Yipes...I've
already got 4 reviews! (that's about double the number I got on my first story
about CSI) So, I guess I'll just get along with being annoying then.
Oew, oew.. by the way, Pirate Blondie, I am so sorry that my story looks a lot
like yours. I swear that I didn't intended to. Just hope that me stealing your
ideas doesn't stop you from reading my story grins
So..Disclaimthingy: I still do not own POTC.
But I'm thinking of a scheme to obtain it though.
Looking at the pirate I can already predict what he's going to say: "....How
come two of such upstanding gentlemen like yourselves did not merit an
invitation?". Geez, how predictable. "Ahem, excuse me..." "We're here to make
sure this dock stays off limit to civilians"
Blah blah blah. I start to look around while Jack and the two guys are
babbling to each other. Hey.. that must be the Interceptor. Let's take a little
look.
"...Could possibly be any other ship
then the Black Pearl?" Oh, they must be about done by now. Finally. Jack
already stands at the steering wheel. "Hey you two! Get away from there!"
That's not fair! Now I'm doing something wrong they notice me. "You don't have
permission to be on board there, mate" After this the skinny guy says a bit
uncomfortable: "And Miss"
Oh please.
Stepping down from the little stairs I was standing on, I reply: "Listen, he is
a pirate, I'm not even supposed to be here. So just get your director, let
someone drive me home and everybody can get on with their lives... agree?"
Again with the I'm not getting this
looks. Sigh. I lean against the ships' railing and listen to the three men
start babbling their usual lines again.
Hey.. that must be the cliff of which Lizzie will come sailing down from any
minute now. Speaking about that: "Ahem.. sorry to interrupt your talking, but
shall I take your effects from you?" Jack looks at me: "Why?" I shrug: "Oh
well... never mind" Jack blinks a couple of times: "You sure you're okay missy?
Anyway, where was I? Oh yes...and then they made me their captain" "splash" I
mumble. "Hey...she's late!" SPLASH
Smiling "Ah.. there she is. No Jack,
they won't be saving her, they can't swim" Standing up, I walk towards the
place where Lizzie should be thrown at the dock again.
Sitting on top of a crate I watch as Jack throws Elizabeth on to the wood. He
gazes at me: "How did you knew that?" "I read the script, you should try that
sometimes you know. It prevents unwanted surprises" They're ripping her corset
of her body now. Ah, there's the commodore, finally, that took like, forever.
"On your feet" Tap Tap on shoulder The commodore turns his head to look at
me. Big grin from me: "Hi there, could you be so kind as to drop me off at some
police station where I can call my parents to pick me up?"
No reaction.. just a stare. I blink and wave my hand in front of his eyes:
"Erhm.. Hello? Anyone at home?"
"Gilette, would you please escort the
lady away from here? This isn't a proper place for a decent lady" Wha? Oh..
right... Staying in the character. I get it. I look at Gilette as he walks with
me towards town again: "So.. the nearest payphone, is that far away from here?"
"I beg your pardon Miss? I haven't got the slightest idea what you're talking
about" Stopping I put my hands in my sides and look extremely pissed off:
"Listen buster, this joke has lasted long enaaah!" For some stupid reason Jack
has chosen me to take for a hostage. "Let the lady go Mr. Sparrow! Men! Lower
your weapons!" I can feel Jack grin: "I knew you'd warm up to me"
Grrr... I do not want to be in a movie "Let me go! I don't get paid for this,
and I do not want to play along" Jack pulls the chains a bit tighter across my
throat "Shut up" he whispers. "Commodore, my effects please" The commodore
hands them to me. Jack turns me around: "Would you be so kind?" He is kidding
right? First he's almost strangling me, and then he wants me to actually dress
him up?: "Dream on". Pushing him backwards I'm talking to him in a really,
extremely, very pissed off manner: "How do you dare doing this to me? Have you
completely lost your mind?"
I'm prodding with my finger in his chest: "You should have taken Elizabeth over
there as you hostaaaaaaaaaaaaa...." Before I can even finish my sentence Jack
has grabbed that stupid rope and lifted the handle. Result: The going up and
spinning around that pole extremely fast, extremely high in the air. With Jack
holding my wrist. I hate heights!
Ooooh... I feel sick from the spinning around. Jack sort of throws me on top of
that very tiny, very small plateau. "You have two choices now, young lady.
Either you hold on to me tightly, or you can stay here and let those guards
save you" "What kind of a choice is that? Of course I'm staying here! I want to
go home.." He nods and uses his shackles to abseil down. And this actions
instantly reveals one little problem: My necklace is stuck on his shirt: "No,
no, no, no, no wait, I'm stuck on your.. nooooo" He doesn't even wait for me
but jumps down, my only option is to cling on him if I don't want to get
beheaded by my own necklace.
Clinging really tight The ground is coming way too fast towards us: "Start
running!" I hear Sparrow yell in my ear. When I open my eyes again we are
running across that wooden bridge. I can hear the bullets impact in the wood
"They're shooting at me! What've I done?!"
Yay, another chapter done. I've got a terrible sense of humor. I think I'll
get rid of the movie line in the next chapter. It is getting a little bit
boring by now.
So..tell me..Am I annoying yet?
