Hello all. I'm back and able to write more on this story. If you find any
of the spelling wrong please tell me, don't flame me. I'm very sensitive.
You'll make me cry and I won't want to write any more on this story. Well
any way I better get on to writting this story.
Disclaimer: I don't own any of it except for Shurin, Saki, Tokai, and Kairi. Though I do wish to own Sesshoumaru. -Dreamy sigh- Oh right back to the story.
Prologue
Preperations to War
Shurin stomped into the war room. "We have got to do something!!" She yelled angerly. "What do you propose we do?" Saki said casting a critical eye on her. She turned to him and glared. "Fuck off, s'cuse my language Lord Sesshoumaru. On a more serious note though, we've got to attack. I had a vision."
Sesshoumaru stood up. He knew she only had visions when is was most serious. He didn't think this war was going to be that bad, but apparently he was wrong. "Speak."He said with the most calmest of tones. "We lost horribly." Her eyes got a far away look in them. "Massacures, blood, gore, and fires; but nay"- She spoke alittle louder when she saw someone about to speak.-"Not of war. This 'was' our army they slaughtered, when they finished with us they moved on to our villages. It was utterly hopeless... even with Lord Sesshoumaru's true form and my third-level magic." "Then what do you propose we do?" asked Tokai. "We get the one thing all youkai fear." The room grew silent. "A powerful miko."
"Nonsence, who would work for us." Tokai stated laughing. "You are losing your mind." Hitten stated chuckling. "War is fogging up your brain and making you think crazy things." Matten stated busting a gut laughing. Shurin's eyes flashed dangeressly. "Then why am I the cousin to the only liveing miko/youkai?" The room was shocked to silence. "Naraku has pissed her off. She is out for blood. I plan to unlock her youkai." "How do we know she is as powerful as you say." Matten stated grining. "Because she is the miko of the Shikon no Tama, dumbass." With that she stood up and walked out.
So tell me what you think. This is accually the first story I've ever posted on the internet. I'm a little rough aroud the edges and help would be appreciated. So just telling me what you think would be help enough and for you wondering Shurin is based off of me. She just hasn't let her funnier side show yet.
Disclaimer: I don't own any of it except for Shurin, Saki, Tokai, and Kairi. Though I do wish to own Sesshoumaru. -Dreamy sigh- Oh right back to the story.
Prologue
Preperations to War
Shurin stomped into the war room. "We have got to do something!!" She yelled angerly. "What do you propose we do?" Saki said casting a critical eye on her. She turned to him and glared. "Fuck off, s'cuse my language Lord Sesshoumaru. On a more serious note though, we've got to attack. I had a vision."
Sesshoumaru stood up. He knew she only had visions when is was most serious. He didn't think this war was going to be that bad, but apparently he was wrong. "Speak."He said with the most calmest of tones. "We lost horribly." Her eyes got a far away look in them. "Massacures, blood, gore, and fires; but nay"- She spoke alittle louder when she saw someone about to speak.-"Not of war. This 'was' our army they slaughtered, when they finished with us they moved on to our villages. It was utterly hopeless... even with Lord Sesshoumaru's true form and my third-level magic." "Then what do you propose we do?" asked Tokai. "We get the one thing all youkai fear." The room grew silent. "A powerful miko."
"Nonsence, who would work for us." Tokai stated laughing. "You are losing your mind." Hitten stated chuckling. "War is fogging up your brain and making you think crazy things." Matten stated busting a gut laughing. Shurin's eyes flashed dangeressly. "Then why am I the cousin to the only liveing miko/youkai?" The room was shocked to silence. "Naraku has pissed her off. She is out for blood. I plan to unlock her youkai." "How do we know she is as powerful as you say." Matten stated grining. "Because she is the miko of the Shikon no Tama, dumbass." With that she stood up and walked out.
So tell me what you think. This is accually the first story I've ever posted on the internet. I'm a little rough aroud the edges and help would be appreciated. So just telling me what you think would be help enough and for you wondering Shurin is based off of me. She just hasn't let her funnier side show yet.