Okay my little chickens, your reviews were great ! I love you all. (gives
everyone a Kai-plushie) You make my day once again, now let's answer you
all to make you satisfied, okay?
Bloody Mary: So you have to keep it a secret? Aaaw man...I wanna know what it is! Tell me okay? Arigato ^^ And no, Tyson isn't a very good boy, he's just showing off ^^"
MasterFranny: come on, breath, breath! My chickens have to live on...at least until this story is finished ^^
Kai/Ray: is he gonna save the kids, that's the question. 'grins sadistically' I feel like adding another cliffie after this chapter....oh well, enjoy^^
ChibiSmiles: Wow, you must be sooo lucky to travel so much. I'm so jealous but no, I have to stay home and write fics ...oh well, as long as I get reviews, you won't hear me complaining.
Wo-ai-ni-Kai-Hiwatari: Bad suspense! You can't kill her. That's against the rules! Anyways, don't forget to breath ok? It's impossible to make everyone survive but the question is...will Kai survive?
Star Twilight: You saw my earlier works? Terrible, isn't it! Lolz ^^ anyways, I'm not really sure if it's coming to a close but I can't go on like this forever. But as soon as this story is finished, I'll start another one^^ , and another one, and another one, as long as people review me, i won't give up, okay?
Curtis Zidane Ziraa: Seems like a really cool closet to me ^^ but no...I don't need a thing, maybe some people who know very good Ryou-torture but you won't find them in your closet will you? ^^ what happened to my chickens? How should I know, is something wrong?
Lychee fairy: No, it's not ending yet and besides, who told you Kai is gonna die? Well, I don't think he will, but off cours, how could I know right? 'grin'
Kaiiko: isn't waiting terrible? I hate it too when i have to wait for other people to update, bwah!
Devil_tiger: nop, no elektrocution here ^^ I have lots of yu-gi-oh stories, if you are interested^^ by the way, you should read yu-gi-oh stories, Ryou (de good Bakura) is so much easier to torture then kai. Because Ryou is so very fragile...but enough, this is beyblade so enjoy!
Cosmo Kid: sorry but dreams never come true...not in my fics that is ^^ lolz, but about the kids...he might save them.
Trinity of the phoenix: here is the update ^^ enjoy
Nights Child: It won't be over very soon...I think ^^" anyways, does it hurt? Poor you! And you were flying? Good? Anyways, enjoy.
Oh, and people? Do me a favor and go read the story Sapphire tears. It's a very good story about beyblade and I just don't understand why my friend gets so little reviews for it, so help her out, read her fantastic fic (it's in my favorites for sure) and give her the best review you have ever written, okay? Can you do that for me? You are very good chickens^^
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chapter 12: starless nights
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Kai looked at the cowering children. They were trying to hide somewhere and their eyes were big with fear. There were so many of them. Most of them were teary-eyes, but only one kid was trying to protect them, trying to bring them to safety but he wasn't strong enough, and the children refused to go away from their safe spot.
Kai stepped forward and grabbed the kids arm who refused. "Save the others first onegai" he said with concern in his eyes. Kai just nodded and grabbed towo kids by the arms. A third, he placed on his back. "By the way" yelled the kid "My name is Ariku!" Kai ignored him and tried to get out of the building as soon as possible. The fire was spreading fast but the entrance was still unharmed, allthough kai knew that it wouldn't last forever.
Quikly, he brought the children outside and ran back to get more kids out of the fire. When he came back, he saw that Ariku was hugging one of the children who was crying his heart out. Apparently, his younger sister was allways with him and he was affraid that she might be sad about it. Right now, she was sitting at home, sleeping...
Kai sighed and grabbed the boy's arm. He placed a girl on his shoulders and told her to grab his hair. Next, he grabbed two other boys with his free hand and pulled them with him again. He tried to get out as soon as possible but the fire was starting to destroy everything and it was hard to find some more room. But eventually, kai succeeded in bringing the children outside of the building.
He wanted to run inside again but some people started to yell at him. "Don't go in again!" yelled a fireman. "You'll get yourself killed in there!" Kai just glared at him and ran in anyways. Some people were screaming after him and the parents of the children he allready rescued just watched how their hero was trying to save even more children.
Ariku was surprised when he saw kai again. "Back again?" asked Ariku in disbelief. Kai just placed two smaller children on his shoulders and grabbed some more by the wrist. Clearly, this was hurting them but Kai had no choice. He ran towards the exit and had to avoid some burning trash here and there. But eventually, he made it outside again. The children ran to their parents and Kai turned around to face the fire again.
He was trembling and coughing and he saw how some fireman ran towards him to stop him from going in. Kai fell to his knees and held his chest, he couldn't stop coughing. The smoke had filled his longs. A man layed a blanket on kai's shoulders and patted him on the shoulders "you are a hero kid" said the man and he looked at the building.
Suddenly, some screams were heard and Kai jumped up again. He couldn't leave those children behind so he jumped over the fire and ran in again, holding his scarf in front of his mouth. When he finally got to Ariku again, he saw some kids were allready coughing badly so he took them first. He ripped his scarf to shreds and gave everyone a piece. Only he had nothing left. He took as many kids as he could and left Ariku with the last children. Ariku was shocked, he had never seen so much bravery in his entire life before. Kai was risking his life to save those children, and he didn't even know them.
Ariku watched how Kai ran past the burning desks and rooms. He allways hoped to meet someone like that, but not in a place like this, not like this. Suddenly, the roof started to come down but Ariku tried to hold it back, protecting the children who were to affraid to even move away from the ceiling that was about to fall on top of them.
Kai was able to bring those children outside too. They ran towards their parents and a few of them were taken care off by the firemen. Kai watched happily how the children cried happily and clinged to their parents. If only he had someone to do that with too. Kai's hair and face was full of ashes and hos clothes were black too. He searched support against the wall because he couldn't hold it any longer. He watched how the fire made a little kid jump out of the window and gasped when he saw her land.
He inhaled deeply and ran inside again, he couldn't allow this to happen. People started to scream at kai, they couldn't let this happen but there was nothing they could do to stop him. Kai was being hit by little sparks all over and flinched with every burning feeling. Eventually, he reached his destination. He saw how Ariku was holding the ceiling back and tried to save the children but he also saw that he couldn't hold on much longer so he ran towards the children, brought them to another room and wanted to run back to help Ariku but it was too late.
He heard a scream and saw how everything landed hard on Ariku who immediatly died from the pressure. Kai watched all this in disbelief. He wasn't able to move a muscle and he just watched at Ariku's eyes...lifeless and cold. All he wanted to do was save the children, why did it have to end this way?
The flames set Ariku's body on fire and woke Kai up. He immediatly ran towards the children and tried to bring every single one to the exit. Something crashed behind him but he didn't pay any attention to it. He only tried to save the children. Eventually, he reached the exit and lead the children in the cold night.
A few parents started to cry when they saw their children, they just couldn't belief they were saved. Some fathers hugged Kai and shook him hands, and even a mother started to give Kai kisses all over his black face.
One couple came slowly towards Kai. Their face was emotionless but they looked as if they wanted to ask him something so kai turned their way. "Youngman, did you bring Ariku out here? Do you know that?" asked the father while holding the mother. Kai bowed his head and a few tears fell to the ground. "I couldn't save him" said Kai slowly "he died".
Suddenly, the mother slapped him right in the face and kai fell to the floor. "YOU BRAT!" screamed the mother. "YOU SAVED ALL THOSE CHILDREN BUT YOU JUST LET ARIKU DIE?!?" She looked as if she could kill Kai any moment now. The father was shocked and held his wife back while apoligizing to kai.
"It's nothing" said Kai. "Apparently, it is my fault." With this the mother calmed down and Kai just stood up and walked away, leaving the women behind, who was clearly sorry about her actions.
Somewhere, behind a bush, Kai whiped away the sweat on his forehead and collapsed, tired because of the action and hurt because of the fire and the ashes.
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That was it folks ^^
Don't forget to read sapphire tears but first REVIEW!
Thx chickies^^
Bloody Mary: So you have to keep it a secret? Aaaw man...I wanna know what it is! Tell me okay? Arigato ^^ And no, Tyson isn't a very good boy, he's just showing off ^^"
MasterFranny: come on, breath, breath! My chickens have to live on...at least until this story is finished ^^
Kai/Ray: is he gonna save the kids, that's the question. 'grins sadistically' I feel like adding another cliffie after this chapter....oh well, enjoy^^
ChibiSmiles: Wow, you must be sooo lucky to travel so much. I'm so jealous but no, I have to stay home and write fics ...oh well, as long as I get reviews, you won't hear me complaining.
Wo-ai-ni-Kai-Hiwatari: Bad suspense! You can't kill her. That's against the rules! Anyways, don't forget to breath ok? It's impossible to make everyone survive but the question is...will Kai survive?
Star Twilight: You saw my earlier works? Terrible, isn't it! Lolz ^^ anyways, I'm not really sure if it's coming to a close but I can't go on like this forever. But as soon as this story is finished, I'll start another one^^ , and another one, and another one, as long as people review me, i won't give up, okay?
Curtis Zidane Ziraa: Seems like a really cool closet to me ^^ but no...I don't need a thing, maybe some people who know very good Ryou-torture but you won't find them in your closet will you? ^^ what happened to my chickens? How should I know, is something wrong?
Lychee fairy: No, it's not ending yet and besides, who told you Kai is gonna die? Well, I don't think he will, but off cours, how could I know right? 'grin'
Kaiiko: isn't waiting terrible? I hate it too when i have to wait for other people to update, bwah!
Devil_tiger: nop, no elektrocution here ^^ I have lots of yu-gi-oh stories, if you are interested^^ by the way, you should read yu-gi-oh stories, Ryou (de good Bakura) is so much easier to torture then kai. Because Ryou is so very fragile...but enough, this is beyblade so enjoy!
Cosmo Kid: sorry but dreams never come true...not in my fics that is ^^ lolz, but about the kids...he might save them.
Trinity of the phoenix: here is the update ^^ enjoy
Nights Child: It won't be over very soon...I think ^^" anyways, does it hurt? Poor you! And you were flying? Good? Anyways, enjoy.
Oh, and people? Do me a favor and go read the story Sapphire tears. It's a very good story about beyblade and I just don't understand why my friend gets so little reviews for it, so help her out, read her fantastic fic (it's in my favorites for sure) and give her the best review you have ever written, okay? Can you do that for me? You are very good chickens^^
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chapter 12: starless nights
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Kai looked at the cowering children. They were trying to hide somewhere and their eyes were big with fear. There were so many of them. Most of them were teary-eyes, but only one kid was trying to protect them, trying to bring them to safety but he wasn't strong enough, and the children refused to go away from their safe spot.
Kai stepped forward and grabbed the kids arm who refused. "Save the others first onegai" he said with concern in his eyes. Kai just nodded and grabbed towo kids by the arms. A third, he placed on his back. "By the way" yelled the kid "My name is Ariku!" Kai ignored him and tried to get out of the building as soon as possible. The fire was spreading fast but the entrance was still unharmed, allthough kai knew that it wouldn't last forever.
Quikly, he brought the children outside and ran back to get more kids out of the fire. When he came back, he saw that Ariku was hugging one of the children who was crying his heart out. Apparently, his younger sister was allways with him and he was affraid that she might be sad about it. Right now, she was sitting at home, sleeping...
Kai sighed and grabbed the boy's arm. He placed a girl on his shoulders and told her to grab his hair. Next, he grabbed two other boys with his free hand and pulled them with him again. He tried to get out as soon as possible but the fire was starting to destroy everything and it was hard to find some more room. But eventually, kai succeeded in bringing the children outside of the building.
He wanted to run inside again but some people started to yell at him. "Don't go in again!" yelled a fireman. "You'll get yourself killed in there!" Kai just glared at him and ran in anyways. Some people were screaming after him and the parents of the children he allready rescued just watched how their hero was trying to save even more children.
Ariku was surprised when he saw kai again. "Back again?" asked Ariku in disbelief. Kai just placed two smaller children on his shoulders and grabbed some more by the wrist. Clearly, this was hurting them but Kai had no choice. He ran towards the exit and had to avoid some burning trash here and there. But eventually, he made it outside again. The children ran to their parents and Kai turned around to face the fire again.
He was trembling and coughing and he saw how some fireman ran towards him to stop him from going in. Kai fell to his knees and held his chest, he couldn't stop coughing. The smoke had filled his longs. A man layed a blanket on kai's shoulders and patted him on the shoulders "you are a hero kid" said the man and he looked at the building.
Suddenly, some screams were heard and Kai jumped up again. He couldn't leave those children behind so he jumped over the fire and ran in again, holding his scarf in front of his mouth. When he finally got to Ariku again, he saw some kids were allready coughing badly so he took them first. He ripped his scarf to shreds and gave everyone a piece. Only he had nothing left. He took as many kids as he could and left Ariku with the last children. Ariku was shocked, he had never seen so much bravery in his entire life before. Kai was risking his life to save those children, and he didn't even know them.
Ariku watched how Kai ran past the burning desks and rooms. He allways hoped to meet someone like that, but not in a place like this, not like this. Suddenly, the roof started to come down but Ariku tried to hold it back, protecting the children who were to affraid to even move away from the ceiling that was about to fall on top of them.
Kai was able to bring those children outside too. They ran towards their parents and a few of them were taken care off by the firemen. Kai watched happily how the children cried happily and clinged to their parents. If only he had someone to do that with too. Kai's hair and face was full of ashes and hos clothes were black too. He searched support against the wall because he couldn't hold it any longer. He watched how the fire made a little kid jump out of the window and gasped when he saw her land.
He inhaled deeply and ran inside again, he couldn't allow this to happen. People started to scream at kai, they couldn't let this happen but there was nothing they could do to stop him. Kai was being hit by little sparks all over and flinched with every burning feeling. Eventually, he reached his destination. He saw how Ariku was holding the ceiling back and tried to save the children but he also saw that he couldn't hold on much longer so he ran towards the children, brought them to another room and wanted to run back to help Ariku but it was too late.
He heard a scream and saw how everything landed hard on Ariku who immediatly died from the pressure. Kai watched all this in disbelief. He wasn't able to move a muscle and he just watched at Ariku's eyes...lifeless and cold. All he wanted to do was save the children, why did it have to end this way?
The flames set Ariku's body on fire and woke Kai up. He immediatly ran towards the children and tried to bring every single one to the exit. Something crashed behind him but he didn't pay any attention to it. He only tried to save the children. Eventually, he reached the exit and lead the children in the cold night.
A few parents started to cry when they saw their children, they just couldn't belief they were saved. Some fathers hugged Kai and shook him hands, and even a mother started to give Kai kisses all over his black face.
One couple came slowly towards Kai. Their face was emotionless but they looked as if they wanted to ask him something so kai turned their way. "Youngman, did you bring Ariku out here? Do you know that?" asked the father while holding the mother. Kai bowed his head and a few tears fell to the ground. "I couldn't save him" said Kai slowly "he died".
Suddenly, the mother slapped him right in the face and kai fell to the floor. "YOU BRAT!" screamed the mother. "YOU SAVED ALL THOSE CHILDREN BUT YOU JUST LET ARIKU DIE?!?" She looked as if she could kill Kai any moment now. The father was shocked and held his wife back while apoligizing to kai.
"It's nothing" said Kai. "Apparently, it is my fault." With this the mother calmed down and Kai just stood up and walked away, leaving the women behind, who was clearly sorry about her actions.
Somewhere, behind a bush, Kai whiped away the sweat on his forehead and collapsed, tired because of the action and hurt because of the fire and the ashes.
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That was it folks ^^
Don't forget to read sapphire tears but first REVIEW!
Thx chickies^^