Thunder Clouds

Chapter 1: Kitsune Commotion!

XxX-I REDID THIS CHAPTER AGAIN-XxX

K I finally redid this chapter I had no idea how crappy this was until I read it again and realized how many typos I had made! I had no freaking idea how badly I needed a spell checker--!! I am soooo sorry to all of you who read this chapter before I redid it but I hope you will enjoy this chapter now that it's been edited for the 3rd time! And I'm working on editing all my other chapters as well cause I know they really need to be redone too! Once I'm done with that I'll put out the 4th chapter. Newayz I hope you can enjoy the story better now and again I'm very sorry about all the errors I made.

This is my first fic and I'm not really sure what I'm doing so if you don't like it tell me what I can do to make it better and if ya do like it that's great tell me, just email me or review PLEASE.

This is basically gonna be a Hiten/Kagome fic I think. I've got some other friends who are written Hiten/Kagome fics too but I felt like writing one cause I got bored and I wanted to see if I could write at all or if it would suck. I'm gonna try, plus I'm a big Hiten fan, he's soooo hot (BUT NOT AS HOT AS KOUGA AND MIROKU!!) .Right now I have no idea where this story is going or what the plot really is. I'm kinda making this up as I go cause I couldn't really think of any good ideas at the moment but I'll get some soon promise. Uh I guess it takes place when Kagome gets kidnapped by the thunder brothers and Inuyasha is being a big dumbass. I just hope I don't bash him to bad. I'm kinda mad at him right now cause I've been watching the show on cartoon network. Okay I guess I really do need to shut up and just writeoh and I'm sorry for any misspelling or misuse of grammar fyi I can't spell for the life of me but I'll try

Disclaimer: I do not own Inuyasha or its characters

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Hiten watched as the clouded sky grew darker, he was eager for his younger brother Manten to return from hunting. They had successfully retrieved another shard of the Shikon no Tama and he could feel his power increasing daily. His father would have been proud of them both. Together Hiten and Manten ruled the skies and were unstoppable. Once his brother came back they would go scouting for more jewel shards. Hiten wanted to increase their power as much as possible. Hiten sat up and gazed at the Death Valley that lay below his home in the clouds high atop the Eastern mountains. He scanned the skies for his brother but there was nothing except an endless horizon and retreating sun. Fog was starting to set in among the mountains tops. Hiten became impatient and went inside to rest, he would have to wait until his brother returned.
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"INUYASHA!?!?" cried Kagome "Can we PLEASE rest, we've been walking non- stop since this morning!" she whined.

Inuyasha's sensitive ears flinched at the high pitched shriek"Will you keep quiet!! We've only been walking for 4 or 5 hours! You weak humans are too much trouble to deal with." Inuyasha spat out as he casually crossed his arms and continued walking.

Kagome pouted" Hmp! I am not just some weak human you jerk!! Just because I'm not some stubborn demon who thinks he can last forever without rest and food, you treat me like I'm some feeble little girl made of glass! I guess you've completely forgotten all the times I've saved your butt!!" Kagome was so mad her face was turning red. She gave one last huff and went off in another direction to look for a good place to rest.

Inuyasha replied with a simple "Feh" and emitted a low growl under his breath as he continued walking in the same direction since he hadn't noticed Kagome's sudden departure.

As Kagome sat down on a rock in the middle of an opening she'd found in the woods near a stream she began to unpack her cooking utensils and start a fire until she heard a very loud "KAGOME!!!!" shouted in her direction.

"EEP" Kagome cried and jumped up from her current position having been startled by Inuyasha's blunt shouting.

"I'M OVER HERE YOU IDIOT!!!" Kagome screamed in the direction she'd heard Inuyasha.

Two seconds later Inuyasha had found Kagome and he was yelling at her for running off without telling him. "What the hell where you thinking, some demon could've snatched you and the jewel shards!!!" Inuyasha's face was red from anger and he was growling. He took a deep breath while he tried to calm down.

"Would you relax!? I can take care of myself! Plus I told you I needed to rest but you wouldn't listen!" Kagome shot back. "Now if you'll cooperate for two minutes and quite yelling I'll make you some ramen and then we can start looking for jewel shards again. OK?"

"Grrrrr....alright fine, but you better hurry up with that ramen." Inuyasha said as he climbed up the nearest tree.

Kagome sighed as she returned to starting the fire. 'Man Inuyasha can be such a jerk sometimes! He gives me no credit and treats me like I'm nothing more than a burden to him. Why did I have to be stuck with him of all demons?!'

Just as she had sat down to eat she heard something rustling in the bushes behind her.

She turned around to further investigate but before she had a chance a huge cloud of smoke surrounded the entire area. Once the smoke finally cleared Kagome was able to make out what looked like a big pink bubble with....a face?! O.o

"GIVE ME ALL THE SHARDS YOU POSSES OR SUFFER THE CONSEQUENCES!!" yelled the pink bubble, attempting to sound menacing.

Kagome couldn't help but giggle, this was one of the cutest demons she had ever seen! While Kagome had been trying to stifle her laughter she had missed the conversation between Inuyasha and the cute little demon. The pink bubble started to knaw on Inuyasha's head and unable to control herself any longer Kagome burst out laughing.

Inuyasha stopped yelling at the annoying demon and turned to look at Kagome rolling on the ground. Has she lost her mind?' He thought to himself.
Shippo (the self-assured little pink demon) decided to take this opportunity to search for the jewel shards. He transformed back into his kitsune form and the area was again clouded with smoke as Shippo started going through a bag he'd spotted near the fire. "Ah ha!" He smirked as he found a clear glass vial full of several shards. "This should be more than enough to lure in the Thunder Brothers, and then I'll be able to take back what they stole!" He snatched the container and took off.
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"Hey!! Where did that little thief get to?!" Inuyasha shouted once the smoke cleared and he found that the demon had disappeared.

"Inuyasha! I think that demon took off with our jewel shards!" Kagome shouted, but stopped as she again noticed a quiet rustling behind her and turned around to see a demon skull with a fuzzy tail poking out, skittering across grass and heading towards some bushes.

Inuyasha noticed the skull as well and watched as Shippo lunged into the nearest bush for cover.

"HEY get back here with my jewel shards you little twurp!!" Inuyasha scowled and took off to retrieve the mischievous jewel thief. He reached his destination in a matter of seconds and hurriedly began searching for the demon. He saw the brief flash of a fuzzy tail and in one quick swipe he had the demon, which he now realized was a kitsune by the tail. He returned to the camp and shook the poor youngster until the bottle of shards fell from the demon's pockets. Inuyasha snatched the bottle and in turn dropped the fox demon harshly on his head, rendering him unconscious.

Once Shippo regained consciousness he was greeted with a large smile and a pair of glistening brown eyes edged with worry.

"Hey there little guy, my name's Kagome and this is Inuyasha." Kagome said with a bright welcoming smile. "I'm sorry he was so mean to you but I won't let him touch you again, I promise!" She edged towards the kit and helped him to his feet. "By the way what's your name?" Kagome asked eagerly. "Uhhh, my name's Shippo." He said as he fidgeted uneasily. "Um, Sorry I tried to take your shards but I really needed them."

'Oh my gosh he's so cute!! He couldn't be an evil demon and he looks so young. I wonder what he needed the shards for?' Kagome thought as she lifted Shippo up off the ground and took him in her arms while she gently patted his back reassuringly. "Oh don't worry about it Shippo, I'm sure you had a good reason. Why don't you tell me more about it while I take a look at that bump on your head?"

"Well...uh ok." Shippo said hesitantly.

"Great! Just let me grab my disinfect spray." Kagome said as found her dissolved bag and began searching through it for her disinfectant and bandages. She grabbed the bottle and began to sprits the large bump on Shippo's head.

"Owww that stings Kagome." whined Shippo.

"Sorry I just don't want that bump to get infected." Kagome turned towards Inuyasha and glared furiously at him as she clenched her fists "INUYASHA you jerk you shouldn't have been so rough on the poor kid.... SIT!!!" she yelled with renewed rage.

Inuyasha slammed into the ground and came back up growling furiously. "What the hell was that for!?"

Kagome ignored Inuyasha and continued tending to Shippo "So what happened to you Shippo?"she asked sincerely as she finished placing a bandage on Shippo's forehead.

"It was the Thunder Brothers, they stole a Shikon shard that my father gave me before he died. My mother died a long time ago though. That's why I needed your shards to lure them in and steal my shard back." Shippo said, his voice edged with sorrow.

"Oh Shippo I'm so sorry" Kagome said genuinely "If you'd like I could take care of you and you can travel with us. How does that sound, huh?" Kagome said as she embraced the kitsune once again.

Shippo's eyes lit up. He really liked Kagome and she would make a great mother "Rrreaally Kagome, you would do that for me?"

"Of course Shippo, it's the least I can do since your parents are gone. I promise I will take good care of you." Kagome replied joyously.

Shippo started bouncing all the around the camp site, he was bursting with happiness and excitement. "Oh Kagome thank you SOOO much you're the nicest person I've ever met!!!" Shippo flashed Kagome a huge smile showing two tiny fangs.

Kagome eyes gleamed and twinkled with joy .She couldn't help but be overjoyed at seeing the young kitsune so happy." Thank you Shippo and you're welcome. I'll just finish up here with lunch and then we'll be on our way again." Kagome said as she gathered up three bowls and began filling them with ramen noodles.

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Okay I know I'm changing things up a bit but hey this my story and I'm in control hehe I rule all.

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Kougasgirl05