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Harry's Poem

Why is there so much pain?
I can't bear it any more.
Is it because I lost much family
It is because I am unlucky
Why
Why did my mother, father, and Sirius have to go
It was all because of me wasn't it
Sometimes I wish I wasn't born
Sometimes I am glad I was born
Because I have 2 best friends in the world
Ron who has a big family
His family loves as one of them
And Hermoine that tries to keep me out of trouble
They are both fun to be around
I am glad I have friends like them
That makes me forget all this pain I feel
I hope one day my parents and Sirius come back
But the question is why is there so much pain?