A/N: Again I'll say that english isn't my first language so there may be some grammatical mistakes. All suggestions and critique is welcome. Nothing else to say really
Disclaimer: These characters and places and everything else are not mine.
Introductions
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The Hogwarts school of witchcraft and wizardy was bustling with voices. It was the evening of the opening feast and all students up from the second year were in the great hall chatting with their friends. The words 'quidditch' and 'England' were heard. Some of them were waiting anxiously the sorting of their siblings or other friends.
When professor McGonagal marched in with the first years in a line behind him everyone in the hall felt silent. There were about fourty of the new students, all of them looking quite scared. The sorting hat was placed on the stool on front of the house tables. After the song McGonagal took the roll of parchment and read the first name.
The dark haired boy sat nervously on the stool and McGonagal placed the hat on his head. He was soon sorted to Ravenclaw and the sorting continued without disturbances. Some of the new students took more time than the others and a few of them were especially hard to place, at least by judging the time the hat took.
After the sorting was over ans all the first years were sitting in their respective tables the Headmaster started the meal. First years gasped when the food appeared on their plates when the older students merely commented some of the dishes they were served. Bonds were created when some friends from the train were sorted in the same house. Bonds were also broken when two twins were sorted into different houses.
After the feast the Headmaster started his annual speech. He mentioned quite many of things which were prohibited and then he told he had some introductions to make. "Like the older students may know, our last years defense against the dark arts teacher couldn't continue his work." To this some laughts were heard from the audience. That man had been unexpectedly incopetent and he had gotten himself quite strongly obliviated near the end of the term. The headmaster has muttered something about the Lockhart, or so the rumors told.
"So this year you have an old acquaintance on that position" Older ones had their hopes up. All of their defense teachers hadn't been that bad and getting back for example Charlie Weasley would be nice. "I'm sure almost all of you know him." continued the headmaster. "The defense teacher on this year will be professor Snape." The great hall fell silent. No one had thought that the greasy git would teach any other subject than potions.
It didn't take long when someone asked "But who will teach us potions if that gr.. I mean professor Snape has other subject to teach?" The headmaster chuckled to the almost slipped comment. "Good notice, mister Davids. And fear not, you have your potions teacher. Let me introduce you, miss Simons" The headmaster pointed to a young woman who had been sitting on the head table. The woman stood up and turned her head to look throught the hall. She smiled to all but didn't say anything. She sat back down when the clappering had subsided.
They seemes to like her, which was good. That would make her job much easier. After all this was her first year teaching potions. She had practised as much as she could but there were certain difficulties which made the tings harder. Well, the previous potions teacher had promised to keep some lessons if they become too hard on her, and the headmaster had promised to try to find a new defence or potions teacher, if this wouldn't work at all. They had all been so kind to her all these years. She wondered had she done anything to deserve it. The dark voice had assured her that she had done more to him than he could ever repay but she didn't really know what that meant. Well, this was not time to worry.
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Response:
Snape rules, Thank you, I have corrected the errors you pointed out :) I'm surprised I didn't have more of them. And thank you about the review, the first one :)
Disclaimer: These characters and places and everything else are not mine.
Introductions
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The Hogwarts school of witchcraft and wizardy was bustling with voices. It was the evening of the opening feast and all students up from the second year were in the great hall chatting with their friends. The words 'quidditch' and 'England' were heard. Some of them were waiting anxiously the sorting of their siblings or other friends.
When professor McGonagal marched in with the first years in a line behind him everyone in the hall felt silent. There were about fourty of the new students, all of them looking quite scared. The sorting hat was placed on the stool on front of the house tables. After the song McGonagal took the roll of parchment and read the first name.
The dark haired boy sat nervously on the stool and McGonagal placed the hat on his head. He was soon sorted to Ravenclaw and the sorting continued without disturbances. Some of the new students took more time than the others and a few of them were especially hard to place, at least by judging the time the hat took.
After the sorting was over ans all the first years were sitting in their respective tables the Headmaster started the meal. First years gasped when the food appeared on their plates when the older students merely commented some of the dishes they were served. Bonds were created when some friends from the train were sorted in the same house. Bonds were also broken when two twins were sorted into different houses.
After the feast the Headmaster started his annual speech. He mentioned quite many of things which were prohibited and then he told he had some introductions to make. "Like the older students may know, our last years defense against the dark arts teacher couldn't continue his work." To this some laughts were heard from the audience. That man had been unexpectedly incopetent and he had gotten himself quite strongly obliviated near the end of the term. The headmaster has muttered something about the Lockhart, or so the rumors told.
"So this year you have an old acquaintance on that position" Older ones had their hopes up. All of their defense teachers hadn't been that bad and getting back for example Charlie Weasley would be nice. "I'm sure almost all of you know him." continued the headmaster. "The defense teacher on this year will be professor Snape." The great hall fell silent. No one had thought that the greasy git would teach any other subject than potions.
It didn't take long when someone asked "But who will teach us potions if that gr.. I mean professor Snape has other subject to teach?" The headmaster chuckled to the almost slipped comment. "Good notice, mister Davids. And fear not, you have your potions teacher. Let me introduce you, miss Simons" The headmaster pointed to a young woman who had been sitting on the head table. The woman stood up and turned her head to look throught the hall. She smiled to all but didn't say anything. She sat back down when the clappering had subsided.
They seemes to like her, which was good. That would make her job much easier. After all this was her first year teaching potions. She had practised as much as she could but there were certain difficulties which made the tings harder. Well, the previous potions teacher had promised to keep some lessons if they become too hard on her, and the headmaster had promised to try to find a new defence or potions teacher, if this wouldn't work at all. They had all been so kind to her all these years. She wondered had she done anything to deserve it. The dark voice had assured her that she had done more to him than he could ever repay but she didn't really know what that meant. Well, this was not time to worry.
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Response:
Snape rules, Thank you, I have corrected the errors you pointed out :) I'm surprised I didn't have more of them. And thank you about the review, the first one :)