English is not my native language and I beg your pardon for my many
mistakes. It would be very helpful for me if you could show me my mistakes.
Everybody knows her, one hates her or loves her. Mary-Sues. They are very beautiful and have perfect manners. But the reality is, that they are mean and they use every method to reach their goal, or to get the man of their dreams.
These are short stories of her accidents.
~Chapter 1~
~A PLAYED DREAM~
This was not a normal Mary-Sue, if one could call her a Mary-Sue. She was a exception for she didn`t love Legolas, the Prince of Mirkwood. And she had an other goal: She wished to switch in the body of an other, and this was Arwen. To say it right away: She had fallen in love with Aragorn!
Mary-Sue knew exactly how she could get where she wanted to, for she WAS Mary-Sue and that was her duty. One didn`t have to get something on the head, have an accident, take chemicals or to sleep and wake in Middle- Earth. One little snip was all you had to do to travel in space and time.
And whoosh, she was in Arwen's body.
Her head was only inches away from his and he helt her face in his hands. Meaningfull eyes looked at her as if they had the abbility to look in her very soal. And perhaps they really could!
Mary-Sue/Arwen supported herself with a hand on the canapee he was lying on while the other first stroked his hair and then caressed his cheek. His hair was black the midnight-sky and smelled well. He was like that when he was not in the wild to protect innocent people.
He said he thought it was all just a dream.
Without thinking she said: "Then it is a very beautiful one." Indeed she only felt like she were in heaven.
Finally she had done it. She was with the one she loved and she was the one whom he loved. It was a perfect idea. One - that no Legolas-Mary-Sue had every had (The reason may be, that Legolas had no girlfriend). It was genial and she smiled at him, and he smiled back at her, the world was wonderful.
Then she got uncomfortable, she stand up and went to the window. She looked at herself for the first time and stroked her hair. Arwen - now Mary-Sue - wore a light dress made of silk and her black tresses were as silky as her dress. She knew that Aragorn would follow her. It was romantic and her heart beat in her chest as if it would burst. She was right, for too stood up and went to her. His naked feet made no sound on the floor. He put an arm around her and put a hand on his chest. His clothes were made of velvet and it felt wonderful. No he pressed his forehead against hers and again their eyes locked.
He talked with her and she with him, but she only listened to his voice and not to his words (Mary-Sue always knows what to say and what to do and therefore doesn't have to pay attention to these little things!).
Then he kissed her and again she felt like in heaven. She melted in his arms and her knees became weak.
"Amin mela lle - I love you, Aragorn." Was the only thing she could whisper when their lips parted. She didn't know how much longer her feet could support her.
"Come!" she said and took his hand and wanted to lead him to where they came from. Aragron gave her a very bewildered look.
"What are you doing, Liv?" asked her supposed Aragorn.
Only parts of a moment later she heard a voice that didn`t suit in here.
What had happened here? That could not be, that was simply wrong!
Then she realized what the voice had said. It was a
CUT!!!
Now it was her turn to look bewildered.
She blushed and said: "Viggo?"
***
If you liked it, you could erite a little review. *begging* Perhaps you have some little idea or have somebody or something you whish to be involved. Then post it for sometimes I need a little hint *lol*
Everybody knows her, one hates her or loves her. Mary-Sues. They are very beautiful and have perfect manners. But the reality is, that they are mean and they use every method to reach their goal, or to get the man of their dreams.
These are short stories of her accidents.
~Chapter 1~
~A PLAYED DREAM~
This was not a normal Mary-Sue, if one could call her a Mary-Sue. She was a exception for she didn`t love Legolas, the Prince of Mirkwood. And she had an other goal: She wished to switch in the body of an other, and this was Arwen. To say it right away: She had fallen in love with Aragorn!
Mary-Sue knew exactly how she could get where she wanted to, for she WAS Mary-Sue and that was her duty. One didn`t have to get something on the head, have an accident, take chemicals or to sleep and wake in Middle- Earth. One little snip was all you had to do to travel in space and time.
And whoosh, she was in Arwen's body.
Her head was only inches away from his and he helt her face in his hands. Meaningfull eyes looked at her as if they had the abbility to look in her very soal. And perhaps they really could!
Mary-Sue/Arwen supported herself with a hand on the canapee he was lying on while the other first stroked his hair and then caressed his cheek. His hair was black the midnight-sky and smelled well. He was like that when he was not in the wild to protect innocent people.
He said he thought it was all just a dream.
Without thinking she said: "Then it is a very beautiful one." Indeed she only felt like she were in heaven.
Finally she had done it. She was with the one she loved and she was the one whom he loved. It was a perfect idea. One - that no Legolas-Mary-Sue had every had (The reason may be, that Legolas had no girlfriend). It was genial and she smiled at him, and he smiled back at her, the world was wonderful.
Then she got uncomfortable, she stand up and went to the window. She looked at herself for the first time and stroked her hair. Arwen - now Mary-Sue - wore a light dress made of silk and her black tresses were as silky as her dress. She knew that Aragorn would follow her. It was romantic and her heart beat in her chest as if it would burst. She was right, for too stood up and went to her. His naked feet made no sound on the floor. He put an arm around her and put a hand on his chest. His clothes were made of velvet and it felt wonderful. No he pressed his forehead against hers and again their eyes locked.
He talked with her and she with him, but she only listened to his voice and not to his words (Mary-Sue always knows what to say and what to do and therefore doesn't have to pay attention to these little things!).
Then he kissed her and again she felt like in heaven. She melted in his arms and her knees became weak.
"Amin mela lle - I love you, Aragorn." Was the only thing she could whisper when their lips parted. She didn't know how much longer her feet could support her.
"Come!" she said and took his hand and wanted to lead him to where they came from. Aragron gave her a very bewildered look.
"What are you doing, Liv?" asked her supposed Aragorn.
Only parts of a moment later she heard a voice that didn`t suit in here.
What had happened here? That could not be, that was simply wrong!
Then she realized what the voice had said. It was a
CUT!!!
Now it was her turn to look bewildered.
She blushed and said: "Viggo?"
***
If you liked it, you could erite a little review. *begging* Perhaps you have some little idea or have somebody or something you whish to be involved. Then post it for sometimes I need a little hint *lol*