trying to believe this wasn't all real. But then, he heard the cruel laughter of his own grandfather and a loud shriek. He saw his Dranzer, and Voltaire was riding him. Then, kai realized it, the fire was coming from his Dranzer, he had turned against him. His beatifull phoenix had betrayed him, just like he had betrayed him once too.
A single tear hit the ground and kai bowed to the fire, accepting his fate. He took his beyblade and saw that Dranzer was truly gone. Suddenly, a loud crash was heard and Kai saw how two large claws suddenly stood before him. He looked up and saw Black Dranzer taking a deep breath and shooting his black flames right in his face
** end dream **
Kai woke up with a scream and he saw that Tyson was shaking him. Kai pushed him away and looked around him. It was raining and the fire was allmost out, but Voltaire was nowhere to be seen. Kai grabbed his blade and saw his own Dranzer, as proud as ever. Kai closed his crimson eyes and grinned. Since when was he afraid of dreams? He put his blade away again and wanted to stand up, but to no avail. His legs couldn't carry him any longer. Kai had forced himself to come this far, but to what price? He was hurt and defenceless.
The temperature had increased a bit and the snow was allmost entirely gone. Kai looked at Rei who was silent. He stared back at Kai and then Kai knew, that Rei had told his secret. He had promised to shut his mouth but he did it anyways. Kai wanted to scream but knew that it was way too late for that so all he could think of was...to laugh. He laughed hard and saw how his team was getting worried about him again. Probably, they thought he had gone mad.
"So Rei" said Kai happily. Rei was clearly very confused. "You broke your promise didn't you?" asked Kai and Rei stared at the fire again. "Kai closed his crimson eyes and leaned against the wall. "I knew you couldn't be trusted, but hey, I don't blame you, it's my own fault for being so stupid!" Kai hit the wall with his fist wich started to bleed immediatly.
Tyson was clearly stressed out and started to scream at kai. "You heartless bastard! Why couldn't we know?" Kai glared daggers at Tyson and growled. Then he screamed back at him "Do you really think that this was so easy to tell?!" yelled Kai "It's not exactly something to tell at the diner-table and besides, why tell someone who can use it against you?" With this, Kai crossed his arms and looked the other way. Clearly, he was feeling defenceless for not being able to walk away.
Max layed a hand on Kai's shoulder and started to whisper a bit. "We would never do that, how can you think we are like that?" asked Max a bit hurt. Kai looked into the normally happy blue eyes and saw sadness. He sighed and stared at the ground, not being able to face Max. "Because you allready..." Kai couldn't finish the sentence. It felt as if his throat was suddenly shut down. "No Kai" said Rei who had come towards kai very slowly. "We never knew about your past in the abbey, you should've told us" said Rei while he played with a tiny stick.
Kai smiled a bit and looked at Rei. He wanted to say something but he really wasn't able to, so he just nodded while his eyes were filling with tears. Tyson layed his hand on kai's shoulder. "Now I know why you were acting that way but promise that you won't ever do that again." Kai just stared at Tyson. "You are our friend and we would feel terrible if something happened to you, so promise." Kai smiled and nodded again "...I promise"
Tyson smiled. He looked outside and saw that the rain had stopped. The sun was rising and some early birds allready started to sing their songs. The fire in the cave had gone out and you could see some tears of happiness shine on kai's face, sparkling in the fresh sunlight. Kenny took Dizzy and looked at his team. "Come on guys, we can go now" he said with a yawn. "Can you handle it Kai?" asked Tyson and he turned to Kai.
Tyson gasped and ran towards his teamleader who had past out, still wearing that smile on his face. Tyson shook him again but to no avail. Kai wouldn't wake up. Max and Rei started to check on kai and noticed that he was still alive, but barely. They carefully picked Kai up and layed him on Tyson's back who immediatly sped outside, hoping that he would reach the hospital very soon.
Rei layed his hand on kai's back, keeping him from falling. Max ran at the other side of Tyson followed by Kenny who could hardly keep up with them. Rain was still dripping from the trees and every now and then, the bladebreakers felt an icy chill in their neck. The birds were silent as they watched how the bladebreakers were running as hard as they could, not knowing why, not understanding what they were going trough.
Finally, hours and hours later they could see their next destination. The town was dooming up out of the mist and they allready saw the hospital as soon as they walked into the quiet town. Most of the people were still sleeping but the hospital was open.
The bladebreakers ran inside, making everyone else look at them. They ran towards a yawning docter who was getting ready to go home and stopped him in the hallway. "Please sir" panted Tyson "You have to help us" The doctor looked at Kai, who was pretty pale and nodded. He was clearly wanting to go home but he knew that he should help Kai.
He led the bladebreakers towards a room and told Tyson to lay Kai in the bed. He was shocked when he saw his face. The boy was only 15 jears old and he looked terrible. "What happened to him?" asked the doctor. "That's a long story" said Tyson who was staring at kai's face.
The doctor quikly pushed a button and a nurse came running in a few seconds later. She was shocked too and pressed her hand in front of her mouth. The doctor told her to go search for another doctor and said that he was going home. He said goodbye to the bladebreakers and ran away.
Tyson growled a little, not understanding what he was going home for when his best friend was laying in the hospital but he just forgot it and decided to wait for the next doctor. He looked at kai and saw that he was having another bad dream, but he didn't wanna wake him up this time. He knew that Kai needed his rest.
After a few minutes, another doctor came running in. He immediatly told the bladebreakers to go away and rolled Kai away on another bed to go do some tests, to see what's all wrong. Tyson still had to fill in some papers and then he would have to go to the hotel because the hospital was allready full with people who were wounded because of last nights snowstorm.
When Tyson was all done, he just walked to the hotel, followed by his friends. He didn't say a word and just went to sleep immediatly, not wanting to talk about what happened, just wanting to go to the hospital again as fast as possible.
The doctors were all getting worried about Kai. He had gone trough a lot and he was clearly abused by someone. They started to clean out his wounds and treated them as good as possible. They all did their best but they knew it was all up to kai. He needed the will to get trough this, if he didn't want too survive, all their work was for nothing and since he was abused, their hopes were not very high.
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The next day, Kai woke up again. The first thing he saw was a man with glasses and a hidious white coat. He saw some lights and blinked a few times, trying to get used to it. He looked to the bottle of water next to him and quikly grabbed it. He was very thirsty, and he was drink so fast that the water was running down his chin. The doctor saw this and quikly grabbed the bottle and gave Kai a glass. He smiled a bit while he was watching how Kai enjoyed the fresh water. When he was finished, the doctor put the glass away and sat himself next to kai.
"Kai, can you please tell me what happened?" asked the doctor friendly. "We really have to know that" Kai suddenly turned the other way and stared at the closet in the corner of the room. "Ask my team" said kai and that was all that the doctor could get out of Kai. He left with a sigh, leaving Kai all alone in the room. Everything was white and Kai looked at himself to avoid all the whiteness. He saw that they had given them other cloaths. Hospital-cloaths. Kai sighed, he knew that they had all seen it. He was allready hoping to get out of there very soon.
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Weeks later, Kai was allmost ready to go, he had to stay in the hospital for one more day. His friends had visited him several times and they had allways brought him a present. Kai had acted more open to them then usual but he still found it very hard to do. Kai sighed and stared at the ceiling, waiting for the last hours to pass by. It was all going very slow and Kai just played with his Dranzer a bit.
Then suddenly, he heard a scream. "FIRE, FIRE!!!" Kai immediatly jumped out of his bed and wanted to get away until he saw several kids, sitting in the corner, scared and not able to move.
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Sorry people, i'm stopping here or the story will be over to soon.
Please review, the sooner, the better, for you too, trust me 'grins'.
Bye everybody ^^
Oh and eum...for those who like yu-gi-oh too. I need reviews for my story: hidden scars. Wanna read it sometimes? Thx ^^ it's no Kai-torture but more...Ryou-torture.