(a/n Warning: There's kinda some sentimental stuff at the beginning.)
~~~~~Next Day~~~~~
"Ray, maybe you should give Dranzer back to Kai." Max said after breakfast.
Only Ray, Max, Hilary, and Kenny were in the room. Kai was still in the bedroom, pouting. He wasn't crying or anything; he was just refusing to talk. He wouldn't even make eye contact. Tyson still hadn't woken up.
"Why?" Ray asked.
"Because Kai's life is beyblading, and you took that away from him when you took Dranzer away." Hilary said.
"Why?"
"Because Kai was raised in the abbey, and that's not a very good thing." Kenny said.
"Why?"
"You don't want to be raised in the abbey." Max said.
"Why?"
"Because it's a bad place." Kenny said.
"Why?"
"Because it's run by Kai's grandfather." Max said.
"Why?"
"WHO CARES 'WHY?!' 'WHY' DON'T YOU ASK KAI HOW COME IT'S RUN BY HIS GRANDFATHER!?" Hilary yelled. (There was a rhyme! Why & Kai! ONE POINT!)
"Because I don't know were Kai's grandfather is right now." Ray answered calmly.
"Why?" Max asked.
"SHUT UP!" Hilary yelled. "We don't need THAT going on anymore!"
"Ray, WHY don't you want to give Dranzer back?" Hilary asked, emphasizing on 'why.'
"I thought I already made that clear." Ray said.
"You did, but maybe you could just let Kai have it back for one day?" Kenny asked.
"I let Kai and Tyson have their beyblades back when they get older." He said.
"That reminds me," Max said. "Should we check on Dizzi?"
"Oh! I almost forgot!" Kenny said, running over to the other side of the living room where Dizzi was plugged in.
Ray and Max followed him, but Hilary stopped. "Shouldn't we get Kai and Tyson?"
"It's ten in the morning, I don't think Tyson will want to get up, and Kai is, um, refusing to acknowledge people when they go in that room." Max said.
"Yeah, I guess you're right." She said.
~~~~~Kai's POV~~~~~
How could Ray do that to me? I mean, I get why, I'd probably do the same thing, but STILL! Oh no, am I starting to act like a little kid too? Because I think I might be mad for no reason. Wait! I do so have reason! I'm mad because Ray took Dranzer from me and hid it in Hilary's room somewhere!
I suddenly sat up. Hilary was in the living room, I could hear their voices. Ray was in there too, and so were Max and Kenny. Tyson is sleeping. I could sneak in her room and grab it, but I wouldn't know where to start looking.
I thought about the plan in my head. The door of the room I shared with Tyson and Ray was open. I could sneak past Tyson's bed without waking him. I mean, there's no way I'd wake Tyson by sneaking past him.
I then noticed that Hilary's door was closed. THAT was a problem. Maybe Tyson wouldn't hear me opening it, but Ray sure would. Another chance ruined, I don't really want to get tied up again.
I layed back down. Maybe if I kept on ignoring people, they would give Dranzer back. Until then, I'll have to wait for the right moment to come.
~~~~~Living Room~~~~~
"Alright guys, and gals, I hate to dissappoint you, but I couldn't find anything about lemonade turning people chibi." Dizzi said. All their faces fell.
"Oh no, guys, what if we can't change them back, and they'll have to grow up all over again?" Max said with panic in his voice.
"They wouldn't be able to stay on the Bladebreakers, and there's no way a chibi can defend the title of World Champion!" Hilary added.
"And even worse, what if the BBA finds out?!" Kenny said.
"Well, like Kai said, technically, it is the BBA's fault that they are little." Ray said.
"That's not how Kai said it." Max said, trying not to giggle.
Before any of them could tell Max to shut up, the phone rang.
Kai also heard the phone ring, there was only one phone. It was in the master bedroom, where he was. (So of course he'd hear the phone ring!)
The phone woke up Tyson (IT"S A MIRACLE! *light shines down from the heavens and people start singing "Hallalujah!"), and he bolted up yelling, "What? Who? When? Where? How? Why?"
"It's the phone, stupid!" Kai yelled. Suddenly, an idea clicked. He jumped off the bed and scampered towards the phone that was sitting on a little table about 10 feet from his own bed.
Ray heard the noise from his room. He started running as fast as he could towards the master bedroom. When he got in the room, Kai was less than 4 feet away from the phone.
Using his neko-jin agility, he got to the phone at the same time as Kai. Kai was glaring at Ray, tugging on one end of the phone. Ray was yelling "NO KAI! LET GO! LET GO!" and pulling on the phone as well.
Tyson decided to join in the fun. So he got off his bed, and he started pulling on another end of the phone.
By the time Max, Kenny, and Hilary got in the room, the phone had rung at least six times. Kai smirked as he let go of his end of the phone. Tyson had, somehow, managed to let go at the same time. The phone went crashing into Ray, and the receiver fell onto the floor, as did Ray and the rest of the phone. (So the part you talk into is off the phone, kay?)
Tyson grabbed the receiver, but Kai grabbed the other end, and they started yelling.
"LET GO OF THE PHONE, STUPID!"
"NO! YOU WET GO OFF DA PHONE, DUMMY!"
"DUMMY? YOU'RE THE ONE WHO DOESN'T TALK RIGHT!"
"LET GO! I WANNA TALK!"
"WOULD YOU BOTH SHUT UP?!" Ray yelled. He grabbed the receiver from both of them, and irritably yelled into the phone, "WHAT?!"(I do that all the time. . .)
"Ray, is that you?" Said the person on the other end of the line.
"Oh!" Ray's face turned from angry to nervous in less than a second. "M-m-m- ister Dickenson, w-what are you calling f-f-for?"
Max, Hilary and Kenny's eyes widened in horror (Well, I'm not sure about Kenny. . .). Hilary grabbed Kai and put her hand over his mouth, as did Max with Tyson.
"Can you hold on a second, I'll put it on speaker." Ray used his free hand to shoo Hilary and Max away. They both mouthed at him, "Where do we put them?"
"I don't care!" He mouthed back. "Just put them somewhere!" (A rhyme! TWO POINTS!)
Hilary and Max hurried out of the room, dragging Kai and Tyson with them.
Ray put the phone on speaker, "Okay, Mr. Dickenson, you can talk to everybody."
"Do you have visitors over? I heard a couple of little kids yelling." Mr. Dickenson said through the speaker.
"Oh, um, uh, that, that was just Max and Hilary fighting over the phone. You know, they both have high voices." Ray answered.
Kenny nodded frantically, even though the president of their team couldn't see him.
Hilary and Max came in again, panting slightly.
"Well, can I ask you all how your vacation's going?"
"It's great!" Hilary said. 'Besides the fact that the two best bladers on the team are now chibis.' She added in her thoughts.
"Yeah! It's the best ever!" Max said, also thinking about how it would be better if Tyson and Kai were older.
"It's been very nice Mr. Dickenson. We're all enjoying ourselves." Kenny said. 'Well, ALMOST all of us.' He thought.
"Yeah, I don't think a vacation could get any wor-better than this!" Ray said.
"I see. What of Tyson and Kai?" Mr. Dickenson asked.
"Oh, you just missed them!" Hilary said. "Tyson and Kai just left about ten minutes ago!"
"They left together?" He asked.
They all froze, all of them trying to think of something that Kai and Tyson would both enjoy so much that they'd wait for the other one to come along. (Geez, I hope that made sense.)
"They went beyblading!" Max spat out.
"Beyblading? I thought you were all on vacation?"
"Oh, we are! But, you know Kai and Tyson, they live to beyblade!" Ray said. As he said that, a small bit of guilt suddenly became noticable to him.
"Well, I hope they're having a good time as well." Mr. Dickenson said. "Well, I'm calling long distance from Japan, so I have to go now. Goodbye everyone!"
"Goodbye!" They all said in unison.
Ray pushed the button on the phone to hang up. "Where did you put them?" He asked in a rushed voice.
Max and Hilary led the way out of the room and into Max and Kenny's room. Max walked past the two beds to the other side of the room, where a wardrobe stood. (Those things are great when you play hide and seek!)
He unlocked it and opened the door. (Okay all you KaiTy fans, get any sick images out of your minds! This ain't a romance story!) Kai and Tyson were both standing sending death glares at Hilary and Max, who both sweatdropped.
"That was Mr. Dickenson on the phone, and you two almost gave us away." Ray said. (Not counting that as a rhyme)
"Yeah, and nice excuse you made up for it: Oh, um, uh, that, that was just Max and Hilary fighting over the phone. You know, they both have high voices." Kai said, mimiking Ray on the last part.
"Well, I couldn't say, 'Oh, um, uh, that, that, was just Kai and Tyson fighting over the phone. You know, they both have high voices now that their both about THREE FEET TALL!" Ray snapped back.
"Sooner or later, someone from the BBA is going to find out." Kai said.
"And you WANT that to happen?" Ray said.
"Why not? I can't beyblade anyway."
"How come?"
Kai stared at Ray as if he was another Tyson. He yelled angrily, "BECAUSE YOU TOOK IT AWAY! DUH!"
Ray sweatdropped, he'd kind of forgotten about that since the little they'd just received.
Okay, I'm ending it there. I just have say something really funny: As I was typing the phone fighting part, you know, when Ray and Tyson and Kai were fighting for the phone, MY phone rang. I started laughing really hard, but I stopped when I picked it up, of course. That was so funny!
Okay, I got an e-mail from someone asking me what AAML is, and they told me to put it on this chap. AAML stands for Ash and Misty Love. I hope you know what that is. I saw that too somewhere, but I was searching for something, and I came across the definition. I made up my definition for it, it could go in a dictionary! *clears throut* A story or anything else referring to Ash and Misty couple togetherness. ^-^ So cute!
And I found out something that all of you are probably gonna say "Well, duh!" to. My friend is VERY obsessed with the anime called Inuyasha. She found this list of Japanese words and their meanings on the internet somewhere, and kawaii was on that list! And it said right across from it: cute, in italics. All of you probably knew that, but I thought kawaii was some made up internet word that people used. I mean, kawaii sounds like Hawaii! Someone could have easily made up that word, even the word sounds cute!
I hope this chap wasn't late. I said at least once a week, and I haven't been late yet! I posted the last chap on Wed. and today, for me at least, is Tuesday.
Enough of my talking, I'm thanking my loyal reviewers!
Raku Ozzarian princess: Woh, this is weird. I agree with you on everything! Except, you forgot Kai's scarf! I love that thing! Unless you don't like Kai's scarf. And I saw a pic somewhere on the internet with their new outfits from G-Rev. I can't wait till that that starts showing! But I really want to see the first season!
star-shimmered-dragon: Yeah, except I can't remember your idea anymore. Can't remember which ideas go to which person. Can't remember ANYTHING. I forget so easily. And you love this story? That makes me happy! I wouldn't like this story if it wasn't mine. That's kinda sad really. . .
Katie: Actually, one of the reviewers gave me the make-up idea, but I did add in that digital camera for fun. I really want one of those. And you LUV it too? Boy, a lot of pplz luv this story!
CrazyInsaneAnimeFanGirl: LOL I was laughing when I read your review! Not making fun of it, but IT was kawaii, just like Kai's chibi face!
A dragon's crystal: Kai pouting is really cute too! I can picture Kai in my mind too! I agree with a lot of things. It's scary sometimes. . .
NiMe-AzN-aNgEl: I hope I got your name right. I was having trouble reading your review, 'specially tha last part. But I found a Kai fan! Were you asking me to put more of him in? This chap had a lot of Kai in it, so I hope I made you happy!
Tonic: Um, they were three in my mind, but I met a four year old the other day that was REALLY annoying. So, I'm thinking four or five. And the idea's good, but Kai is my fav, and I'm not sure if I could make him do THAT. I'd probably be crying as I write the chap. Don't think I could make Tyson do it either. He's number three on my list, right behind Ray, or Rei, or however it's spelt.
Leenaren: You like my story too? I don't know why I'm surprised, but I don't think I'd like it. Don't think I could have resisted to chibi Kai either, but think Ray was a little mad at the time.
the tigris: Another person who thinks this story is good? I'm not surprised anymore. Anyway, when I saw your name I'm like "Hey that was my first reviewer!" I should dedicate a chapter to you or someone else on this HUGE website. Should I? I'm not too sure. . .
vapour: You must be a Ray/Rei fan! Right? I'm not sure. . . And you like it too? Yeah, I'm getting tired of saying that, but everyone says that to me!
Okay, that's it for the review thank-yous. I just realized that this chap is REALLY short. I'm sorry! But, I'm not mentioning any names, some people on here have really short chapters all the time.
And for the quote thing, I decided to stop it since no one was commenting, and I thought it was getting kind of stupid.
Total chap rhyme points: 2 Total story points: 21
Well, I got past twenty. I haven't been rhyming lately anyway, like when I talk you know?
Review if you liked the chap!
~~~~~Next Day~~~~~
"Ray, maybe you should give Dranzer back to Kai." Max said after breakfast.
Only Ray, Max, Hilary, and Kenny were in the room. Kai was still in the bedroom, pouting. He wasn't crying or anything; he was just refusing to talk. He wouldn't even make eye contact. Tyson still hadn't woken up.
"Why?" Ray asked.
"Because Kai's life is beyblading, and you took that away from him when you took Dranzer away." Hilary said.
"Why?"
"Because Kai was raised in the abbey, and that's not a very good thing." Kenny said.
"Why?"
"You don't want to be raised in the abbey." Max said.
"Why?"
"Because it's a bad place." Kenny said.
"Why?"
"Because it's run by Kai's grandfather." Max said.
"Why?"
"WHO CARES 'WHY?!' 'WHY' DON'T YOU ASK KAI HOW COME IT'S RUN BY HIS GRANDFATHER!?" Hilary yelled. (There was a rhyme! Why & Kai! ONE POINT!)
"Because I don't know were Kai's grandfather is right now." Ray answered calmly.
"Why?" Max asked.
"SHUT UP!" Hilary yelled. "We don't need THAT going on anymore!"
"Ray, WHY don't you want to give Dranzer back?" Hilary asked, emphasizing on 'why.'
"I thought I already made that clear." Ray said.
"You did, but maybe you could just let Kai have it back for one day?" Kenny asked.
"I let Kai and Tyson have their beyblades back when they get older." He said.
"That reminds me," Max said. "Should we check on Dizzi?"
"Oh! I almost forgot!" Kenny said, running over to the other side of the living room where Dizzi was plugged in.
Ray and Max followed him, but Hilary stopped. "Shouldn't we get Kai and Tyson?"
"It's ten in the morning, I don't think Tyson will want to get up, and Kai is, um, refusing to acknowledge people when they go in that room." Max said.
"Yeah, I guess you're right." She said.
~~~~~Kai's POV~~~~~
How could Ray do that to me? I mean, I get why, I'd probably do the same thing, but STILL! Oh no, am I starting to act like a little kid too? Because I think I might be mad for no reason. Wait! I do so have reason! I'm mad because Ray took Dranzer from me and hid it in Hilary's room somewhere!
I suddenly sat up. Hilary was in the living room, I could hear their voices. Ray was in there too, and so were Max and Kenny. Tyson is sleeping. I could sneak in her room and grab it, but I wouldn't know where to start looking.
I thought about the plan in my head. The door of the room I shared with Tyson and Ray was open. I could sneak past Tyson's bed without waking him. I mean, there's no way I'd wake Tyson by sneaking past him.
I then noticed that Hilary's door was closed. THAT was a problem. Maybe Tyson wouldn't hear me opening it, but Ray sure would. Another chance ruined, I don't really want to get tied up again.
I layed back down. Maybe if I kept on ignoring people, they would give Dranzer back. Until then, I'll have to wait for the right moment to come.
~~~~~Living Room~~~~~
"Alright guys, and gals, I hate to dissappoint you, but I couldn't find anything about lemonade turning people chibi." Dizzi said. All their faces fell.
"Oh no, guys, what if we can't change them back, and they'll have to grow up all over again?" Max said with panic in his voice.
"They wouldn't be able to stay on the Bladebreakers, and there's no way a chibi can defend the title of World Champion!" Hilary added.
"And even worse, what if the BBA finds out?!" Kenny said.
"Well, like Kai said, technically, it is the BBA's fault that they are little." Ray said.
"That's not how Kai said it." Max said, trying not to giggle.
Before any of them could tell Max to shut up, the phone rang.
Kai also heard the phone ring, there was only one phone. It was in the master bedroom, where he was. (So of course he'd hear the phone ring!)
The phone woke up Tyson (IT"S A MIRACLE! *light shines down from the heavens and people start singing "Hallalujah!"), and he bolted up yelling, "What? Who? When? Where? How? Why?"
"It's the phone, stupid!" Kai yelled. Suddenly, an idea clicked. He jumped off the bed and scampered towards the phone that was sitting on a little table about 10 feet from his own bed.
Ray heard the noise from his room. He started running as fast as he could towards the master bedroom. When he got in the room, Kai was less than 4 feet away from the phone.
Using his neko-jin agility, he got to the phone at the same time as Kai. Kai was glaring at Ray, tugging on one end of the phone. Ray was yelling "NO KAI! LET GO! LET GO!" and pulling on the phone as well.
Tyson decided to join in the fun. So he got off his bed, and he started pulling on another end of the phone.
By the time Max, Kenny, and Hilary got in the room, the phone had rung at least six times. Kai smirked as he let go of his end of the phone. Tyson had, somehow, managed to let go at the same time. The phone went crashing into Ray, and the receiver fell onto the floor, as did Ray and the rest of the phone. (So the part you talk into is off the phone, kay?)
Tyson grabbed the receiver, but Kai grabbed the other end, and they started yelling.
"LET GO OF THE PHONE, STUPID!"
"NO! YOU WET GO OFF DA PHONE, DUMMY!"
"DUMMY? YOU'RE THE ONE WHO DOESN'T TALK RIGHT!"
"LET GO! I WANNA TALK!"
"WOULD YOU BOTH SHUT UP?!" Ray yelled. He grabbed the receiver from both of them, and irritably yelled into the phone, "WHAT?!"(I do that all the time. . .)
"Ray, is that you?" Said the person on the other end of the line.
"Oh!" Ray's face turned from angry to nervous in less than a second. "M-m-m- ister Dickenson, w-what are you calling f-f-for?"
Max, Hilary and Kenny's eyes widened in horror (Well, I'm not sure about Kenny. . .). Hilary grabbed Kai and put her hand over his mouth, as did Max with Tyson.
"Can you hold on a second, I'll put it on speaker." Ray used his free hand to shoo Hilary and Max away. They both mouthed at him, "Where do we put them?"
"I don't care!" He mouthed back. "Just put them somewhere!" (A rhyme! TWO POINTS!)
Hilary and Max hurried out of the room, dragging Kai and Tyson with them.
Ray put the phone on speaker, "Okay, Mr. Dickenson, you can talk to everybody."
"Do you have visitors over? I heard a couple of little kids yelling." Mr. Dickenson said through the speaker.
"Oh, um, uh, that, that was just Max and Hilary fighting over the phone. You know, they both have high voices." Ray answered.
Kenny nodded frantically, even though the president of their team couldn't see him.
Hilary and Max came in again, panting slightly.
"Well, can I ask you all how your vacation's going?"
"It's great!" Hilary said. 'Besides the fact that the two best bladers on the team are now chibis.' She added in her thoughts.
"Yeah! It's the best ever!" Max said, also thinking about how it would be better if Tyson and Kai were older.
"It's been very nice Mr. Dickenson. We're all enjoying ourselves." Kenny said. 'Well, ALMOST all of us.' He thought.
"Yeah, I don't think a vacation could get any wor-better than this!" Ray said.
"I see. What of Tyson and Kai?" Mr. Dickenson asked.
"Oh, you just missed them!" Hilary said. "Tyson and Kai just left about ten minutes ago!"
"They left together?" He asked.
They all froze, all of them trying to think of something that Kai and Tyson would both enjoy so much that they'd wait for the other one to come along. (Geez, I hope that made sense.)
"They went beyblading!" Max spat out.
"Beyblading? I thought you were all on vacation?"
"Oh, we are! But, you know Kai and Tyson, they live to beyblade!" Ray said. As he said that, a small bit of guilt suddenly became noticable to him.
"Well, I hope they're having a good time as well." Mr. Dickenson said. "Well, I'm calling long distance from Japan, so I have to go now. Goodbye everyone!"
"Goodbye!" They all said in unison.
Ray pushed the button on the phone to hang up. "Where did you put them?" He asked in a rushed voice.
Max and Hilary led the way out of the room and into Max and Kenny's room. Max walked past the two beds to the other side of the room, where a wardrobe stood. (Those things are great when you play hide and seek!)
He unlocked it and opened the door. (Okay all you KaiTy fans, get any sick images out of your minds! This ain't a romance story!) Kai and Tyson were both standing sending death glares at Hilary and Max, who both sweatdropped.
"That was Mr. Dickenson on the phone, and you two almost gave us away." Ray said. (Not counting that as a rhyme)
"Yeah, and nice excuse you made up for it: Oh, um, uh, that, that was just Max and Hilary fighting over the phone. You know, they both have high voices." Kai said, mimiking Ray on the last part.
"Well, I couldn't say, 'Oh, um, uh, that, that, was just Kai and Tyson fighting over the phone. You know, they both have high voices now that their both about THREE FEET TALL!" Ray snapped back.
"Sooner or later, someone from the BBA is going to find out." Kai said.
"And you WANT that to happen?" Ray said.
"Why not? I can't beyblade anyway."
"How come?"
Kai stared at Ray as if he was another Tyson. He yelled angrily, "BECAUSE YOU TOOK IT AWAY! DUH!"
Ray sweatdropped, he'd kind of forgotten about that since the little they'd just received.
Okay, I'm ending it there. I just have say something really funny: As I was typing the phone fighting part, you know, when Ray and Tyson and Kai were fighting for the phone, MY phone rang. I started laughing really hard, but I stopped when I picked it up, of course. That was so funny!
Okay, I got an e-mail from someone asking me what AAML is, and they told me to put it on this chap. AAML stands for Ash and Misty Love. I hope you know what that is. I saw that too somewhere, but I was searching for something, and I came across the definition. I made up my definition for it, it could go in a dictionary! *clears throut* A story or anything else referring to Ash and Misty couple togetherness. ^-^ So cute!
And I found out something that all of you are probably gonna say "Well, duh!" to. My friend is VERY obsessed with the anime called Inuyasha. She found this list of Japanese words and their meanings on the internet somewhere, and kawaii was on that list! And it said right across from it: cute, in italics. All of you probably knew that, but I thought kawaii was some made up internet word that people used. I mean, kawaii sounds like Hawaii! Someone could have easily made up that word, even the word sounds cute!
I hope this chap wasn't late. I said at least once a week, and I haven't been late yet! I posted the last chap on Wed. and today, for me at least, is Tuesday.
Enough of my talking, I'm thanking my loyal reviewers!
Raku Ozzarian princess: Woh, this is weird. I agree with you on everything! Except, you forgot Kai's scarf! I love that thing! Unless you don't like Kai's scarf. And I saw a pic somewhere on the internet with their new outfits from G-Rev. I can't wait till that that starts showing! But I really want to see the first season!
star-shimmered-dragon: Yeah, except I can't remember your idea anymore. Can't remember which ideas go to which person. Can't remember ANYTHING. I forget so easily. And you love this story? That makes me happy! I wouldn't like this story if it wasn't mine. That's kinda sad really. . .
Katie: Actually, one of the reviewers gave me the make-up idea, but I did add in that digital camera for fun. I really want one of those. And you LUV it too? Boy, a lot of pplz luv this story!
CrazyInsaneAnimeFanGirl: LOL I was laughing when I read your review! Not making fun of it, but IT was kawaii, just like Kai's chibi face!
A dragon's crystal: Kai pouting is really cute too! I can picture Kai in my mind too! I agree with a lot of things. It's scary sometimes. . .
NiMe-AzN-aNgEl: I hope I got your name right. I was having trouble reading your review, 'specially tha last part. But I found a Kai fan! Were you asking me to put more of him in? This chap had a lot of Kai in it, so I hope I made you happy!
Tonic: Um, they were three in my mind, but I met a four year old the other day that was REALLY annoying. So, I'm thinking four or five. And the idea's good, but Kai is my fav, and I'm not sure if I could make him do THAT. I'd probably be crying as I write the chap. Don't think I could make Tyson do it either. He's number three on my list, right behind Ray, or Rei, or however it's spelt.
Leenaren: You like my story too? I don't know why I'm surprised, but I don't think I'd like it. Don't think I could have resisted to chibi Kai either, but think Ray was a little mad at the time.
the tigris: Another person who thinks this story is good? I'm not surprised anymore. Anyway, when I saw your name I'm like "Hey that was my first reviewer!" I should dedicate a chapter to you or someone else on this HUGE website. Should I? I'm not too sure. . .
vapour: You must be a Ray/Rei fan! Right? I'm not sure. . . And you like it too? Yeah, I'm getting tired of saying that, but everyone says that to me!
Okay, that's it for the review thank-yous. I just realized that this chap is REALLY short. I'm sorry! But, I'm not mentioning any names, some people on here have really short chapters all the time.
And for the quote thing, I decided to stop it since no one was commenting, and I thought it was getting kind of stupid.
Total chap rhyme points: 2 Total story points: 21
Well, I got past twenty. I haven't been rhyming lately anyway, like when I talk you know?
Review if you liked the chap!