Authors note:
Dark-Sephiroth: As promised, I've put up chapter 10 and review responses.
Thanks to all my reviewers so far! I've had some great/not so great
responses to the story!
The story is drawing near to an end and though I may manage a few more
chapters, It won't be long before I finish.
When that happens don't forget to read True Conquest by me or any of the
stories written by my reviewers. Any stories I've recommended are well
worth a read.
Anyway, enough said about that.
Cloud: Yo, you've just received a review from Markman!
Dark-Sephiroth: And?
Cloud: He's put your real name up again!
Aeris: *Hands Dark-Sephiroth his sword*
Dark Sephiroth goes outside with a dangerous look on his face.
Zidane: Jeez! Does that Markman guy ever learn?!
Cloud: Huh, he deserves it! That's the third time now!! Listen, all authors reserve the right to withhold their own details, including their true name. If Markman goes too far I could report him to staff! Hopefully Dark- Sephiroth will sort him out but I WILL report reviewers who don't respect the Author. This is Serious and not a joke.
*There is a scream from outside and a sickening shredding sound. Blood splatters freely onto the windows.*
Review Responses:
Spectral Sereda: Hey, thanks for all the support and reviews. I'm glad Dark Awakening is still continuing, your story is truly a masterpiece. I'd recommend it to any LOK fan, good work!
Cloti: Glad you like the story but sorry you don't like Aeris. Aeris will probably be around for a while yet! Anyway, thanks for the reviews and please continue Soul Summoner, you haven't updated in a while.
Markman: I'll report you to staff pretty soon. If you want to review please have a little respect for my right to withhold my own details. Good luck with Barrets Revenge but if I'm included I'll make sure you never visit this site again. You've double incurred my wrath!!! Bad F****** idea!!!!!! No joke this time!!!!!!!!!
Mikoto Tribal: I'm really happy you've continued To Find my Way home, It's definitely a great story and the last chapter was excellent!! Thanks for continued support throughout the story too!
Sylvanon the wolf gurl: Thanks for reviewing. And welcome to the site, as you are a new author. I think Sylvanonim Zephonim is a great story, good luck with it!
Grizzy: Thanks for the review! Glad you liked the story, I'd like to read one of your stories soon but school limits my free time. I will read soon, thanks anyway.
SuperModelLooks: I'll take your review as a flame but I didn't expect people would take the killing of Kain too well.
FUCK: Well, your review was definitely a flame, enough said.
I LOVE KAIN (uber classified): Another flame because of the death of Kain. What fun. *sighs*
Dark-Sephy: Thanks for reading and giving your opinion. I would like to read more of your stories but so few are FF or LOK. If you bring out a story in these categories I'll promise to read.
And that's about it! If I missed you, don't worry, there will be another review response section on the final chapter. Oh, I will continue True Conquest after 5 reviews per chapter, so please review if you want!!
STORY! (at last)
Cloud felt the world around him fade as the time streaming device was activated. He felt himself rushing through some sort of strange vortex. His head throbbed. When at last he awoke he thought it was night. Everything around him was dark but then his sight slowly adapted. It was the world that they had seen earlier, where Raziel had battled Raziel and died. This was a dying Nosgoth of the future, and standing before them was its corruptor.
Kain: So you made it, I congratulate and commend you all.
Zidane: Huh?! We made it! Wheeee!! *runs around like a lunatic* I'm alive, we made it!
Squall: Whatever, I must have pressed the wrong button. We should be lost in time and dead by now.
Zidane: You what? *sighs* this guy needs to see a psychiatrist!
Squall: We could still be dead. Maybe this is heaven.
Auron: Heaven?! Even the inside of sin is more heaven than this place!
Zidane: Hey! Can we leave him here? He'd be a lot more happier here!
Squall: Whatever, I don't want to be happy.
Cloud: Listen, hadn't we better find that Elder dude?
Kain: The Elder God. You must gain a little more respect for those with power. But it matters little now, I will teleport you there.
Kain gathers energy and tries to use a teleport spell but nothing happens. The group look at him questioningly. Kain: It seems that I have not yet the power to teleport you all. My evolved self was killed, and he had all the power.
Zidane: Who killed your stronger self?
Sephiroth: *looks guilty*
Aeris: Hey, you and Cloud met Kain, you didn't kill him though did you?
Sephiroth: Hey, YOU killed the Sarafan lord!
Aeris: I knew it! You tried to kill me too! You brutal murderer.
Sephiroth: *Evil grin* Why thank you. I do try my best.
Aeris: I'll get you!!!
Cloud: Whoa, stop bickering! I've killed tons of people on this world, who gives a crap anyway?! Let's concentrate on getting home.
Kain: Wait! I think I could teleport three of you in but it would cost me a lot of my power. It would be one-way, and you would be only three when battling against the God.
Cloud: I'll go.
Squall: Me too, I'll suffer.
Aeris: And I'll follow my Cloud!
Sephiroth: Bull****!! I'm going and I'll impale all who oppose me. Teleport us in Kain!!
Kain: Then it is decided. So be it.
Kain once more gathered all his energy, this time he shone with a radiant light. Sephiroth shoved Aeris to the ground and stood near Cloud and Squall. There was a brief hesitation before the group of the vanished with a flash. When his senses returned Cloud found himself standing before a large pool of water. Moebius stood nearby and deep down in the murky depths of the water lay the elder god. A devious grin spread across Moebius' face when he saw them.
Moebius: Ah! So you arrive at last. I must say, I am most impressed that you have tracked me down this far. But it will do you no good, The Elder God has given his consent to help me with my plan.
Squall: Whatever. Where the heck is this Old god thingy anyway, I want to kick his butt.
Cloud: *peers into the water* Maybe he's down here somewhere? Whoa, yuck!! What the heck is that?!
Sephiroth: *Also peers into the water* Great, not only do we have to battle the ghost of a lizard man, now we've got a giant squid to fry.
Squall: I'd suggest Thunder magic or a summon. Works well on water enemies.
Sephiroth: I know the Bolt3 spell, shall I try it?
Cloud: Hey, we could sell the remains! Cloud and co. Fried Squid, special delicacy. 500gil per kg?
Moebius: *fuming with rage* How dare you speak about the true ruler of Nosgoth in such a way?! You should fear the one who will bring to you your death.
Squall: Whatever, as if I give a crap anyway. But you know, with a little spice I'm sure we could get quite a bit. Maybe we should throw some salt in before we start?
Cloud: Salt?! Where the heck would we-
Cloud is suddenly broken off in mid sentence by a loud rumbling that shakes everything around them. A portal opens up nearby and a loud booming voice fills the air.
Elder God: Cease your pathetic babble mortals. You have been lucky so far in that you are still alive but because of that you have been led to underestimate us. I hold a far greater power than any of you could imagine, and now I shall demonstrate that to you all.
There is a blinding flash and seven individuals appear. They are all of different stature but all have one similarity. Their flesh is a strange blue colour. One of them (Raziel) looks decayed but the others look healthy and stronger than ever. All of the sevens eyes glow with a bright blue/white light. They are:
Turel
Raziel
Raziel (vampire)
The Sarafan Lord
Marcus
Rinoa
and Kain.
Squall looks horrified to see that Rinoa is among them.
Squall: *to himself* Crap! She died when I stranded her! I hope to god she doesn't go all hugs and kisses in that state! *out loud* Lets get them!!
Elder God: ''Get'' them?! They are immortal beings who cannot be killed! They will shift to spectral when damaged and return with full vitality seconds later. But that is not all. The portal you see nearby leads to your homes and your own planets. I send my army through this portal to attack your own worlds and with their invincibility your people will be enslaved forever!! Go my army!!!
Cloud and the others watch as the army leap across the whole room into the portal with almost impossible agility. The portal remains open. The group know they could follow, but will they? Whose world will they go to and can they get back once they go? Cloud looks at the portal and decides what to do. Silently he turns to the group with a solemn expression.
And that's it!! Keep reviewing to find out what happens in Chapter 11 (coming soon). Thanks for reading, please check out True Conquest too, If you have the time. Thanks!!!
Cloud: Yo, you've just received a review from Markman!
Dark-Sephiroth: And?
Cloud: He's put your real name up again!
Aeris: *Hands Dark-Sephiroth his sword*
Dark Sephiroth goes outside with a dangerous look on his face.
Zidane: Jeez! Does that Markman guy ever learn?!
Cloud: Huh, he deserves it! That's the third time now!! Listen, all authors reserve the right to withhold their own details, including their true name. If Markman goes too far I could report him to staff! Hopefully Dark- Sephiroth will sort him out but I WILL report reviewers who don't respect the Author. This is Serious and not a joke.
*There is a scream from outside and a sickening shredding sound. Blood splatters freely onto the windows.*
Review Responses:
Spectral Sereda: Hey, thanks for all the support and reviews. I'm glad Dark Awakening is still continuing, your story is truly a masterpiece. I'd recommend it to any LOK fan, good work!
Cloti: Glad you like the story but sorry you don't like Aeris. Aeris will probably be around for a while yet! Anyway, thanks for the reviews and please continue Soul Summoner, you haven't updated in a while.
Markman: I'll report you to staff pretty soon. If you want to review please have a little respect for my right to withhold my own details. Good luck with Barrets Revenge but if I'm included I'll make sure you never visit this site again. You've double incurred my wrath!!! Bad F****** idea!!!!!! No joke this time!!!!!!!!!
Mikoto Tribal: I'm really happy you've continued To Find my Way home, It's definitely a great story and the last chapter was excellent!! Thanks for continued support throughout the story too!
Sylvanon the wolf gurl: Thanks for reviewing. And welcome to the site, as you are a new author. I think Sylvanonim Zephonim is a great story, good luck with it!
Grizzy: Thanks for the review! Glad you liked the story, I'd like to read one of your stories soon but school limits my free time. I will read soon, thanks anyway.
SuperModelLooks: I'll take your review as a flame but I didn't expect people would take the killing of Kain too well.
FUCK: Well, your review was definitely a flame, enough said.
I LOVE KAIN (uber classified): Another flame because of the death of Kain. What fun. *sighs*
Dark-Sephy: Thanks for reading and giving your opinion. I would like to read more of your stories but so few are FF or LOK. If you bring out a story in these categories I'll promise to read.
And that's about it! If I missed you, don't worry, there will be another review response section on the final chapter. Oh, I will continue True Conquest after 5 reviews per chapter, so please review if you want!!
STORY! (at last)
Cloud felt the world around him fade as the time streaming device was activated. He felt himself rushing through some sort of strange vortex. His head throbbed. When at last he awoke he thought it was night. Everything around him was dark but then his sight slowly adapted. It was the world that they had seen earlier, where Raziel had battled Raziel and died. This was a dying Nosgoth of the future, and standing before them was its corruptor.
Kain: So you made it, I congratulate and commend you all.
Zidane: Huh?! We made it! Wheeee!! *runs around like a lunatic* I'm alive, we made it!
Squall: Whatever, I must have pressed the wrong button. We should be lost in time and dead by now.
Zidane: You what? *sighs* this guy needs to see a psychiatrist!
Squall: We could still be dead. Maybe this is heaven.
Auron: Heaven?! Even the inside of sin is more heaven than this place!
Zidane: Hey! Can we leave him here? He'd be a lot more happier here!
Squall: Whatever, I don't want to be happy.
Cloud: Listen, hadn't we better find that Elder dude?
Kain: The Elder God. You must gain a little more respect for those with power. But it matters little now, I will teleport you there.
Kain gathers energy and tries to use a teleport spell but nothing happens. The group look at him questioningly. Kain: It seems that I have not yet the power to teleport you all. My evolved self was killed, and he had all the power.
Zidane: Who killed your stronger self?
Sephiroth: *looks guilty*
Aeris: Hey, you and Cloud met Kain, you didn't kill him though did you?
Sephiroth: Hey, YOU killed the Sarafan lord!
Aeris: I knew it! You tried to kill me too! You brutal murderer.
Sephiroth: *Evil grin* Why thank you. I do try my best.
Aeris: I'll get you!!!
Cloud: Whoa, stop bickering! I've killed tons of people on this world, who gives a crap anyway?! Let's concentrate on getting home.
Kain: Wait! I think I could teleport three of you in but it would cost me a lot of my power. It would be one-way, and you would be only three when battling against the God.
Cloud: I'll go.
Squall: Me too, I'll suffer.
Aeris: And I'll follow my Cloud!
Sephiroth: Bull****!! I'm going and I'll impale all who oppose me. Teleport us in Kain!!
Kain: Then it is decided. So be it.
Kain once more gathered all his energy, this time he shone with a radiant light. Sephiroth shoved Aeris to the ground and stood near Cloud and Squall. There was a brief hesitation before the group of the vanished with a flash. When his senses returned Cloud found himself standing before a large pool of water. Moebius stood nearby and deep down in the murky depths of the water lay the elder god. A devious grin spread across Moebius' face when he saw them.
Moebius: Ah! So you arrive at last. I must say, I am most impressed that you have tracked me down this far. But it will do you no good, The Elder God has given his consent to help me with my plan.
Squall: Whatever. Where the heck is this Old god thingy anyway, I want to kick his butt.
Cloud: *peers into the water* Maybe he's down here somewhere? Whoa, yuck!! What the heck is that?!
Sephiroth: *Also peers into the water* Great, not only do we have to battle the ghost of a lizard man, now we've got a giant squid to fry.
Squall: I'd suggest Thunder magic or a summon. Works well on water enemies.
Sephiroth: I know the Bolt3 spell, shall I try it?
Cloud: Hey, we could sell the remains! Cloud and co. Fried Squid, special delicacy. 500gil per kg?
Moebius: *fuming with rage* How dare you speak about the true ruler of Nosgoth in such a way?! You should fear the one who will bring to you your death.
Squall: Whatever, as if I give a crap anyway. But you know, with a little spice I'm sure we could get quite a bit. Maybe we should throw some salt in before we start?
Cloud: Salt?! Where the heck would we-
Cloud is suddenly broken off in mid sentence by a loud rumbling that shakes everything around them. A portal opens up nearby and a loud booming voice fills the air.
Elder God: Cease your pathetic babble mortals. You have been lucky so far in that you are still alive but because of that you have been led to underestimate us. I hold a far greater power than any of you could imagine, and now I shall demonstrate that to you all.
There is a blinding flash and seven individuals appear. They are all of different stature but all have one similarity. Their flesh is a strange blue colour. One of them (Raziel) looks decayed but the others look healthy and stronger than ever. All of the sevens eyes glow with a bright blue/white light. They are:
Turel
Raziel
Raziel (vampire)
The Sarafan Lord
Marcus
Rinoa
and Kain.
Squall looks horrified to see that Rinoa is among them.
Squall: *to himself* Crap! She died when I stranded her! I hope to god she doesn't go all hugs and kisses in that state! *out loud* Lets get them!!
Elder God: ''Get'' them?! They are immortal beings who cannot be killed! They will shift to spectral when damaged and return with full vitality seconds later. But that is not all. The portal you see nearby leads to your homes and your own planets. I send my army through this portal to attack your own worlds and with their invincibility your people will be enslaved forever!! Go my army!!!
Cloud and the others watch as the army leap across the whole room into the portal with almost impossible agility. The portal remains open. The group know they could follow, but will they? Whose world will they go to and can they get back once they go? Cloud looks at the portal and decides what to do. Silently he turns to the group with a solemn expression.
And that's it!! Keep reviewing to find out what happens in Chapter 11 (coming soon). Thanks for reading, please check out True Conquest too, If you have the time. Thanks!!!