Chapter 8: Suzina's Secret (Part 1) Rated R, NOT suitable for anyone under 17 or immature

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If you where Keto, you could hear her humming, if you where Dark Magician Girl, you could hear her humming, if you where in the same bed room and Keto and Dark Magician Girl you could hear Keto's Mom humming away at 9:34 in the morning making breakfast, Vanilla flavored Pancakes, scrambled eggs, Toast, Chocolate Milk or Apple Juice, and Bacon, along with an Apple. But what was the occasion? It wasn't his birthday, He didn't get married, or get a job, make Honor roll or even Cut the grass. Keto sat up listening to the humming, and the sweet smell of Breakfast.

"Dark Magician Girl... wake up... My mom is making breakfast", said Keto quietly. But Dark Magician Girl did not move she just slept there, her back to him.

So Keto just got out of bed and walked downstairs in a Black tank top and rugged Black pants as he walked into the Kitchen and saw hand holding a Paper, He assumed it had a Head and body behind the paper so he declared himself that the paper bodied man was his Father. "Hey Mom what smells so good?", asked Keto turning around. He then got the biggest shock of his life. His breakfast was making itself.

"What the hell?!?!?!", said Keto looking toward his father.

"Dad! What's going on where's Mom???", He said sweating.

"Why she's right here.....", said his Dad, but this wasn't his Dad, this was an imposter, this voice was familiar as the man behind the paper put the paper down, crossed his leg and gave the most wicked smile he had yet to see. Totoshinku, he then flashed 3 Cards at Keto, it held pictures of his Mother, father and sister.

"TOTOSHINKU!", yelled Keto noticing his glove was missing.

"I have your family now Keto, Bring me the Millennium Items or your family will Perish!!!!!", said Totoshinku in a raging, echoing voice as flame's bursted from the ground. Totoshinku laughed and laughed and laughed as the world shook and exploded in Keto's face.

"MOTHER FUCKING BASTARD!!!!!!!!!!!", screamed Keto jolting up from his bed with his heart pounding incredibly fast. Keto took deep breaths, he was in his room, it was still night out. He looked at his clock, 3:23 am. Lights off, raining outside. Suddenly Dark Magician Girl, without her hood, wearing a pink, see-though blouse with a vision of panties and a bra visible. "Keto! What's wrong?", asked Dark Magician Girl looking worried.

"I...I... had a... a nightmare.... that's all...", said Keto taking deep breaths.

"What about?", asked Dark Magician Girl rubbing his arm. Keto took a drink of Water Dark Magician Girl made appear out of nowhere.

"Totoshinku, he has my parents.... trapped in cards, like my Grandmother....", said Keto relaxing.

"I think he might really have them....", said a familiar voice. Shocked by the sudden voice of Kenshin Keto and Dark Magician Girl jumped a bit.

"Kenshin... you bastard.... don't do that....", said Keto catching his breath again.

"Your parents......... They never came home", said Kenshin walking closer to them, Dark Magician in human disguise followed.

"What do you mean?", asked Keto looking at him.

"They...", said Kenshin slowly pointing to a picture of his family.

"Never..." He shook his head.

"Came..." made a moving jester.

"Home..." widened his arms introducing the house.

Keto stayed up the rest of the night, afraid of more nightmares like he did with Totoshinku, plus he wondered about his parents and sister. They never came. Morning came, The Shadow Duel with Suzina is about to take place. Keto looked tense like a Duel Monster's Tournament. He took a shower, while he stood there in the shower, scrubbing his head with Cherry scented Shampoo, being he loves the smell and taste of cherries, he thought to himself, there where so many things to complain about, a demanded Shadow Duel by a person he talked to for 20 minutes, owning a Millennium Item he regrets owning, Dark Magician Girl being the closest thing ever to actually wants, and in a way needs, to hang with Keto, Kenshin trying to kill him all for a glove he still doesn't understand, Totoshinku taking his Grandmother away, his parents not returning home, the nightmare after nightmare, and yet, all he wanted to do, was to blame someone for his scalp hurting after 10-15 minutes of scrubbing without stop. All this clogged Keto's thoughts, so many problems where changing him, like have cold Showers instead of hot ones, he wore the Black trench coat he hated and thought made him look like a sinner all the time, he drank Pepsi Twist instead of his all favorite Vanilla Coke, and for the first time ever, he felt respected, by Dark Magician Girl that is. What did he do to have so many people hate him? Why does Kenshin just want to Kill him, why can't Totoshinku leave him and his family alone, and why can't his parents and sister ever talk to him or at least leave a message, as a matter of fact, he's rarely seen them, They're out when he goes to bed, and they're out before he can even wake up.

After his shower, Keto got dressed, He wore a White T-Shirt with a long, fierce looking blue dragon on it, Black pants and the Black trench coat he did not like, he then but his deck in his inner coat pocket near his chest. And left with Dark Magician Girl in human mode, Kenshin followed along with Dark Magician in human mode, why? Because this duel might calm his anger that Keto still has his Egyptian God Card, Ra. Dark Magician Girl kept her arm around Keto's, as if he was a gentlemen.

"So, are you ready for the shadow duel Keto, or are you going to freeze in place hoping someone else will save you?", asked Kenshin walking slowly behind him with his arms behind his head.

{Shadow Duel?} Dark Magician girl thought to herself.

"Shut up Kenshin, or I'll knock your head in...", said Keto giving him a dirty look.

"A SHADOW DUEL!?!?!? This is what you and Suzina where talking about yesterday!?!?!?", yelled Dark Magician Girl Growling at Keto.

"Yeah.... what did you think we where doing?", said Keto looking at her puzzled. Dark Magician Girl was furious, her wand appeared out of nowhere and waved it at Keto. Suddenly, a small black cloud appeared over his head, it rained on him, mini lightning bolts shocked him, then a big rock fell on him as it then went away, she then continued walking away angry.

"What was that all about?", asked Keto getting up, dizzy.

"No idea", replied Kenshin.

After 30 minutes of walking, and Dark Magician Girl insulting Keto, they reached the shoreline as the sun was already setting, Suzina was waiting there, her arms folded, she wore the same clothing as yesterday, only Black, she was waiting for him, Buster Blader stood next to her, motionless, his sword in it's sheet sheath on his back.

"You ready Comei? Or Keto?", said Suzina smirking. Keto's Millennium Hand glowed.

"I'm ready, let's begin this duel...", said Comei, narrowing his eyes at her walking down to the shore. The sand was hot and the sounds of seagulls flying all around and splashes from the waves filled the surrounding as Comei on one side, Suzina on the other, starring at each other, narrowing their eyes at one another.

"I never got a chance to ask, what will happen if I win?", asked Comei, more calm then he was 20 minutes ago.

"I'll give you all the information you need on the whereabouts of your family...", said Suzina with little satisfaction. Comei's eyes widened.

"What?!? What have you done with them Suzina!?!?", demanded Comei.

"I do not have them, if I win, well I'll figure that out later...", said Suzina strapping a deck holder onto her arm. Comei did the same as they bother opened it. They both put they're index finger and middle finger on the top card as they had a stare-down. For 2 minutes they starred at each other waiting for a sign to begin. It was quiet, until suddenly, a car backfired. They both then drew their top card as Suzina threw a card at Comei like a Boomerang.

"Let see you take on Empress Judge!", she said as the Water Creature appeared, she was a human shaped monster wearing a silk dress. Comei threw his as Suzina sent Empress Judge after him. "I'll counter attack! With my Magical Cylinders!", said Comei. 2 Cylinders appeared infront of Comei, both pointing at Suzina. Dark Magician Girl then transformed to her normal self and jumped between the Cylinders using her wand to redirect the attack to go into the left cylinder.

"This card combed with a Magician, will absorb the attack.....", said Comei smirking.

"And fires it right back at you!", said Dark Magician Girl pointing her wand as the other Cylinder shot the energy from Empress Judge back at Suzina.

"Mistress Suzina!", said Buster Blader stepping infront of her as the energy went right through him and blasted Suzina backward. Comei then drew another card.

"Now! The offensive assault!!! I'll summon the 2 Thunder Dragon!!!", said Comei throwing 2 cards as two big pale dragons appeared from the cards and lightning bursted everywhere. Comei then threw another card.

"Now I'll activate the Magic of Fusion Gate! This is a field magic card and will change the surrounding as it gives off energy allowing monster to have a self fusion or their own built-in Polymerization, the fusion card", said Comei. The Water disappeared ad the land suddenly became flat, and the entire surrounding turned black with a green outline then green lines appeared in the sky.

"Now my two Dragons! Fuse together to create The Twin-Headed Thunder Dragon!", ordered Comei. The two dragons then rammed into each other and suddenly began fusing, suddenly a much bigger dragon with two mouths, on 4 legs with a Giant horn took the place or the two dragons as it roared and much bigger bolts of lightning appeared.

"What a coincidence... I had a fusion monster in mind as well.... I summon Marie The Fallen One and The Companionate Nun!", said Suzina throwing 2 cards, a Nun and a woman wearing black clothing with devil wings appeared. "And by using the Magic of your Fusion Gate...... Marie! Nun! Combine yourselves into St. Joan!", said Suzina. The two female monster began to merge with one and a woman took they're place, she wore a knight's armor, with no helmet and a long sword, she had blonde hair. "St. Joan destroy that Dragon! Feminine Sword of Might attack!", ordered Suzina. St. Joan swung her sword at Comei's Dragon, but the Twin-Headed Thunder Dragon caught the sword and, using his tail, sent her flying backwards.

"Twin-headed Thunder Dragon! Counter attack! Double Thunder Burst!", said Comei. The Dragon opened both it's mouths and shot two balls of lightning at St. Joan as St. Joan stood her ground, and swung her sword at the attack, the sword slashed through them, canceling them both out.

"A stale mate... they're both at 2800 attack power.... Comei's Dragon's 2nd mouth can be used to stop and equal or weaker opponent's attack while it can attack with hte first or both if he wishes.... then there's St. Joan... her sword is so strong that it can even slay attacks and block them too... it would probably take years for those two monster to finish a 1 on 1 battle", said Kenshin.

"Yeah.... but Suzina AND Comei have Magic and Traps that could easily strengthen their monsters or weaken the opponents, either way, attacking the Deck Master is more important...", said Dark Magician.

Comei drew a card from his deck and smirked a bit, "I have a card that will destroy your St. Joan... I'll place one card face down onto this battle field", said Comei putting the card face down, the card just floated there, face down. "Now Twin-Headed Thunder Dragon! Attack! Double Thunder Blast!", ordered Comei as the Dragon opened both his mouths and unleashed the same attack last time.

"But the attack is the same! there's no way that attack will defeat St. Joan! Does her plan on wearing out the sword?", said Dark Magician Girl looking to Kenshin for a little support.

"No really, it's almost impossible for that sword to be worn out, if he kept attacking with the dragon, and wore out the sword, St Joan could easily destroy the Dragon because HE would be weakened too from using so many attacks, just using two doubles the speed of losing it's power...", replied Kenshin.

"Let's not forget, St. Joan is using a sword, so wearing the sword down does nothing to her, giving her enough energy to finish the Dragon, the dragon won't have anytime to respond to a defend or counter attack", said Dark Magician. {But... then again, there's his face down card.... it could be a trap, for St. Joan's counter attack... I learned from our duel to not under estimate Comei... Comei is a Master Gamer, he wouldn't do an amateur strategy like wearing out the opponent with his own energy... lets see what he's up too...} Kenshin thought to himself.

The attack finally struck St. Joan's defensive sword. "Stupid move Comei! The same thing happened last time, and I can't ignore counter attacks What a waste of your energy! St. Joan! Counter Attack!", said Suzina. Comei smirked at St. Joan's Counter attack.

"Thought so... Activate Trap Card!!!", said Comei. "Trap Card!?!?!?!", said Suzina shocked. {I knew it...} Kenshin thought to himself smirking. The Card leapt upward to reveal Dynamite wrapped in string with a Dragon on it, "Blast with Chain! It raises a selected monster that I control's attack power by 500 points!", said Comei Smirking as a chain bursted from the card and wrapped itself around Twin-Headed Thunder Dragon's neck like a collar and the Dynamite was the tag. The Dragon used his 2nd mouth to grasp the sword and send her flying backwards, "Twin-Headed Thunder Dragon! Counter attack! Double Thunder Blast!", said Comei as the dragon unleashed two attacks on St. Joan as St. Joan could not hold off the 1st attack and blew up, into dust, destroyed, the 2nd attack hit Suzina doing 2800 points of damage.

"Its 8000 to 3100, Comei is gonna win this game!", said Dark Magician Girl happily, forgetting that she was pissed off at him.

{She shouldn't celebrate, this is still Comei's match to loose... although I'm placing all my bets on him, I won't be upset or surprised if Suzina has more monsters, stronger even then St. Joan in her arsenal.... we'll just have to wait and see} Kenshin thought to himself, narrowing his eyes to Comei, then Suzina.

"Good Job, no one has ever defeated my St. Joan or brought my life points this low, even in a mortal duel...", said Suzina.

"Thanks, your St. Joan was a great warm up for my Twin-Headed Thunder Dragon, I hope that wasn't your best monster...", said Comei smirking his cocky smile.

"Oh he'll get warmed up, I'll burn him...", said Suzina sounding more confident. Kenshin narrowed his eyes back to Suzina and studied her carefully {This duel is just getting started.....} he said, as he saw her smile.

It looks like Comei has the upper edge with his powered up Twin-Headed Thunder Dragon, but why is Suzina smiling? Is she going crazy, or does she have a monster ever stronger then St. Joan, if so will this be the end for Comei? Find out next time on YuGiOh Xtreme

Next: Chapter 9: Suzina's Secret (part 2)