Gabbi: *pats Kurama's back* Aww... Kurama-kun... thank you so much for letting me torture you...
Kurama: T_T; Why...
Gabbi: Eh, I think we'll reply to the Chapter 7 crew then the Chapter 8 crew, k?
Kurama: Whatever...
CHAPTER 7
The real Eternal Sailor Earth- Poor you two!
Joey, Chibi Ryu, and Vash- You three are, like, the only boys who are reading this. YOU ROCK! *glomps chibi Ryu* You guys support me soo... saa... I wuv you all! And FK says hi along with Pocky-Chan and Yami Gabbi! I got some Almond Cream Pocky too!
Kurama: *waves*
Pocky-Chan: *purrs* ^_^
Gabbi: Oh, that's my Youko alter-ego Pocky-Chan. She's most likely to come out when I eat...
Pocky-Chan: Keep going, Gabbi, Yami is still doing her tribute to Johnny Cash for those dudes in that jail...
Gabbi and Kurama: O_O; Okay...
Dragon Ladysupreme- Ouch. Well, you gotta be physic or somethin' XD;
liztheryoubakurafan- LOL! I'll remember that ^_~
animegurl6- I guess you're a Karasu/Kurama supporter? *pats back* Don't worry. Karasu/Kurama is to come... somewhere in my fics... Kuronue/Kurama too! Basically anything, except Botan/Kurama! Gomen nasai, B/K supporters. I don't feel the love...
Starr Dust- Knowing Yusuke, he was thinking of that. Also, if you note, Kurama was a little sloppy on the clothes... insert henati possibilities here
Akiko Kimora- Well said. It reminds me of a song I made up in a forum once... it went something like "Karasu's an evil bastard... he touched my fox's hair..." something weird like that...
CHAPTER 8
Joey, Chibi ryu, and Chao???- Why in seven makais do you have Chao in that?1 Isn't that poor Ryu's ex? You guys are really fettish for guy's girl forms... ya know that? First Ranma... now Kurama... RHYME! neways... gomen nasai, I had to let Kurama get hurt!
TheUnlovedOutcast- I am soo glad I am helping you with your studies XP
animegurl6- RUN AG! Anyway, what really makes you think I would KILL Karasu? *goes Yami* Really? What WOULD?
*goes normal* Whoops!
liztheryoubakurafan- Well that was easy...
Dragon Ladysupreme- Oooh! Thanks for the katana!
Kurama: Hiei's not going to be happy...
Gabbi: Oh, come on... It's no big deal!
Starr Dust- Damn my mathimatic skills...
Kurama: And your spelling skills!
Gabbi: Oh shut it!
Draconia SilverFlame- Can do!
Rinoa Usagi Leonhart- Ain't it though?
Storm Elf- I don't know if I have moral fiber...
Kurama: Believe me, you don't... -_-V
Gabbi: Anyway.. poor Hiei... and thanks!
Karen Rhine- You really need to calm down... and we all LURVE Hiei, too! Note the chappie title...
Pocky-Chan: Oh! Hellooooo Princess of Kurama Torture!
Kurama: YOU MEAN THERE'S A WHOLE BUNCH OF KURAMA TORTURE ROYALTY NOW?!
Gabbi: Oh poor Kurama-Chan...
Saria19- You just gotta find out...
Okay! Domo arigato, minna! Now sit back, relax, and get your mouse at hand! We got a whole lotta fightin' going on!
Oh, and a note for my friend xoxohiei AKA Caroline IF YOU ARE NOT HER, DON'T READ- Ah da da... well... I think we can take out the whole "orange" scene for Melly-Chan. Just say that "Karasu made Kurama pregnant" or sumthin'. She may watch our anime too, but she doesn't have to know the world of Cirtrus yet, ne? See ya Tuesday and at school ^_^
One more thing- I am currently doing doujinshi to Kurama 1/2 called Swords and Roses. It's really hillarious and will be assisible on my site once KKK1/2 is finished. A less... SD version will be on FF.net as well ^^;
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Karasu's Girl AKA Kurama 1/2
Chapter 9: Oh the Fire in His Eyes
(A/N: XD, Funny, ne, Karen?)
***
Hiei had his flame on! He was never so pissed in his life! Even when Yukina was kidnapped! This really did it.
"....HIEI!" Yusuke and Kuwabara yelled.
"..." Kurama stared at the jagged wound on his stomach.
It hurt a lot. He knew it had to have hurt the kits a little. They seemed a little... jumpy and scared.
He rolled his eyes back.
He couldn't let Hiei fight for him after what he did.
His hair turned silver.
His height shot up.
Youko was there.
He opened his eyes.
He was still a girl! And he was still pregnant!
But he WAS Youko.
And YOUKO was not happy.
He started to walk to Karasu and Hiei.
"Kurama!" Hiei yelled.
Kurama was lost in rage. "KARASU!"
Karasu looked at him. "Nani, Kurama?"
"HAH!" Youko let off a strong aura.
Hiei was stunned that his kitsune could do that.
So was Karasu. "Kurama!? Youko?! Uh... STOP!"
Youko grinned. "After what you did to me? You turned me to a girl. You took advantage of me. You raped me. You made me pregnant. But I think I gotta thank you. You had Hiei and me feel more close to eachother."
He took a seed from his hair.
It became a plant with a dragon-like face.
"Thank you."
The dragon attacked Karasu.
Karasu blocked it. "Youko... I am sorry that you have to go through this..."
He took a bomb.
"But I have to, koi."
He threw it at Youko.
But it was blocked.
Hiei.
"Did you think a bomb would kill him?"
"REI KEN!" Kuwabara yelled. He got his sword. "Yeah!"
Yusuke came in to the fight, too. "Don't count me out!"
Youko snorted. "I have this, minna."
"Like the bomb?" Hiei joked.
Youko's eyes narrowed. "Talk to the plant."
The dragon attacked Karasu. Karasu jumped a bit.
"It's a snap dragon, get it, Karasu?" Youko joked.
(A/N: CHA CHA CHINK!)
Nobody was amused.
"Okay... youkos can't joke..." Yusuke said.
"Shut up!" Kuwabara yelled. "I wanna rip that mask off that Karasu's face!"
Youko stood foward, summoning the plant again. This time it got Karasu's shoulder.
Crimson liquid fell down Karasu's arm. "Damn."
Youko took the plant again and got it to attack at Karasu's shoulder again. Youko laughed as he heard the sound of bones crunching.
Karasu screamed.
"Well he's screwed..." Kuwabara said, putting his sword back.
"Keep on guard," Hiei warned. "No way in seven hells is that baka going to go down by two strikes.
Karasu stared at Youko. "Hmph. Looks like the end."
"Yeah," Youko smirked. "Any last requests?"
"I guess..." Karasu said.
"I just have a question," Youko said. "Why do you want children so bad?"
"Doesn't everyone?" Karasu asked. "Doesn't everyone want a child to look at and say, 'he's mine. He's perfect in every way'? And they have some looks of the person you love the most? A mirror almost of observance. Just to look at your love if they die before you? You never wanted that?"
Youko growled. "SHUT UP!"
He was starting to have the plant bite off Karasu's pretty head.
Instead, Karasu rolled a bomb at Youko's feet and he disappeared.
"KARASU!" Youko yelled, accidently running foward, in the lighted bombs path.
"KURAMA!" the three boys yelled.
Youko took a double-take, but was too late.
B
A
N
G
!
"NO!" Hiei screamed.
"No way! No way!" Yusuke yelled.
"THIS ISN'T HAPPENING!" Kuwabara yelled.
Hiei charged into the dust cloud.
"HIEI! MATTE!" Yusuke yelled, but to no avail.
Hiei tried to find Kurama.
"Kurama! Kurama!"
He found him, lying down on his side, coughing madly.
"KURAMA! YOU'RE ALIVE!"
Kurama opened one green eye, smiling weakly. "...Hi...ei..."
Hiei grabbed Kurama and held him tight.
"You baka..." he hissed, a tear gem falling. "...you bastard... you bitch... whatever..."
Kurama laughed as best as he could. "Guess you can't stop a Youko's craving to fight, ne?"
Hiei nodded.
The dust settled down. Kurama drifted into an unconious state.
"What should we do?" Yusuke asked.
"We can ask Yukina, but she is probably too far away.." Kuwabara said.
"Why not a nigen hospital?" Hiei said, noting the gash on Kurama's side.
"Do you think Karasu is dead?" Yusuke asked.
"No. He escaped." Hiei sighed.
"Let's get moving," Kuwabara said. "We have 3 people to think about."
Hiei nodded.
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AND SO! Kurama and the kit's future don't look too bright? What's going to happen? Don't look at me! Review!
Kurama: T_T; Why...
Gabbi: Eh, I think we'll reply to the Chapter 7 crew then the Chapter 8 crew, k?
Kurama: Whatever...
CHAPTER 7
The real Eternal Sailor Earth- Poor you two!
Joey, Chibi Ryu, and Vash- You three are, like, the only boys who are reading this. YOU ROCK! *glomps chibi Ryu* You guys support me soo... saa... I wuv you all! And FK says hi along with Pocky-Chan and Yami Gabbi! I got some Almond Cream Pocky too!
Kurama: *waves*
Pocky-Chan: *purrs* ^_^
Gabbi: Oh, that's my Youko alter-ego Pocky-Chan. She's most likely to come out when I eat...
Pocky-Chan: Keep going, Gabbi, Yami is still doing her tribute to Johnny Cash for those dudes in that jail...
Gabbi and Kurama: O_O; Okay...
Dragon Ladysupreme- Ouch. Well, you gotta be physic or somethin' XD;
liztheryoubakurafan- LOL! I'll remember that ^_~
animegurl6- I guess you're a Karasu/Kurama supporter? *pats back* Don't worry. Karasu/Kurama is to come... somewhere in my fics... Kuronue/Kurama too! Basically anything, except Botan/Kurama! Gomen nasai, B/K supporters. I don't feel the love...
Starr Dust- Knowing Yusuke, he was thinking of that. Also, if you note, Kurama was a little sloppy on the clothes... insert henati possibilities here
Akiko Kimora- Well said. It reminds me of a song I made up in a forum once... it went something like "Karasu's an evil bastard... he touched my fox's hair..." something weird like that...
CHAPTER 8
Joey, Chibi ryu, and Chao???- Why in seven makais do you have Chao in that?1 Isn't that poor Ryu's ex? You guys are really fettish for guy's girl forms... ya know that? First Ranma... now Kurama... RHYME! neways... gomen nasai, I had to let Kurama get hurt!
TheUnlovedOutcast- I am soo glad I am helping you with your studies XP
animegurl6- RUN AG! Anyway, what really makes you think I would KILL Karasu? *goes Yami* Really? What WOULD?
*goes normal* Whoops!
liztheryoubakurafan- Well that was easy...
Dragon Ladysupreme- Oooh! Thanks for the katana!
Kurama: Hiei's not going to be happy...
Gabbi: Oh, come on... It's no big deal!
Starr Dust- Damn my mathimatic skills...
Kurama: And your spelling skills!
Gabbi: Oh shut it!
Draconia SilverFlame- Can do!
Rinoa Usagi Leonhart- Ain't it though?
Storm Elf- I don't know if I have moral fiber...
Kurama: Believe me, you don't... -_-V
Gabbi: Anyway.. poor Hiei... and thanks!
Karen Rhine- You really need to calm down... and we all LURVE Hiei, too! Note the chappie title...
Pocky-Chan: Oh! Hellooooo Princess of Kurama Torture!
Kurama: YOU MEAN THERE'S A WHOLE BUNCH OF KURAMA TORTURE ROYALTY NOW?!
Gabbi: Oh poor Kurama-Chan...
Saria19- You just gotta find out...
Okay! Domo arigato, minna! Now sit back, relax, and get your mouse at hand! We got a whole lotta fightin' going on!
Oh, and a note for my friend xoxohiei AKA Caroline IF YOU ARE NOT HER, DON'T READ- Ah da da... well... I think we can take out the whole "orange" scene for Melly-Chan. Just say that "Karasu made Kurama pregnant" or sumthin'. She may watch our anime too, but she doesn't have to know the world of Cirtrus yet, ne? See ya Tuesday and at school ^_^
One more thing- I am currently doing doujinshi to Kurama 1/2 called Swords and Roses. It's really hillarious and will be assisible on my site once KKK1/2 is finished. A less... SD version will be on FF.net as well ^^;
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Karasu's Girl AKA Kurama 1/2
Chapter 9: Oh the Fire in His Eyes
(A/N: XD, Funny, ne, Karen?)
***
Hiei had his flame on! He was never so pissed in his life! Even when Yukina was kidnapped! This really did it.
"....HIEI!" Yusuke and Kuwabara yelled.
"..." Kurama stared at the jagged wound on his stomach.
It hurt a lot. He knew it had to have hurt the kits a little. They seemed a little... jumpy and scared.
He rolled his eyes back.
He couldn't let Hiei fight for him after what he did.
His hair turned silver.
His height shot up.
Youko was there.
He opened his eyes.
He was still a girl! And he was still pregnant!
But he WAS Youko.
And YOUKO was not happy.
He started to walk to Karasu and Hiei.
"Kurama!" Hiei yelled.
Kurama was lost in rage. "KARASU!"
Karasu looked at him. "Nani, Kurama?"
"HAH!" Youko let off a strong aura.
Hiei was stunned that his kitsune could do that.
So was Karasu. "Kurama!? Youko?! Uh... STOP!"
Youko grinned. "After what you did to me? You turned me to a girl. You took advantage of me. You raped me. You made me pregnant. But I think I gotta thank you. You had Hiei and me feel more close to eachother."
He took a seed from his hair.
It became a plant with a dragon-like face.
"Thank you."
The dragon attacked Karasu.
Karasu blocked it. "Youko... I am sorry that you have to go through this..."
He took a bomb.
"But I have to, koi."
He threw it at Youko.
But it was blocked.
Hiei.
"Did you think a bomb would kill him?"
"REI KEN!" Kuwabara yelled. He got his sword. "Yeah!"
Yusuke came in to the fight, too. "Don't count me out!"
Youko snorted. "I have this, minna."
"Like the bomb?" Hiei joked.
Youko's eyes narrowed. "Talk to the plant."
The dragon attacked Karasu. Karasu jumped a bit.
"It's a snap dragon, get it, Karasu?" Youko joked.
(A/N: CHA CHA CHINK!)
Nobody was amused.
"Okay... youkos can't joke..." Yusuke said.
"Shut up!" Kuwabara yelled. "I wanna rip that mask off that Karasu's face!"
Youko stood foward, summoning the plant again. This time it got Karasu's shoulder.
Crimson liquid fell down Karasu's arm. "Damn."
Youko took the plant again and got it to attack at Karasu's shoulder again. Youko laughed as he heard the sound of bones crunching.
Karasu screamed.
"Well he's screwed..." Kuwabara said, putting his sword back.
"Keep on guard," Hiei warned. "No way in seven hells is that baka going to go down by two strikes.
Karasu stared at Youko. "Hmph. Looks like the end."
"Yeah," Youko smirked. "Any last requests?"
"I guess..." Karasu said.
"I just have a question," Youko said. "Why do you want children so bad?"
"Doesn't everyone?" Karasu asked. "Doesn't everyone want a child to look at and say, 'he's mine. He's perfect in every way'? And they have some looks of the person you love the most? A mirror almost of observance. Just to look at your love if they die before you? You never wanted that?"
Youko growled. "SHUT UP!"
He was starting to have the plant bite off Karasu's pretty head.
Instead, Karasu rolled a bomb at Youko's feet and he disappeared.
"KARASU!" Youko yelled, accidently running foward, in the lighted bombs path.
"KURAMA!" the three boys yelled.
Youko took a double-take, but was too late.
B
A
N
G
!
"NO!" Hiei screamed.
"No way! No way!" Yusuke yelled.
"THIS ISN'T HAPPENING!" Kuwabara yelled.
Hiei charged into the dust cloud.
"HIEI! MATTE!" Yusuke yelled, but to no avail.
Hiei tried to find Kurama.
"Kurama! Kurama!"
He found him, lying down on his side, coughing madly.
"KURAMA! YOU'RE ALIVE!"
Kurama opened one green eye, smiling weakly. "...Hi...ei..."
Hiei grabbed Kurama and held him tight.
"You baka..." he hissed, a tear gem falling. "...you bastard... you bitch... whatever..."
Kurama laughed as best as he could. "Guess you can't stop a Youko's craving to fight, ne?"
Hiei nodded.
The dust settled down. Kurama drifted into an unconious state.
"What should we do?" Yusuke asked.
"We can ask Yukina, but she is probably too far away.." Kuwabara said.
"Why not a nigen hospital?" Hiei said, noting the gash on Kurama's side.
"Do you think Karasu is dead?" Yusuke asked.
"No. He escaped." Hiei sighed.
"Let's get moving," Kuwabara said. "We have 3 people to think about."
Hiei nodded.
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AND SO! Kurama and the kit's future don't look too bright? What's going to happen? Don't look at me! Review!