This is my first attempt at a fic so give me a break. Anyway here it is
hope you enjoy. I'll have the next chapter up hopefully in a few days so be
patient. If you want to read this fic in its original format – as a play –
then just contact me with your e-mail address and I'll send the entire
first part of my two part fic. Anyway... Enjoy!
*Disclaimer* ~ I do not own any of the star wars characters except for Kida and her mother~
Chapter 1
At first Yoda was too preoccupied with his young charges to notice the beautiful – yet eerily mysterious – young woman who stood in the doorway of the training room. But then something told him to take notice of the visitor, which he promptly did. At first glance he thought she was a Jedi but as he looked harder he realized that he didn't recognize her. This made him curious because he knew every Jedi knight and padawan that had passed through the temple for the last 900 or so years.
As Yoda's gaze fell on the young woman he saw that she had long unbound Honey-blond hair that fell like a river down her back – ending near her waist. She wore the traditional garb of a Jedi which moved smoothly over her slim, graceful figure as she pushed herself away from the doorpost on which she had been leaning. Her pale, lightly tanned face shone with a joyful glow as she smiled at him and then he noticed her eyes. They quickly gained his attention because of their color – or to be more precise their colors. They as blue as the sky next to the pupil, the outside color was a rim of forest green, and in-between the two colors it was a light-brown speckled with gold. As he looked into her eyes he could see that, even though they glowed with a stubborn flame, for all her young years she had seen more tragedies and sorrows than most people did in their entire life. As she started to walk towards him he could see her strong square jaw clench decidedly together in determination.
Yoda then turned to the padawans and stopped the training session saying, "You may stop Bear Clan. A visitor we have." He then turned back to the woman and said, "Greetings. Of what service can I be?"
The woman smiled warmly and said, "I'm sorry to interrupt you're training session but I thought that you might be able to help me with a problem. I thought that if any one could help me it would be you."
Yoda looked thoughtfully at her, now throughouly curious to figure out who she was. "Glad to help you I would be, miss...?"
The woman smiled and gave a small laugh, which sounded like small bells tinkling, and replied saying, "I'm sorry. My full name is Kidakakash Horato but please just call me Kida. My mother used to be one of your padawans years ago. You may remember her – Mitaka Moslee?"
Yoda smiled fondly at the memory. "Ah, yes. Very well, I remember her. One of my best padawans she was. Your problem is what?"
Kida sighed and said, "Well ever since I was a kid I've been having visions of the future. At first they came at unexpected times – I never knew when I would have another. As time went on they came less frequently, yet at the same time I began to have more control over them. Now they have come to the point where I can summon them at will. I can also decide whose future I will see. I was wondering if you could help me figure out how I can see the future as clear as if they were actually happening at that very moment, where as your vision of the future is so clouded by the Sith."
Yoda then looked thoughtful and mumbled, "A hard question you have asked." He then turned to his students and asks, "Padawans can the answer you find to her question?"
After a few seconds one young padawan raised her hand and after Yoda acknowledged her she replied saying, "The answer is that she has a much stronger connection to the Force than even you, making her stronger than the clouding darkness of the Sith."
Yoda then addressed the young girl saying, "Thank you for the answer young padawan." Then he turned to Kida and asks, "wait till I finish here so talk with you I may, will you?"
Kida smiled and bowed in acknowledgement before she left saying, "I would be delighted to do so Master Yoda."
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Sorry this chapter is kinda short but I promise that the other chapters are longer and a bit more interesting story wise. Please, please, please review. I won't put up the next chapter this week unless I get some – so PLEASE review. I really want to know what you think of it. ~ jediprophetessSchag
*Disclaimer* ~ I do not own any of the star wars characters except for Kida and her mother~
Chapter 1
At first Yoda was too preoccupied with his young charges to notice the beautiful – yet eerily mysterious – young woman who stood in the doorway of the training room. But then something told him to take notice of the visitor, which he promptly did. At first glance he thought she was a Jedi but as he looked harder he realized that he didn't recognize her. This made him curious because he knew every Jedi knight and padawan that had passed through the temple for the last 900 or so years.
As Yoda's gaze fell on the young woman he saw that she had long unbound Honey-blond hair that fell like a river down her back – ending near her waist. She wore the traditional garb of a Jedi which moved smoothly over her slim, graceful figure as she pushed herself away from the doorpost on which she had been leaning. Her pale, lightly tanned face shone with a joyful glow as she smiled at him and then he noticed her eyes. They quickly gained his attention because of their color – or to be more precise their colors. They as blue as the sky next to the pupil, the outside color was a rim of forest green, and in-between the two colors it was a light-brown speckled with gold. As he looked into her eyes he could see that, even though they glowed with a stubborn flame, for all her young years she had seen more tragedies and sorrows than most people did in their entire life. As she started to walk towards him he could see her strong square jaw clench decidedly together in determination.
Yoda then turned to the padawans and stopped the training session saying, "You may stop Bear Clan. A visitor we have." He then turned back to the woman and said, "Greetings. Of what service can I be?"
The woman smiled warmly and said, "I'm sorry to interrupt you're training session but I thought that you might be able to help me with a problem. I thought that if any one could help me it would be you."
Yoda looked thoughtfully at her, now throughouly curious to figure out who she was. "Glad to help you I would be, miss...?"
The woman smiled and gave a small laugh, which sounded like small bells tinkling, and replied saying, "I'm sorry. My full name is Kidakakash Horato but please just call me Kida. My mother used to be one of your padawans years ago. You may remember her – Mitaka Moslee?"
Yoda smiled fondly at the memory. "Ah, yes. Very well, I remember her. One of my best padawans she was. Your problem is what?"
Kida sighed and said, "Well ever since I was a kid I've been having visions of the future. At first they came at unexpected times – I never knew when I would have another. As time went on they came less frequently, yet at the same time I began to have more control over them. Now they have come to the point where I can summon them at will. I can also decide whose future I will see. I was wondering if you could help me figure out how I can see the future as clear as if they were actually happening at that very moment, where as your vision of the future is so clouded by the Sith."
Yoda then looked thoughtful and mumbled, "A hard question you have asked." He then turned to his students and asks, "Padawans can the answer you find to her question?"
After a few seconds one young padawan raised her hand and after Yoda acknowledged her she replied saying, "The answer is that she has a much stronger connection to the Force than even you, making her stronger than the clouding darkness of the Sith."
Yoda then addressed the young girl saying, "Thank you for the answer young padawan." Then he turned to Kida and asks, "wait till I finish here so talk with you I may, will you?"
Kida smiled and bowed in acknowledgement before she left saying, "I would be delighted to do so Master Yoda."
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Sorry this chapter is kinda short but I promise that the other chapters are longer and a bit more interesting story wise. Please, please, please review. I won't put up the next chapter this week unless I get some – so PLEASE review. I really want to know what you think of it. ~ jediprophetessSchag