Alright for all those who missed last chapters update. Spot has just
professed that he is in love with the newest girlfriend, Secret. Snaps has
realized that she is in love with her long time friend Spot, and is torn
with her emotions, what WILL she do?!
And a special thanks to those who actually reviewed for my new updates who include:
Anglefish7- hey, not everyone reviews, I understand that! But thank you soo much for reviewing, you don't know how good it makes me feel to know that people are actually reading my horrible writing! Lol
Umm... lol you hate it that much ? im sorry you don't like it, I really didn't mean to take that direction with it, but it just struck me as the best way to reach the ending! Lol if you want to talk plot with me just email me at beceldring@msn.com I'd love to hear ideas
And Harley (nenaaceveda1614@msn.com) thank you very much!! I like it too. did I update quick enough? Lol five days isn't that bad for me actually! Lol
So she wont sleep better alone,
And he wont sleep better alone,
No they wont feel better alone.
An audible gasp came out, wait, in love with Secret? SECRET?!
Oh Lordy that hurt.
"S-Secret? You think you're in love with Secret?" I asked incredulously.
Spot gave me a long and searching look. "Yea," he breathed.
"Oh," came my one-syllabic response.
"Is something wrong wit dat Snaps?"
"What in the world would be wrong with that?" there was a long pause after the hasty words had come out.
To even me I knew they sounded hurried, and not plausible. Obviously, I was hiding something from him, Spot was one of the most perceptive people I knew, and here he was, still oblivious to my feelings for him.
In a moment of feelings I sat up and grabbed him to myself, a tight hug saying the words that would surely drive the thoughts of me away, if they were even there, "That's wonderful Spot! I'm so happy for you! I always did like Secret!"
The response to my words was an uncomfortable silence, ended only by a banging downstairs...the nature of I am certain I do not want to know. Brooklyn boys really were boisterous with girls.
"Well," Spot said after a long interlude of soft breathing noises, "Then I guess you'se also think it's a good idea to well... um.. make it a liddle moah poimenent?"
I coughed.
Clearing my throat a little to show my discomfort that he was even considering doing anything of the sort, I replied, "What are you talking about?"
A little uncertainly, he began to explain, "Well, I'se know dat you'se will always be dere foah me, I'se can always count on you'se-" I interrupted him, "What does this have to do with me?"
"Eveythin' has got ta do with you damn it Snaps!"
This confused me, first he says he's in love with Secret; wanted to make things more permanent, and now he was saying this had to do with me. How could any of that possibly have anything to do with me? It was his decision, wasn't it?
"What I'se was meanin' ta say was dat, I could always count on you'se for advice, so I just want to see what you'se think I should do 'bout it." He looked at me questioningly, as if I really had an answer for him. Screwed up boy.
"Well," I said slowly, sitting up to face him. I leaned on the metal bar on the corner of the bunk testing my own words slowly in my head, "What did you mean, 'more permanent'?" I asked skeptically.
He chuckled for a moment then responded in almost a mocking tone, "What you'se think dat I'm gonna marry dat goil?" large gales of laughter erupted in the small room. He entire body shook with his howling laughs. At one point, five minutes later, he accidentally fell on the floor clutching his stomach.
As his laughter died out gradually I asked in a particularly aggravated tone, " And what may I ask is so damn funny Mr. Conlon?" I believed he was mocking me.
He looked up at me from the floor, his eyes were alight with tom foolery as he chuckled softly to himself for another few moments. Clearing his throat and wiping his eyes, he gave me his oh so detailed answer: "You'se are."
"While I'll thank for that compliment or insult another time, explain yourself right now, what the hell are you talking about? Permanent . . . ? What the hell do you want to make permanent?"
He gave me an even look, I suppose he wasn't used to hearing me curse, and it must have put him in the right state of mind again, considering the fact that I was not in the mood for this cheerfulness.
"Well I'se thinking that I want to not break up wid hah, maybe tell her dat I'se love her you know, all dat romantic shit."
"Yes, romantic shit, right."
His lower lip came slightly out in a small pout, "Will you'se help me get da goil of mah dreams to be mine longer dan a measly two weeks?"
Well this was a hard decision, to help the guy I was in love with profess his love to another? Sure. Piece of cake right?
Haha.don't you just lurrvv me? Well. what do you think? Lol please pretty please please review? Alrighty then. until next time
~Jade Shintz
And a special thanks to those who actually reviewed for my new updates who include:
Anglefish7- hey, not everyone reviews, I understand that! But thank you soo much for reviewing, you don't know how good it makes me feel to know that people are actually reading my horrible writing! Lol
Umm... lol you hate it that much ? im sorry you don't like it, I really didn't mean to take that direction with it, but it just struck me as the best way to reach the ending! Lol if you want to talk plot with me just email me at beceldring@msn.com I'd love to hear ideas
And Harley (nenaaceveda1614@msn.com) thank you very much!! I like it too. did I update quick enough? Lol five days isn't that bad for me actually! Lol
So she wont sleep better alone,
And he wont sleep better alone,
No they wont feel better alone.
An audible gasp came out, wait, in love with Secret? SECRET?!
Oh Lordy that hurt.
"S-Secret? You think you're in love with Secret?" I asked incredulously.
Spot gave me a long and searching look. "Yea," he breathed.
"Oh," came my one-syllabic response.
"Is something wrong wit dat Snaps?"
"What in the world would be wrong with that?" there was a long pause after the hasty words had come out.
To even me I knew they sounded hurried, and not plausible. Obviously, I was hiding something from him, Spot was one of the most perceptive people I knew, and here he was, still oblivious to my feelings for him.
In a moment of feelings I sat up and grabbed him to myself, a tight hug saying the words that would surely drive the thoughts of me away, if they were even there, "That's wonderful Spot! I'm so happy for you! I always did like Secret!"
The response to my words was an uncomfortable silence, ended only by a banging downstairs...the nature of I am certain I do not want to know. Brooklyn boys really were boisterous with girls.
"Well," Spot said after a long interlude of soft breathing noises, "Then I guess you'se also think it's a good idea to well... um.. make it a liddle moah poimenent?"
I coughed.
Clearing my throat a little to show my discomfort that he was even considering doing anything of the sort, I replied, "What are you talking about?"
A little uncertainly, he began to explain, "Well, I'se know dat you'se will always be dere foah me, I'se can always count on you'se-" I interrupted him, "What does this have to do with me?"
"Eveythin' has got ta do with you damn it Snaps!"
This confused me, first he says he's in love with Secret; wanted to make things more permanent, and now he was saying this had to do with me. How could any of that possibly have anything to do with me? It was his decision, wasn't it?
"What I'se was meanin' ta say was dat, I could always count on you'se for advice, so I just want to see what you'se think I should do 'bout it." He looked at me questioningly, as if I really had an answer for him. Screwed up boy.
"Well," I said slowly, sitting up to face him. I leaned on the metal bar on the corner of the bunk testing my own words slowly in my head, "What did you mean, 'more permanent'?" I asked skeptically.
He chuckled for a moment then responded in almost a mocking tone, "What you'se think dat I'm gonna marry dat goil?" large gales of laughter erupted in the small room. He entire body shook with his howling laughs. At one point, five minutes later, he accidentally fell on the floor clutching his stomach.
As his laughter died out gradually I asked in a particularly aggravated tone, " And what may I ask is so damn funny Mr. Conlon?" I believed he was mocking me.
He looked up at me from the floor, his eyes were alight with tom foolery as he chuckled softly to himself for another few moments. Clearing his throat and wiping his eyes, he gave me his oh so detailed answer: "You'se are."
"While I'll thank for that compliment or insult another time, explain yourself right now, what the hell are you talking about? Permanent . . . ? What the hell do you want to make permanent?"
He gave me an even look, I suppose he wasn't used to hearing me curse, and it must have put him in the right state of mind again, considering the fact that I was not in the mood for this cheerfulness.
"Well I'se thinking that I want to not break up wid hah, maybe tell her dat I'se love her you know, all dat romantic shit."
"Yes, romantic shit, right."
His lower lip came slightly out in a small pout, "Will you'se help me get da goil of mah dreams to be mine longer dan a measly two weeks?"
Well this was a hard decision, to help the guy I was in love with profess his love to another? Sure. Piece of cake right?
Haha.don't you just lurrvv me? Well. what do you think? Lol please pretty please please review? Alrighty then. until next time
~Jade Shintz