Authors Notes: Chapter 15 and it's time for review responses!
Dark-Sephiroth: Ah jeez, writing these sucks, I'm gonna skip this. You're all great, ok?
Aeris: Hey don't be lazy!
Cloud: You sure they're ALL great?
Dark-Sephiroth: Huh? Oh yeah, that. *sighs* very well.
REVIEW RESPONSES:
MarkmanofWexford: I hope you die and burn in hell you fat piece of crap. Eternal torture is a punishment too light for the likes of you. Even mentioning your name is making me sick, but thankfully you didn't review my last chapter, so my story is unpolluted. Only death awaits you, filthy scum, and I pray it's a slow and painful one.
*There's a bit of a story behind this but NEVER, EVER trust or talk to this filth. He's a thief and preys on those who trust him. One of those seems- nice-but-really-twisted types*
Mikoto Zoku: I don't think you've missed a chapter yet. Thanks for all the reviews, I'm glad you like the story so much. When are you going to update yourself? You write cool stuff! Good luck with the art too!
Nocturnally Damned: Hey, thanks for reading! I'm not sure you'll understand the most recent chapters if you haven't played Final Fantasy, but it was nice to hear from ya all the same! I love your artwork but keep up with the fic you're writing too ok?
Dark-Sephy: Heh heh, glad you wouldn't be bored no matter how much I put up. Means a lot to me. Thanks for all the reviews anyway, I'll keep updating as long as I can.
Celes-Tifa-Rinoa-Garnet-Yuna: I hope I got your name right, you keep changing it so often. Ha ha ha! I had a feeling you wouldn't like the Aeris/Sephiroth part! Sorry bout that. Thanks for reviewing up to now anyway, hope this doesn't spoil it too much for you. Keep on with your Bo2/Ffx fic, its interesting to say the least.
Sereda: Hope I don't go into too much detail? Jeez! You and your vivid imagination! I wasn't planning to anyway, much. Thanks for reviewing and sorry I'm not keeping up to date with reviewing your fic. It's cool, good luck with it.
Aeristhewhitemageofcetras: Jeez! I'm having mixed responses to the Aer/Seph part. *sighs* Better in your story than mine. Thanks for finding the time to review anyway, I know you're pretty busy nowadays. Glad you like the story too, even though yours is miles ahead of it! Oh, I love your art, you ever think of looking up the deviant art website?
*Anyone who likes this story should consider reading Moogles go wild by Aeris, It's brilliant!*
Tabris: You don't like FF7? You feeling ok?! *sighs* Hey, at least I made you laugh though, that's positive. Thanks for the review!
Cold Fang: Weird huh? I guess if that's in a good way, then thanks!
Skriana the Shadow Dragon: Hey nice review, thanks! Glad you liked the story!
Dark-Sephiroth: *phew* That it? Thanks guys! I couldn't continue without your support! Oh, and sorry if I missed you. Hmm, one thing though. Looking back I see a few once off reviews. If you read you MUST review. Or Else! Ha ha ha! j/k
STORY:
Sephiroth is in the Ghost Square inn sitting on the bed. There is a knock on the door and Aeris walks in.
Aeris: Hey, you feeling better?
Sephiroth: Yeah, I guess. Sorry to trouble you, I just needed a rest.
Aeris: Hey, no problem!
Sephiroth: Hmm, well, thanks. Lets go find Cloud and the others.
Aeris and Sephiroth head from the ghost square to the main entrance. There are tunnels leading to every part of the Gold saucer and Sephiroth looks at them with a puzzled expression.
Aeris: What's up?
Sephiroth: Uh, which way?
Aeris: Jeez! How can you be lost already! Let's try this one. *jumps down tunnel*
Sephiroth: Try?! *sighs* Oh well *jumps down tunnel*
Staff: Hey congratulations! You're our 200th couple! You'll be the leads in tonight's show!
Sephiroth: Ha ha ha, yeah right!
Aeris: Wrong turn? Ok, lets try this tunnel.
Staff: But you have to play in tonights show!
Sephiroth: Shut up or die.
Staff: YOU'RE PLAYING IN THE SHOW WHETHER YOU LIKE IT OR NOT! *grabs the two and drags them to the stage*
Sephiroth: Hey wait! Jeez calm down! Noooo!!
A while later the curtains roll up. Sephiroth is standing on the stage looking bewildered. Suddenly a knight spins up to him.
Knight: Oh, are you the legendary hero Sir Alfred? Please I pray in my heart that you can help the princess.
Sephiroth: Alfred?! I am the Dark God Sephiroth!! The heck am I doing here anyway!
Knight: Alfred! Please talk to the king!
Suddenly a fat man in a king suit spins in. Sephiroth fixes him with dark glare.
King: Please, Legendary hero! Save my daughter!
Sephiroth: *looks pissed off* Someone's gonna die now.
King: The evil dragon Vlavrados has taken her captive! You must defeat the dragon to free her!
Sephiroth: Dragon slaying huh?! Now you're talking!
King: You cannot defeat him by yourself, talk to one who can help you!
Wizard: *spins in* Please Alfred! You must use the power of love to defeat the dragon.
Sephiroth: Love?! Ok, Now I'm really getting pissed off!! *takes out sword* You will fall like leaves in the wind before my blade!!
Sephiroth raises his sword, tilts it 90 degrees and uses the Slash-All technique. The Wizard and knight are cut cleanly in two and the King is badly torn and bleeding terribly.
Sephiroth: Heh, heh! This is fun!
Suddenly there is a large tremor and a sound like a footstep. Aeris is thrown roughly onto the stage.
Aeris: Ow! What the hell!?
Sephiroth: Sounds like Valvadros! Cool sound effects for another fat guy in a costume.
Suddenly a dark shadow falls over the stage and an immense silver dragon lands down before them. On the dragons back is a man with pure white hair, a silver coat and two jet black soul Reavers in each hand. As the dragon lands he crushes at least 50 of the audience beneath his feet, for he is near 250 feet high.
Aeris: Zero Bahamut!! It can't be!!
Sephiroth: Ha ha ha! Look at the Sephiroth wannabe! *sniggers* Man what a cheap job he has on his hair! And he calls that a sword! ''Made in china'' I'll bet!
Aeris: Sephiroth! That dragon!!
Sephiroth: *looks at dragon as if seeing it for the first time* crap.
MEANWHLE....
Cloud and the others are battling the creations of the Elder God. Although they have killed the Spectral creatures many times, they keep returning and slowly the team are losing.
Cloud: Damn, too many! Kain, is there any way to defeat these things?
Kain: I still seek their weakness! But don't give up yet! I am certain there is a way!
Cloud: Ok guys!! Don't give up, just hold out against these few, We'll manage to win in the end, it won't be long.
Suddenly there is flash and a blue spectral knight appears followed by a wizard and a fat man in a King suit.
Cloud: FOR F*** SAKE SEPHIROTH!! Ok, guy's nothing to worry about!! That's the last of them! Just concentrate on keeping alive.
Zidane: *being squashed by the Man in the chocobo suit* Ungh! Damn this guy's heavy! What if more come?! We can't hold out that much longer.
Cloud: *smashed down by a fireball from Tifa* .....
Squall: This is cool!! I'm gonna die for sure, painfully!
Spectral Rinoa: When you die Squall you can spend eternity with me, reborn as a spectral being!! I miss you so much Squall!!
Squall: *petrified with horror* Dear god no! I DON'T WANT TO DIE!!!
Suddenly Rinoa leaps forth and drives Squall with a powerful blow. Squall sinks to one knee with pain and Rinoa is about to finish him off when there is a burst of electricity. Squall raises his gunblade for his Limit, Renzokuken then charges into Rinoa, slashing her crazily. After 9 blows Rinoa collapses and fades and Squall points his sword towards the sky. There is a pause, then a huge pillar of light fires up into the sky, reaching towards the heavens and growing in width and intensity. At the height of this, Squall swings his blade forward, crushing every enemy with the light pillar.
Zidane: *Struggles to his feet* Whoa! Pretty cool!
Auron: Is it over?
Cloud: Seems so. Let's hope Sephiroth doesn't make any more contributions though.
Auron: Hmph, lets go.
The group prepare to turn back but are surprised to see Kain and Raziel still in attack position. Cloud senses danger, he takes out his sword and suddenly there is a flash and all the Spectral beings are revived.
Cloud: Damn, should've known!
Suddenly there is another flash and 50 random spectral people that were crushed in the audience by Zero Bahamut appear. The army of nearly 60 invincible wraithlike beings face the small group. Elsewhere the King of Dragons and the Elder God face Aeris and Sephiroth.
There! As well as review responses I threw in (a small) Chapter 15. This chapter was the most difficult to write in a long time, so my apologies if it isn't as funny or good as the last. As usual 5 reviews and I'll update. Thanks for reading!!
Dark-Sephiroth: Ah jeez, writing these sucks, I'm gonna skip this. You're all great, ok?
Aeris: Hey don't be lazy!
Cloud: You sure they're ALL great?
Dark-Sephiroth: Huh? Oh yeah, that. *sighs* very well.
REVIEW RESPONSES:
MarkmanofWexford: I hope you die and burn in hell you fat piece of crap. Eternal torture is a punishment too light for the likes of you. Even mentioning your name is making me sick, but thankfully you didn't review my last chapter, so my story is unpolluted. Only death awaits you, filthy scum, and I pray it's a slow and painful one.
*There's a bit of a story behind this but NEVER, EVER trust or talk to this filth. He's a thief and preys on those who trust him. One of those seems- nice-but-really-twisted types*
Mikoto Zoku: I don't think you've missed a chapter yet. Thanks for all the reviews, I'm glad you like the story so much. When are you going to update yourself? You write cool stuff! Good luck with the art too!
Nocturnally Damned: Hey, thanks for reading! I'm not sure you'll understand the most recent chapters if you haven't played Final Fantasy, but it was nice to hear from ya all the same! I love your artwork but keep up with the fic you're writing too ok?
Dark-Sephy: Heh heh, glad you wouldn't be bored no matter how much I put up. Means a lot to me. Thanks for all the reviews anyway, I'll keep updating as long as I can.
Celes-Tifa-Rinoa-Garnet-Yuna: I hope I got your name right, you keep changing it so often. Ha ha ha! I had a feeling you wouldn't like the Aeris/Sephiroth part! Sorry bout that. Thanks for reviewing up to now anyway, hope this doesn't spoil it too much for you. Keep on with your Bo2/Ffx fic, its interesting to say the least.
Sereda: Hope I don't go into too much detail? Jeez! You and your vivid imagination! I wasn't planning to anyway, much. Thanks for reviewing and sorry I'm not keeping up to date with reviewing your fic. It's cool, good luck with it.
Aeristhewhitemageofcetras: Jeez! I'm having mixed responses to the Aer/Seph part. *sighs* Better in your story than mine. Thanks for finding the time to review anyway, I know you're pretty busy nowadays. Glad you like the story too, even though yours is miles ahead of it! Oh, I love your art, you ever think of looking up the deviant art website?
*Anyone who likes this story should consider reading Moogles go wild by Aeris, It's brilliant!*
Tabris: You don't like FF7? You feeling ok?! *sighs* Hey, at least I made you laugh though, that's positive. Thanks for the review!
Cold Fang: Weird huh? I guess if that's in a good way, then thanks!
Skriana the Shadow Dragon: Hey nice review, thanks! Glad you liked the story!
Dark-Sephiroth: *phew* That it? Thanks guys! I couldn't continue without your support! Oh, and sorry if I missed you. Hmm, one thing though. Looking back I see a few once off reviews. If you read you MUST review. Or Else! Ha ha ha! j/k
STORY:
Sephiroth is in the Ghost Square inn sitting on the bed. There is a knock on the door and Aeris walks in.
Aeris: Hey, you feeling better?
Sephiroth: Yeah, I guess. Sorry to trouble you, I just needed a rest.
Aeris: Hey, no problem!
Sephiroth: Hmm, well, thanks. Lets go find Cloud and the others.
Aeris and Sephiroth head from the ghost square to the main entrance. There are tunnels leading to every part of the Gold saucer and Sephiroth looks at them with a puzzled expression.
Aeris: What's up?
Sephiroth: Uh, which way?
Aeris: Jeez! How can you be lost already! Let's try this one. *jumps down tunnel*
Sephiroth: Try?! *sighs* Oh well *jumps down tunnel*
Staff: Hey congratulations! You're our 200th couple! You'll be the leads in tonight's show!
Sephiroth: Ha ha ha, yeah right!
Aeris: Wrong turn? Ok, lets try this tunnel.
Staff: But you have to play in tonights show!
Sephiroth: Shut up or die.
Staff: YOU'RE PLAYING IN THE SHOW WHETHER YOU LIKE IT OR NOT! *grabs the two and drags them to the stage*
Sephiroth: Hey wait! Jeez calm down! Noooo!!
A while later the curtains roll up. Sephiroth is standing on the stage looking bewildered. Suddenly a knight spins up to him.
Knight: Oh, are you the legendary hero Sir Alfred? Please I pray in my heart that you can help the princess.
Sephiroth: Alfred?! I am the Dark God Sephiroth!! The heck am I doing here anyway!
Knight: Alfred! Please talk to the king!
Suddenly a fat man in a king suit spins in. Sephiroth fixes him with dark glare.
King: Please, Legendary hero! Save my daughter!
Sephiroth: *looks pissed off* Someone's gonna die now.
King: The evil dragon Vlavrados has taken her captive! You must defeat the dragon to free her!
Sephiroth: Dragon slaying huh?! Now you're talking!
King: You cannot defeat him by yourself, talk to one who can help you!
Wizard: *spins in* Please Alfred! You must use the power of love to defeat the dragon.
Sephiroth: Love?! Ok, Now I'm really getting pissed off!! *takes out sword* You will fall like leaves in the wind before my blade!!
Sephiroth raises his sword, tilts it 90 degrees and uses the Slash-All technique. The Wizard and knight are cut cleanly in two and the King is badly torn and bleeding terribly.
Sephiroth: Heh, heh! This is fun!
Suddenly there is a large tremor and a sound like a footstep. Aeris is thrown roughly onto the stage.
Aeris: Ow! What the hell!?
Sephiroth: Sounds like Valvadros! Cool sound effects for another fat guy in a costume.
Suddenly a dark shadow falls over the stage and an immense silver dragon lands down before them. On the dragons back is a man with pure white hair, a silver coat and two jet black soul Reavers in each hand. As the dragon lands he crushes at least 50 of the audience beneath his feet, for he is near 250 feet high.
Aeris: Zero Bahamut!! It can't be!!
Sephiroth: Ha ha ha! Look at the Sephiroth wannabe! *sniggers* Man what a cheap job he has on his hair! And he calls that a sword! ''Made in china'' I'll bet!
Aeris: Sephiroth! That dragon!!
Sephiroth: *looks at dragon as if seeing it for the first time* crap.
MEANWHLE....
Cloud and the others are battling the creations of the Elder God. Although they have killed the Spectral creatures many times, they keep returning and slowly the team are losing.
Cloud: Damn, too many! Kain, is there any way to defeat these things?
Kain: I still seek their weakness! But don't give up yet! I am certain there is a way!
Cloud: Ok guys!! Don't give up, just hold out against these few, We'll manage to win in the end, it won't be long.
Suddenly there is flash and a blue spectral knight appears followed by a wizard and a fat man in a King suit.
Cloud: FOR F*** SAKE SEPHIROTH!! Ok, guy's nothing to worry about!! That's the last of them! Just concentrate on keeping alive.
Zidane: *being squashed by the Man in the chocobo suit* Ungh! Damn this guy's heavy! What if more come?! We can't hold out that much longer.
Cloud: *smashed down by a fireball from Tifa* .....
Squall: This is cool!! I'm gonna die for sure, painfully!
Spectral Rinoa: When you die Squall you can spend eternity with me, reborn as a spectral being!! I miss you so much Squall!!
Squall: *petrified with horror* Dear god no! I DON'T WANT TO DIE!!!
Suddenly Rinoa leaps forth and drives Squall with a powerful blow. Squall sinks to one knee with pain and Rinoa is about to finish him off when there is a burst of electricity. Squall raises his gunblade for his Limit, Renzokuken then charges into Rinoa, slashing her crazily. After 9 blows Rinoa collapses and fades and Squall points his sword towards the sky. There is a pause, then a huge pillar of light fires up into the sky, reaching towards the heavens and growing in width and intensity. At the height of this, Squall swings his blade forward, crushing every enemy with the light pillar.
Zidane: *Struggles to his feet* Whoa! Pretty cool!
Auron: Is it over?
Cloud: Seems so. Let's hope Sephiroth doesn't make any more contributions though.
Auron: Hmph, lets go.
The group prepare to turn back but are surprised to see Kain and Raziel still in attack position. Cloud senses danger, he takes out his sword and suddenly there is a flash and all the Spectral beings are revived.
Cloud: Damn, should've known!
Suddenly there is another flash and 50 random spectral people that were crushed in the audience by Zero Bahamut appear. The army of nearly 60 invincible wraithlike beings face the small group. Elsewhere the King of Dragons and the Elder God face Aeris and Sephiroth.
There! As well as review responses I threw in (a small) Chapter 15. This chapter was the most difficult to write in a long time, so my apologies if it isn't as funny or good as the last. As usual 5 reviews and I'll update. Thanks for reading!!