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Disclaimer: I don't own any of the Dragonball series. I own my story and characters though.
Chaos Judgment
Chapter 1: The Stranger
Pan was walking in the forest hoping to relax her self after she and her mom got into a fight. Pan forgot to clean her room, and that's when Videl had to stop her from going anywhere until she did so. This got pan mad as she was hoping to see a movie. However, by the time she was done, the movie was already over(it took her a couple of hours to do so, what a pigsty).
She and Videl got into it then. Her dad was working late today, so he wasn't there to help solve the situation. Because she said her thoughts so strongly, she ended up grounded from associating with her friends. 'Where does mom get off at grounding me?! I can't see my friends for a month!'
"Perhaps your mother was just teaching you a thing or two about responsibility, not to mention your mouth." Said an unfamiliar voice. Pan was surprised and quickly turned around. There she saw a 17 year-old boy, who wore a black shirt with white armor over it, white pants with the boots to match. He had a yin-yang symbol on the front of the armor, a gray cape and has blue eyes and spiked brown hair. He just glanced at her, smiling. As reaction, pan jumped away from him
"I know who you and your family are Pan." Said the mysterious boy. Pan thought, 'Who is this creep? How does he know my family? And how did he know what I was thinking?' He responded to her "First off, the name is Kain. As for your second question, I've done my research. And finally, I'm telepathic." The teen said. 'What, how can this be?!' Pan thought quickly. (Like I said, I'm psychic.) "Stay out of my head!!" said a very angry demi- saiyan. "As you wish." Responded Kain.
"I don't know who you are, but you better leave me alone!!" shouted pan who was past irate. Kain just chuckled and said "My, my; aren't we a little cocky. I know of your adventures with your family and friends. Always saving the world. And don't bother thinking cause I already have an answer for you. I've done my research." "Why are you here?!" demanded pan. "Just because you got into a fight with your mother doesn't mean you could take out your anger on me." Said the witty boy. " As for the answer to your question, lets just say something big is coming." "Something big?" inquired the young girl. Kain answered " Yep, that's exactly what I said. Do you want to know?" The only thing Pan could do was nod. "Alright. Here's how it goes,' Kain began. " 2 thousand years ago, an evil force, one that anyone could never fathom, appeared in this universe." Pan started to put her guard down as Kain continued. She felt something about this boy. She felt a power like no other, a power that could save the world, or destroy it. A demon seized control of this power, and became a creature named Chaos Judgment. He became a force bent on creating the apocalypse for all life as we know it. With this power, he could end all life in a single galaxy with the snap of his fingers. A powerful warrior stepped up to him, and that's when a fight ensued. This fighter was able to stop judgment and his reign of destruction, but at the cost of his own life. With his life force, he trapped Judgment into a place of solitude and shadows, oblivion. Not only that, but a powerful crystal stripped him of his powers, and was never to be seen since then." Pan totally focused on what he said and asked "So why does this have to do with my friends and family?" "Well, oblivion opens up every 2000 years. Since today marks that anniversary, it is destined to open up at 7:00 tonight." answered Kain. "The original reason I'm here though is because of the crystal I mentioned. The crystal was to be born inside an individual's soul. It 's a power that Judgment wants. The only we to obtain it is to separate it from the soul, which has a high risk of killing that soul. You see, I'm searching for the crystal." Pan asked in light of this new info " Who has the crystal?" Kain answered, "You have it."
This came as a shock for Pan as she dwelled on what Kain said how to obtain it. The words ringed in her head 'You must separate it from the soul, which has a high chance of killing that soul.' (You mustn't be afraid Pan. You know this has to be done.) Kain thought. Pan instead fired an energy blast at him, in which it didn't even faze him after contact. "You are not killing my soul, so forget about getting the crystal. I will defend myself with everything I got, so come at me if you dare you evil jerk!!!" She yelled angrily. She's convinced and determined not to let Kain have the crystal. Kain just paused, and then laughed. "WHAT'S SO FUNNY?!" Pan shouted with the angriest tone she ever gave. Kain responded "It's just so funny seeing you as angry like an adult. Listen, your just a kid, and you have no chance of beating me saiyan. But if it will satisfy you, than I accept your challenge. And afterwards, I'm going to obtain the crystal from your soul. You have a strong soul, perhaps you won't be killed."
Pan had nowhere to run, nowhere to hide. She was going to fight the toughest match she's ever been in. All because of the big argument. She regretted saying those words to her mom, because she may never see her again. In fact, she may never see anyone again.
At pans home: "Hi Videl, I'm home!" said a certain grown up demi-saiyan. "Hi Gohan." Videl greeted him coming down stairs. "How was work?" Gohan said, "It was fine. Uh, say, where's Pan?" Videl looked mad and said, "That girl went outside after I grounded her from going with her friends." Gohan, who was now curious, asked her, "Why, what did she do?" "She wouldn't clean her room after I told her to a week ago." Videl started to calm down and breathe. "After she cleaned, Pan started yelling at me because she missed a movie she wanted to see. I said she should've cleaned her room, but she told me to go hell. Maybe I was too harsh." Gohan looked at her and said, " It doesn't matter if you were to harsh or not. She knows better than to speak to you like that. Tell you what, I'm going to find pan so we could all talk about it." He started heading out the door and said, "It's only going to take a few minutes." He flew into the forest. ' I have a lock on her, but someone else is there. It feels different.' Gohan thought as he flew past trees.
Pan screamed as she powered up and charged at Kain. She threw a punch, only for it to miss. She looked around to see where he was, but to no avail. (What's the matter, can't find me? Here, let me help.) said a voice in her head. Suddenly, Out of nowhere, Kain popped out and punched Pan in the stomach. She never felt so much pain before. She held her stomach as Kain disappeared again. She fell to her knees still holding her stomach. She gasped for air and finally muttered, " H, how d, did you do that?" Kain warped in front of her from the air and said " I have special abilities." With that answer, Pan fainted. "Sorry Pan, but this must be done."said Kain. An energy blast shot over to Kain. Kain was able to dodge it with ease and saw who the person was that shot it. "Leave my daughter alone!" said Gohan.
So what did you think? Please send in your reviews now and please do not be afraid to send in any criticism cuz "I AM THE OVERLORD CHAOS!!!" I know, I'm egotistical.
' ' means thoughts ( ) means telepathy
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the Dragonball series. I own my story and characters though.
Chaos Judgment
Chapter 1: The Stranger
Pan was walking in the forest hoping to relax her self after she and her mom got into a fight. Pan forgot to clean her room, and that's when Videl had to stop her from going anywhere until she did so. This got pan mad as she was hoping to see a movie. However, by the time she was done, the movie was already over(it took her a couple of hours to do so, what a pigsty).
She and Videl got into it then. Her dad was working late today, so he wasn't there to help solve the situation. Because she said her thoughts so strongly, she ended up grounded from associating with her friends. 'Where does mom get off at grounding me?! I can't see my friends for a month!'
"Perhaps your mother was just teaching you a thing or two about responsibility, not to mention your mouth." Said an unfamiliar voice. Pan was surprised and quickly turned around. There she saw a 17 year-old boy, who wore a black shirt with white armor over it, white pants with the boots to match. He had a yin-yang symbol on the front of the armor, a gray cape and has blue eyes and spiked brown hair. He just glanced at her, smiling. As reaction, pan jumped away from him
"I know who you and your family are Pan." Said the mysterious boy. Pan thought, 'Who is this creep? How does he know my family? And how did he know what I was thinking?' He responded to her "First off, the name is Kain. As for your second question, I've done my research. And finally, I'm telepathic." The teen said. 'What, how can this be?!' Pan thought quickly. (Like I said, I'm psychic.) "Stay out of my head!!" said a very angry demi- saiyan. "As you wish." Responded Kain.
"I don't know who you are, but you better leave me alone!!" shouted pan who was past irate. Kain just chuckled and said "My, my; aren't we a little cocky. I know of your adventures with your family and friends. Always saving the world. And don't bother thinking cause I already have an answer for you. I've done my research." "Why are you here?!" demanded pan. "Just because you got into a fight with your mother doesn't mean you could take out your anger on me." Said the witty boy. " As for the answer to your question, lets just say something big is coming." "Something big?" inquired the young girl. Kain answered " Yep, that's exactly what I said. Do you want to know?" The only thing Pan could do was nod. "Alright. Here's how it goes,' Kain began. " 2 thousand years ago, an evil force, one that anyone could never fathom, appeared in this universe." Pan started to put her guard down as Kain continued. She felt something about this boy. She felt a power like no other, a power that could save the world, or destroy it. A demon seized control of this power, and became a creature named Chaos Judgment. He became a force bent on creating the apocalypse for all life as we know it. With this power, he could end all life in a single galaxy with the snap of his fingers. A powerful warrior stepped up to him, and that's when a fight ensued. This fighter was able to stop judgment and his reign of destruction, but at the cost of his own life. With his life force, he trapped Judgment into a place of solitude and shadows, oblivion. Not only that, but a powerful crystal stripped him of his powers, and was never to be seen since then." Pan totally focused on what he said and asked "So why does this have to do with my friends and family?" "Well, oblivion opens up every 2000 years. Since today marks that anniversary, it is destined to open up at 7:00 tonight." answered Kain. "The original reason I'm here though is because of the crystal I mentioned. The crystal was to be born inside an individual's soul. It 's a power that Judgment wants. The only we to obtain it is to separate it from the soul, which has a high risk of killing that soul. You see, I'm searching for the crystal." Pan asked in light of this new info " Who has the crystal?" Kain answered, "You have it."
This came as a shock for Pan as she dwelled on what Kain said how to obtain it. The words ringed in her head 'You must separate it from the soul, which has a high chance of killing that soul.' (You mustn't be afraid Pan. You know this has to be done.) Kain thought. Pan instead fired an energy blast at him, in which it didn't even faze him after contact. "You are not killing my soul, so forget about getting the crystal. I will defend myself with everything I got, so come at me if you dare you evil jerk!!!" She yelled angrily. She's convinced and determined not to let Kain have the crystal. Kain just paused, and then laughed. "WHAT'S SO FUNNY?!" Pan shouted with the angriest tone she ever gave. Kain responded "It's just so funny seeing you as angry like an adult. Listen, your just a kid, and you have no chance of beating me saiyan. But if it will satisfy you, than I accept your challenge. And afterwards, I'm going to obtain the crystal from your soul. You have a strong soul, perhaps you won't be killed."
Pan had nowhere to run, nowhere to hide. She was going to fight the toughest match she's ever been in. All because of the big argument. She regretted saying those words to her mom, because she may never see her again. In fact, she may never see anyone again.
At pans home: "Hi Videl, I'm home!" said a certain grown up demi-saiyan. "Hi Gohan." Videl greeted him coming down stairs. "How was work?" Gohan said, "It was fine. Uh, say, where's Pan?" Videl looked mad and said, "That girl went outside after I grounded her from going with her friends." Gohan, who was now curious, asked her, "Why, what did she do?" "She wouldn't clean her room after I told her to a week ago." Videl started to calm down and breathe. "After she cleaned, Pan started yelling at me because she missed a movie she wanted to see. I said she should've cleaned her room, but she told me to go hell. Maybe I was too harsh." Gohan looked at her and said, " It doesn't matter if you were to harsh or not. She knows better than to speak to you like that. Tell you what, I'm going to find pan so we could all talk about it." He started heading out the door and said, "It's only going to take a few minutes." He flew into the forest. ' I have a lock on her, but someone else is there. It feels different.' Gohan thought as he flew past trees.
Pan screamed as she powered up and charged at Kain. She threw a punch, only for it to miss. She looked around to see where he was, but to no avail. (What's the matter, can't find me? Here, let me help.) said a voice in her head. Suddenly, Out of nowhere, Kain popped out and punched Pan in the stomach. She never felt so much pain before. She held her stomach as Kain disappeared again. She fell to her knees still holding her stomach. She gasped for air and finally muttered, " H, how d, did you do that?" Kain warped in front of her from the air and said " I have special abilities." With that answer, Pan fainted. "Sorry Pan, but this must be done."said Kain. An energy blast shot over to Kain. Kain was able to dodge it with ease and saw who the person was that shot it. "Leave my daughter alone!" said Gohan.
So what did you think? Please send in your reviews now and please do not be afraid to send in any criticism cuz "I AM THE OVERLORD CHAOS!!!" I know, I'm egotistical.