'This is the worst vacation ever.' Thought Ray as he stood in line at the
infamous Macandon's Supper Club. Max called it Mickey D's. As for Ray, he
called it plain old McDonalds.
'I can't believe I'm waiting in line at McDonalds. Why did Tyson want to come here?' But Mcdonalds would work quite well with him since Tyson had become a "picky eater". All Ray had to do was order a kid's meal for Tyson and Kai, and they'd both eat it, hopefully. However, it was rather expensive. Three bucks for one kid's meal! It was a rip off.
Okay, so it was $2.95 for a regular kid's meal, but it was pretty close to three bucks.
"Can I help you?" The server asked with a smile on her face.
"Uh, yeah, I need a number four (a quarter-pounder in case you were wondering), supersized, and a large 7-Up without ice." Ray said. 'There's Max, let's see if I remember the rest.'
"Is that all?"
"No, I need two salad shakers, a Caeser one (Kenny) and a chicken one (Hilary). I also need a medium Diet Coke (Hilary) and a water (Kenny)."
"Is that everything for you, sir?"
"Not yet, I need a, um, how about a Big Mac, not supersized, with a medium Sprite to drink."
"Is that all you'll be needing, then?"
"Wait, one last thing. I need a kid's meal, but I'm not sure which one to get. . ."
"We have hamburger, cheeseburger, or chicken nuggets." She said, still with that smile on her face. "We also have the Mighty kid's meal, which a dollar more, and includes double-hamburger, double-cheeseburger, or six nuggets instead of four."
"I'll get the normal kid's meal chicken nuggets." He said. 'Kai will eat two, Tyson will hopefully eat two, and someone will the fries.'
"What would you like to drink with that?"
"Oh! Um, oh, whatever, just give me a couple of small Mountain Dews."
"Code Red or Regular?"
Now Ray was getting irritated, he had no idea it would take this long to order, and that girl's smile was really making him mad.
"I DON'T REALLY CARE!" He shouted. "JUST GIVE ME ONE OF EACH!"
"Alright then! So that's a number four supersized, Caeser and chicken shakers, Big Mac, regular nuggets kid's meal, a large 7-Up, a medium Diet Coke, a water, a-"
"Actually, change my medium Sprite to a medium Diet Coke."
"Okay, so then that's a number four supersized, Caeser and chicken shakers, Big Mac, regular nuggets kid's meal, a large 7-Up, two medium Diet Cokes, a water, a small Mountain Dew, and a small Code Red Mountain Dew?"
"Yes."
"Will that be for here or to go?"
"Eat here."
"The total is $16.65, and the order is-"
"Wait a second! It should only be $15.15! Why the extra dollar and a half?" Ray asked.
"There is a small fee of $1.50 to eat here." She said, and she STILL had that happy-go-lucky smile on her face.
'Well, that's stupid.' Ray thought as he handed her a twenty dollar bill. 'It's so dumb to charge extra money just to eat here.'
"Your change is $3.35, and your order is #42567, just come up when we call your number." She handed him a copy of the receipt.
Ray took the receipt and walked away so that someone else could place their order. He decided to wait for his number to be called out before he went into the Playland area to join the others. This particular McDonald's wasn't crowded today. As a matter of fact, Ray and his friends were the only people eating in the Playland area, which meant they could pretty much do whatever they wanted to in there.
"Order #42567 is ready!" Called the girl from the counter. Ray walked back up. She handed him the ugly reddish-pinkish tray loaded with food and said, "Have a nice day! And remember to put a smile on!"
Ray forced a smile on, but when he turned around, it vanished. 'Oh, yeah, I'm lovin' it.' He thought sarcastically.
He was walking back towards the door to Playland when a little girl, obviously excited for eating at McDonalds, crashed right into him, and the food flew off the tray. Luckily, no one got messy from ketchup or anything, but pop (or soda as some people call it) was all over the floor.
"Oh, no! I'm so sorry for my daughter's behavior! She's just happy today! I'm so sorry!" The girl's mother said as she helped Ray up.
"It's okay, ma'am, really, I was planning on changing my Diet Coke to a McFlurry, anyway."
Ray had gotten in the short line again and reordered (He didn't order a McFlurry either, in case you were wondering) everything. He was now walking into Playland.
"Ray, what took you so long?" Kenny asked as Ray set the tray (Yes! First rhyme! ONE POINT!) on the table.
"Yeah, Ray! You were gone for, like, ten minutes! The line didn't look THAT long!" Max said.
"It wasn't long, it just took long to order."
The other three just nodded. "So, Ray, did you remember everything?" Hilary asked.
"I didn't think I would, but I did!" He replied happily. Ray suddenly noticed that Tyson wasn't at the table. He saw two booster seats, one had Kai in it, and he looked really pissed. The other held nothing.
"Where's Tyson?"
"Playing." Max answered.
"Tyson!" Kenny called. "The food's here! You can eat now!"
There was some rumbling heard in the huge structure of rainbow tubes above them. Soon, Tyson came sliding out of the slide nearest to them, and running over.
"Yes, finawy!" He said, getting into his booster seat. "I'm hungwy!"
Max, Kenny, Hilary, and Ray all ate their meals. Tyson had actually eaten all the chicken nuggets AND all the fries. Kai hadn't eaten anything.
"Why doncha eat somethin', Kai?" Tyson asked.
"I hate McDonalds."
"Why?"
Kai glared at Tyson. "Because their food is greasy and full of fat, they put too much salt on their french fries, and the salads taste like plastic, just like their chicken."
"You should drink something then, Kai. They buy the pop from Pepsi and Coka- Cola companies." Hilary told Kai.
Tyson had already claimed the regular Mountain Dew, so Kai had to drink the Code Red. After both chibis were done, they wanted refills.
"I am NOT going back up there just to get refills for you two." Ray said.
"I'll do it." Max volunteered. He grabbed the two cups and walked out of the Playland area. In about a minute, he was back with both cups.
"Well, I can see why you didn't want to go back up, Ray." Max said. "That girl freaks me out." He handed the two cups full of pop to Kai and Tyson.
The four older kids just started talking about whatever as Kai and Tyson drank.
'This is so weird.' Kai thought. 'This stuff tastes really good! It makes me feel. . . . . Happy, somehow! But, I'm not supposed to be happy! This stuff is magical, I swear. . ."
'Woh! The Mountain Dew in America is somehow. . . . . Different. . . . . From the Mountain Dew back in Japan. But how? It's international, right? It should all taste the same, shouldn't it?' (Yes, Tyson can think the right words, but he can't SAY them)
Soon after the two chibis finished, they wanted more. This time, Hilary was the one to get refills. Kai and Tyson drank the pop even faster, and then, they wanted more. Kenny went up since everyone else refused to, and Kai and Tyson drank up every, single, drop in the cups. After they finished with their fourth round, they wanted even more.
After much arguing, Ray finally gave in. Kai and Tyson gobbled up the fifth round of soda in about a minute.
"Well, should we go? I mean, it's one o'clock. We should go back to the house." Hilary suggested.
"But I wanna stay wonger!" Tyson whined.
"Why?" Max questioned.
" 'Cause we wanna pway!" Kai said enthusiastically with a smile on his face to match that of the McDonalds server.
"Kai?" Ray asked with concern in his voice. "Are you okay?"
"I WANNA PWAY!" Tyson and Kai shouted in unison. They both took off towards an open pink tube.
"NO! GET BACK HERE!" Hilary yelled.
Tyson and Kai bolted up the pink tube, and much thundering in the tubes above was heard.
"Why are they both acting this way?" Hilary asked outloud.
"It's the sugar!" Max said. "The sugar in the Mountain Dew! And all that caffeine!"
"Isn't that called hyperactivity?" Kenny asked. Max and Hilary both nodded.
"Darn it!" Ray said angrily. "We forgot that they shrunk! They can't handle the caffeine!"
Max and Hilary ran towards the pink tube. Max went first with Hilary behind him. Almost as soon as they got up into the "canopy" of crawling, Kai came shooting out of a slide near Ray with Tyson right behind him. They both ran past Ray and ran towards a rope ladder. Ray snapped out of his shock and started climbing up the ladder after them.
Kenny was still on the floor, stunned. How were they going to catch two kids filled up on Mountain Dew?
Meanwhile, up in the tubes, Kai and Tyson had finished climbing up the ladder, and Max and Hilary were crawling fast straight towards them. It looked like the Kai and Max would crash into each other, but Kai turned to the left down another tube, Tyson climbing after him just in time. Unfortunatly, Ray had been right behind the two chibis, and he collided head on with Max.
"Oh my gosh! Are you guys okay?!" Hilary asked frantically.
Max and Ray were both rubbing their foreheads, nodding, but saying "Owwww. . ." from the pain.
"You guys!" Kenny called from the ground. "They're in the ball pit!"
Ray swore out loud in Chinese. He crawled down the tube Kai and Tyson had climbed through, with Max and Hilary behind him. They reached a slide, and Ray went head first down the slide.
When Ray reached the ground, Max came flying out. They both ran toward Kenny, who was standing outside the huge pit full of plastic balls of different colors (PLEASE! People, don't make that sound bad! Anyone who's been to a Mcdonalds or a Burger King knows what I'm talking about!!!). Tyson and Kai were throwing the little toys back and forth at each other.
"Please, you two! Can't you please get out of there? We're begging on our knees!" Hilary had arrived, pleading. She fell to her knees to prove her point.
In response, a red ball and a blue ball came shooting out of the tube that led into the ball pit, landing on the floor.
Hilary got up and stormed into the tube that led into the ball pit. She got to the entrance and clambered into the plastic pool. When her head came up, four plastic balls hit her on the head.
"OWWWW!!!" She yelled. Hilary death glared the two boys, who just threw more balls at her. She then grabbed plastic and threw it back at them.
"Hilary!" Kenny said. "You need to retrieve them! Not murder them!"
"WHAT DO I LOOK LIKE?! A DOG?! THEY STARTED IT! THEY'RE TRYING TO MURDER ME!" She screamed.
"Let me help!" Max called. He too climbed down the tube and fell into the ball pit. And when he surfaced, balls were thrown at him. He tried to make his way over to Tyson and Kai, but they kept bulleting him with balls. Finally, he gave up, and joined in the fight with Hilary, throwing balls at the two chibis.
"THIS IS GETTING US NOWHERE!!!" Kenny yelled. He was practically pulling his hair out.
Hilary and Max soon tired out from using their arms too much, and they were getting pelted with balls. Finally, both of them managed to escape out the tube.
"What are we going to do?" Max asked. "We can't get anywhere near them without getting hit, and getting hurt!"
After Max said that, both boys came out of the tube, and crawled up another one before anyone else could react.
"It's hopeless!" Hilary said. "We just have to wait for that stuff to wear off!"
The four teens suddenly heard a knocking sound. They looked up and saw Kai and Tyson in a circular dome with a plastic window on the front of it. Kai pulled down his lower eyelid and stuck his tongue out at them, while Tyson stuck his face up against the plastic window, making "funny" faces at them.
Hilary death glared them and blew a raspberry. Tyson and Kai both burst out laughing at her, and Tyson yelled out, "Nah nah nah nah nah! You ca-an't catch us!"
Hilary once again lost her temper, and she bolted up one of the tubes. In the dome, Kai and Tyson climbed out so they wouldn't be trapped. Ray, Max, and Kenny all sweatdropped.
Hilary spotted the two crawling down the tube she just entered. She raced after them, and Kai and Tyson didn't go down any of the slides. They kept going around and around the same path, singing "Catch me if you can".
When Hilary figured out she was going in circles, she stopped and turned to face the other way in the tube. Tyson had been in the lead, and he crashed into her, not seeing her in time, and Kai crashed into him. They both looked up and saw Hilary smiling evily at them.
"GOT YOU!" She yelled, but before she could grab Tyson, Kai grabbed the collar of Tyson's shirt and pulled him back just in time. They both crawled back the way they came, and got away from her, but she was still behind them, just not on their tail. The two chibis got to a blue slide, and both went feet first.
Hilary shouted just as she saw them go down, "THEY'RE GOING DOWN THE BLUE SLIDE!"
The three on the ground ran to the blue slide, but nothing came out.
"We don't see them!" Max called.
"I just saw them go down the blue slide, I swear!"
Ray looked up the slide in suspicion. He listened carefully. He could here just the slightest sound coming from it. It sounded like breathing. Like someone breathing. . . .
Ray bent down and took off his slip on shoes and socks. He climbed up the slide, his bare feet sticking to the plastic to make the climbing easier.
He got about halfway up when he found them. Kai had his hands on both sides of the tube slide, trying to keep from going all the way down. Tyson had his shoes sticking to the slides since they were rubber, and also had his hands on either side of the slide (RHYME! And up above where it says sides and slide, my mom says that didn't rhyme, so TWO POINTS!).
Ray was about to grab Kai, but Hilary came down, crashing into Tyson, who crashed into Kai, who crashed into Ray, and they all went tumbling down. Ray landed on his stomach with the other three piled on top of him.
"Are you guys okay?" Max asked.
All that was heard were groans of pain. Tyson and Kai couldn't get up because Hilary was on top of them, so the two had finally been caught.
"Not that I don't mind being buried under people, I kind of want to get up. . ." Ray said groggily.
Hilary got up, but grabbed Kai and Tyson before they could get up and run off into Playland again.
Ray got up and swaggered as he stood. He hadn't planned on falling down a slide.
Kai and Tyson were both struggling against Hilary's hold. Max helped her by taking Tyson. Together, the Bladebreakers walked out of the Playland area, not bothering to throw away their leftover paper from the food.
As they walked past the counter, the female server smiled at them and said, "Enjoy the rest of your day!" None of them smiled, or did anything except walk out of the fast-food restaurant. Ray, Max, Kenny, and Hilary all made a silent promise never to let Tyson and Kai drink Moutain Dew until the two turned back, if that would ever happen.
Okay, I lied. This chap is only 27kb, and that isn't including the a/n at the end. I checked before I started writing the a/n. sweatdrops It seemed really nice to end there! At least this chap isn't late like the last one.
Anyway, I want to personally give a HUGE thank you to a reviewer. Penguin Pop, I AM SO SORRY! You were right! I DID intentionally mean fried eggs, but I accidently typed fried eyes! Oo I went back and changed it now, so it is now correct. Sometimes, I just type weird things, and that was one of them! Even if my computer's spell check worked, it would have counted that as right since eyes is a word. looks down in shame I feel so bad! That chap was late AND it had an error! Shame on me! I may be overreacting, but I can't help it!
Okay, enough of me shaming myself, I asked for your fav characters so I could give you. . . . . . IMAGINARY PLUSHIES!!! Kind of stupid, but I was also curious as to who your guyses favorite characters were! And I hope that last sentence made sense to all of you! Some people forgot to tell me their fav characters, so they just get imaginary ice cream and imaginary candy.
So, time to thank all those nice people who review (I finally figured out how to bold the names. Boy, I can be really stupid sometimes).
pika318: You're the second person to tell me about falling off chairs! Not that that's a good thing, the chair I sit in is huge too. But it did tip over when I was trying to get something off the floor. gives pika318 imaginary Ray plushie, Kai plushie, and Max plushie Everyone says this story is funny! I hope this chap was funny. Have fun with your imaginary plushies!
Leenaren: I always get so happy when I see your name among the others! I don't know why, maybe because you've reviewed before??? gives Leenaren imaginary Ray plushie, Kai plushie, and Tyson plushie Cool! Your fav characters are in the same order as mine! Have fun with your imaginary plushies!
Blackrose: Everyone likes this story! Everyone who's reviewed, anyway. And Kai and Tyson did get along in this chap! Well, parts of it. gives Blackrose imaginary ice cream and imaginary candy Have fun eating your imaginary food!
Hazel-Beka: Okay, Kai is still kind of sick, but him and Tyson both kind of got better during their little sugar rush at Mickey D's. And I'm jealous! You only have six?! Well, maybe your's are longer or something. Or maybe you stay in school longer? I don't know, I start first period at 8:36 am and end seventh period at 3:20 pm. You play flute AND you're in cross country? I can't even run a mile. . . Walk it! But can't run it. . . I have a kind-of-a-friend that plays flute. I'm a singer myself. We're gonna be singing a song from the movie "Chicago" and from the Disney movie "Tarzan". gives Hazel-Beka imaginary ice cream and imaginary candy I'm guessing that you like Kai and Ray and dislike Tyson? Heheheh, I only like Tyson 'cause he can be funny sometimes. Have fun eating your imaginary food!
vapour: Woh, your review WAS long. I hope I get your fav characters right. gives vapour imaginary Max plushie, Ray plushie, and Kai plushie Those are your favorite ones, right? I hope they are. Your review was so funny! And I thought I was right about yaoi. I kind of knew, but I wasn't sure if my DD was right. And someone else told me what uke is, it means, um, the not dominant person. I get picky when I have to talk about THAT stuff. Luv reading about it, though! I am so weird. Have fun with your imaginary plushies!
Raku Ozzarian princess: I'm not the first? I can believe that. I didn't understand your uke definition at first, but when the tigris explained, your's made sense! - And I did know what shounen-ai meant. All I did was look through my friend's 45 page list of Japanese words and phrases, and I saw that shounen meant boy and ai meant love. That was the same day I found out about kawaii meaning cute in Japanese too! And I checked out your one- shot! I reviewed, though, so you probably already knew that. It was sooooo kawaii! gives Raku Ozzarian princess imaginary ice cream and imaginary candy Have fun eating your imaginary food!
the tigris: You must be picky when it comes to THAT subject too. I hated my Health class so much. o Glad it's over. . . gives the tigris imaginary Rei plushie, Kai plushie, and Tala plushie Have fun with your imaginary plushies!
Sukasa192: I hope you like this chap! I kind of figured that yaoi meant THAT. I just wasn't really sure. And I'm sorry you learned the hard way. sweatdrops I think I might have learned the hard way, but you see, my inner child is only ten, and all my friends say I have a childish mind. Which is probably true, since I didn't understand the yaoi thing until people explained it to me. . . sweatdrops again I have been sweatdropping way too much lately. gives Sukasa192 imaginary Kai plushie, Bryan plushie, and Ray plushie Wow! You're one of the only people who said they liked Bryan! I probably would if I'd seen the first season. I REALLY need some dvds. Have fun with your imaginary plushies!
Penguin Pop: Once again, I thank you for correcting me! You saw my huge thank you at the beginning of my a/n, and if you didn't, go back up and look. I was reading your story "Twisted Fate" and I lost it! AHHHHH! That was like the fifth story that had vanished from my fav list! However, I found it again and I'm trying to catch up. I love seeing Kai suffer, he's my fav, but I love seeing stories where people really make him miserable. gives Penguin Pop imaginary Rei plushie, Kai plushie, and Marium plushie You weer the only person who liked Marium! She's funny on the show. And you're right about Hilary making the stories more interesting. sigh I agree with everyone here, it's so bizarre. Have fun with your imaginary plushies!
CrazyInsaneAnimeFanGirl: OH! Doom! You love doom? Not sure what you mean. sweatdrops Darn! I did it again! I don't how many times I've done that! gives CrazyInsaneAnimeFanGirl imaginary ice cream and imaginary candy Have fun eating your imaginary food!
HimecoSukie: I luv your name! I would never have thought of that as an author name! And thank you for the definition of yaoi! I thought I was right with my DD, but I wasn't sure. And if you want to know what Uke means, it means dominant. That is, "on top". I don't really like writing that stuff, but I love reading it! gives HimecoSukie imaginary Tala plushie, Kai plushie, Rei plushie, and Bryan plushie I'll just give you both Rei and Bryan since you can't make up your mind. Hope no one gets mad at me. . . And Kai and Tyson will be better soon, the sugar rush just temporarily cured them. Have fun with your imaginary plushies!
A dragon's crystal: Tala? So that's where he is! I started to wonder why he wasn't in V-Force. Thank you for answering my questions about those words! And I think your review was the third longest or the second longest! Tyson would like a fridge, but you better put food in it! Unless you're playing a joke on him or something. gives A dragon's crystal imaginary Kai plushie, Rei plushie, Tala plushie, and Bryan plushie Guesss you couldn't decide? Never seen the first season, but I like Kai because of his personality. He does the funniest things! Even at the end of the opening song to V-Force, Kai is the only one not moving, you know, when Max and Tyson jump up and Rei does. . . something. I don't know what he's doing. And I also like him because of his past. I desperatly want to see a picture of Voltaire! I spent 6 hours at my computer looking for a picture of Voltaire! I looked EVERYWHERE!!! sigh I will BEG my mother to buy me dvds! And this response is REALLY long. . . Have fun with your imaginary plushies!
LadyVampi: You really made my day! I feel . . . . honered. I don't think I've EVER felt HONERED. And if I have, I can't remember. And I get into stories all the time at a later chap. I'm trying to improve on that, but I haven't gone story searching because I have like 25 stories on my fav list, and I do not understand that author alert thing at all. And I LUV your author name! Another name that I would NEVER have thought of, but then, my author name isn't original. I borrowed it from pokemon. gives LadyVampi imaginary ice cream and imaginary candy I'm obsessed with ff.net too. I check my stories every day. Have fun eating your imaginary food!
Susanna: Everyone says they like this! I don't know why I'm surprised. gives Susanna imaginary Kai plushie, Oliver plushie, and Robert plushie Wow! You're the only person who like Robert and Oliver! Have fun with your imaginary plushies!
NiMeAzNaNgEl: I just put this name 'cause I know it better and I probably wouldn't have been able to type the other one. Oo Anyway, tons of people told me what yaoi means, I thank you as well! I already kind of knew what it meant, I just wasn't sure about my DD. Call me crazy if you want, I seem to have fallen deep into yaoi fanfiction. However, if I read one about Kai, I can't picture him doing the stuff he does in those fics. So I've made up my own 'lil female Kai. Works every time! All I do is switch some words around and ta-dah! But besides that stuff, I'm also trapped by the enchanting powers of AAML. I'm sure it's holding me hostage! I am sooooo weird! I think I might have gotten hyper again. gives NiMeAzNaNgEl imaginary Kai plushie, Johnny plushie, and Ozuma plushie Cool! You are the only person who said they liked Ozuma! Have fun with your imaginary plushies!
Woh, there were a lot of reviewers who reviewed that last chap. It was the shortest one so far, and I think it got the most reviews!
I noticed something very interesting: Everyone who told me about their favs said Kai was on their list. He's on mine too.
My three fav Beyblade characters are in the most liked order as follows: Kai Hiwatari, Rei/Ray Kon, and Tyson Granger/Takao Kinomiya. I hope that's Tyson's last name in Japanese. I probably would like Johnny, Enrique, Tala, and Bryan too, but I don't know what any of them sound like.
Total Rhymes for chap: 2 (I am really slipping on these rhymes) Total Rhymes for story: 31
Review please!
'I can't believe I'm waiting in line at McDonalds. Why did Tyson want to come here?' But Mcdonalds would work quite well with him since Tyson had become a "picky eater". All Ray had to do was order a kid's meal for Tyson and Kai, and they'd both eat it, hopefully. However, it was rather expensive. Three bucks for one kid's meal! It was a rip off.
Okay, so it was $2.95 for a regular kid's meal, but it was pretty close to three bucks.
"Can I help you?" The server asked with a smile on her face.
"Uh, yeah, I need a number four (a quarter-pounder in case you were wondering), supersized, and a large 7-Up without ice." Ray said. 'There's Max, let's see if I remember the rest.'
"Is that all?"
"No, I need two salad shakers, a Caeser one (Kenny) and a chicken one (Hilary). I also need a medium Diet Coke (Hilary) and a water (Kenny)."
"Is that everything for you, sir?"
"Not yet, I need a, um, how about a Big Mac, not supersized, with a medium Sprite to drink."
"Is that all you'll be needing, then?"
"Wait, one last thing. I need a kid's meal, but I'm not sure which one to get. . ."
"We have hamburger, cheeseburger, or chicken nuggets." She said, still with that smile on her face. "We also have the Mighty kid's meal, which a dollar more, and includes double-hamburger, double-cheeseburger, or six nuggets instead of four."
"I'll get the normal kid's meal chicken nuggets." He said. 'Kai will eat two, Tyson will hopefully eat two, and someone will the fries.'
"What would you like to drink with that?"
"Oh! Um, oh, whatever, just give me a couple of small Mountain Dews."
"Code Red or Regular?"
Now Ray was getting irritated, he had no idea it would take this long to order, and that girl's smile was really making him mad.
"I DON'T REALLY CARE!" He shouted. "JUST GIVE ME ONE OF EACH!"
"Alright then! So that's a number four supersized, Caeser and chicken shakers, Big Mac, regular nuggets kid's meal, a large 7-Up, a medium Diet Coke, a water, a-"
"Actually, change my medium Sprite to a medium Diet Coke."
"Okay, so then that's a number four supersized, Caeser and chicken shakers, Big Mac, regular nuggets kid's meal, a large 7-Up, two medium Diet Cokes, a water, a small Mountain Dew, and a small Code Red Mountain Dew?"
"Yes."
"Will that be for here or to go?"
"Eat here."
"The total is $16.65, and the order is-"
"Wait a second! It should only be $15.15! Why the extra dollar and a half?" Ray asked.
"There is a small fee of $1.50 to eat here." She said, and she STILL had that happy-go-lucky smile on her face.
'Well, that's stupid.' Ray thought as he handed her a twenty dollar bill. 'It's so dumb to charge extra money just to eat here.'
"Your change is $3.35, and your order is #42567, just come up when we call your number." She handed him a copy of the receipt.
Ray took the receipt and walked away so that someone else could place their order. He decided to wait for his number to be called out before he went into the Playland area to join the others. This particular McDonald's wasn't crowded today. As a matter of fact, Ray and his friends were the only people eating in the Playland area, which meant they could pretty much do whatever they wanted to in there.
"Order #42567 is ready!" Called the girl from the counter. Ray walked back up. She handed him the ugly reddish-pinkish tray loaded with food and said, "Have a nice day! And remember to put a smile on!"
Ray forced a smile on, but when he turned around, it vanished. 'Oh, yeah, I'm lovin' it.' He thought sarcastically.
He was walking back towards the door to Playland when a little girl, obviously excited for eating at McDonalds, crashed right into him, and the food flew off the tray. Luckily, no one got messy from ketchup or anything, but pop (or soda as some people call it) was all over the floor.
"Oh, no! I'm so sorry for my daughter's behavior! She's just happy today! I'm so sorry!" The girl's mother said as she helped Ray up.
"It's okay, ma'am, really, I was planning on changing my Diet Coke to a McFlurry, anyway."
Ray had gotten in the short line again and reordered (He didn't order a McFlurry either, in case you were wondering) everything. He was now walking into Playland.
"Ray, what took you so long?" Kenny asked as Ray set the tray (Yes! First rhyme! ONE POINT!) on the table.
"Yeah, Ray! You were gone for, like, ten minutes! The line didn't look THAT long!" Max said.
"It wasn't long, it just took long to order."
The other three just nodded. "So, Ray, did you remember everything?" Hilary asked.
"I didn't think I would, but I did!" He replied happily. Ray suddenly noticed that Tyson wasn't at the table. He saw two booster seats, one had Kai in it, and he looked really pissed. The other held nothing.
"Where's Tyson?"
"Playing." Max answered.
"Tyson!" Kenny called. "The food's here! You can eat now!"
There was some rumbling heard in the huge structure of rainbow tubes above them. Soon, Tyson came sliding out of the slide nearest to them, and running over.
"Yes, finawy!" He said, getting into his booster seat. "I'm hungwy!"
Max, Kenny, Hilary, and Ray all ate their meals. Tyson had actually eaten all the chicken nuggets AND all the fries. Kai hadn't eaten anything.
"Why doncha eat somethin', Kai?" Tyson asked.
"I hate McDonalds."
"Why?"
Kai glared at Tyson. "Because their food is greasy and full of fat, they put too much salt on their french fries, and the salads taste like plastic, just like their chicken."
"You should drink something then, Kai. They buy the pop from Pepsi and Coka- Cola companies." Hilary told Kai.
Tyson had already claimed the regular Mountain Dew, so Kai had to drink the Code Red. After both chibis were done, they wanted refills.
"I am NOT going back up there just to get refills for you two." Ray said.
"I'll do it." Max volunteered. He grabbed the two cups and walked out of the Playland area. In about a minute, he was back with both cups.
"Well, I can see why you didn't want to go back up, Ray." Max said. "That girl freaks me out." He handed the two cups full of pop to Kai and Tyson.
The four older kids just started talking about whatever as Kai and Tyson drank.
'This is so weird.' Kai thought. 'This stuff tastes really good! It makes me feel. . . . . Happy, somehow! But, I'm not supposed to be happy! This stuff is magical, I swear. . ."
'Woh! The Mountain Dew in America is somehow. . . . . Different. . . . . From the Mountain Dew back in Japan. But how? It's international, right? It should all taste the same, shouldn't it?' (Yes, Tyson can think the right words, but he can't SAY them)
Soon after the two chibis finished, they wanted more. This time, Hilary was the one to get refills. Kai and Tyson drank the pop even faster, and then, they wanted more. Kenny went up since everyone else refused to, and Kai and Tyson drank up every, single, drop in the cups. After they finished with their fourth round, they wanted even more.
After much arguing, Ray finally gave in. Kai and Tyson gobbled up the fifth round of soda in about a minute.
"Well, should we go? I mean, it's one o'clock. We should go back to the house." Hilary suggested.
"But I wanna stay wonger!" Tyson whined.
"Why?" Max questioned.
" 'Cause we wanna pway!" Kai said enthusiastically with a smile on his face to match that of the McDonalds server.
"Kai?" Ray asked with concern in his voice. "Are you okay?"
"I WANNA PWAY!" Tyson and Kai shouted in unison. They both took off towards an open pink tube.
"NO! GET BACK HERE!" Hilary yelled.
Tyson and Kai bolted up the pink tube, and much thundering in the tubes above was heard.
"Why are they both acting this way?" Hilary asked outloud.
"It's the sugar!" Max said. "The sugar in the Mountain Dew! And all that caffeine!"
"Isn't that called hyperactivity?" Kenny asked. Max and Hilary both nodded.
"Darn it!" Ray said angrily. "We forgot that they shrunk! They can't handle the caffeine!"
Max and Hilary ran towards the pink tube. Max went first with Hilary behind him. Almost as soon as they got up into the "canopy" of crawling, Kai came shooting out of a slide near Ray with Tyson right behind him. They both ran past Ray and ran towards a rope ladder. Ray snapped out of his shock and started climbing up the ladder after them.
Kenny was still on the floor, stunned. How were they going to catch two kids filled up on Mountain Dew?
Meanwhile, up in the tubes, Kai and Tyson had finished climbing up the ladder, and Max and Hilary were crawling fast straight towards them. It looked like the Kai and Max would crash into each other, but Kai turned to the left down another tube, Tyson climbing after him just in time. Unfortunatly, Ray had been right behind the two chibis, and he collided head on with Max.
"Oh my gosh! Are you guys okay?!" Hilary asked frantically.
Max and Ray were both rubbing their foreheads, nodding, but saying "Owwww. . ." from the pain.
"You guys!" Kenny called from the ground. "They're in the ball pit!"
Ray swore out loud in Chinese. He crawled down the tube Kai and Tyson had climbed through, with Max and Hilary behind him. They reached a slide, and Ray went head first down the slide.
When Ray reached the ground, Max came flying out. They both ran toward Kenny, who was standing outside the huge pit full of plastic balls of different colors (PLEASE! People, don't make that sound bad! Anyone who's been to a Mcdonalds or a Burger King knows what I'm talking about!!!). Tyson and Kai were throwing the little toys back and forth at each other.
"Please, you two! Can't you please get out of there? We're begging on our knees!" Hilary had arrived, pleading. She fell to her knees to prove her point.
In response, a red ball and a blue ball came shooting out of the tube that led into the ball pit, landing on the floor.
Hilary got up and stormed into the tube that led into the ball pit. She got to the entrance and clambered into the plastic pool. When her head came up, four plastic balls hit her on the head.
"OWWWW!!!" She yelled. Hilary death glared the two boys, who just threw more balls at her. She then grabbed plastic and threw it back at them.
"Hilary!" Kenny said. "You need to retrieve them! Not murder them!"
"WHAT DO I LOOK LIKE?! A DOG?! THEY STARTED IT! THEY'RE TRYING TO MURDER ME!" She screamed.
"Let me help!" Max called. He too climbed down the tube and fell into the ball pit. And when he surfaced, balls were thrown at him. He tried to make his way over to Tyson and Kai, but they kept bulleting him with balls. Finally, he gave up, and joined in the fight with Hilary, throwing balls at the two chibis.
"THIS IS GETTING US NOWHERE!!!" Kenny yelled. He was practically pulling his hair out.
Hilary and Max soon tired out from using their arms too much, and they were getting pelted with balls. Finally, both of them managed to escape out the tube.
"What are we going to do?" Max asked. "We can't get anywhere near them without getting hit, and getting hurt!"
After Max said that, both boys came out of the tube, and crawled up another one before anyone else could react.
"It's hopeless!" Hilary said. "We just have to wait for that stuff to wear off!"
The four teens suddenly heard a knocking sound. They looked up and saw Kai and Tyson in a circular dome with a plastic window on the front of it. Kai pulled down his lower eyelid and stuck his tongue out at them, while Tyson stuck his face up against the plastic window, making "funny" faces at them.
Hilary death glared them and blew a raspberry. Tyson and Kai both burst out laughing at her, and Tyson yelled out, "Nah nah nah nah nah! You ca-an't catch us!"
Hilary once again lost her temper, and she bolted up one of the tubes. In the dome, Kai and Tyson climbed out so they wouldn't be trapped. Ray, Max, and Kenny all sweatdropped.
Hilary spotted the two crawling down the tube she just entered. She raced after them, and Kai and Tyson didn't go down any of the slides. They kept going around and around the same path, singing "Catch me if you can".
When Hilary figured out she was going in circles, she stopped and turned to face the other way in the tube. Tyson had been in the lead, and he crashed into her, not seeing her in time, and Kai crashed into him. They both looked up and saw Hilary smiling evily at them.
"GOT YOU!" She yelled, but before she could grab Tyson, Kai grabbed the collar of Tyson's shirt and pulled him back just in time. They both crawled back the way they came, and got away from her, but she was still behind them, just not on their tail. The two chibis got to a blue slide, and both went feet first.
Hilary shouted just as she saw them go down, "THEY'RE GOING DOWN THE BLUE SLIDE!"
The three on the ground ran to the blue slide, but nothing came out.
"We don't see them!" Max called.
"I just saw them go down the blue slide, I swear!"
Ray looked up the slide in suspicion. He listened carefully. He could here just the slightest sound coming from it. It sounded like breathing. Like someone breathing. . . .
Ray bent down and took off his slip on shoes and socks. He climbed up the slide, his bare feet sticking to the plastic to make the climbing easier.
He got about halfway up when he found them. Kai had his hands on both sides of the tube slide, trying to keep from going all the way down. Tyson had his shoes sticking to the slides since they were rubber, and also had his hands on either side of the slide (RHYME! And up above where it says sides and slide, my mom says that didn't rhyme, so TWO POINTS!).
Ray was about to grab Kai, but Hilary came down, crashing into Tyson, who crashed into Kai, who crashed into Ray, and they all went tumbling down. Ray landed on his stomach with the other three piled on top of him.
"Are you guys okay?" Max asked.
All that was heard were groans of pain. Tyson and Kai couldn't get up because Hilary was on top of them, so the two had finally been caught.
"Not that I don't mind being buried under people, I kind of want to get up. . ." Ray said groggily.
Hilary got up, but grabbed Kai and Tyson before they could get up and run off into Playland again.
Ray got up and swaggered as he stood. He hadn't planned on falling down a slide.
Kai and Tyson were both struggling against Hilary's hold. Max helped her by taking Tyson. Together, the Bladebreakers walked out of the Playland area, not bothering to throw away their leftover paper from the food.
As they walked past the counter, the female server smiled at them and said, "Enjoy the rest of your day!" None of them smiled, or did anything except walk out of the fast-food restaurant. Ray, Max, Kenny, and Hilary all made a silent promise never to let Tyson and Kai drink Moutain Dew until the two turned back, if that would ever happen.
Okay, I lied. This chap is only 27kb, and that isn't including the a/n at the end. I checked before I started writing the a/n. sweatdrops It seemed really nice to end there! At least this chap isn't late like the last one.
Anyway, I want to personally give a HUGE thank you to a reviewer. Penguin Pop, I AM SO SORRY! You were right! I DID intentionally mean fried eggs, but I accidently typed fried eyes! Oo I went back and changed it now, so it is now correct. Sometimes, I just type weird things, and that was one of them! Even if my computer's spell check worked, it would have counted that as right since eyes is a word. looks down in shame I feel so bad! That chap was late AND it had an error! Shame on me! I may be overreacting, but I can't help it!
Okay, enough of me shaming myself, I asked for your fav characters so I could give you. . . . . . IMAGINARY PLUSHIES!!! Kind of stupid, but I was also curious as to who your guyses favorite characters were! And I hope that last sentence made sense to all of you! Some people forgot to tell me their fav characters, so they just get imaginary ice cream and imaginary candy.
So, time to thank all those nice people who review (I finally figured out how to bold the names. Boy, I can be really stupid sometimes).
pika318: You're the second person to tell me about falling off chairs! Not that that's a good thing, the chair I sit in is huge too. But it did tip over when I was trying to get something off the floor. gives pika318 imaginary Ray plushie, Kai plushie, and Max plushie Everyone says this story is funny! I hope this chap was funny. Have fun with your imaginary plushies!
Leenaren: I always get so happy when I see your name among the others! I don't know why, maybe because you've reviewed before??? gives Leenaren imaginary Ray plushie, Kai plushie, and Tyson plushie Cool! Your fav characters are in the same order as mine! Have fun with your imaginary plushies!
Blackrose: Everyone likes this story! Everyone who's reviewed, anyway. And Kai and Tyson did get along in this chap! Well, parts of it. gives Blackrose imaginary ice cream and imaginary candy Have fun eating your imaginary food!
Hazel-Beka: Okay, Kai is still kind of sick, but him and Tyson both kind of got better during their little sugar rush at Mickey D's. And I'm jealous! You only have six?! Well, maybe your's are longer or something. Or maybe you stay in school longer? I don't know, I start first period at 8:36 am and end seventh period at 3:20 pm. You play flute AND you're in cross country? I can't even run a mile. . . Walk it! But can't run it. . . I have a kind-of-a-friend that plays flute. I'm a singer myself. We're gonna be singing a song from the movie "Chicago" and from the Disney movie "Tarzan". gives Hazel-Beka imaginary ice cream and imaginary candy I'm guessing that you like Kai and Ray and dislike Tyson? Heheheh, I only like Tyson 'cause he can be funny sometimes. Have fun eating your imaginary food!
vapour: Woh, your review WAS long. I hope I get your fav characters right. gives vapour imaginary Max plushie, Ray plushie, and Kai plushie Those are your favorite ones, right? I hope they are. Your review was so funny! And I thought I was right about yaoi. I kind of knew, but I wasn't sure if my DD was right. And someone else told me what uke is, it means, um, the not dominant person. I get picky when I have to talk about THAT stuff. Luv reading about it, though! I am so weird. Have fun with your imaginary plushies!
Raku Ozzarian princess: I'm not the first? I can believe that. I didn't understand your uke definition at first, but when the tigris explained, your's made sense! - And I did know what shounen-ai meant. All I did was look through my friend's 45 page list of Japanese words and phrases, and I saw that shounen meant boy and ai meant love. That was the same day I found out about kawaii meaning cute in Japanese too! And I checked out your one- shot! I reviewed, though, so you probably already knew that. It was sooooo kawaii! gives Raku Ozzarian princess imaginary ice cream and imaginary candy Have fun eating your imaginary food!
the tigris: You must be picky when it comes to THAT subject too. I hated my Health class so much. o Glad it's over. . . gives the tigris imaginary Rei plushie, Kai plushie, and Tala plushie Have fun with your imaginary plushies!
Sukasa192: I hope you like this chap! I kind of figured that yaoi meant THAT. I just wasn't really sure. And I'm sorry you learned the hard way. sweatdrops I think I might have learned the hard way, but you see, my inner child is only ten, and all my friends say I have a childish mind. Which is probably true, since I didn't understand the yaoi thing until people explained it to me. . . sweatdrops again I have been sweatdropping way too much lately. gives Sukasa192 imaginary Kai plushie, Bryan plushie, and Ray plushie Wow! You're one of the only people who said they liked Bryan! I probably would if I'd seen the first season. I REALLY need some dvds. Have fun with your imaginary plushies!
Penguin Pop: Once again, I thank you for correcting me! You saw my huge thank you at the beginning of my a/n, and if you didn't, go back up and look. I was reading your story "Twisted Fate" and I lost it! AHHHHH! That was like the fifth story that had vanished from my fav list! However, I found it again and I'm trying to catch up. I love seeing Kai suffer, he's my fav, but I love seeing stories where people really make him miserable. gives Penguin Pop imaginary Rei plushie, Kai plushie, and Marium plushie You weer the only person who liked Marium! She's funny on the show. And you're right about Hilary making the stories more interesting. sigh I agree with everyone here, it's so bizarre. Have fun with your imaginary plushies!
CrazyInsaneAnimeFanGirl: OH! Doom! You love doom? Not sure what you mean. sweatdrops Darn! I did it again! I don't how many times I've done that! gives CrazyInsaneAnimeFanGirl imaginary ice cream and imaginary candy Have fun eating your imaginary food!
HimecoSukie: I luv your name! I would never have thought of that as an author name! And thank you for the definition of yaoi! I thought I was right with my DD, but I wasn't sure. And if you want to know what Uke means, it means dominant. That is, "on top". I don't really like writing that stuff, but I love reading it! gives HimecoSukie imaginary Tala plushie, Kai plushie, Rei plushie, and Bryan plushie I'll just give you both Rei and Bryan since you can't make up your mind. Hope no one gets mad at me. . . And Kai and Tyson will be better soon, the sugar rush just temporarily cured them. Have fun with your imaginary plushies!
A dragon's crystal: Tala? So that's where he is! I started to wonder why he wasn't in V-Force. Thank you for answering my questions about those words! And I think your review was the third longest or the second longest! Tyson would like a fridge, but you better put food in it! Unless you're playing a joke on him or something. gives A dragon's crystal imaginary Kai plushie, Rei plushie, Tala plushie, and Bryan plushie Guesss you couldn't decide? Never seen the first season, but I like Kai because of his personality. He does the funniest things! Even at the end of the opening song to V-Force, Kai is the only one not moving, you know, when Max and Tyson jump up and Rei does. . . something. I don't know what he's doing. And I also like him because of his past. I desperatly want to see a picture of Voltaire! I spent 6 hours at my computer looking for a picture of Voltaire! I looked EVERYWHERE!!! sigh I will BEG my mother to buy me dvds! And this response is REALLY long. . . Have fun with your imaginary plushies!
LadyVampi: You really made my day! I feel . . . . honered. I don't think I've EVER felt HONERED. And if I have, I can't remember. And I get into stories all the time at a later chap. I'm trying to improve on that, but I haven't gone story searching because I have like 25 stories on my fav list, and I do not understand that author alert thing at all. And I LUV your author name! Another name that I would NEVER have thought of, but then, my author name isn't original. I borrowed it from pokemon. gives LadyVampi imaginary ice cream and imaginary candy I'm obsessed with ff.net too. I check my stories every day. Have fun eating your imaginary food!
Susanna: Everyone says they like this! I don't know why I'm surprised. gives Susanna imaginary Kai plushie, Oliver plushie, and Robert plushie Wow! You're the only person who like Robert and Oliver! Have fun with your imaginary plushies!
NiMeAzNaNgEl: I just put this name 'cause I know it better and I probably wouldn't have been able to type the other one. Oo Anyway, tons of people told me what yaoi means, I thank you as well! I already kind of knew what it meant, I just wasn't sure about my DD. Call me crazy if you want, I seem to have fallen deep into yaoi fanfiction. However, if I read one about Kai, I can't picture him doing the stuff he does in those fics. So I've made up my own 'lil female Kai. Works every time! All I do is switch some words around and ta-dah! But besides that stuff, I'm also trapped by the enchanting powers of AAML. I'm sure it's holding me hostage! I am sooooo weird! I think I might have gotten hyper again. gives NiMeAzNaNgEl imaginary Kai plushie, Johnny plushie, and Ozuma plushie Cool! You are the only person who said they liked Ozuma! Have fun with your imaginary plushies!
Woh, there were a lot of reviewers who reviewed that last chap. It was the shortest one so far, and I think it got the most reviews!
I noticed something very interesting: Everyone who told me about their favs said Kai was on their list. He's on mine too.
My three fav Beyblade characters are in the most liked order as follows: Kai Hiwatari, Rei/Ray Kon, and Tyson Granger/Takao Kinomiya. I hope that's Tyson's last name in Japanese. I probably would like Johnny, Enrique, Tala, and Bryan too, but I don't know what any of them sound like.
Total Rhymes for chap: 2 (I am really slipping on these rhymes) Total Rhymes for story: 31
Review please!