Disclaimer: Me no own, you no sue, just read and review, and review, and
review, and review. . .well, you get the gist of it. Thank you, thank you
very much to the reviewers. ^_^
~o~O~o~
Or maybe you're half-right. . .Narrator person said that because the pages were all scattered, the story we would be portraying would be kinda mixed up. He'd probably read the first page he plucked out from the attic floor. . .
~o~O~o~
Once the bright light diminished, I woke up in front of a large, large castle.
My jaw almost fell from the size of it. And luckily, it didn't have time to do so, the narrator had already started.
~Once upon a time, there was a sixteen year old princess named Anna~
Good God, I wasn't even sixteen yet!
The book must've heard me somehow. . .because the next thing I knew, I was growing fast.
Thirteen year old body was gone and I looked down in horror to see that. . .uh. . .a part of my anatomy had grown bigger. My—(what was that term the ainu baka used when he was spying at Tamao in the hot springs?. . .Now I remember,)—tits to be exact. The short hair had grown waist length now too.
Once I was finished with my inspection, the annoying voice came up again.
~Beautiful as she was, she was made to work by her wicked stepmother and her equally wicked stepsister in the castle~
A loud popping noise echoed inside the castle. Curiosity got the best of me. . .I went in.
Only to find Hao and Tamao in the dining areas.
~Her stepfamily always ordered her around, from the simplest of things to cleaning the whole castle in one day~
Hao had a wide grin plastered on his face, and I could say that he was completely enjoying himself.
"Anna, clean the castle right now."
I rolled my eyes. "What? Are you paralyzed or something? Do it yourself, I have much better things to do than follow an insane shaman's orders."
~Tamao, her stepsister slapped Anna for her insolence~
"Eh?. . ." Tamao blanched. "S-slap? A-anna?"
~Yup~
Tamao had gone paler than a kyonshi.
Hao tapped his fingers on the wooden table in impatience. "Hurry up, I haven't got all day, I still have a world to dominate you know?"
Tamao rose from her seat, lifted a hand mechanically, and slapped me on the face. Actually, it was more like a tap on the cheek, a really soft one.
Tamao had scurried to the other end of the table, the farthest from me, for safety measures I suppose.
~So the beautiful princess turned maid had no choice but to clean the whole castle~
I didn't waste my time grumbling. It was practically fine then, because the castle was already free from any dirt. But then dust literally appeared out of nowhere, soiling every area of the clean castle structure. I grumbled under my breath and grabbed a broom nearby.
So here I am now, scrubbing dirty dishes that also popped out of nowhere and wearing the uniform Hao gave me. . .If you call rags a uniform!!
~o~O~o~
Hao paced around a certain corner in his room to observe a glimmering structure nailed to the wall. Having watched Snow White almost a billion times in his youth, he didn't need to be told what should be done. "Mirror, Mirror on the wall, who is the fairest one of all?"
An ugly face appeared on the mirror while Hao was admiring his reflection, scaring him out of his wits.
Hao sighed in relief. "For a while there, I almost thought the narrator added sideburns to my glorious, glorious hair."
~o~O~o~
Who can guess whom the face was? ^_^" I guess the sideburns already gave away the answer though. I presume that it's getting kind of boring already ~,~, but I'm planning to write the exciting parts in the later part of the
story. . .where all the YohXAnna parts can be found.
I'll also take this opportunity to thank (I'm obsessed with that word) you all and to answer some questions as well.
IceQueen-Anna-Asakura Really? *_* (eyes glimmer) Thanks!
Akira: Thanks for the review too!
Anonymous Thanks for reviewing!
diablocurse I'm working on the length, thanks for the tip!
ReinaQueen Thanks for reviewing too!
fuyu jin Thanks for the review! (I'm using that line too much ne?)
A. o. G. Woah you put me in you favorite author list! I'm bursting from happiness
xX-wasabi-Xx Woah, you put me in your favorite authors list too! (jumps up and down)
DrakeTheDuelist You hate Anna but I probably chose her because she's my favorite character (no offense), I just think that Yoh wouldn't be as strong as he is now if it weren't for her, though. . .she IS a slave driver ~_~.Manta wouldn't be playing a big role in the story, so I don't think I could write it in his P.O.V. ~_~ so I guess I'll just try writing more of the chapters in a 3rd person P.O.V.
Youkuforever This story is kinda in the fantasy category, though I didn't put it there. O_o Well, about the people popping out of nowhere. . .the narrator just needed more characters to push through with the story. . .um so they pop out of nowhere. It would be kind of possible if the book can suck Anna and Yoh in. So let's just say it's magic
~o~O~o~
Or maybe you're half-right. . .Narrator person said that because the pages were all scattered, the story we would be portraying would be kinda mixed up. He'd probably read the first page he plucked out from the attic floor. . .
~o~O~o~
Once the bright light diminished, I woke up in front of a large, large castle.
My jaw almost fell from the size of it. And luckily, it didn't have time to do so, the narrator had already started.
~Once upon a time, there was a sixteen year old princess named Anna~
Good God, I wasn't even sixteen yet!
The book must've heard me somehow. . .because the next thing I knew, I was growing fast.
Thirteen year old body was gone and I looked down in horror to see that. . .uh. . .a part of my anatomy had grown bigger. My—(what was that term the ainu baka used when he was spying at Tamao in the hot springs?. . .Now I remember,)—tits to be exact. The short hair had grown waist length now too.
Once I was finished with my inspection, the annoying voice came up again.
~Beautiful as she was, she was made to work by her wicked stepmother and her equally wicked stepsister in the castle~
A loud popping noise echoed inside the castle. Curiosity got the best of me. . .I went in.
Only to find Hao and Tamao in the dining areas.
~Her stepfamily always ordered her around, from the simplest of things to cleaning the whole castle in one day~
Hao had a wide grin plastered on his face, and I could say that he was completely enjoying himself.
"Anna, clean the castle right now."
I rolled my eyes. "What? Are you paralyzed or something? Do it yourself, I have much better things to do than follow an insane shaman's orders."
~Tamao, her stepsister slapped Anna for her insolence~
"Eh?. . ." Tamao blanched. "S-slap? A-anna?"
~Yup~
Tamao had gone paler than a kyonshi.
Hao tapped his fingers on the wooden table in impatience. "Hurry up, I haven't got all day, I still have a world to dominate you know?"
Tamao rose from her seat, lifted a hand mechanically, and slapped me on the face. Actually, it was more like a tap on the cheek, a really soft one.
Tamao had scurried to the other end of the table, the farthest from me, for safety measures I suppose.
~So the beautiful princess turned maid had no choice but to clean the whole castle~
I didn't waste my time grumbling. It was practically fine then, because the castle was already free from any dirt. But then dust literally appeared out of nowhere, soiling every area of the clean castle structure. I grumbled under my breath and grabbed a broom nearby.
So here I am now, scrubbing dirty dishes that also popped out of nowhere and wearing the uniform Hao gave me. . .If you call rags a uniform!!
~o~O~o~
Hao paced around a certain corner in his room to observe a glimmering structure nailed to the wall. Having watched Snow White almost a billion times in his youth, he didn't need to be told what should be done. "Mirror, Mirror on the wall, who is the fairest one of all?"
An ugly face appeared on the mirror while Hao was admiring his reflection, scaring him out of his wits.
Hao sighed in relief. "For a while there, I almost thought the narrator added sideburns to my glorious, glorious hair."
~o~O~o~
Who can guess whom the face was? ^_^" I guess the sideburns already gave away the answer though. I presume that it's getting kind of boring already ~,~, but I'm planning to write the exciting parts in the later part of the
story. . .where all the YohXAnna parts can be found.
I'll also take this opportunity to thank (I'm obsessed with that word) you all and to answer some questions as well.
IceQueen-Anna-Asakura Really? *_* (eyes glimmer) Thanks!
Akira: Thanks for the review too!
Anonymous Thanks for reviewing!
diablocurse I'm working on the length, thanks for the tip!
ReinaQueen Thanks for reviewing too!
fuyu jin Thanks for the review! (I'm using that line too much ne?)
A. o. G. Woah you put me in you favorite author list! I'm bursting from happiness
xX-wasabi-Xx Woah, you put me in your favorite authors list too! (jumps up and down)
DrakeTheDuelist You hate Anna but I probably chose her because she's my favorite character (no offense), I just think that Yoh wouldn't be as strong as he is now if it weren't for her, though. . .she IS a slave driver ~_~.Manta wouldn't be playing a big role in the story, so I don't think I could write it in his P.O.V. ~_~ so I guess I'll just try writing more of the chapters in a 3rd person P.O.V.
Youkuforever This story is kinda in the fantasy category, though I didn't put it there. O_o Well, about the people popping out of nowhere. . .the narrator just needed more characters to push through with the story. . .um so they pop out of nowhere. It would be kind of possible if the book can suck Anna and Yoh in. So let's just say it's magic