The Over-Reactor
Part 1
This is my Punisher knockoff, It's a comic I'm working on, but I'll post the storylines on here,
This will be in a story format by the way.
Character Page:
The Over-Reactor (Real Name:White Castle) - White is a crazy vigilante, he has a giant glass eye for his right eye and huge neck veins all around his neck. He is a former crossing gaurd, his wife and kids were killed by a guy who ran a stop sign. He views all crimes as the same, from littering to homocide.
Benuul Ahmed Mensanusaphone - A pakistani 65-11 clerk.
Michael Monroe (A.K.A. Mike the Baffoon) - A spacey moron with perpetual drool on his chin. He's stupid, but he is good with machines.
Rip Headstone - This guy is a parody of Tombstone, he looks the same except he has a unibrow, and the mind of a five year old child.
Gums McKgee - This guy is a parody of Piranha Jones. He only has one tooth.
Rubiks Cube - This guy is a parody of Jigsaw, except he has square scars on his face instead of Jigsaw Puzzle scars, plus every side is a different color.
Wrench Head - Knockoff of Hammerhead, that's about it.
Combover - Knockoff of Kingpin.
The Actual Story:
In a 65-11 gas station in the city of Smarmyville Nebraska, a man in a hooded sweatshirt pointed a gun at Pakistani clerk Benuul Mensanusaphone.
A boot crunched on the gravel it had two skulls on it that looked like "The Punisher's symbol, only one eye was much larger than the other. A revolver was raised up with a skull charm on it, it too had one eye bigger than the other. The Gun went off, firing a bullet with four small blades on it, through the air.
The bullet hit the man's hand, his hand and his gun both exploded in mess of metal and blood. The man looked at his hand and said, "Ahh, my hand!"
The Over-Reactor walked in showing his face, he said, "Armed robbery is against the law.", he pulled the pin off a grenade and shoved it in the man's mouth. The man's head exploded in a fountain of blood, firing an eye, a tooth, and an ear through the air.
Benuul put his hands together and said, "Many blessings to you, good sir! Would you like a free slurpee?" "Sure, a large cherry would be good." The Over-Reactor said. "My apologies Sir, we have no cherry slurpee." Benuul replied. "No cherry?" The Over-Reactor asked, a large vein appeared on his head. "Not having cherry is a crime!" The Over-Reactor shouted as he shot a Benuul, Benuul ducked under the bullet as his turban was shot off, screaming "Sweet Alla protect me!"
Again, Benuul was in his prayer position he pleaded, "Oh please Sir, spare me. The 65-11 is a very poor store." "Okay but just this time." The Over-Reactor replied. "Thank you, Mr. Uh?" Benuul asked.
The Over-Reactor looked out the window ominously, "My name is White Castle, but the press calls me... The Over-Reactor. Five years a go, I was a crossing gaurd, a damn good one too. One day a careless motorist ran a stop sign and killed my wife and son. From that day I vowed to uphold the law. A blood pressure problem caused by too much stress made my neck veins stick out, and a eye I lost in Vietnam was replaced with a glass one."
Benuul stared wide eyed at The Over-Reactor and finally said, "Um... Oh... K. A million thank you's for your story...weirdo." he whispered the last word. "Well see ya Achmed." The Over-Reactor said, drinking his slurpee. "Benuul." Benuul replied. "Pardon me?" The Over-Reactor asked. "My name is Benuul, not Achmed." The Over-Reactor said. "See ya." he said, waving as he walked out the door, a price tag that said $100 hanging off the collar of his trench coat.
Later on the road, the Over-Reactor drove his green 1973 Gremlin X. "Now let's see the kind of evil going on out here." The Over-Reactor said.
The Over-Reactor spied Gums Mckgee holding up a man, "Dwop yow wawwet and put yow hamds bup!" (Drop your wallet and put your hands up!) he said. The Over-Reactor pushed a button on his dashboard and a large missile turret came through the roof of his gremlin, three missiles fired out, they hit Gums, all that was left of him were his legs and his head, "What the heck was that?" The man asked as The Over-Reactor drove off.
Meanwhile across town... A swivel chair was turned towards the window, a single arm protruded from the side holding a smoking cigar. "Sir, someone has killed Gums. He calls himself the Over-Reactor!"
Later... Headstone nodded, "Okay, I'll do it. But I want a pizza and a sunday and a horsie and a GI Joe." "Deal." The man said.
At the Over-Reactor's Lair, "Home sweet home." the Over-Reactor said as he looked at his Double Wide trailer surround by five foot thick cement walls with razor wire on top of them and a mine field in the front yard.
Inside, Mike the Baffoon sat staring blankly at the wall. "One time..." he said, drooling all over his shirt. "Mike... Mike? MIKE!!!" The Over-Reactor screamed. "What mine?" Mike asked, wiping the drool from his chin, which was then replaced by more drool. "Load the rocket launcher. I'm going to bed." The Over-Reactor said. "Okay." Mike replied.
Suddenly a fist flew through the wall, followed by Headstone breaking through the wall. "Breaking and entering!" The Over-Reactor screamed.
Headstone punched at the Over-Reactor, the Over-Reactor fired a shot from his pistol, the bullet blew through his hand. Tombstone fired a shot, breaking the Over-Reactor's pistol in half. "Yo ugly..." The Over-Reactor said, cocking his shotgun "Let's rock!" Headstone raised his fist up in front of him in a threatening manner, which The Over-Reactor replied to by blowing his hand off.
Headstone stared at his bloody stump, his eyes glowed with rage, and then sudeenly he began to cry, tears shot from his eyes as he screamed, "My hand, he hurt my wittle hand!"
The Over-Reactor picked Headstone up by his neck tie, "Who you work for?" he asked. "Rubiks Cube." Headstone replied, sniffling. "Okay. Leave." The Over-Reactor said.
Across town... back in the same setting. "Sir, the Over-Reactor is coming for you." the man said. "Send the gaurds home." Rubiks Cube replied. "But sir..." the man began to say. Rubiks Cube spun around in his chair suddenly, "I grew up in Iowa, I don't expect YOU to understand." Rubiks Cube said.
Outside... "Stay here Mike, this is between me and Rubiks Cube." The Over-Reactor kicked down the door holding a double barreled shotgun in his hand. "Let's rock." The Over-Reactor said.
"You'll never kill me." Rubiks Cube said, holding a revolver with a silencer in one hand, and a lit cigar in the other. "I'll put that on your tombstone." The Over-Reactor said, with an M-16 slung over one shoulder and a double barreled shotgun in his right hand.
The Over-Reactor fired the shotgun, both barrels, hitting Runiks Cube in the shoulder. "It'll take more than that." Rubiks Cube said, firing a shot which knocked the shotgun from the Over-Reactor's hand. The Over-Reactor fired his M-16, making Rubiks Cube's right hand explode, "Holy crap!" Rubiks Cube said, wide eyed.
"Mike, toss me the time bomb launcher." The Over-Reactor said, he caught what looked like a tear gas gun and fired eight bombs with claws that anchored into the walls, all with one minute left one them. "Well Cubie, It's been real, it's been fun." The Over-Reactor said, he pressed the button on the detonator, and said, "...But it ain't been real fun."
The Over-Reactor went down stairs, started his car and drove away, as the clock reached one second, he said, "Boom" The building went up in a giant fiery explosion.
Wrench Head looked out the window of the building, he watched as the mushroom cloud dissipated. "Dang, this guy's good sir." Wrench Head said. "I can handle it, call Overkill!" Combover said, turning around, chomping on a cigar.
Back at the Over-Reactor's Base... Benuul sat on his knees, his hands in a prayer position. "For saving my life, I am your loyal servant." Benuul said. "Okay, go get me a cherry slurpee." The Over-Reactor said. "Yes sir, Mr. Crazy Vigilante Sir." Benuul said.
The end for now.
Well this I hope was good. Next issue features a Deadpool parody, called Overkill plus another copycat Punisher called the Paddler. Read and review! And read my other, much more crappy stories, Capcom vs. Squaresoft, Crono Trigger 2: The Return of Lavos, and Final Fantasy 6: The Chronicles of Shadow, read and review them too, even though they suck.
Part 1
This is my Punisher knockoff, It's a comic I'm working on, but I'll post the storylines on here,
This will be in a story format by the way.
Character Page:
The Over-Reactor (Real Name:White Castle) - White is a crazy vigilante, he has a giant glass eye for his right eye and huge neck veins all around his neck. He is a former crossing gaurd, his wife and kids were killed by a guy who ran a stop sign. He views all crimes as the same, from littering to homocide.
Benuul Ahmed Mensanusaphone - A pakistani 65-11 clerk.
Michael Monroe (A.K.A. Mike the Baffoon) - A spacey moron with perpetual drool on his chin. He's stupid, but he is good with machines.
Rip Headstone - This guy is a parody of Tombstone, he looks the same except he has a unibrow, and the mind of a five year old child.
Gums McKgee - This guy is a parody of Piranha Jones. He only has one tooth.
Rubiks Cube - This guy is a parody of Jigsaw, except he has square scars on his face instead of Jigsaw Puzzle scars, plus every side is a different color.
Wrench Head - Knockoff of Hammerhead, that's about it.
Combover - Knockoff of Kingpin.
The Actual Story:
In a 65-11 gas station in the city of Smarmyville Nebraska, a man in a hooded sweatshirt pointed a gun at Pakistani clerk Benuul Mensanusaphone.
A boot crunched on the gravel it had two skulls on it that looked like "The Punisher's symbol, only one eye was much larger than the other. A revolver was raised up with a skull charm on it, it too had one eye bigger than the other. The Gun went off, firing a bullet with four small blades on it, through the air.
The bullet hit the man's hand, his hand and his gun both exploded in mess of metal and blood. The man looked at his hand and said, "Ahh, my hand!"
The Over-Reactor walked in showing his face, he said, "Armed robbery is against the law.", he pulled the pin off a grenade and shoved it in the man's mouth. The man's head exploded in a fountain of blood, firing an eye, a tooth, and an ear through the air.
Benuul put his hands together and said, "Many blessings to you, good sir! Would you like a free slurpee?" "Sure, a large cherry would be good." The Over-Reactor said. "My apologies Sir, we have no cherry slurpee." Benuul replied. "No cherry?" The Over-Reactor asked, a large vein appeared on his head. "Not having cherry is a crime!" The Over-Reactor shouted as he shot a Benuul, Benuul ducked under the bullet as his turban was shot off, screaming "Sweet Alla protect me!"
Again, Benuul was in his prayer position he pleaded, "Oh please Sir, spare me. The 65-11 is a very poor store." "Okay but just this time." The Over-Reactor replied. "Thank you, Mr. Uh?" Benuul asked.
The Over-Reactor looked out the window ominously, "My name is White Castle, but the press calls me... The Over-Reactor. Five years a go, I was a crossing gaurd, a damn good one too. One day a careless motorist ran a stop sign and killed my wife and son. From that day I vowed to uphold the law. A blood pressure problem caused by too much stress made my neck veins stick out, and a eye I lost in Vietnam was replaced with a glass one."
Benuul stared wide eyed at The Over-Reactor and finally said, "Um... Oh... K. A million thank you's for your story...weirdo." he whispered the last word. "Well see ya Achmed." The Over-Reactor said, drinking his slurpee. "Benuul." Benuul replied. "Pardon me?" The Over-Reactor asked. "My name is Benuul, not Achmed." The Over-Reactor said. "See ya." he said, waving as he walked out the door, a price tag that said $100 hanging off the collar of his trench coat.
Later on the road, the Over-Reactor drove his green 1973 Gremlin X. "Now let's see the kind of evil going on out here." The Over-Reactor said.
The Over-Reactor spied Gums Mckgee holding up a man, "Dwop yow wawwet and put yow hamds bup!" (Drop your wallet and put your hands up!) he said. The Over-Reactor pushed a button on his dashboard and a large missile turret came through the roof of his gremlin, three missiles fired out, they hit Gums, all that was left of him were his legs and his head, "What the heck was that?" The man asked as The Over-Reactor drove off.
Meanwhile across town... A swivel chair was turned towards the window, a single arm protruded from the side holding a smoking cigar. "Sir, someone has killed Gums. He calls himself the Over-Reactor!"
Later... Headstone nodded, "Okay, I'll do it. But I want a pizza and a sunday and a horsie and a GI Joe." "Deal." The man said.
At the Over-Reactor's Lair, "Home sweet home." the Over-Reactor said as he looked at his Double Wide trailer surround by five foot thick cement walls with razor wire on top of them and a mine field in the front yard.
Inside, Mike the Baffoon sat staring blankly at the wall. "One time..." he said, drooling all over his shirt. "Mike... Mike? MIKE!!!" The Over-Reactor screamed. "What mine?" Mike asked, wiping the drool from his chin, which was then replaced by more drool. "Load the rocket launcher. I'm going to bed." The Over-Reactor said. "Okay." Mike replied.
Suddenly a fist flew through the wall, followed by Headstone breaking through the wall. "Breaking and entering!" The Over-Reactor screamed.
Headstone punched at the Over-Reactor, the Over-Reactor fired a shot from his pistol, the bullet blew through his hand. Tombstone fired a shot, breaking the Over-Reactor's pistol in half. "Yo ugly..." The Over-Reactor said, cocking his shotgun "Let's rock!" Headstone raised his fist up in front of him in a threatening manner, which The Over-Reactor replied to by blowing his hand off.
Headstone stared at his bloody stump, his eyes glowed with rage, and then sudeenly he began to cry, tears shot from his eyes as he screamed, "My hand, he hurt my wittle hand!"
The Over-Reactor picked Headstone up by his neck tie, "Who you work for?" he asked. "Rubiks Cube." Headstone replied, sniffling. "Okay. Leave." The Over-Reactor said.
Across town... back in the same setting. "Sir, the Over-Reactor is coming for you." the man said. "Send the gaurds home." Rubiks Cube replied. "But sir..." the man began to say. Rubiks Cube spun around in his chair suddenly, "I grew up in Iowa, I don't expect YOU to understand." Rubiks Cube said.
Outside... "Stay here Mike, this is between me and Rubiks Cube." The Over-Reactor kicked down the door holding a double barreled shotgun in his hand. "Let's rock." The Over-Reactor said.
"You'll never kill me." Rubiks Cube said, holding a revolver with a silencer in one hand, and a lit cigar in the other. "I'll put that on your tombstone." The Over-Reactor said, with an M-16 slung over one shoulder and a double barreled shotgun in his right hand.
The Over-Reactor fired the shotgun, both barrels, hitting Runiks Cube in the shoulder. "It'll take more than that." Rubiks Cube said, firing a shot which knocked the shotgun from the Over-Reactor's hand. The Over-Reactor fired his M-16, making Rubiks Cube's right hand explode, "Holy crap!" Rubiks Cube said, wide eyed.
"Mike, toss me the time bomb launcher." The Over-Reactor said, he caught what looked like a tear gas gun and fired eight bombs with claws that anchored into the walls, all with one minute left one them. "Well Cubie, It's been real, it's been fun." The Over-Reactor said, he pressed the button on the detonator, and said, "...But it ain't been real fun."
The Over-Reactor went down stairs, started his car and drove away, as the clock reached one second, he said, "Boom" The building went up in a giant fiery explosion.
Wrench Head looked out the window of the building, he watched as the mushroom cloud dissipated. "Dang, this guy's good sir." Wrench Head said. "I can handle it, call Overkill!" Combover said, turning around, chomping on a cigar.
Back at the Over-Reactor's Base... Benuul sat on his knees, his hands in a prayer position. "For saving my life, I am your loyal servant." Benuul said. "Okay, go get me a cherry slurpee." The Over-Reactor said. "Yes sir, Mr. Crazy Vigilante Sir." Benuul said.
The end for now.
Well this I hope was good. Next issue features a Deadpool parody, called Overkill plus another copycat Punisher called the Paddler. Read and review! And read my other, much more crappy stories, Capcom vs. Squaresoft, Crono Trigger 2: The Return of Lavos, and Final Fantasy 6: The Chronicles of Shadow, read and review them too, even though they suck.