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Chapter 2: Brotherly Hate
Later that night, a horrid storm began to punish the land. By the seconds trillions of raindrops poured upon the land, and constantly did lightning bolts rip through the black sky. It storm was even worse on the Hyrule Sea though. Here the winds were strong enough to blow away birds and some fish, even terrible enough to knock grown men off their feet. The rain was horrendous. It came down on the sea like falling leaves off a tree in autumn, and if you stood outside in it for a mere four seconds, you'd be soaked. The waves were huge on the stormy night. Big enough to carry away Moblins and even Iron Knuckles. A few must've been about twenty feet tall, while others were only a few feet under that. No a single gull or albatross soared in the sky tonight, and the fish hid in the deepest regions of the water below to escape the wrath of the violent weather.
But on this terrible night, there still sailed a ship within the war-zone- like sea. It was a normal ship, made of chestnut colored wood, with two medium sized sails. It wasn't too big, but wasn't too small either, right in the middle size wise. The waves crashed against the vessel, and thrashed it around once in a while. But every time that did happen, the crew of the ship gained control of it, and got it back on its normal course. On deck where six male adults, all seeming to be warriors of some sort. Well, really there were only five on deck, as a smaller man knelt on the wooden tip of one of the sails as he stared out into the distance through the rain and wind.
Down below in one of the cabins, dwelled a rather handsome young man. He had long dark brown hair that reached past his shoulder blades, and then deep blue eyes. Attracted to his shoulders was a long, dark sky blue cape, and then a suit of indigo body armor covered his chest and upper body, as well as indigo leg armored which covered his legs. He had a very serious look on his face, and his eyes were narrowed. This was Dranon, leader of the Ordonra Elite, the one who would be meeting with Sephia at her castle in Herlassia soon, and the one who had arranged an alliance with Ganondorf for retribution on Link, Mirren, and Zelda. The Ordonra Elite were a group containing five of the mightiest warriors in Hyrule and Herlassia and any other land. They were all being slayers and were the cause of many bloody and dreadful massacres.
The first was Qualgaya, who was a rather small man standing at the height of five foot seven. He was also thin, but this size was not a disadvantage for him, considering he was a great assassin. Qualgaya had lived as one for many years murdering innocent people for riches and pleasure. The killer wore a purple tunic and then somewhat tight white pants. His head was completely bald, and his brown eyes were knee and full of evil. As weaponry went for him, Qualgaya didn't have much, merely a pouch full of needles, for that was all the little man needed.
The second was Bellarus, a younger man with long golden hair that reached past his shoulders. His clothing consisted of only a long crimson trench coat, seeming to be made of some very soft, smooth velvet. His weapon of choice was a long chain, which he lashed at his foes with like a whip. Bellarus at one time in his life lived peacefully on a small island in the Hyrule Sea. He dwelled in a very nice village with a few people, although he was quite the bitter young man looking for an adventure to take out his aggression on other people. One day, the Ordonra Elite's ship arrived, and the few warriors at the time along with Dranon came and annihilated the village, and then slaughtered all the people there; except Bellarus. Dranon had could see that he was a strong young man, and asked him if he'd like to join the Ordonra Elite. Bellarus accepted, and became a member of the sinister group.
The third was Risst. Risst was another young man, although he seemed young than Bellarus, like Link's age actually. His skin was a rich indigo color, but with more a cerulean tone to it. His eyes were a light violet color, and full of wickedness. He had long white hair that just went beyond his shoulders, and then for his attire he wore a shirt of chain mail with a leather covering at the top and then a black cape that only went to his torso, and then chain mail pants, although his dark blue leather boots went all the way up past his knees. Risst had two main offenses. His first was his excellent skill with his somewhat wide twin scimitars, and then his second was telekinesis, which he used to move objects around merely with a little concentration of his mind. Throughout his teenaged years, Risst had gone on a killing spree in the deep regions of Terlon Forest, destroying every village and killing all the people within it. Thus earned him a spot in the Ordonra Elite from Dranon.
Next was Eldama, who many considered a monster. He stood at about eight foot four, and was incredibly muscular. He wore a black tunic, and then spiked steel pants. On his shoulders were spiked steel pads, just like what how his pants were. His long fiery red hair went about to his shoulders, and then the steel gauntlets on his hands had a spike at where every knuckle would be. Eldama's face was never revealed, because he wore a stone mask of a gargoyle, which two black, curved, yet kind of thin in height but wide to the sides horns protruded from the top. The mask had its mouth open, showing the gargoyle's tongue and terrible fangs. When in battle, Eldama just used his fist the break his opponent's bodies almost in half, along with his frightening physical might.
Talgaros was the second tallest member of the Ordonra Elite, at the height of seven foot one, although that was still way under Eldama. He was also a large man, with lots of muscle, but that wasn't very visible with the black robe he wore that had numerous orange designs and symbols on it. Like Qualgaya he was bald, but not as much. He really only had a large bald spot that came from his forehead and stopped at the middle or so of his cranium, the rest was scarlet colored hair. Talgaros was on the only member of the Ordonra Elite with a beard, which of his was scarlet also and came from his sideburns. His skin was a dark auburn color, and his eyes a dark green. He was a very powerful man, and sometimes he would simply punch and smack his victims away with his huge fists. But his main form of fighting was with his scimitars. They were beautifully crafted, and only curved at the top. While he used the same weapons as Risst; Talgaros was much more powerful, and unlike Risst knew magic. Talgaros had the power to breathe fire like a dragon, and could also send slashes of fire from his scimitars.
Finally there was Asdamus, who was a normal sized man. He had a very mysterious look to him, as well as his aura. He wore a dark yellow cloak, and then snow white baggy pants. He wore a hood above his head, so all you could see through the darkness of it were his fiery red eyes, his silver hair, and then a bit of his lower face, which was covered in bandages. Attached to his belt was a dagger somewhat like a kodachi actually than point diagonally at the very top, and then strapped to his back was a huge scimitar nearly as big as him. Not much was known about Asdamus. All that was, was that he had wandered in the desert for many many years before joining the Ordonra Elite, and had killed many beings and creatures within his nomadic time.
And of course, the leader was Dranon, who had gathered all of the six best wicked warriors he could find, and created the Ordonra Elite. While they were all very strong, Dranon was the mightiest of the Elite, and could not be defeated by anyone he fought. He used a very nice broadsword, with a shining silver-like blade and a teal hilt. He was incredible when he fought with his sword. His tactics were incredible and unstoppable, and his skill was literally God-like. Another thing he knew like Risst was telekinesis, although he was the one to teach Risst telekinesis and was much stronger with it. He could gain control of anything and move it around without concentrating at all like Risst, and also could create insane mind blasts which were almost impossible to dodge and were extraordinarily strong and prodigious. His other amazing ability was that he had the power to emit extremely potent energy beams from his sword, which had speeds faster than a falcon and the power to create craters in the hardest of stone walls.
As the storm on the sea grew worse and as the Ordonra Elite's ship did her best to stay on course, Dranon still sat in his cabin at his desk. There were three torches lit throughout the entire room, one on every wall besides the one with the door. Then hanging from the ceiling was a lantern on a chain, which blaze was giving off a deal of heat and light. On Dranon's desk lay a parchment map of Herlassia's South Quadrant where Sephia's castle was, the place the Ordonra Elite would be visiting soon. Dranon took a feather pen and dabbed it in a small jar of ink quickly. He circled the Sephia's citadel, leaving a red circle around it. He then made a line going to a fort within a forest near her castle, and made an X there to mark where'd they'd be staying for the time being. Closing the lid on the jar of ink, the young man set his pen aside. Dranon then opened up a little cabinet in his desk, and took out a diamond wine glass and a bottle of wine. He uncorked it, and poured himself half a glassful of a blood red wine. The leader of the Ordonra Elite put the cork back on the bottle, and set it aside as he took a sip of the wine. It tasted absolutely delicious to him, and he quickly took another sip. Once the wine went down his throat, he gently put the glass down on the table still holding it, and sat speechless as he had been. His eyes were still narrow with sternness, seriousness, and most of all anger. Not even the wine could make him smile, grin, smirk or even make his eyes lit up a tiny bit for that matter. During all of his years with the Ordonra Elite, Dranon had never smiled or smirked once. Every single moment of his life, he had that same expression on his face seriousness, and angered. He took another slug of his wine from the glass, and finished it up. He grabbed the bottle by the top, uncorked it once again, and poured himself this time a full glass. At that moment, he heard a knock on his cabin door.
"Come in" he said. The door handle then turned, and the door opened up as a soaking wet Bellarus stepped into his cabin, a bit of a grin on his face.
"Good news Dranon, we'll be reaching shore by dawn most definitely hours" he stated, "we're keeping the ship on course nicely and at a good speed." Dranon nodded, and took a sip of his wine.
"Thank you for the update Bellarus, and when you go back up on deck tell everyone that we'll be going to Sephia's castle first, and then to a fort just for us within a forest nearby" he replied. Bellarus nodded back, and gave a quick bow.
"As you say" he said. Dranon began to take a big slug of his drink, and Bellarus walked over to him and leaned his ear at Dranon as he hid his mouth with his one hand to whisper. "Now I understand why you want so much revenge on that brat Mirren and that fool Link, but what is it that you have about Zelda?" he asked, "I mean she's quite the beauty after all and..." Bellarus got no more out. The very millisecond he called Zelda a "beauty" Dranon locked his hand around his throat and applied a good deal of pressure. Bellarus grasped for breath as he made numerous choking noises, and Dranon lowered his wine glass from his lips. He glared at Bellarus with rage in his eyes.
"She is anything but a beauty you stupid imbecile!!" he sneered scornfully, shattering his wine glass with an extra amount of force on his grasp of it. The pieces of diamond flew everywhere, and Bellarus's eyes widened in shock as he felt a few pieces hit his face. One though soared by his cheek and created a little blood cut. Dranon continued, "She's a broad who's forgotten the most important thing in her life and literally worships pure fools. Zelda is a snob princess who thinks she's the greatest and most important thing alive all because she's the good-for-nothing princess of Hyrule!! My respect for her had vanished because of her stupid actions and beliefs...so don't you ever, call her a beauty, again you fool..." With that Dranon then threw Bellarus to the ground with incredible force, so much that Bellarus actually unleashed a loud grunt of pain from the hit. He groaned in pain, and slowly opened his eyes as Dranon loomed over him. "Get out now..." he threatened with a terrible sneer. Fear flooded Bellarus's eyes, and panicking he crawled for a few moments and soon stood up and ran out of the cabin, slamming the door on the way out. Dranon still stood sneering for a few seconds; before eventually went back to his desk. The leader of the Ordonra Elite pulled out another diamond wine glass from the cabinet, and grabbed the bottle and uncorked it. Dranon poured himself another full glass of the blood red wine, and set the bottle aside after putting the cork back on. He took a decently sized sip of the wine, and slowly set it on the desk still holding it, sitting at his desk with pure anger and hatred in his eyes.
"I'm back Zelda..." He whispered, "your big brother is finally returning home..."