Eh, well here we are again. Thanks to everyone who reviewed!
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You know why I find this story really hilarious? The fact that there are transfer students during Harry's sixth year when there's this whole Voldemort deal. And the fact that Harry's anger problems are, in fact, no where in this story. Also, our characters will be speaking in American slang…not too much but still pretty obvious.
Disclaimer: I don't …….hmmm…..I wonder what will happen if I don't finish the disclaimer?
The Next Day:
The whole school had been called to the Great Hall for a mid-term sorting. Hermione was slumped over in her chair, moaning about homework to be done. Harry, Ron, and Neville were all looking towards the door, waiting for the new arrivals. Just then Dumbledore stood up and announced: "We have three new students we need to be sorting tonight. First, I would like to welcome Gabriella del'Ortollio."
The walls to the Great Hall flung open and in walked the most gorgeous young women anyone had ever seen. Neville had been right. Her hair was a cascade of shimmering bronze. Her big, swirling cerulean eyes scanned the audience confidently as she made her way over dramatically to the front of the room. She grinned, flashing the most beautifully white teeth anyone had ever seen, making the boys melt. Once she passed Ron, the most wonderful perfume wafted through the air. Ron breathed it in and said, "Midnight Gardenia". The girl over heard him and turned around smiling, "You're very smart. And very charming." The girl made a small giggle and kept walking. 'Mmmmmmm, I hope I'm in the same house as him.' She thought thinking of Ron. She continued walking up to the front of the hall, went up to Dumbledore and gave him a hug, "Hi Uncle Albus!"
"Good evening, Gabriella." The old man chuckled. "No if you take a seat in that chair we'll sort you into your house."
"Can't wait." She said perkily sitting on the old stool. McGonagall placed the old, tattered hat on the young girl's head and it immediately shouted, "GRYFFYNDOR….you sexy thing you."
Gabriella giggled and walked over to where Ron was sitting and sat down next to him. She shook her head and swooshed her hair so that it flung into Ron's face. She turned around and pretended to be sorry, "Oh, dear me! I'm sorry!"
Ron smiled. And smiled. Gabriella giggled, "What's your name, cutey?"
"R-R-Ron Weasley." He replied quickly. Gabriella smiled and ran her finger over Ron's chest. "Well you're just the cutest thing ever."
While Ron and Gabriella talked, the doors flung open to reveal another beautiful young women, Ron and Gabriella totally oblivious to their surroundings. Neville had been right again. Her was the color of a raven and her passionate jade eyes attracted all the men's attention. She walked by Ron and Gabriella right as Gabriella was showing Ron her navel ring. "Chantal le Croix" Dumbledore's voice rang throughout the entire hall. As Chantal walked past Harry, he was immediately attacked with the most wonderful scent ever. "Oh, lavender." He said dreamily. Chantal smiled and turned around. "It's Lacy Lavender, the new scent that has only been released to…well, me." Chantal said eyeing Harry, who was gawking at Chantal. Chantal walked over to Harry, bent down so that her face was near hers and said, "Your eyes are amazing." Harry squeaked and continued to gawk. Chantal smiled and walked away just as Harry heard Gabriella tell Ron that he could call her Gabby. Chantal sat down on the stool as McGonagall placed the hat on her beautiful head.
"GRYFFYNDOR!…too bad I'm just a hat. Meooooooooow." The hat said.
Chantal smiled and walked over to where Harry was. She sat down on his lap and ran her hands through his hair. Then resting her hands on his chest, she said, "Did I mention you had pretty eyes?" Harry nodded weakly and wrapped his arms around her waist. Dumbledore smiled at the behavior. 'Young love..' he thought to himself.
"Now I would like to introduce another new member to our community. Monique Ravenwing"
"It's just Monique!" a striking voice shouted. The students turned their heads to see yet another beautiful young lady. Yup. Neville was right again. Her beautiful eyes were the color of a hazy mahogany and her long locks were a glossy brown sugar color. She had full, lower pouty lips and a gorgeous smile. She started walking towards the stool and when she passed Neville, her scent caught his attention. "Passionate Night-Blossom" he sighed. Monique heard him and turned around. "You know your scents, sugar." Neville froze. "See you 'round, k?" Monique said continuing to walk up to the front of the hall. She sat on the stool and the hat was placed on her head.
"GRYFFINDOR! God I really wish I wasn't a hat…."
Monique smiled and walked over to Neville and pressed her lips firmly against his, embracing him in a passionate, heartfelt kiss. She pulled away and sat next to him. Neville turned around momentarily to look at Ron and Harry, who nodded and said, "Dude." Neville smiled and turned back to Monique. "Hi. I'm Neville. Nice to mean you." He said acting suave. Monique giggled.
"That is all. I trust our new students will find someone to escort them to their rooms." Dumbledore said.
"Will you escort me Ronniekins?" Gabriella said pouting.
"Of course. What kind of man would refuse to?" Ron said getting up and walking out of the hall beside Gabriella who giggled girlishly and fawned over Ron. They were quickly followed by Harry, who was escorting a fawning Chantal, and Neville who walked out acting debonair with a captivated Monique. In her spot, Hermione sighed, "This is going to be a long year."
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