~~~At Breakfast~~~
There were two chairs empty at the table, located between Ray and Hilary.
"Well, guys, the good news is that we don't have to worry about Tyson arguing with Hilary." Ray said. Hilary rolled her eyes at the comment.
"And what's the bad news?" Max asked.
Hilary answered for Ray. "The bad news is: 1. We have two chibi's tied up in the living room on the couch with a scarf. 2. We made Tyson miss breakfast, so he'll be whining until lunch. 3. We have to go shopping to buy Tyson and Kai new outfits because their clothes don't fit anymore. 4. Tyson AND Kai will both be complaining because they can't beyblade(shoots glare at Ray). 5. Probably the biggest one, Tyson and Kai are chibi's, and we need to get them cured somehow before we go back to Japan, otherwise the BBA will have a fit."
"Don foget dat. . . . . . . . AHHH! I can't tink off anyting!" Tyson whined.
"Hey, how did Tyson and Kai become chibi's, anyway?" Max asked.
"Who knows. . ." Ray answered.
"Well, we're going to have to find out how, because if we find out HOW they turned chibi, we'll surely find how to turn them back to normal." Kenny said.
"But that's the problem. We have NO idea as to how two teens became kids again overnight." Hilary stated.
"Well, maybe Dizzi can find out." Kenny said. He pushed his empty plate out of the way and put Dizzi on the table.
Dizzi yawned. "Am I getting woken up again? I thought you guys were on vacation?"
"We are, Dizzi, but we need your help. Kai and Tyson turned into chibi's last night, and we need to turn them back, pronto." Kenny said.
"Oh, this I've got to see to believe(1 point for rhyming!), Chief. And while you're at it, I'll get a picture."
They all walked out of the kitchen, and into the living room. On the couch sat, or whatever you'd call it, two chibi boys wrapped up in a white scarf.
"Look, I understand your point of tying Tyson up, but you didn't really have to tie me up too." Kai shot at them.
Kenny took out the camera part on Dizzi, and held it in front of Kai and Tyson, both shooting death glares.
"Ha, this is going to be hilarious at Christmas when we go back to Japan." Dizzi said as she got the two in a picture.
"Alright, Dizzi, you got your picture. Just tell us how to cure them!" Kenny said frantically.
"Well, I can't just look at them and make a cure appear now, can I? I'm going to need a DNA sample so I can find the problem, and how this happened."
"Look, we don't really have the equipment necessary here for drawing blood." Ray said.
At Ray's comment, both Tyson's eyes became wide with fear, and Kai wrinkled up his nose in disgust.
"Der ain no way I'm lettin' a needle get neaw me."(There ain't no way I'm letting a needle get near me) Tyson said dangerously.
"Hey, you want me to put duck tape on your mouth too, Tyson?" Hilary asked.
Tyson shuddered. It was her that had grabbed him and Kai, and stuck them in their little spot with Kai's scarf.
"Don't worry, Tyson. All I need is a strand of your hair. How am I supposed to analyze blood?" Dizzi said.
Tyson sighed. That was a relief.
"So, who wants to pluck out the hair?" Dizzi asked.
"I'll do it!" Max said. He reached his hand out toward Tyson's head. He touched Tyson's hair, then singled them the strands out carefully. He finally got one and carefully pulled it out.
"OOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!! DAT HUUUUUUT!!!!!!!" Tyson screamed.
"Tyson, SHUUUUUUUUUUT UUUUUUUUUUUUP!!!!!!!" Kai yelled. "And there's no way I'm letting someone touch MY hair! I'll do it myself, thank you!"
"Look, Kai," Ray said, kneeling in front of him. "I'll untie you, but do you promise not to hurt anybody?"
"Hph. . ." Kai said smartly.
Ray sighed. "That's good enough for me."
He undid the scarf, and Kai and Tyson were finally free. Kai reached his hand up to hair, and neatly pulled out a loose one. He handed it to Max, who gave both of the strands to Kenny. Kenny opened up two of Dizzi's disk holders, then put Tyson's in the left, and Kai's in the right. The holders closed, and they all crowded around her to see the results.
"Well, this is definatly Kai and Tyson." She said. "Of course, they're a few years younger, but it's still them. Looks like they ate something which triggered their sudden age reduction. So it must have been supper, since they haven't eaten anything today."
"SUPPER?" They all said in unison.
"Well, that's going to be hard, considering that Tyson ate some of everything last night." Hilary said.
"I don't even remember what we had." Max said sadly.
"Oh man, can't you guyses memba anyting?" Tyson asked. "We had mash-ed potaters an gwavy, gween beanses, pok chopses, cone, tanjoweenses(Tangerines), pina appel, kiwi, mangoses, bananers, lemenade, an cake! Is dat so hard ta 'memba?"
Everyone, except Kai and Dizzi, hung their mouths open, and popped their eyes.
"WOW, TYSON! If you took a test on food, you'd definately pass with an 'A' plus, plus, plus!" Max complimented.
"Well, we all basially ate that stuff, so what did only Kai and Tyson eat?" Hilary asked.
Ray thought back to last night, when they'd been eating. He'd gotten up to get drinks, Tyson came in begging, Hilary yelled, the fight, the cake splattering, the lemonade, him yelling at them to behave, Tyson full, Kai going to bed first, washing dishes. . .
'Wait a second!' He thought. 'Tyson full? Kai first to bed? Exact opposite for both, and the taste in Tyson's mouth. . .'
"Tyson, did the lemonade taste bad last night?" Ray asked.
Tyson looked up at him, so did Kai, and both of them made scowling faces, Tyson's was worse than Kai's.
"You bet! Dat lemenade sucked beeg time!" Tyson exclaimed.
"I have to admit, Ray, you USUALLY have good taste, but for once, Tyson is actually right. That lemonade was nasty." Kai said.
"What are you guys talking about?" Hilary asked. "That lemonade was delicious!"
"Yeah, it was good, not really enough sugar, though." Max said.
"That's because it was a pre-mix. You don't add sugar, otherwise it will taste bad." Ray explained.
"Why don't we have a look at that lemonade?" Dizzi suggested.
They all looked puzzled(except Kai and Tyson, they were still mad at Ray for the lemonade). Max recovered first, and went into the kitchen, opened the cupboard door, and took out the container of lemonade mix. He walked back into the living room with it.
"Alright, now read the directions." Dizzi instructed.
"Pour water into serving glass(es), and place four tablespoons of mix into glass(es). Stir well, then serve." Max read aloud.
"Are there any warnings on that thing, Max?" Dizzi asked.
"Warnings? I don't see any." Max said as he turned the container around, looking for a warning.
"Look, here's one," Hilary pointed at a spot near the bottom. It was in tiny letters. "It says, 'Caution, Do not exceed limit of four tablespoons, and do not go under the limit of four tablespoons. If limit is exceeded or if gone under limit, drinker may experience sypmtoms such as nausea, nosebleeds, stuffy nose, sore throat, watery eyes, headaches, or ear aches.' Hey, it doesn't say anything about chibi's!" (Is that stuff convincing for you? I couldn't think of the word opposite of exceeded. . .)
"Maybe Ray put in the wrong amounts?" Max asked.
"No way! I put in the exact amounts for all the drinks!" Ray said.
"Not for Tyson's, you didn't." Kai said. "Remember, Tyson made his drink during his fight with Hilary. You, Ray, I can understand putting the ingrediants in right, Tyson, though, I'm not sure. . ."
"What do ya mean not sir?!" Tyson said irritated.
"I mean, you're dense, and stubborn, and rude, and stupid, and always hungry, and always complaining, and always whining, and you're a fu-"
Kai's mouth was covered up by Ray's hand.
"Look, we don't need any foul language here." He said to Kai. "Now, I put EXACTLY four tablespoons for each cup, besides Tyson's since he took off with it."
"Wait a minute," Max said. "Tyson, how many tablespoons did you put in your's?"
"Um, I can't weally wememba." Tyson answered.
Everyone groaned.
"But, I tink I put in about, um free?" He said uncertainly. "I was gonna put in da foth one, unteel a certain SOMEONES attack-ed me." He glared at Hilary.
"So, the last tablespoon must have went into Kai's cup." Max said.
"And Ray put in the other four. So, Tyson had three, and Kai had five." Kenny said.
"Right, Chief," Dizzi said. "But that still doesn't explain why they're little."
"So, it's Hiwawy's faut dat I'm wittle?" Tyson asked.
"No, it's your fault that you're little, and also your fault that I'm little." Kai said.
"WHAT!" Tyson screamed. "How da heck is it MY faut?!"
"Well, if YOU hadn't of been showing off YOU'RE 'talent' and 'skill' at the beach, Hilary wouldn't have been mad at YOU, I wouldn't have had to buy a cake, an-"
"CAKE!" Ray shouted.
"WHAT!" Everyone said in confusion and unison(Rhyme! Another point!).
"The cake spilled into the cups next to it when Hilary smashed her fist into it." Ray explained.
"So, are trying to say, that if you put cake in over or underdosed lemonade, you'll turn chibi?" Hilary asked.
"That's exactly what I'm trying to say!"
"I KNEW I SHOULDN'T HAVE BOUGHT THAT *beep* CAKE! *beep* IT TO HELL!" Kai went on a swearing spree.
"AHHHHHHH!!!! MAX!!!!! WHY DID YOU MAKE ME BUY THAT *beep* CAKE!" Kai strode over to Max, and grabbed him by his collar, except Kai was in Max's face, yelling.
" *beep* IT! I AM NEVER GOING TO BUY ANYONE ANYTHING, AGAIN! I HAD A FEELING ABOUT THAT CAKE! AND LOOK, I WAS RIGHT! LOOK AT MEEE! LOOK AT TYSON! I SHOULDN'T HAVE EVER COME ON THIS *beep* VACATION! I'LL PROBABLY NEVER BE NORMAL AGAIN!"
With that said and done, Kai jumped off Max, and started running away towards the hallway.
"KAI! Stop right there!"
Kai stopped and turned to see who would dare challenge him while he was angry.
It was Ray. He had an angry, yet still sympathetic look in his eyes.
"Kai, come back here." Ray said dangerously.
Kai suddenly became rather afraid as he walked towards Ray. Unlike himself, Ray could get extremely out of control when he was angry, and not like it had been in the kitchen last night. He finally reached Ray. However, what he was expecting was not for Ray to get down to his level on the floor, then look ashamed.
"Kai, please don't be angry with Max, or Tyson, or Hilary, or Kenny. If you want to take out your anger and frustration on someone, take it out on me. It's my fault you ended up like this. I should have known to put three instead of four in your cup. Could you forgive me?"
Ray bowed his head down slightly, waiting for the reaction. Kai had two choices: He could either forgive Ray, and walk away, or he could not forgive Ray, and take his temper out on him.
Kai, instead, said(RHYME! 3 points!), "Look, it isn't your fault, or any of the other people in this room's fault."
They all looked at him, surprised.
"Well, who's fault is it then?" Hilary asked.
"If you guys really want to know. . ." He said slowly.
"IT'S THAT *beep* BEYBLADE BATTLE ASSOCIATION'S FAULT!"
They all fell over anime style.
uh, this was ANOTHER, well, fairly long chapter. Not as long as the first. The first one was 42 KB! That might not be a lot, but it sure seemed like a lot. I was gonna put the shopping trip in here, but it was getting kinda long, so yeah.
And the scene changes looked bigger on my computer, but then I saw my story on the internet, and it looked bad. So I hoped this chapter turned out better.
I wanted to ask peoples reading this if they notice a difference between Kai and Tyson. And I'll tell you it isn't their hair, eyes, height, etc. I had to go and rewrite some things, cause it was supposed to, blah. I don't know how to explain it with out giving it away. Can you guess what it is?(If you even know what I mean. . .)
I actually shouldn't be on the computer writing this, 'cause I'm grounded, but I didn't want people mad at me for this being late. If you're wondering how, its cause I slept over at my friend's house yesterday, and I was supposed to go to church at noon the next day, except we stayed up watching her taped Inuyasha episodes, and we watched the two movies twice, and looked at her pics on the computer. We stayed up till like 2:30 in the morning, and we didn't wake up till like one in the afternoon. So I got grouded from the computer, telephone, tv, dvd, game boy, game cube, cd player, radio, anything that plugs in a wall or uses batteries.
I did get to see the Inuyasha movies though. They were in Japanese, but they had English AND Chinese subtitles. Liked the first movie better, if you guys were wondering.
It might be a while before the next chap comes, so be prepared to wait. My mom didn't tell me how long I was grounded, so I have no idea.
Anyways, thanks to:
the tigris: My first reviewer! You like this story? Cool! You think you know how they turned chibi? It took me forever to think of an original idea. . . Thank you!
Raku Ozzarian princess: WOW! Someone else hasn't seen the season of Beyblade! I feel like I could go on a sugar rush!(I'm gonna go eat some ice cream during Inuyasha tonight O_o)I wanna see the abbey stuff that happened, which includes the battle Ray has with Bryan! I went to BB.com too! This is soooo weird. . . I also wanna see Mariah, all I know is she's pink, and an old friend of Ray's.
Kimiko Nekoinu: CUTE? YAY! Someone thinks this is cute! I thought it was cute too! Yep, you're right about how they changed! You're the first to guess! Oh, I've seen this word everywhere, Kawaii! What's it mean? Sorry, but I'm a little new at this. Not even my friend(she's the one with the Inuyasha movies) knew what it meant.
Driger&Dragoon: I went back and looked about the n't thing, and you were right! Whoops. . . So if I'd have six points for the first chap, total of, well, look at the bottom.
Review please!
Total rhyme points: 3 Current # of all rhyme points for story: 9 I'll probably get messed up with all this rhyming stuff.
There were two chairs empty at the table, located between Ray and Hilary.
"Well, guys, the good news is that we don't have to worry about Tyson arguing with Hilary." Ray said. Hilary rolled her eyes at the comment.
"And what's the bad news?" Max asked.
Hilary answered for Ray. "The bad news is: 1. We have two chibi's tied up in the living room on the couch with a scarf. 2. We made Tyson miss breakfast, so he'll be whining until lunch. 3. We have to go shopping to buy Tyson and Kai new outfits because their clothes don't fit anymore. 4. Tyson AND Kai will both be complaining because they can't beyblade(shoots glare at Ray). 5. Probably the biggest one, Tyson and Kai are chibi's, and we need to get them cured somehow before we go back to Japan, otherwise the BBA will have a fit."
"Don foget dat. . . . . . . . AHHH! I can't tink off anyting!" Tyson whined.
"Hey, how did Tyson and Kai become chibi's, anyway?" Max asked.
"Who knows. . ." Ray answered.
"Well, we're going to have to find out how, because if we find out HOW they turned chibi, we'll surely find how to turn them back to normal." Kenny said.
"But that's the problem. We have NO idea as to how two teens became kids again overnight." Hilary stated.
"Well, maybe Dizzi can find out." Kenny said. He pushed his empty plate out of the way and put Dizzi on the table.
Dizzi yawned. "Am I getting woken up again? I thought you guys were on vacation?"
"We are, Dizzi, but we need your help. Kai and Tyson turned into chibi's last night, and we need to turn them back, pronto." Kenny said.
"Oh, this I've got to see to believe(1 point for rhyming!), Chief. And while you're at it, I'll get a picture."
They all walked out of the kitchen, and into the living room. On the couch sat, or whatever you'd call it, two chibi boys wrapped up in a white scarf.
"Look, I understand your point of tying Tyson up, but you didn't really have to tie me up too." Kai shot at them.
Kenny took out the camera part on Dizzi, and held it in front of Kai and Tyson, both shooting death glares.
"Ha, this is going to be hilarious at Christmas when we go back to Japan." Dizzi said as she got the two in a picture.
"Alright, Dizzi, you got your picture. Just tell us how to cure them!" Kenny said frantically.
"Well, I can't just look at them and make a cure appear now, can I? I'm going to need a DNA sample so I can find the problem, and how this happened."
"Look, we don't really have the equipment necessary here for drawing blood." Ray said.
At Ray's comment, both Tyson's eyes became wide with fear, and Kai wrinkled up his nose in disgust.
"Der ain no way I'm lettin' a needle get neaw me."(There ain't no way I'm letting a needle get near me) Tyson said dangerously.
"Hey, you want me to put duck tape on your mouth too, Tyson?" Hilary asked.
Tyson shuddered. It was her that had grabbed him and Kai, and stuck them in their little spot with Kai's scarf.
"Don't worry, Tyson. All I need is a strand of your hair. How am I supposed to analyze blood?" Dizzi said.
Tyson sighed. That was a relief.
"So, who wants to pluck out the hair?" Dizzi asked.
"I'll do it!" Max said. He reached his hand out toward Tyson's head. He touched Tyson's hair, then singled them the strands out carefully. He finally got one and carefully pulled it out.
"OOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!! DAT HUUUUUUT!!!!!!!" Tyson screamed.
"Tyson, SHUUUUUUUUUUT UUUUUUUUUUUUP!!!!!!!" Kai yelled. "And there's no way I'm letting someone touch MY hair! I'll do it myself, thank you!"
"Look, Kai," Ray said, kneeling in front of him. "I'll untie you, but do you promise not to hurt anybody?"
"Hph. . ." Kai said smartly.
Ray sighed. "That's good enough for me."
He undid the scarf, and Kai and Tyson were finally free. Kai reached his hand up to hair, and neatly pulled out a loose one. He handed it to Max, who gave both of the strands to Kenny. Kenny opened up two of Dizzi's disk holders, then put Tyson's in the left, and Kai's in the right. The holders closed, and they all crowded around her to see the results.
"Well, this is definatly Kai and Tyson." She said. "Of course, they're a few years younger, but it's still them. Looks like they ate something which triggered their sudden age reduction. So it must have been supper, since they haven't eaten anything today."
"SUPPER?" They all said in unison.
"Well, that's going to be hard, considering that Tyson ate some of everything last night." Hilary said.
"I don't even remember what we had." Max said sadly.
"Oh man, can't you guyses memba anyting?" Tyson asked. "We had mash-ed potaters an gwavy, gween beanses, pok chopses, cone, tanjoweenses(Tangerines), pina appel, kiwi, mangoses, bananers, lemenade, an cake! Is dat so hard ta 'memba?"
Everyone, except Kai and Dizzi, hung their mouths open, and popped their eyes.
"WOW, TYSON! If you took a test on food, you'd definately pass with an 'A' plus, plus, plus!" Max complimented.
"Well, we all basially ate that stuff, so what did only Kai and Tyson eat?" Hilary asked.
Ray thought back to last night, when they'd been eating. He'd gotten up to get drinks, Tyson came in begging, Hilary yelled, the fight, the cake splattering, the lemonade, him yelling at them to behave, Tyson full, Kai going to bed first, washing dishes. . .
'Wait a second!' He thought. 'Tyson full? Kai first to bed? Exact opposite for both, and the taste in Tyson's mouth. . .'
"Tyson, did the lemonade taste bad last night?" Ray asked.
Tyson looked up at him, so did Kai, and both of them made scowling faces, Tyson's was worse than Kai's.
"You bet! Dat lemenade sucked beeg time!" Tyson exclaimed.
"I have to admit, Ray, you USUALLY have good taste, but for once, Tyson is actually right. That lemonade was nasty." Kai said.
"What are you guys talking about?" Hilary asked. "That lemonade was delicious!"
"Yeah, it was good, not really enough sugar, though." Max said.
"That's because it was a pre-mix. You don't add sugar, otherwise it will taste bad." Ray explained.
"Why don't we have a look at that lemonade?" Dizzi suggested.
They all looked puzzled(except Kai and Tyson, they were still mad at Ray for the lemonade). Max recovered first, and went into the kitchen, opened the cupboard door, and took out the container of lemonade mix. He walked back into the living room with it.
"Alright, now read the directions." Dizzi instructed.
"Pour water into serving glass(es), and place four tablespoons of mix into glass(es). Stir well, then serve." Max read aloud.
"Are there any warnings on that thing, Max?" Dizzi asked.
"Warnings? I don't see any." Max said as he turned the container around, looking for a warning.
"Look, here's one," Hilary pointed at a spot near the bottom. It was in tiny letters. "It says, 'Caution, Do not exceed limit of four tablespoons, and do not go under the limit of four tablespoons. If limit is exceeded or if gone under limit, drinker may experience sypmtoms such as nausea, nosebleeds, stuffy nose, sore throat, watery eyes, headaches, or ear aches.' Hey, it doesn't say anything about chibi's!" (Is that stuff convincing for you? I couldn't think of the word opposite of exceeded. . .)
"Maybe Ray put in the wrong amounts?" Max asked.
"No way! I put in the exact amounts for all the drinks!" Ray said.
"Not for Tyson's, you didn't." Kai said. "Remember, Tyson made his drink during his fight with Hilary. You, Ray, I can understand putting the ingrediants in right, Tyson, though, I'm not sure. . ."
"What do ya mean not sir?!" Tyson said irritated.
"I mean, you're dense, and stubborn, and rude, and stupid, and always hungry, and always complaining, and always whining, and you're a fu-"
Kai's mouth was covered up by Ray's hand.
"Look, we don't need any foul language here." He said to Kai. "Now, I put EXACTLY four tablespoons for each cup, besides Tyson's since he took off with it."
"Wait a minute," Max said. "Tyson, how many tablespoons did you put in your's?"
"Um, I can't weally wememba." Tyson answered.
Everyone groaned.
"But, I tink I put in about, um free?" He said uncertainly. "I was gonna put in da foth one, unteel a certain SOMEONES attack-ed me." He glared at Hilary.
"So, the last tablespoon must have went into Kai's cup." Max said.
"And Ray put in the other four. So, Tyson had three, and Kai had five." Kenny said.
"Right, Chief," Dizzi said. "But that still doesn't explain why they're little."
"So, it's Hiwawy's faut dat I'm wittle?" Tyson asked.
"No, it's your fault that you're little, and also your fault that I'm little." Kai said.
"WHAT!" Tyson screamed. "How da heck is it MY faut?!"
"Well, if YOU hadn't of been showing off YOU'RE 'talent' and 'skill' at the beach, Hilary wouldn't have been mad at YOU, I wouldn't have had to buy a cake, an-"
"CAKE!" Ray shouted.
"WHAT!" Everyone said in confusion and unison(Rhyme! Another point!).
"The cake spilled into the cups next to it when Hilary smashed her fist into it." Ray explained.
"So, are trying to say, that if you put cake in over or underdosed lemonade, you'll turn chibi?" Hilary asked.
"That's exactly what I'm trying to say!"
"I KNEW I SHOULDN'T HAVE BOUGHT THAT *beep* CAKE! *beep* IT TO HELL!" Kai went on a swearing spree.
"AHHHHHHH!!!! MAX!!!!! WHY DID YOU MAKE ME BUY THAT *beep* CAKE!" Kai strode over to Max, and grabbed him by his collar, except Kai was in Max's face, yelling.
" *beep* IT! I AM NEVER GOING TO BUY ANYONE ANYTHING, AGAIN! I HAD A FEELING ABOUT THAT CAKE! AND LOOK, I WAS RIGHT! LOOK AT MEEE! LOOK AT TYSON! I SHOULDN'T HAVE EVER COME ON THIS *beep* VACATION! I'LL PROBABLY NEVER BE NORMAL AGAIN!"
With that said and done, Kai jumped off Max, and started running away towards the hallway.
"KAI! Stop right there!"
Kai stopped and turned to see who would dare challenge him while he was angry.
It was Ray. He had an angry, yet still sympathetic look in his eyes.
"Kai, come back here." Ray said dangerously.
Kai suddenly became rather afraid as he walked towards Ray. Unlike himself, Ray could get extremely out of control when he was angry, and not like it had been in the kitchen last night. He finally reached Ray. However, what he was expecting was not for Ray to get down to his level on the floor, then look ashamed.
"Kai, please don't be angry with Max, or Tyson, or Hilary, or Kenny. If you want to take out your anger and frustration on someone, take it out on me. It's my fault you ended up like this. I should have known to put three instead of four in your cup. Could you forgive me?"
Ray bowed his head down slightly, waiting for the reaction. Kai had two choices: He could either forgive Ray, and walk away, or he could not forgive Ray, and take his temper out on him.
Kai, instead, said(RHYME! 3 points!), "Look, it isn't your fault, or any of the other people in this room's fault."
They all looked at him, surprised.
"Well, who's fault is it then?" Hilary asked.
"If you guys really want to know. . ." He said slowly.
"IT'S THAT *beep* BEYBLADE BATTLE ASSOCIATION'S FAULT!"
They all fell over anime style.
uh, this was ANOTHER, well, fairly long chapter. Not as long as the first. The first one was 42 KB! That might not be a lot, but it sure seemed like a lot. I was gonna put the shopping trip in here, but it was getting kinda long, so yeah.
And the scene changes looked bigger on my computer, but then I saw my story on the internet, and it looked bad. So I hoped this chapter turned out better.
I wanted to ask peoples reading this if they notice a difference between Kai and Tyson. And I'll tell you it isn't their hair, eyes, height, etc. I had to go and rewrite some things, cause it was supposed to, blah. I don't know how to explain it with out giving it away. Can you guess what it is?(If you even know what I mean. . .)
I actually shouldn't be on the computer writing this, 'cause I'm grounded, but I didn't want people mad at me for this being late. If you're wondering how, its cause I slept over at my friend's house yesterday, and I was supposed to go to church at noon the next day, except we stayed up watching her taped Inuyasha episodes, and we watched the two movies twice, and looked at her pics on the computer. We stayed up till like 2:30 in the morning, and we didn't wake up till like one in the afternoon. So I got grouded from the computer, telephone, tv, dvd, game boy, game cube, cd player, radio, anything that plugs in a wall or uses batteries.
I did get to see the Inuyasha movies though. They were in Japanese, but they had English AND Chinese subtitles. Liked the first movie better, if you guys were wondering.
It might be a while before the next chap comes, so be prepared to wait. My mom didn't tell me how long I was grounded, so I have no idea.
Anyways, thanks to:
the tigris: My first reviewer! You like this story? Cool! You think you know how they turned chibi? It took me forever to think of an original idea. . . Thank you!
Raku Ozzarian princess: WOW! Someone else hasn't seen the season of Beyblade! I feel like I could go on a sugar rush!(I'm gonna go eat some ice cream during Inuyasha tonight O_o)I wanna see the abbey stuff that happened, which includes the battle Ray has with Bryan! I went to BB.com too! This is soooo weird. . . I also wanna see Mariah, all I know is she's pink, and an old friend of Ray's.
Kimiko Nekoinu: CUTE? YAY! Someone thinks this is cute! I thought it was cute too! Yep, you're right about how they changed! You're the first to guess! Oh, I've seen this word everywhere, Kawaii! What's it mean? Sorry, but I'm a little new at this. Not even my friend(she's the one with the Inuyasha movies) knew what it meant.
Driger&Dragoon: I went back and looked about the n't thing, and you were right! Whoops. . . So if I'd have six points for the first chap, total of, well, look at the bottom.
Review please!
Total rhyme points: 3 Current # of all rhyme points for story: 9 I'll probably get messed up with all this rhyming stuff.