Chapter 14: The Pain and the Tormentor Rated R, NOT suitable for anyone under 17 or immature
Author's Note: Yay! I got a new computer, sorry about the lack of upgrades, but my Computer had a virus in it (Plus it was old) So I finally got a Compaq) And now I'll be updating soon! Hip Hip HOORAY!
Also: Because of the lawsuit between Wizards of The Coast on Upperdeck, The Magic Cards of YuGiOh are now called Spell Cards, so if you are confused on why the Magic Cards are now Spell cards, remember that the lawsuit now has Magic Cards called Spell Cards. Ok? Glad we're all caught up.
Keys:
*= When a player must sacrifice weaker monster to summon higher leveled monsters, sacrifice 1 monster to summon a monster at Lv. 5 or 6, sacrifice 2 monsters to summon monsters Lv. 7 or higher, sacrifice 3 monster to summon either of the 3 Egyptian God Cards, some cards require sacrifices in order to keep cards in play.
**= Play song "Going Under" by Evanescence (Optional)
{ } = Thoughts
- = time shift
~~~ =Mind Chamber
Suzina grew chills down her spine realizing that Becky had deceived her. She fell to her knees, she glared at the ground and began to cry, she hiccuped in between sniffs. Comei clenched his fists.
"You!", shouted Comei pointing at Becky's father. Becky's father then glared at Comei. 'What is your name?", demanded Comei.
"My name is Hiroshi, Hiroshi Tanker... that name will go in the history books of darkness once Master Totoshinku rules this world using the powers of all the Millennium Items", said Hiroshi.
"You know Totoshinku will take your Millennium Dagger once he has all of them but yours", said Kenshin also giving Hiroshi a disgusted look.
"Master Totoshinku has given me this Millennium Dagger to hunt down the rest, he'll spare my life if I do as he says and returns the dagger once he has all the items", said Hiroshi holding up the Millennium Dagger.
"Well we'll defeat you in a duel and take your dagger!!!", said Comei preparing his deck for combat. Hiroshi smirked.
"Is that all you want?", said Hiroshi also preparing his deck. Comei grinded his teeth for a moment.
"That's a...", said Comei before he suddenly looked toward Suzina, kneeled and crying her eyes out.
"And...... And you'll Grant Becky her freedom to us!", said Comei finally finishing. Suzina's eyes shot open as she stopped crying finally and looked to Comei. She felt like crying but couldn't bring herself to cry again.
"Comei...", whispered Suzina.
"Very Well, but because it's 2 requests, If I win, I take your Millennium Item AND Dark Magician Girl as well as Kuriboh will belong to Master Totoshinku"
"Deal...", replied Comei. Comei looked to Kenshin who looked as if he's ready to battle too.
"Kenshin, I want you to not fight this one with me.
"What?", said Kenshin looking to Comei as if he heard the worst of news.
"If I loose You'll need to wager everything we lost back in our favor and take him down, find his weakness", said Comei.
"But if we work together It can be done faster!", argued Kenshin.
"I trusted your reliability Kenshin now It's time you trusted my Judgement!", Comei argued right back. Kenshin then grinded his teeth for a second and stepped down from his position in battle.
{The fool... he has no idea what he's up against, If he allowed Kenshin to fight, they would have had a chance, but without the assistance of god of Ra, he's just an open target... for MY Egyptian God card...} Hiroshi thought to himself.
"It's your call, will this be a Shadow Duel, or a normal Duel?", said Comei.
"Hmmmm, you've had a lot of experience in Shadow Duels, so lets see if you can win in the same game you played against Master Totoshinku...", said Hiroshi smiling.
"8000 life points, *tributes, DUEL!", Said Comei.
Hiroshi drew 5 cards then a 6th, "I guess I'll go first then, I'll set a monster in defense mode, and set one card onto the field, ending my turn", said Hiroshi. Two illusion card appeared on Hiroshi's Side of the field, one representing a monster, the other representing a trap or spell card. Comei's eyes narrowed at the face down cards, He didn't know what to do during his first turn, because he went 2nd, he has the option to attack this turn or not. He looked at his hand, Gearfried The Iron Knight, Dark Magician, Raigeki, Heavy Storm, Spear Dragon and Ceasefire.
"I'll start by playing Heavy Storm to destroy your face down Trap or Spell!!! And Raigeki to Destroy your face down monster!", said Comei playing the two Spell Cards. A gust of Wind appeared out of no where as Hiroshi's Face down spell card disappeared and then, Thunder roared from the sky as it struck Hiroshi's monster, destroying it. "Now I'll summon The Spear Dragon in attack Mode!!!", said Comei playing the Card as a Dragon with a very small body with giant wings and a long beak appeared. "And I'll also place one card face down, Spear Dragon! Spear Assault Attack!", ordered Comei as Spear Dragon then charged at Hiroshi and stabbed Hiroshi in the arm as his Life Points went from 8000 to 6100. Hiroshi just smiled as Comei's Spear Dragon went into Defensive mode by itself. Hiroshi drew a card from his deck.
"Your Spear Dragon is strong Comei... I mean just look at this flesh wound on my arm... but because he is forced into switching into defense mode after he attacks, He's easy pray for this card!!! I Summon the Goblin Attack Force! With a destructive power of 2300!!!", said Hiroshi playing the card as an army of goblins with helmets and mallets appeared.
"True, but even with an Attack of 2300, Goblin Attack Force goes to defense mode too and can't switch back until the 2nd turn it's attacked...", said Kenshin watching.
"Now I'll activate The spell card Fairy's Meteor Crush!!! This Spell card will allow my monster to do damage to your life points no matter what mode he's in... Goblin Attack Force! Club Crushing Assault!!!", said Hiroshi. The Goblins then charged at Spear Dragon and assaulted it with their clubs as Comei's Life Points went from 8000 to 5700. "And to end my turn I'll place two cards onto the field. "My turn...", said Comei drawing a card.
{Pot of Greed.... using this card will allow me to draw two more cards from my deck...} Comei thought to himself.
"I'll play the Spell card Pot of Greed! Which allows me to draw two extra cards...", said Comei drawing the two.
{Oh Yeah... Gold.... Change of Heart and Monster Reborn... If I can reborn Spear Dragon and Change of Heart his Goblin Attack Force, I can summon The Dark Magician!} Comei smirked to himself.
"Activate Spell card Monster Reborn!!!", said Comei as an Anhk appeared in his hand. "And I choose to Reborn Spear Dragon in attack mode!!!", said Comei as the Anhk resurrected Spear Dragon. "And I will also play the spell card Change of Heart which will let me control one of your monster for a whole turn!!!", said Comei as an angel wearing half White and Half black appeared, Goblin Attack Force then Stood up and walked to Comei's side of the field and went back to defense mode.
"Stupid move Comei... Even though you control Goblin Attack Force... He still can't go back to Attack mode...", said Hiroshi smiling.
"I don't plan on attacking with it, I'm sacrificing them both! to summon... The Dark Magician!!!", said Comei as The Dark Magician appeared, his blonde hair blowing in the wind.
"Oh...fuck.... The Dark Magician...", said Hiroshi knowing he can't do anything this turn.
"Dark Magician!!! Dark Magic attack!!!", said Comei pointing at Hiroshi as Dark Magician swung his wand and sent black lightning at Hiroshi as Hiroshi was covered with the attack's energy, then his life points dropped from 6100 to 3600.
Hiroshi drew a card and looked at it, then he smiled coming up with a great Strategy. "Comei the card I just drew will now finish you off once and for all.... and I have just the right amount of life points to pull this off too...", said Hiroshi playing one card face down. Then he set another card face down.
"Now I'll place one monster face down in defensive mode ending my turn...", Comei drew a card and then summoned a monster, "Go!!! Gearfried! The Iron Knight!!!", said Comei as he summoned Gearfried to the field. "Activate Trap card!!! Ultimate offering!!!", said Hiroshi revealing his face down card, It was a hand with blood dripping from it.
"Confused Comei? Allow me to explain... Ultimate Offering is a Trap Card that allows my summoning ability Limitless!!! And I can summon monsters during your turn and my turn as well in exchange for 500 life points... And I'll offer 1000 life points to summon these two monsters... Battle Ox and Neo The Magic Swordsman! In attack mode!!!", Said Hiroshi playing the two monster cards.
"It won't matter because Dark Magician And Gearfried can destroy them with ease!!! Dark Magician And Gearfried! Destroy Battle Ox and Neo The Magic Swordsman!!!", said Comei. Hiroshi's eye shot open for this chance. "Activate Trap Card! Mirror Force!!!", said Hiroshi revealing his Trap Card.
"No!!!", said Comei.
"Oh Shit, Mirror Force! Comei's monsters will be destroyed!!!", said Kenshin as a barrier appeared around Battle Ox and Neo as the attacks of Dark Magician and Gearfried where reflected, destroying Comei's monsters.
"Now I'll use my Traps ability to summon a monster during your turn again!!! I'll offer all three of my monsters for The unstoppable... GOD OF OBELISK!!!", said Hiroshi holding up a blue card with an Egyptian god on it.
Comei's eyes shot open as he gasped, then all three of Hiroshi's monster's disappeared and Obelisk rose from the ground before Comei ready to assault him.
"Give up Comei! Once you end your turn The God of Obelisk will destroy you, and your millennium item will belong to Master Totoshinku... if you forfeit, your life will be spared, but what happens between you and Master Totoshinku is beyond my power... And I know you don't even have any pieces of Exodia in your hand to stop Obelisk", said Hiroshi with a Dark smirk.
Comei looked at his hand, there wasn't a single piece of Exodia in his hand.
"Nothing in my hand can stop Obelisk... I can however, play this Spell Card... Graceful Charity!!! I draw 3 cards then discard 2...", said Comei drawing 3 cards, Kuriboh, Exodia's Left Arm and Call of The Haunted. {I can't use these Exodia pieces, there's no way I'll be able to draw Exodia in less then one turn... but... I do have... one hope... That Ultimate Offering took 1500 life points from Hiroshi... If I can summon back Gearfried, and if he plays 3 more effect monsters, my Ceasefire can finish this duel... but what are the odds he'll do that.... If I can remember what Kenshin said before... Obelisk can sacrifice 2 monsters to obliterate all my monsters and inflict 4000 points of damage automatically, and he can still attack directly... What do I do...} Comei thought to himself.
"Hey... wait a minute... Kenshin?", said Dark Magician Girl looking at Kenshin.
"Yeah?", replied Kenshin.
"Look at Obelisk for a minute, now look at Hiroshi, isn't something wrong?", said Dark Magician Girl. Kenshin looked for a moment, Obelisk was just standing there awaiting an attack, and Hiroshi was just standing there too, no changes, nothing.
"Oh! I see!!!", said Kenshin realizing what Dark Magician Girl was talking about.
"What's wrong Kenshin?", asked Dark Magician.
"Remember when I summoned The God of Ra against Comei? My hair, it turned Yellow and was spiked up, my pupils turns yellow, and I was giving off a great amount of energy, not to mention, the sky thundered... Because apparently Ra choose me as it's master, so it gave me the power... But Hiroshi... nothing's happening, as if...", said Kenshin.
"As if Obelisk doesn't plan to attack for Hiroshi!", said Dark Magician realizing it too. Kuriboh then began to goes crazy and jumping all over the place, Dark Magician Girl got a hold of him, "What's with you???", said Dark Magician Girl. Kuriboh then pointed at Comei. They looked at Comei, his hair, it began to wave a bit, and his eyes where also changing a bit, as if he was transforming or something.
"Dark Magician... you thinking what I'm thinking?", asked Kenshin smirking.
"I do master... Obelisk was meant for Comei... not Hiroshi... Obelisk is gonna turn on Hiroshi...", said Dark Magician. Suzina, who finally stopped crying heard the news and looked up, {C...Comei... is gonna win?} Suzina thought to herself. Comei sighed as he discarded Ceasefire and Call of The Haunted.
"So you finally realized that nothing can save you now, right?", said Hiroshi. Comei nodded looking at Hiroshi with disgust. Hiroshi drew card, "Well it was nice knowing you for 30 minutes... Now I will use the Power of Ultimate Offering to summon 2 monsters to the field in face down defense mode... now God of Obelisk!!! Offer them to finish Comei then attack him directly!!!", commanded Hiroshi. But Obelisk, did nothing.
"What are you waiting for Obelisk?!?!?!?! Finish Comei Now!!!", ordered Hiroshi. Obelisk then grabbed the two face down monsters and crushed them for the offering. Hiroshi smiled, "Good Bye Comei!!!", said Hiroshi. Then Obelisk just walked over to Comei's side of the field, and then faced Hiroshi. "What the fuck is going on!?!?!?", said Hiroshi looking frightened.
"Obelisk... has not chosen you... God Cards choose their masters... And he has chosen... ME", said Comei looking upward, his shadowed eyes revealed as his entire eye pupil became Blue, adding too the blue already in his eye.
"YYYYYAHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!", Screamed Comei loudly as a Thunder storm broke out and Comei's hair spiked into a Blue Color and his body glowed with a blue mist.
"Holy mother fucker.... look at all the energy Obelisk is producing to Comei!", said Kenshin.
Hiroshi grinded his teeth and pulled out the Millennium Dagger, "if I'm gonna loose... SO WILL YOU!!!", said Hiroshi throwing the Millennium Dagger past him. Comei turned to see where the dagger was heading, it was heading for Suzina!!!
"SUZINA!!!! GET OUT OF THE WAY!!!", yelled Comei. But Suzina could not move.
"Suzina!!!", yelled Becky's voice. Suzina's eye shot open. Hearing her voice, made her surroundings cold, and damp.
"Becky?", Suzina whispered, that whisper echoed as all sound muted from Suzina's hearing and Becky, stepped in Suzina's way, holding out her arms, and just before Suzina could say anything, the dagger, went right through her chest. ** Blood poured from Becky onto Suzina's cheeks. Becky, then feel to her knees as rain suddenly broke from the sky and came down like the world was ending. At the moment, Suzina's world collaped into itself. Becky fell into Suzina's arms.
"Becky!!! Becky hold on!!!", said Suzina holding Becky in her arms. Becky looked up to Suzina, and smiled, "Suzina... I L...lo....Love... you....", said Becky gently rubbing Suzina's cheeks with her finger as blood dripped down her mouth, Becky, was now dead.
"Becky...... I love you too! Don't leave me.... I need you.... I need you...", cried Suzina, Suzina cracked with tears when she said "I need you" for a 2nd time. They all glared at them for a while and Comei looked to himself.
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Comei, left his mind chamber and met Keto who was standing at his mind chamber door, they faced each other.
"The power of God was in our hands as well as the Power of an Egyptian God... and we couldn't save her...", Keto said to Comei. Comei looked away disappointed at himself.
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"MONSTER!!!", roared a voice, Buster Blader held up his sword jumping high in the air above Hiroshi. "DIEEEEE!!!", roared Buster Blader swinging his sword down.
"Tri-Horned Dragon!!!", said Hiroshi opening his eyes, as a Dragon with no wings and 3 horns appeared and stabbed Buster Blader in the chest with it's middle horn.
"BUSTER BLADER!!!", screamed Suzina looking at Buster Blader falling backward onto his back.
"NO BUSTER BLADER!!!", screamed Suzina crying even harder. Comei cleanched his fist and grinded his teeth and looked furious at Hiroshi, as the Millennium Symbol appeared on his forehead and he screamed louder, creating more energy.
"YOU CANNOT BE FORGIVEN! AND I WILL SHOW YOU NO MERCY!!! GOD OF OBELISK!!! TORMENTING OBLITERATION!!!!", commanded the angry Comei. Obelisk gathered energy into his right fist and slammed it into Hiroshi, his life points dropped from 2100 to 0.
Game Over, Winner, Comei.
Hiroshi stood up weak as Obelisk walked closer toward Hiroshi.
"Penalty Game!!! DEATH!!!", said Comei pointing to Hiroshi as Obelisk gathered more energy into a fist. Hiroshi smirked and stood up, "I have no intention on Dying!!! We'll meet again!!! Goodbye!!!", said Hiroshi as Shadow covered him and he began to disappear.
"No! Obelisk stop him!!!", said Comei, but Obelisk was to late, Hiroshi and his deck leader Tri-Horned Dragon where gone, and he had the dagger too. Obelisk formed back into a card and floated into Comei's hands as Comei glared at it, the rain came down harder and thunder roared louder as he looked to Buster Blader, who Dark Magician Girl and Dark Magician picked up.
"He's alive... barley... but... Becky wasn't so lucky...", said Dark Magician Girl looking to Suzina, who knelt there, holding Suzina, she cried and cried.
"Suzina... I'm sorry... I tried...", said Comei who hung his head in shame. Suzina, didn't reply, she cried, and cried some more. Soon after, the ambulance came, took Becky and announce her officially dead, her heart had been gorged from her chest and there was a hole in it. Dark Magician Girl said it was the power of Forbidden Love that allowed her to live those extra seconds, it's a powerful Dark Magic. Kenshin made up the story that someone broke into Becky's house and murdered Becky while trying to save her girlfriend, and the killer also took the bodies of Becky's parents with him. And Suzina? She cried and cried until she could cry no more.
Keto, Comei, Kenshin and now Suzina have become victims of Totoshinku's rein of terror. But now, it ends. It end right here, right now. Can they reach Totoshinku and pass his obstacles? Also, Julia, holder of the Millennium Crown appears! What happens? Find out next time on YuGiOh Xtreme!
Next: Chapter15: End Game Part 1: Julia's Warning
Author's Note: Yay! I got a new computer, sorry about the lack of upgrades, but my Computer had a virus in it (Plus it was old) So I finally got a Compaq) And now I'll be updating soon! Hip Hip HOORAY!
Also: Because of the lawsuit between Wizards of The Coast on Upperdeck, The Magic Cards of YuGiOh are now called Spell Cards, so if you are confused on why the Magic Cards are now Spell cards, remember that the lawsuit now has Magic Cards called Spell Cards. Ok? Glad we're all caught up.
Keys:
*= When a player must sacrifice weaker monster to summon higher leveled monsters, sacrifice 1 monster to summon a monster at Lv. 5 or 6, sacrifice 2 monsters to summon monsters Lv. 7 or higher, sacrifice 3 monster to summon either of the 3 Egyptian God Cards, some cards require sacrifices in order to keep cards in play.
**= Play song "Going Under" by Evanescence (Optional)
{ } = Thoughts
- = time shift
~~~ =Mind Chamber
Suzina grew chills down her spine realizing that Becky had deceived her. She fell to her knees, she glared at the ground and began to cry, she hiccuped in between sniffs. Comei clenched his fists.
"You!", shouted Comei pointing at Becky's father. Becky's father then glared at Comei. 'What is your name?", demanded Comei.
"My name is Hiroshi, Hiroshi Tanker... that name will go in the history books of darkness once Master Totoshinku rules this world using the powers of all the Millennium Items", said Hiroshi.
"You know Totoshinku will take your Millennium Dagger once he has all of them but yours", said Kenshin also giving Hiroshi a disgusted look.
"Master Totoshinku has given me this Millennium Dagger to hunt down the rest, he'll spare my life if I do as he says and returns the dagger once he has all the items", said Hiroshi holding up the Millennium Dagger.
"Well we'll defeat you in a duel and take your dagger!!!", said Comei preparing his deck for combat. Hiroshi smirked.
"Is that all you want?", said Hiroshi also preparing his deck. Comei grinded his teeth for a moment.
"That's a...", said Comei before he suddenly looked toward Suzina, kneeled and crying her eyes out.
"And...... And you'll Grant Becky her freedom to us!", said Comei finally finishing. Suzina's eyes shot open as she stopped crying finally and looked to Comei. She felt like crying but couldn't bring herself to cry again.
"Comei...", whispered Suzina.
"Very Well, but because it's 2 requests, If I win, I take your Millennium Item AND Dark Magician Girl as well as Kuriboh will belong to Master Totoshinku"
"Deal...", replied Comei. Comei looked to Kenshin who looked as if he's ready to battle too.
"Kenshin, I want you to not fight this one with me.
"What?", said Kenshin looking to Comei as if he heard the worst of news.
"If I loose You'll need to wager everything we lost back in our favor and take him down, find his weakness", said Comei.
"But if we work together It can be done faster!", argued Kenshin.
"I trusted your reliability Kenshin now It's time you trusted my Judgement!", Comei argued right back. Kenshin then grinded his teeth for a second and stepped down from his position in battle.
{The fool... he has no idea what he's up against, If he allowed Kenshin to fight, they would have had a chance, but without the assistance of god of Ra, he's just an open target... for MY Egyptian God card...} Hiroshi thought to himself.
"It's your call, will this be a Shadow Duel, or a normal Duel?", said Comei.
"Hmmmm, you've had a lot of experience in Shadow Duels, so lets see if you can win in the same game you played against Master Totoshinku...", said Hiroshi smiling.
"8000 life points, *tributes, DUEL!", Said Comei.
Hiroshi drew 5 cards then a 6th, "I guess I'll go first then, I'll set a monster in defense mode, and set one card onto the field, ending my turn", said Hiroshi. Two illusion card appeared on Hiroshi's Side of the field, one representing a monster, the other representing a trap or spell card. Comei's eyes narrowed at the face down cards, He didn't know what to do during his first turn, because he went 2nd, he has the option to attack this turn or not. He looked at his hand, Gearfried The Iron Knight, Dark Magician, Raigeki, Heavy Storm, Spear Dragon and Ceasefire.
"I'll start by playing Heavy Storm to destroy your face down Trap or Spell!!! And Raigeki to Destroy your face down monster!", said Comei playing the two Spell Cards. A gust of Wind appeared out of no where as Hiroshi's Face down spell card disappeared and then, Thunder roared from the sky as it struck Hiroshi's monster, destroying it. "Now I'll summon The Spear Dragon in attack Mode!!!", said Comei playing the Card as a Dragon with a very small body with giant wings and a long beak appeared. "And I'll also place one card face down, Spear Dragon! Spear Assault Attack!", ordered Comei as Spear Dragon then charged at Hiroshi and stabbed Hiroshi in the arm as his Life Points went from 8000 to 6100. Hiroshi just smiled as Comei's Spear Dragon went into Defensive mode by itself. Hiroshi drew a card from his deck.
"Your Spear Dragon is strong Comei... I mean just look at this flesh wound on my arm... but because he is forced into switching into defense mode after he attacks, He's easy pray for this card!!! I Summon the Goblin Attack Force! With a destructive power of 2300!!!", said Hiroshi playing the card as an army of goblins with helmets and mallets appeared.
"True, but even with an Attack of 2300, Goblin Attack Force goes to defense mode too and can't switch back until the 2nd turn it's attacked...", said Kenshin watching.
"Now I'll activate The spell card Fairy's Meteor Crush!!! This Spell card will allow my monster to do damage to your life points no matter what mode he's in... Goblin Attack Force! Club Crushing Assault!!!", said Hiroshi. The Goblins then charged at Spear Dragon and assaulted it with their clubs as Comei's Life Points went from 8000 to 5700. "And to end my turn I'll place two cards onto the field. "My turn...", said Comei drawing a card.
{Pot of Greed.... using this card will allow me to draw two more cards from my deck...} Comei thought to himself.
"I'll play the Spell card Pot of Greed! Which allows me to draw two extra cards...", said Comei drawing the two.
{Oh Yeah... Gold.... Change of Heart and Monster Reborn... If I can reborn Spear Dragon and Change of Heart his Goblin Attack Force, I can summon The Dark Magician!} Comei smirked to himself.
"Activate Spell card Monster Reborn!!!", said Comei as an Anhk appeared in his hand. "And I choose to Reborn Spear Dragon in attack mode!!!", said Comei as the Anhk resurrected Spear Dragon. "And I will also play the spell card Change of Heart which will let me control one of your monster for a whole turn!!!", said Comei as an angel wearing half White and Half black appeared, Goblin Attack Force then Stood up and walked to Comei's side of the field and went back to defense mode.
"Stupid move Comei... Even though you control Goblin Attack Force... He still can't go back to Attack mode...", said Hiroshi smiling.
"I don't plan on attacking with it, I'm sacrificing them both! to summon... The Dark Magician!!!", said Comei as The Dark Magician appeared, his blonde hair blowing in the wind.
"Oh...fuck.... The Dark Magician...", said Hiroshi knowing he can't do anything this turn.
"Dark Magician!!! Dark Magic attack!!!", said Comei pointing at Hiroshi as Dark Magician swung his wand and sent black lightning at Hiroshi as Hiroshi was covered with the attack's energy, then his life points dropped from 6100 to 3600.
Hiroshi drew a card and looked at it, then he smiled coming up with a great Strategy. "Comei the card I just drew will now finish you off once and for all.... and I have just the right amount of life points to pull this off too...", said Hiroshi playing one card face down. Then he set another card face down.
"Now I'll place one monster face down in defensive mode ending my turn...", Comei drew a card and then summoned a monster, "Go!!! Gearfried! The Iron Knight!!!", said Comei as he summoned Gearfried to the field. "Activate Trap card!!! Ultimate offering!!!", said Hiroshi revealing his face down card, It was a hand with blood dripping from it.
"Confused Comei? Allow me to explain... Ultimate Offering is a Trap Card that allows my summoning ability Limitless!!! And I can summon monsters during your turn and my turn as well in exchange for 500 life points... And I'll offer 1000 life points to summon these two monsters... Battle Ox and Neo The Magic Swordsman! In attack mode!!!", Said Hiroshi playing the two monster cards.
"It won't matter because Dark Magician And Gearfried can destroy them with ease!!! Dark Magician And Gearfried! Destroy Battle Ox and Neo The Magic Swordsman!!!", said Comei. Hiroshi's eye shot open for this chance. "Activate Trap Card! Mirror Force!!!", said Hiroshi revealing his Trap Card.
"No!!!", said Comei.
"Oh Shit, Mirror Force! Comei's monsters will be destroyed!!!", said Kenshin as a barrier appeared around Battle Ox and Neo as the attacks of Dark Magician and Gearfried where reflected, destroying Comei's monsters.
"Now I'll use my Traps ability to summon a monster during your turn again!!! I'll offer all three of my monsters for The unstoppable... GOD OF OBELISK!!!", said Hiroshi holding up a blue card with an Egyptian god on it.
Comei's eyes shot open as he gasped, then all three of Hiroshi's monster's disappeared and Obelisk rose from the ground before Comei ready to assault him.
"Give up Comei! Once you end your turn The God of Obelisk will destroy you, and your millennium item will belong to Master Totoshinku... if you forfeit, your life will be spared, but what happens between you and Master Totoshinku is beyond my power... And I know you don't even have any pieces of Exodia in your hand to stop Obelisk", said Hiroshi with a Dark smirk.
Comei looked at his hand, there wasn't a single piece of Exodia in his hand.
"Nothing in my hand can stop Obelisk... I can however, play this Spell Card... Graceful Charity!!! I draw 3 cards then discard 2...", said Comei drawing 3 cards, Kuriboh, Exodia's Left Arm and Call of The Haunted. {I can't use these Exodia pieces, there's no way I'll be able to draw Exodia in less then one turn... but... I do have... one hope... That Ultimate Offering took 1500 life points from Hiroshi... If I can summon back Gearfried, and if he plays 3 more effect monsters, my Ceasefire can finish this duel... but what are the odds he'll do that.... If I can remember what Kenshin said before... Obelisk can sacrifice 2 monsters to obliterate all my monsters and inflict 4000 points of damage automatically, and he can still attack directly... What do I do...} Comei thought to himself.
"Hey... wait a minute... Kenshin?", said Dark Magician Girl looking at Kenshin.
"Yeah?", replied Kenshin.
"Look at Obelisk for a minute, now look at Hiroshi, isn't something wrong?", said Dark Magician Girl. Kenshin looked for a moment, Obelisk was just standing there awaiting an attack, and Hiroshi was just standing there too, no changes, nothing.
"Oh! I see!!!", said Kenshin realizing what Dark Magician Girl was talking about.
"What's wrong Kenshin?", asked Dark Magician.
"Remember when I summoned The God of Ra against Comei? My hair, it turned Yellow and was spiked up, my pupils turns yellow, and I was giving off a great amount of energy, not to mention, the sky thundered... Because apparently Ra choose me as it's master, so it gave me the power... But Hiroshi... nothing's happening, as if...", said Kenshin.
"As if Obelisk doesn't plan to attack for Hiroshi!", said Dark Magician realizing it too. Kuriboh then began to goes crazy and jumping all over the place, Dark Magician Girl got a hold of him, "What's with you???", said Dark Magician Girl. Kuriboh then pointed at Comei. They looked at Comei, his hair, it began to wave a bit, and his eyes where also changing a bit, as if he was transforming or something.
"Dark Magician... you thinking what I'm thinking?", asked Kenshin smirking.
"I do master... Obelisk was meant for Comei... not Hiroshi... Obelisk is gonna turn on Hiroshi...", said Dark Magician. Suzina, who finally stopped crying heard the news and looked up, {C...Comei... is gonna win?} Suzina thought to herself. Comei sighed as he discarded Ceasefire and Call of The Haunted.
"So you finally realized that nothing can save you now, right?", said Hiroshi. Comei nodded looking at Hiroshi with disgust. Hiroshi drew card, "Well it was nice knowing you for 30 minutes... Now I will use the Power of Ultimate Offering to summon 2 monsters to the field in face down defense mode... now God of Obelisk!!! Offer them to finish Comei then attack him directly!!!", commanded Hiroshi. But Obelisk, did nothing.
"What are you waiting for Obelisk?!?!?!?! Finish Comei Now!!!", ordered Hiroshi. Obelisk then grabbed the two face down monsters and crushed them for the offering. Hiroshi smiled, "Good Bye Comei!!!", said Hiroshi. Then Obelisk just walked over to Comei's side of the field, and then faced Hiroshi. "What the fuck is going on!?!?!?", said Hiroshi looking frightened.
"Obelisk... has not chosen you... God Cards choose their masters... And he has chosen... ME", said Comei looking upward, his shadowed eyes revealed as his entire eye pupil became Blue, adding too the blue already in his eye.
"YYYYYAHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!", Screamed Comei loudly as a Thunder storm broke out and Comei's hair spiked into a Blue Color and his body glowed with a blue mist.
"Holy mother fucker.... look at all the energy Obelisk is producing to Comei!", said Kenshin.
Hiroshi grinded his teeth and pulled out the Millennium Dagger, "if I'm gonna loose... SO WILL YOU!!!", said Hiroshi throwing the Millennium Dagger past him. Comei turned to see where the dagger was heading, it was heading for Suzina!!!
"SUZINA!!!! GET OUT OF THE WAY!!!", yelled Comei. But Suzina could not move.
"Suzina!!!", yelled Becky's voice. Suzina's eye shot open. Hearing her voice, made her surroundings cold, and damp.
"Becky?", Suzina whispered, that whisper echoed as all sound muted from Suzina's hearing and Becky, stepped in Suzina's way, holding out her arms, and just before Suzina could say anything, the dagger, went right through her chest. ** Blood poured from Becky onto Suzina's cheeks. Becky, then feel to her knees as rain suddenly broke from the sky and came down like the world was ending. At the moment, Suzina's world collaped into itself. Becky fell into Suzina's arms.
"Becky!!! Becky hold on!!!", said Suzina holding Becky in her arms. Becky looked up to Suzina, and smiled, "Suzina... I L...lo....Love... you....", said Becky gently rubbing Suzina's cheeks with her finger as blood dripped down her mouth, Becky, was now dead.
"Becky...... I love you too! Don't leave me.... I need you.... I need you...", cried Suzina, Suzina cracked with tears when she said "I need you" for a 2nd time. They all glared at them for a while and Comei looked to himself.
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Comei, left his mind chamber and met Keto who was standing at his mind chamber door, they faced each other.
"The power of God was in our hands as well as the Power of an Egyptian God... and we couldn't save her...", Keto said to Comei. Comei looked away disappointed at himself.
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"MONSTER!!!", roared a voice, Buster Blader held up his sword jumping high in the air above Hiroshi. "DIEEEEE!!!", roared Buster Blader swinging his sword down.
"Tri-Horned Dragon!!!", said Hiroshi opening his eyes, as a Dragon with no wings and 3 horns appeared and stabbed Buster Blader in the chest with it's middle horn.
"BUSTER BLADER!!!", screamed Suzina looking at Buster Blader falling backward onto his back.
"NO BUSTER BLADER!!!", screamed Suzina crying even harder. Comei cleanched his fist and grinded his teeth and looked furious at Hiroshi, as the Millennium Symbol appeared on his forehead and he screamed louder, creating more energy.
"YOU CANNOT BE FORGIVEN! AND I WILL SHOW YOU NO MERCY!!! GOD OF OBELISK!!! TORMENTING OBLITERATION!!!!", commanded the angry Comei. Obelisk gathered energy into his right fist and slammed it into Hiroshi, his life points dropped from 2100 to 0.
Game Over, Winner, Comei.
Hiroshi stood up weak as Obelisk walked closer toward Hiroshi.
"Penalty Game!!! DEATH!!!", said Comei pointing to Hiroshi as Obelisk gathered more energy into a fist. Hiroshi smirked and stood up, "I have no intention on Dying!!! We'll meet again!!! Goodbye!!!", said Hiroshi as Shadow covered him and he began to disappear.
"No! Obelisk stop him!!!", said Comei, but Obelisk was to late, Hiroshi and his deck leader Tri-Horned Dragon where gone, and he had the dagger too. Obelisk formed back into a card and floated into Comei's hands as Comei glared at it, the rain came down harder and thunder roared louder as he looked to Buster Blader, who Dark Magician Girl and Dark Magician picked up.
"He's alive... barley... but... Becky wasn't so lucky...", said Dark Magician Girl looking to Suzina, who knelt there, holding Suzina, she cried and cried.
"Suzina... I'm sorry... I tried...", said Comei who hung his head in shame. Suzina, didn't reply, she cried, and cried some more. Soon after, the ambulance came, took Becky and announce her officially dead, her heart had been gorged from her chest and there was a hole in it. Dark Magician Girl said it was the power of Forbidden Love that allowed her to live those extra seconds, it's a powerful Dark Magic. Kenshin made up the story that someone broke into Becky's house and murdered Becky while trying to save her girlfriend, and the killer also took the bodies of Becky's parents with him. And Suzina? She cried and cried until she could cry no more.
Keto, Comei, Kenshin and now Suzina have become victims of Totoshinku's rein of terror. But now, it ends. It end right here, right now. Can they reach Totoshinku and pass his obstacles? Also, Julia, holder of the Millennium Crown appears! What happens? Find out next time on YuGiOh Xtreme!
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