I AM GOOD! Well, replies!:
inuyasha34- Oh... you will see MANY reactions... Hiei and everyone... I have read another that Hiei did. It was good.
Saria- I know what you mean by that...
sam- Nice and simple name XD thank you so so much! I feel so special!
Kurai-Youkai- WILL SOMEONE TELL ME WHAT KURAI MEAN?! Gomen... hyper.. interesting... interesting... I'll check that out...
Maruken- O_o; Okay... sorry... I forgot that that was Naraku's laugh. I mean, I saw Yami Bakura and people laugh like that... sorry... Karasu... Naraku... what's the diff? They're both phycos...
Chrissy- People like you make me feel special.
Maylar- And I will!
subaru the medium- I was having a bit of trouble with refering to Kurama as a he and a she. I mean, at first I was to do the she thing. But when I thought about it, I remembered that even if he is in the girl body, he's still a boy. He's still Kurama. So I did keep he, but if people get confused, I will change. I am a person that looks for the reader's enjoyment!
Karen Rhine- *hugs* Lightning is evil. But anyway, that is weird. Kurama telling everyone... hmm...
Kokuei Zabuza suicidal persona- Interesting name... okay, fifth time. I am honored =) heh.. heh... I'll answer like your review.
1. Thank you for the compliment.
2. I guess Kurama is sorta OOC. I admit it. But that was sort of the effect I wanted. And you'll notice that there is a line between the way Male Kurama might think to Female Kurama.
3. Yeah, it was alittle. I had to finish it THEN. Not later. I had to leave for a vacation. This one I promise I'll put all my effort in it. More detail (pinky promise)!
4. Memory. I was thinking of this at one point, but you'll see as the time goes on the the Female Kurama is just too good for her own sake!
5. I planed that out before I started. So yes, already, when Kurama goes youko and he's in the female body, he WILL be still a girl.
6. Heh. Thankies. I won't ask what it means. Wow... longest review I ever replied to...
Draconia SilverFlame- Okay! Love the spirit! *victory sign*
MoonGoddessKonoko- ^____________^ ME AM THE QUEEN OF KURAMA TORTURE! Okay... me writes...
wowies... alots of reviews! Thankies!
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Karasu's Girl AKA Kurama 1/2
Chapter 3: That's What Lovers are For
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Karasu didn't harm Kurama at all the rest of the night. In fact, he went to sleep.
Pure anger engulped Kurama, but at the same time pure fear. Rebel and leave? Stay and maybe be raped again or even killed? Where would he go if he left? Hiei could be anywhere... Yusuke would not be of much help. Who knows with Kuwabara... and Shiori... she might faint... and even Karasu could...
Kurama shook his head. "...Hiei...please be wandering... please be around here..."
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Hiei flitted to Kurama's window. But he saw no fox.
The bed was undone, and the scent of Karasu was everywhere. He could even see the trail he made in the white rug.
"Dammit! He didn't!"
Hiei flitted off.
He went faster and faster, trying to sense Kurama's ki or even Karasu's. But he remembered that Karasu probably masked it in some way.
"Gotta try..." Hiei said to himself.
He felt something. He turned to the forest on the edge of town.
"Shit. He couldn't be in here... could he...?"
Hiei went in the forest's direction.
He flitted as fast as he could to where he sensed the ki. After awhile he stopped. Karasu's ki was faint, but he knew he was close.
He laid on a high branch in an evergreen tree. He looked down to see Kurama. He was really pale looking... and he had a black jacket covering him. Hiei could tell Karasu did something to him.
Hiei quickly ran and took Kurama's hand. Kurama's mouth opened to gasp, but was silent. After a minute they stopped, far away from Karasu, partically up a tree.
Hiei faced Kurama, but screamed. The jacket was slightly open, just enough to see Kurama's-ahem- more feminant parts.
"NANI?!" Hiei yelled and nearly fainted, Kurama grabbing him in time. "Hiei! Inari! Hiei!"
Hiei looked at Kurama's face. "Who are you?"
"I am Kurama!" Kurama yelled. "Hiei! Just let me speak!"
Hiei sat up, leaning on the base of the tree.
"Karasu kidnapped me. When he did he took me by a pond. He poured something in it. When he did, he threw me in it. I turned into a girl, Hiei! A girl!"
Hiei looked at Kurama, a concerned look on his face.
"...then... then he raped me. It was horrible. And then he told me that I could turn back..."
Hiei nodded, a little happy that there was a way to get him back.
"...but when I did it, I didn't turn back. I was still a girl..."
Kurama's voice wavered. It was getting hard to talk now.
"...and... and... when I asked Karasu... he looked at me with this face I can't ever forget... he said that I was pregnant!"
Hiei was shocked. But he didn't faint. He looked at Kurama, concerned.
"But... how are you going to tell everyone...?"
"I don't know... Hiei... please help me..."
"...Of course, Kurama. That's what lovers are for."
"...dozo... I knew that you would understand... I am so scared..."
"Is there anyway we can avoid the baby?"
"Yes. An abortion. That's when they take the fetus, but I am not doing it."
"NAZE?!"
"...Hiei, I got myself into this mess by not trying to defend myself. I am not going to give in and let Karasu win the whole thing. Karasu, he probably wants me to give up. I'll be weak if I do so. Do you understand?"
"But won't Karasu want a child."
"At the same time. He would probably love to have a child to take up his legacy. But if I take care of the child correctly. Show them real love, and show them that they don't have to be Karasu... Karasu will see, Hiei. He'll learn that I am not another pretty face."
"I want to help."
"Huh?"
"I want to help you, Kurama. You can't do this on your own. You need another person. I want to help you."
"Hiei..."
"I mean it, Kurama!"
"...well... okay..."
"You better get home. Your Kassan will be worried whether you are there pregnant, or not at all. More if you aren't there at all. Let's go."
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So now Kurama is with Hiei. But how will Shiori and the rest of the gang react. Is this going to be okay? And will Karasu come back? Or is this a part of his plan? Leave a little review and find out!
inuyasha34- Oh... you will see MANY reactions... Hiei and everyone... I have read another that Hiei did. It was good.
Saria- I know what you mean by that...
sam- Nice and simple name XD thank you so so much! I feel so special!
Kurai-Youkai- WILL SOMEONE TELL ME WHAT KURAI MEAN?! Gomen... hyper.. interesting... interesting... I'll check that out...
Maruken- O_o; Okay... sorry... I forgot that that was Naraku's laugh. I mean, I saw Yami Bakura and people laugh like that... sorry... Karasu... Naraku... what's the diff? They're both phycos...
Chrissy- People like you make me feel special.
Maylar- And I will!
subaru the medium- I was having a bit of trouble with refering to Kurama as a he and a she. I mean, at first I was to do the she thing. But when I thought about it, I remembered that even if he is in the girl body, he's still a boy. He's still Kurama. So I did keep he, but if people get confused, I will change. I am a person that looks for the reader's enjoyment!
Karen Rhine- *hugs* Lightning is evil. But anyway, that is weird. Kurama telling everyone... hmm...
Kokuei Zabuza suicidal persona- Interesting name... okay, fifth time. I am honored =) heh.. heh... I'll answer like your review.
1. Thank you for the compliment.
2. I guess Kurama is sorta OOC. I admit it. But that was sort of the effect I wanted. And you'll notice that there is a line between the way Male Kurama might think to Female Kurama.
3. Yeah, it was alittle. I had to finish it THEN. Not later. I had to leave for a vacation. This one I promise I'll put all my effort in it. More detail (pinky promise)!
4. Memory. I was thinking of this at one point, but you'll see as the time goes on the the Female Kurama is just too good for her own sake!
5. I planed that out before I started. So yes, already, when Kurama goes youko and he's in the female body, he WILL be still a girl.
6. Heh. Thankies. I won't ask what it means. Wow... longest review I ever replied to...
Draconia SilverFlame- Okay! Love the spirit! *victory sign*
MoonGoddessKonoko- ^____________^ ME AM THE QUEEN OF KURAMA TORTURE! Okay... me writes...
wowies... alots of reviews! Thankies!
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Karasu's Girl AKA Kurama 1/2
Chapter 3: That's What Lovers are For
***
Karasu didn't harm Kurama at all the rest of the night. In fact, he went to sleep.
Pure anger engulped Kurama, but at the same time pure fear. Rebel and leave? Stay and maybe be raped again or even killed? Where would he go if he left? Hiei could be anywhere... Yusuke would not be of much help. Who knows with Kuwabara... and Shiori... she might faint... and even Karasu could...
Kurama shook his head. "...Hiei...please be wandering... please be around here..."
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Hiei flitted to Kurama's window. But he saw no fox.
The bed was undone, and the scent of Karasu was everywhere. He could even see the trail he made in the white rug.
"Dammit! He didn't!"
Hiei flitted off.
He went faster and faster, trying to sense Kurama's ki or even Karasu's. But he remembered that Karasu probably masked it in some way.
"Gotta try..." Hiei said to himself.
He felt something. He turned to the forest on the edge of town.
"Shit. He couldn't be in here... could he...?"
Hiei went in the forest's direction.
He flitted as fast as he could to where he sensed the ki. After awhile he stopped. Karasu's ki was faint, but he knew he was close.
He laid on a high branch in an evergreen tree. He looked down to see Kurama. He was really pale looking... and he had a black jacket covering him. Hiei could tell Karasu did something to him.
Hiei quickly ran and took Kurama's hand. Kurama's mouth opened to gasp, but was silent. After a minute they stopped, far away from Karasu, partically up a tree.
Hiei faced Kurama, but screamed. The jacket was slightly open, just enough to see Kurama's-ahem- more feminant parts.
"NANI?!" Hiei yelled and nearly fainted, Kurama grabbing him in time. "Hiei! Inari! Hiei!"
Hiei looked at Kurama's face. "Who are you?"
"I am Kurama!" Kurama yelled. "Hiei! Just let me speak!"
Hiei sat up, leaning on the base of the tree.
"Karasu kidnapped me. When he did he took me by a pond. He poured something in it. When he did, he threw me in it. I turned into a girl, Hiei! A girl!"
Hiei looked at Kurama, a concerned look on his face.
"...then... then he raped me. It was horrible. And then he told me that I could turn back..."
Hiei nodded, a little happy that there was a way to get him back.
"...but when I did it, I didn't turn back. I was still a girl..."
Kurama's voice wavered. It was getting hard to talk now.
"...and... and... when I asked Karasu... he looked at me with this face I can't ever forget... he said that I was pregnant!"
Hiei was shocked. But he didn't faint. He looked at Kurama, concerned.
"But... how are you going to tell everyone...?"
"I don't know... Hiei... please help me..."
"...Of course, Kurama. That's what lovers are for."
"...dozo... I knew that you would understand... I am so scared..."
"Is there anyway we can avoid the baby?"
"Yes. An abortion. That's when they take the fetus, but I am not doing it."
"NAZE?!"
"...Hiei, I got myself into this mess by not trying to defend myself. I am not going to give in and let Karasu win the whole thing. Karasu, he probably wants me to give up. I'll be weak if I do so. Do you understand?"
"But won't Karasu want a child."
"At the same time. He would probably love to have a child to take up his legacy. But if I take care of the child correctly. Show them real love, and show them that they don't have to be Karasu... Karasu will see, Hiei. He'll learn that I am not another pretty face."
"I want to help."
"Huh?"
"I want to help you, Kurama. You can't do this on your own. You need another person. I want to help you."
"Hiei..."
"I mean it, Kurama!"
"...well... okay..."
"You better get home. Your Kassan will be worried whether you are there pregnant, or not at all. More if you aren't there at all. Let's go."
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
So now Kurama is with Hiei. But how will Shiori and the rest of the gang react. Is this going to be okay? And will Karasu come back? Or is this a part of his plan? Leave a little review and find out!