Hey everyone, I'm back. I know to the R readers I've only just gone, but I was on NC17 so those readers haven't been updated for over a month. (sorry!) anyway, thanks to everyone whose reviewed the story so far, please keep 'em coming! Even if the review just says hi, I've read this!
GundamNymph: Sorry about the long paragraphs, I'll try to keep them short! The Elementals are my original characters. Fire is based solely on one of my best friends Holly, known to you guys as Lady Allylandra, as anyone who knows her will tell you! Some aspects of Water are based a bit on me. As for Buffy/Spike moments, probably not, at least from Buffy's point of view. Remember, me British and out of date! I've only seen up to series 5! The DADA lesson was short as it wasn't crucial to the plot so I decided not to focus on it. (not because I ran out of ideas- honest!) As for the dementors, wait and see!...
Keiyuki: Thanks for giving my fic a try, glad you like it so far! Spike is my fav character from Buffy so how could I not include him?! I agree about the dialogue spacing, but I couldn't be bothered to go back and change the past chapters so I'll just space from now on. Believe me it's better than it was as NC17 when it was compressed into 1 long stream with no breaks!
Hoshiko-Malfoy: Glad you like the title, it becomes very relevant at the end! Of course I'm continuing, I wouldn't be cruel enough to leave it like that!
So, still don't own anything apart from the Elementals, so please don't sue, I'm an impoverished student! Dedications as always to Lady Allylandra and My gorgeous boyfriend Andrew. READ AND REVIEW LADY ALLYLANDRA'S FICS!!! There are 3 Harry Potter ones, harry Potter and the Ring of destiny, The right choice and erm... complications is the third one I think. Also, read HB's original fic Jack Bernman- Marker City Lowlife. It's really good. Now, on with chapter 6....
Previously on Heaven doesn't want me, Hell's afraid I'll take over....
Water and Xander took Harry, Hermione and Draco to a small shopping mall in Guildford, Surrey (aka, the Friary if anyone was wondering) as part of the DADA lesson. However, Hermione has just seen 5 dementors coming towards them...
"Xander, call Fire, tell her to get her butt over here," Water snapped.
"Why, what's going on?" Xander sounded confused.
Water turned, incredulous, "You mean you can't see them?!"
"Of course he can't see them," Draco snapped, "He's only a muggle."
"Hey..." Xander started.
"You two..." the warning in Water's voice was clear. "well, you're lucky Xand, these guys are way off on the ugly chart. Now just call Fire damn it!"
"Why Fire? Why not Buffy? She is the slayer."
"Anyone care to enlighten him?" Water drawled. "About the kiss."
Hermione jumped. "the dementors kiss sucks out a persons soul."
"Which is..." Water prompted
"Precisely what you and Fire don't have!" Xander finished with a smile. "You want me to call Air and Earth as well?"
"Nah, Air will just want to hear their side of the story and Earth will just.... Well, be Earth. He aint big on fighting."
"Right." Xander pulled out a slim cell phone and called Fire. "Hey, Water says get your arse here."
"I said butt, not arse!" Water called over her shoulder where she was keeping an eye on the dementors.
"What ever, does it mean I get to fight something?" a cool voice asked.
Harry turned to see Fire leaning up against a wall, a display of lit candles behind her.
"Them." Water said tersely.
"Cool, I need to kick some butt, those Slytherins...." She growled slightly, shaking her head, sending shots of copper and red through her hair.
Water laughed. "Getting a little hot headed are we?"
"Shut up before I drown you"
Water laughed again and Fire turned and grinned. "Ready?"
"Yep, Xander get the kids to safety. We'll find you after we've had our fun."
With that the two elementals turned to face the dementors floating towards them. The humans, despite not being able to see them, obviously felt their presence. A pair of small children started crying hysterically and a group of teenagers shuddered suddenly. Harry could have watched with fascination but Xander had other ideas. He grabbed Harry's arm in one hand and gave Draco a sharp shove with the other before grabbing Hermione. Harry turned to look behind him and saw Fire create a ball of flames in her hand, which she threw at the nearest dementor. It burst, shrieking into flames. Harry winced at the screams, they sounded like them screams of the damned and echoed throughout the shopping centre. The other four dementors paused while the shoppers stared in horror at the burning mass in front of them. So they can be seen, as they die Harry thought. As Xander turned a corner Harry skidded and fell, knocking Draco, who was running behind him. Draco grabbed Harry in shock and ended up on top of him, gasping in momentary pain. Harry looked up and caught Draco's eyes. Draco was panting hard, his eyes fogged with a mixture of emotions Harry couldn't even begin identify. Ok, hormones, down! We're in a dangerous, could well die kinda situation and you're STILL thinking about how damn fine Draco Malfoy is. You are one sick teenager Harry sighed to himself. Draco raised an elegant eyebrow.
"You know, comfortable as I am lying on top of you wonder boy, we're still facing death by dementors. Or failing that death by two very kick ass demons who will be very pissed off that we didn't follow their instructions and get the hell out of here."
"So you mean we have three choices?" Harry asked grinning slightly.
"Of course, we could stay here and get killed by dementors. We could stay here and get killed by angry demons. Or, alternatively we could get up and survive."
"Er... third option I think, don't you?"
"Glad to see we're on the same wave length."
Draco grinned down at Harry before shifting and standing up. Harry almost groaned out load at the loss of the comfortable weight. He looked up at Draco who was offering him his hand to help Harry up. Grabbing it Harry allowed himself to be hauled up. He held onto Draco's hand for a further moment before letting go, regretfully. Suddenly he staggered feeling a wash of cold sweep over him. From what felt like miles away he heard Draco gasp. Looking up he saw a dementor towering over Draco, reaching menacingly for him. No, I can't let this happen he thought, and tried to stand up straight without shuddering. A load smash thundered through his consciousness and, as suddenly as it had come, the feeling of cold disappeared. He looked up to see Water standing there, bringing her leg down from a kick to the creature's head. The hood had fallen back revealing the dementor's true face.
"Ewww" Water wrinkled up her nose in disgust. "And I thought you guys were ugly with the hoods on."
The dementor pulled back, curling back what had to be a lip, but Harry wasn't to sure. Water took a step back, reaching under her baggy jumper for her belt. Harry saw a flask of silver as she drew a small dagger, with a sharp, cruel looking blade from where she had been hiding it in her belt. She suddenly leapt forward, slamming a kick into the dementor's side. As it staggered off balance she rammed the knife into it's throat, slicing it to the side, decapitating the head.
"Do you think it's dead?" A small voice asked. Harry turned to see Hermione and Xander standing to one side. Hermione looked scared while Xander looked ready to be sick.
"Well, I find cutting the head off usually works to kill most species," Water drawled sarcastically.
"Now that was fun!" Fire called as she wandered up to join the group. She was covered with a thick silver goo and grinning like a maniac. Water grinned as well.
"The killing some evil butt or getting covered with said evils seriously gross goo- blood?" She asked laughing.
"Can't have one without the other!" Fire crowed triumphantly. She turned to Harry, Draco, Hermione and Xander. Her eyes narrowed. "Didn't Water tell you guys to get out of here?"
"Yep, I did."
"Just be very grateful I just killed something." Fire warned. "And hope I don't remember by the time we get back to Hogwarts and the killing high has gone."
Draco sighed and looked and Harry, a glint in his eye. "Guess we're taking death by pissed off demon." Harry nodded.
"Oh yeah"
Yes, this chapter is so short it's disgraceful, but the next one is on its way as we speak, just thought I'd leave it there for now. PLEASE review, need reviews to keep me going! I'll love you forever!! See you soon my darlings!
30.10.02
GundamNymph: Sorry about the long paragraphs, I'll try to keep them short! The Elementals are my original characters. Fire is based solely on one of my best friends Holly, known to you guys as Lady Allylandra, as anyone who knows her will tell you! Some aspects of Water are based a bit on me. As for Buffy/Spike moments, probably not, at least from Buffy's point of view. Remember, me British and out of date! I've only seen up to series 5! The DADA lesson was short as it wasn't crucial to the plot so I decided not to focus on it. (not because I ran out of ideas- honest!) As for the dementors, wait and see!...
Keiyuki: Thanks for giving my fic a try, glad you like it so far! Spike is my fav character from Buffy so how could I not include him?! I agree about the dialogue spacing, but I couldn't be bothered to go back and change the past chapters so I'll just space from now on. Believe me it's better than it was as NC17 when it was compressed into 1 long stream with no breaks!
Hoshiko-Malfoy: Glad you like the title, it becomes very relevant at the end! Of course I'm continuing, I wouldn't be cruel enough to leave it like that!
So, still don't own anything apart from the Elementals, so please don't sue, I'm an impoverished student! Dedications as always to Lady Allylandra and My gorgeous boyfriend Andrew. READ AND REVIEW LADY ALLYLANDRA'S FICS!!! There are 3 Harry Potter ones, harry Potter and the Ring of destiny, The right choice and erm... complications is the third one I think. Also, read HB's original fic Jack Bernman- Marker City Lowlife. It's really good. Now, on with chapter 6....
Previously on Heaven doesn't want me, Hell's afraid I'll take over....
Water and Xander took Harry, Hermione and Draco to a small shopping mall in Guildford, Surrey (aka, the Friary if anyone was wondering) as part of the DADA lesson. However, Hermione has just seen 5 dementors coming towards them...
"Xander, call Fire, tell her to get her butt over here," Water snapped.
"Why, what's going on?" Xander sounded confused.
Water turned, incredulous, "You mean you can't see them?!"
"Of course he can't see them," Draco snapped, "He's only a muggle."
"Hey..." Xander started.
"You two..." the warning in Water's voice was clear. "well, you're lucky Xand, these guys are way off on the ugly chart. Now just call Fire damn it!"
"Why Fire? Why not Buffy? She is the slayer."
"Anyone care to enlighten him?" Water drawled. "About the kiss."
Hermione jumped. "the dementors kiss sucks out a persons soul."
"Which is..." Water prompted
"Precisely what you and Fire don't have!" Xander finished with a smile. "You want me to call Air and Earth as well?"
"Nah, Air will just want to hear their side of the story and Earth will just.... Well, be Earth. He aint big on fighting."
"Right." Xander pulled out a slim cell phone and called Fire. "Hey, Water says get your arse here."
"I said butt, not arse!" Water called over her shoulder where she was keeping an eye on the dementors.
"What ever, does it mean I get to fight something?" a cool voice asked.
Harry turned to see Fire leaning up against a wall, a display of lit candles behind her.
"Them." Water said tersely.
"Cool, I need to kick some butt, those Slytherins...." She growled slightly, shaking her head, sending shots of copper and red through her hair.
Water laughed. "Getting a little hot headed are we?"
"Shut up before I drown you"
Water laughed again and Fire turned and grinned. "Ready?"
"Yep, Xander get the kids to safety. We'll find you after we've had our fun."
With that the two elementals turned to face the dementors floating towards them. The humans, despite not being able to see them, obviously felt their presence. A pair of small children started crying hysterically and a group of teenagers shuddered suddenly. Harry could have watched with fascination but Xander had other ideas. He grabbed Harry's arm in one hand and gave Draco a sharp shove with the other before grabbing Hermione. Harry turned to look behind him and saw Fire create a ball of flames in her hand, which she threw at the nearest dementor. It burst, shrieking into flames. Harry winced at the screams, they sounded like them screams of the damned and echoed throughout the shopping centre. The other four dementors paused while the shoppers stared in horror at the burning mass in front of them. So they can be seen, as they die Harry thought. As Xander turned a corner Harry skidded and fell, knocking Draco, who was running behind him. Draco grabbed Harry in shock and ended up on top of him, gasping in momentary pain. Harry looked up and caught Draco's eyes. Draco was panting hard, his eyes fogged with a mixture of emotions Harry couldn't even begin identify. Ok, hormones, down! We're in a dangerous, could well die kinda situation and you're STILL thinking about how damn fine Draco Malfoy is. You are one sick teenager Harry sighed to himself. Draco raised an elegant eyebrow.
"You know, comfortable as I am lying on top of you wonder boy, we're still facing death by dementors. Or failing that death by two very kick ass demons who will be very pissed off that we didn't follow their instructions and get the hell out of here."
"So you mean we have three choices?" Harry asked grinning slightly.
"Of course, we could stay here and get killed by dementors. We could stay here and get killed by angry demons. Or, alternatively we could get up and survive."
"Er... third option I think, don't you?"
"Glad to see we're on the same wave length."
Draco grinned down at Harry before shifting and standing up. Harry almost groaned out load at the loss of the comfortable weight. He looked up at Draco who was offering him his hand to help Harry up. Grabbing it Harry allowed himself to be hauled up. He held onto Draco's hand for a further moment before letting go, regretfully. Suddenly he staggered feeling a wash of cold sweep over him. From what felt like miles away he heard Draco gasp. Looking up he saw a dementor towering over Draco, reaching menacingly for him. No, I can't let this happen he thought, and tried to stand up straight without shuddering. A load smash thundered through his consciousness and, as suddenly as it had come, the feeling of cold disappeared. He looked up to see Water standing there, bringing her leg down from a kick to the creature's head. The hood had fallen back revealing the dementor's true face.
"Ewww" Water wrinkled up her nose in disgust. "And I thought you guys were ugly with the hoods on."
The dementor pulled back, curling back what had to be a lip, but Harry wasn't to sure. Water took a step back, reaching under her baggy jumper for her belt. Harry saw a flask of silver as she drew a small dagger, with a sharp, cruel looking blade from where she had been hiding it in her belt. She suddenly leapt forward, slamming a kick into the dementor's side. As it staggered off balance she rammed the knife into it's throat, slicing it to the side, decapitating the head.
"Do you think it's dead?" A small voice asked. Harry turned to see Hermione and Xander standing to one side. Hermione looked scared while Xander looked ready to be sick.
"Well, I find cutting the head off usually works to kill most species," Water drawled sarcastically.
"Now that was fun!" Fire called as she wandered up to join the group. She was covered with a thick silver goo and grinning like a maniac. Water grinned as well.
"The killing some evil butt or getting covered with said evils seriously gross goo- blood?" She asked laughing.
"Can't have one without the other!" Fire crowed triumphantly. She turned to Harry, Draco, Hermione and Xander. Her eyes narrowed. "Didn't Water tell you guys to get out of here?"
"Yep, I did."
"Just be very grateful I just killed something." Fire warned. "And hope I don't remember by the time we get back to Hogwarts and the killing high has gone."
Draco sighed and looked and Harry, a glint in his eye. "Guess we're taking death by pissed off demon." Harry nodded.
"Oh yeah"
Yes, this chapter is so short it's disgraceful, but the next one is on its way as we speak, just thought I'd leave it there for now. PLEASE review, need reviews to keep me going! I'll love you forever!! See you soon my darlings!
30.10.02