A/N I am really sorry for the delay, its been ages since I last posted
anything, and I doubt I have anyone actually left who remembers my fan
fiction is here, and those of you who are here will probably leave after
this chapter. Stay with me! I have a plan... sort of. Please review!
Disclaimer-: I do not and will never own any of the characters, only the plotline and he new spin.
Chapter 5: Just five seconds of time
The scene lingered as though set in stone. She lay on the floor looking at him; he stood in the doorway staring down at her. The glass glinted red from the blood it had ripped out of Hermione and the furniture was out of place with her books strewn across the floor, pages missing, where she had knocked them from the table.
Her robes lay discarded on the floor leaving her in her school skirt and blouse. Her knees and arms were badly cut up from the glass and her hair had muddled itself up into a worried tangle. She had now cried all the make up from her face leaving her pale (well, paler). She still struggled to support herself as she tried to gain some composure. Her pupils are still dilated and she still struggled to focus though now with more purpose. 'how cud I have forgotten to lock the door! Gain composure Hermione! He might not have noticed!' As she leans against the bed, sitting up a little straighter whilst shaking her head (and quickly wishing she hadn't) she tried to think of something to say that would relieve the situation a bit 'think Hermione!' she screamed to herself 'he cant see u like this!' The situation was pretty much laid bare in front of him. She swallowed hoping that she could swallow her apparent fear as well.
"I had a little accident," she slurred whilst the blood soaked up the sleeve of her blouse. Oh well done Hermione. Round of applause, don't state the obvious. Her mind was clouded by the cotton confusion. She couldn't keep straight thought in her memory for more than five seconds and her head was thumping.
He said nothing. He simply stood there framed in the doorway. He surveyed the room and then his eyes rested on Hermione. He didn't need to say anything. His reaction was written all over his face.
A/N Ok don't kill me, I promise ill tell u next chapter who it is, u can probably guess (or try to) anyway. You never know it might be Neville! Also don't kill me on the shortness, I know its been like ages since I posted my last thing so in theory this chapter should be the length of the amber spyglass, but I had muse troubles as you might have guessed.
To my reviewees!:
Face food-: Thanks, thanks thanks ill try my best.
Elanorevenstar-: I like your poems they are very deep and passionate keep on writing
Delores Wilson-: Hey! Thanks for your reviews, its nice to see a familiar face now and again. Really sorry bout my poor msn spelling. I speak it a lot so it becomes automatic after a while and sneaks its way into my important essays. Tis VERY annoying I know.
Aaron -: I don't think that Harry or Ron are really goin to be in this fic that much because I find it hard to write bout them, I don't know why, I just don't really get on with them very well, but don't worry you see them now and again, and who knows they may be featured later depending on where the story takes me
Sinking slowly -: Lol thanks and sorry about cliffhangers, but it keeps ya reading!
Love-: Thanks sorry bout the wait, I have time management problems.
Taichi Kitsune -:Thanks for the advice and again sorry about the spelling, ill do my best to keep it down. Also I'm taking French AS so its properly shameful that I'm mixing up tenses but I have real problems with it, I was never really taught grammar. Keep with me!
Bluejello86-: Yaaay another familiar face, thanks hun ur stories are great. Anyone here who likes star gate read her stories.
x00xBaDrEpUtAtIoNx00x -: Thanx its nice to think people can relate to my stories, keep reading and keep reviewing ur lovely!
Darklady/Harrypotterluvr-: sorry I haven't emailed you, my email is being a bit of a (think of a less foul word) mongoose at the moment.
In dreams-: thanks a lot. I actually wrote the first two chapters a year ago, when I was a bit... well anyway thanks.
Disclaimer-: I do not and will never own any of the characters, only the plotline and he new spin.
Chapter 5: Just five seconds of time
The scene lingered as though set in stone. She lay on the floor looking at him; he stood in the doorway staring down at her. The glass glinted red from the blood it had ripped out of Hermione and the furniture was out of place with her books strewn across the floor, pages missing, where she had knocked them from the table.
Her robes lay discarded on the floor leaving her in her school skirt and blouse. Her knees and arms were badly cut up from the glass and her hair had muddled itself up into a worried tangle. She had now cried all the make up from her face leaving her pale (well, paler). She still struggled to support herself as she tried to gain some composure. Her pupils are still dilated and she still struggled to focus though now with more purpose. 'how cud I have forgotten to lock the door! Gain composure Hermione! He might not have noticed!' As she leans against the bed, sitting up a little straighter whilst shaking her head (and quickly wishing she hadn't) she tried to think of something to say that would relieve the situation a bit 'think Hermione!' she screamed to herself 'he cant see u like this!' The situation was pretty much laid bare in front of him. She swallowed hoping that she could swallow her apparent fear as well.
"I had a little accident," she slurred whilst the blood soaked up the sleeve of her blouse. Oh well done Hermione. Round of applause, don't state the obvious. Her mind was clouded by the cotton confusion. She couldn't keep straight thought in her memory for more than five seconds and her head was thumping.
He said nothing. He simply stood there framed in the doorway. He surveyed the room and then his eyes rested on Hermione. He didn't need to say anything. His reaction was written all over his face.
A/N Ok don't kill me, I promise ill tell u next chapter who it is, u can probably guess (or try to) anyway. You never know it might be Neville! Also don't kill me on the shortness, I know its been like ages since I posted my last thing so in theory this chapter should be the length of the amber spyglass, but I had muse troubles as you might have guessed.
To my reviewees!:
Face food-: Thanks, thanks thanks ill try my best.
Elanorevenstar-: I like your poems they are very deep and passionate keep on writing
Delores Wilson-: Hey! Thanks for your reviews, its nice to see a familiar face now and again. Really sorry bout my poor msn spelling. I speak it a lot so it becomes automatic after a while and sneaks its way into my important essays. Tis VERY annoying I know.
Aaron -: I don't think that Harry or Ron are really goin to be in this fic that much because I find it hard to write bout them, I don't know why, I just don't really get on with them very well, but don't worry you see them now and again, and who knows they may be featured later depending on where the story takes me
Sinking slowly -: Lol thanks and sorry about cliffhangers, but it keeps ya reading!
Love-: Thanks sorry bout the wait, I have time management problems.
Taichi Kitsune -:Thanks for the advice and again sorry about the spelling, ill do my best to keep it down. Also I'm taking French AS so its properly shameful that I'm mixing up tenses but I have real problems with it, I was never really taught grammar. Keep with me!
Bluejello86-: Yaaay another familiar face, thanks hun ur stories are great. Anyone here who likes star gate read her stories.
x00xBaDrEpUtAtIoNx00x -: Thanx its nice to think people can relate to my stories, keep reading and keep reviewing ur lovely!
Darklady/Harrypotterluvr-: sorry I haven't emailed you, my email is being a bit of a (think of a less foul word) mongoose at the moment.
In dreams-: thanks a lot. I actually wrote the first two chapters a year ago, when I was a bit... well anyway thanks.