This is the next chapter! Now as a reminder I will have a vote at the end of the chapter and the further chapters.
Disclaimer Guy: Now she doesnt own Teletubbies. :P
It's really stupid in the beginning and gets to the horror afterwards. I don't know if I rated it right. tell me in reviews.
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One day I was sitting in my car listening to the radio and I was tapping the beat when my brother ran up to the car. "Sarah, Sarah, save me from the evil Teletubbies!"
I thought it was just one of his silly games so I said, "No, I think you can take 'em." That was before I saw Tinkie-winkie run up behind him with a butcher knife. "Get in the car, Zach, quick!" He got in the car and I locked the door. Ten seconds later Tinkie-winkie was at the car door and he started hacking away at it. We stared in horror as he kept hacking. I realized if I stayed like that he would get to us so I started to drive, first slowly then faster and faster.
Next thing I knew he was flying behind the car trying to get a better grip on the knife and he suddenly let go. The next thing I know he is running after the car and isn't breathing. I went through a tunnel and he was lost behind us when I passed a blue truck with flame decals. In it was my friend, Mara, she waved at me and I hurriedly waved back and started to go a little faster. She got out her cell phone and dialed my number (I have a cell phone with me at all times just in case something happens to me or someone on the road so I can call the police).
"Hey, why are you driving so fast? It seems like there is something chasing you," she said into the cell phone.
"There is something chasing me, you can't see it though. You might see a floating butcher knife." I said to her.
"What is chasing you?" she asked.
"The thing chasing me is...Tinkie-winkie." I told her.
"Tinkie-winkie! Sarah is that the best you can come up with?! I can give you an A for effort but...Tinkie-winkie!" she said laughing.
"I'm not kidding Mara! It really is, oh wait, he's on the back of you're truck!"
Tinkie-winkie was climbing on to the cab of the truck when I said that. He got out ANOTHER(because there was one stuck in the side of my car) butcher knife, carved a hold into the top, climbed into the cab and...I didn't see what happened but Zach said he slit her throat and blood spattered everywhere.
I started going even faster just as Tinkie-winkie attempted to jump on our car. He didn't succeed though. He was just about to grab onto the car when I went faster. He landed on the cement and I heard him make a weird noise, that sounded kinda like a scream, as an 18 wheeler ran him over.
"Eeeeewwwwwwwww!" I said as the 18 wheeler moved into the other lane and I could see Tinkie-winkie's flattened corpse.
In about an hour Zach and I got to our parents house. "Zach, I want you to stay in the car while I go get mom and dad. I am going to leave you with the doors locked. I will come back as soon as I can. I am going to take your CD player. Don't protest it won't do anything." I said as I got ready to go into the house. I quickly opened the door, locked the other doors, and ran into the house. I looked around the corner leading into the living room and quickly drew my head back because of what I saw. Dipsie, La-La, and Po were hacking away at mom and dad with every sharp object in the house they could find.
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That's the end of the first chapter! Is it a good cliffhanger or not? I don't really care because this is only 1 of 2 stories so I can still work on it, it is also only the second chapter if you count the foreword. Time for the vote now!!!! MWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! Here it is:
#1: it was really really good.
#2: it was good.
#3: it was okay.
#4: it needs improvement.
#5: it sucked.
THERE!!! NOW I COMMAND YOU TO VOTE!!!!! If you vote bad I don't care, just no flames. Actually, you can send me stuff like flames except nicer.
Bbf: comes out of nowhere It's called constructive criticism!
Yes, that! I have a really big headache right now, so the Disclaimer Idiot is going to bring me some headache medicine. And don't worry, he was an idiot because Billybobfred wasn't specific enough. (clap clap)
Disclaimer Idiot: Yes master?
Headache medicine. I mean Tylenol or Advil or aspirin.
Disclaimer Idiot: Okey dokes! (gets some)
(takes it) Wow, that worked fast!
