Chapter 2:
Don't Write that way to me
Journal,
It's not like I meant to get in a fight with Brendan Acklie, He came after me... Well, more so, I went after him, but only because he insulted Lily. He said that she wasn't even pretty, and that I should just stop mooning over her. It's not like I've tried, believe me. But damn, that girl has got some knockers. You can't just pass up a girl with knockers that big.
After barging into Lily's room to tell her that Moony wanted to see her-because he did, Dumbledore told him they had a meeting to go to-And Lily kicked me out, she was getting dressed. Damn she's foxy! When I was going down the stairs, I heard Acklie talking with his buddies. I saw Padfoot, and Moony talking, and looking nervously at the stairs I was coming down. When Moony saw me, he said "J- Prongs! Buddy, me and Padfoot here were just talking, He's hungry, we go eat in Kitchens." He grabbed my shirt and started to pull me toward the door. Moony always talks in incomplete sentences when he's trying to lie.
As he was pulling me off, I heard Hubble say her name. The sacred name that will distract me from Quidditch. He said the Knocker Name. He said Lily.
I turned around, and when I did, Simon was looking at me, waiting for a reaction I suspect. When I turned he smiled and said, "Well, Your right, she's defiantly do-able. But that face, I would have to put a paper bag over it."
Then he nodded in my direction, and Acklie turned around, "Prongs," he said, "Question: Why do you still obsess over a Pigmy?" They all had a good laugh. I wasn't thinking.
Well, Maybe I was thinking, 'She's not even here to defend herself!' and before I knew it, I had jumped on top of him. I started to bash his head in. When I threw him down, I saw S-Padfoot was already rumbling, and Moony was fighting Hubble still standing up. But then he ran into Hubble, and they fell into a lamp, making a crashing sound.
That's when the crowd came, and started chanting 'Fight, Fight, Fight.' Then I was thrown onto my side and when I opened my eyes, I saw a foot tapping on the ground next to my head. As I looked up, I saw the knockers, then the face. A beautiful Pixie like face, Lily's face.
I remember looking into her emerald eyes, and getting a chill down my spine. Then she looked away, and started to yell at me.
I don't remember what was said, but I do know that she was pissed. Her friends had to drag her away from me. I felt bad for them. She looked like she was putting up a fight.
Wormtail is yelling at me to stop the insesent scratching. So I'll write to you later.
Signed, Prongs
Ok, I know it's been forever, But I'VE been incredibly busy with a lot of stuff. You will notice I have changed my name to winter Cowan. Also, this is how the story will be written, 1st person, present tense in the odd chapters, and then James writes in his journal and gives his side of what happened. Also all of the J-Prongs things are because he writes in the book in their code names, if you didn't notice, and sometimes he'll forget.
Thank you:
Laquinn: You also have good attention grabbing openers (tehe)
Carmel March: Thank you. I didn't know I had an apparent plot-line in the first two chapters. I'll have to hide it more. Kidding. Yes, ouch is right, Imagine if you were poor James.
Perdolwen: Thanks for your review on MY story. Your story is great! Post more soon!!!
Lizzie: I only said that I wouldn't write until I got 5 reviews because 1: I knew 5 people wouldn't even read it, and 2: I needed an excuse not to write more for long periods of time. So, now that my secret is out, I guess I'll have to update at least monthly. Not bi-yearly.
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