Hi!!! I'm back with chapter 5!!!! It's super short, but tomorrow I'll try
and get another one up.
Since I have 10 reviews I'll respond to them.
*Vima: I love you sis!!!!
*Fire Gemron - My English isn't perfect because my first language is Spanish.
*Amskitty214 - Yeah, whatever.It's been a while since you don't go there.
*Sasami Minammo - Hey! I updated, now you update!!! ^_^
*Tiychan87 - I love Kuronue too!!!!
*Jeanne-chan56 - I see...
*Ewa - Ewa!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_______^
*Jeanne-chan56 - Yeah.I can be pretty annoying.especially when I know how to annoy.
*Fire Gemron - You're welcome! ^_^
*Vix - This chapter is for you.^_^
Thanx for all the reviews!!!!
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A Raven and A Sire Chapter 5: Split Up
It was an early morning, the Sun was shining and the sky was a relaxing bright blue. There were no clouds.
Everyone was waking up; Lorraine and Kuronue refused by all means to get out of their hiding spot until Yoko found both youkais sitting together in a tall tree branch.
Since Yoko could control all kind of plants in the Makai and Ningenkai, he made the branch they were sitting on drop them from the height they were to the floor. Kuronue had to open his wings and catch Lorraine once more, so none of them would be hurt from the fall.
Everybody was ready to start their journey. They made some breakfast. After they ate, they thought about their task.
They had to fight a shape shifter, a youkai with a powerful jagan, a youkai that copies it's enemy's rei ki and two new foes. They new what was their plan and how they intended to act. But there was a problem. There are powerful youkai. They could easily change their minds.
"How do we start looking for them?" Lorraine asked.
"We should try and sense their ki. It must be the strongest ki in Makai. If we manage to find it, we'll know in what direction to go". That was Kuronue's response.
"Then let's start looking" Yoko ordered.
They all concentrated their spiritual energy and sensed something unusual. There were two complete opposite directions to go.
"That's weird" Kuronue said "There are two great power sources in two different ways"
"Then let's split up" Lorraine suggested.
They did so. Lorraine went to the east with Kuronue and Yoko, while Hiei went with Mukuro to the west of the demon world.
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Told ya it was short.Tomorrow I'll try, TRY, and write another chapter.
Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Etc.
^_^
Disclaimer: I don't own anything that you might think I own except the character Lorraine.
Since I have 10 reviews I'll respond to them.
*Vima: I love you sis!!!!
*Fire Gemron - My English isn't perfect because my first language is Spanish.
*Amskitty214 - Yeah, whatever.It's been a while since you don't go there.
*Sasami Minammo - Hey! I updated, now you update!!! ^_^
*Tiychan87 - I love Kuronue too!!!!
*Jeanne-chan56 - I see...
*Ewa - Ewa!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_______^
*Jeanne-chan56 - Yeah.I can be pretty annoying.especially when I know how to annoy.
*Fire Gemron - You're welcome! ^_^
*Vix - This chapter is for you.^_^
Thanx for all the reviews!!!!
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A Raven and A Sire Chapter 5: Split Up
It was an early morning, the Sun was shining and the sky was a relaxing bright blue. There were no clouds.
Everyone was waking up; Lorraine and Kuronue refused by all means to get out of their hiding spot until Yoko found both youkais sitting together in a tall tree branch.
Since Yoko could control all kind of plants in the Makai and Ningenkai, he made the branch they were sitting on drop them from the height they were to the floor. Kuronue had to open his wings and catch Lorraine once more, so none of them would be hurt from the fall.
Everybody was ready to start their journey. They made some breakfast. After they ate, they thought about their task.
They had to fight a shape shifter, a youkai with a powerful jagan, a youkai that copies it's enemy's rei ki and two new foes. They new what was their plan and how they intended to act. But there was a problem. There are powerful youkai. They could easily change their minds.
"How do we start looking for them?" Lorraine asked.
"We should try and sense their ki. It must be the strongest ki in Makai. If we manage to find it, we'll know in what direction to go". That was Kuronue's response.
"Then let's start looking" Yoko ordered.
They all concentrated their spiritual energy and sensed something unusual. There were two complete opposite directions to go.
"That's weird" Kuronue said "There are two great power sources in two different ways"
"Then let's split up" Lorraine suggested.
They did so. Lorraine went to the east with Kuronue and Yoko, while Hiei went with Mukuro to the west of the demon world.
(*)(*)(*)(*)(*)(*)(*)(*)(*)(*)(*)(*)(*)(*)(*)(*)(*)(*)(*)(*)(*)(*)(*)(*)(*)( *)(*)
Told ya it was short.Tomorrow I'll try, TRY, and write another chapter.
Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Etc.
^_^
Disclaimer: I don't own anything that you might think I own except the character Lorraine.