Hi this is Overlord Chaos again, I must have not been as good as I
should've been, seeing as how I didn't receive any reviews. It's expected
considering I this is my first story. Please review, if it's too much to
ask. Also, sorry, I forgot to put up the disclaimer in my last chapter, and
I will fix that as soon as possible.
' 'means thoughts ( ) means telepathy
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the Dragonball Series. I do own this story though, and any of my created characters.
Chaos Judgment Chapter 2: Confrontations
" I had a great time, Taki." Said a familiar teenage demi-saiyan. " I had a great time to, Goten" said a beautiful brown haired girl. " So, when's the next time we could meet?" Asked Goten, who was really blushing as he gazed at her. Taki said "Does tomorrow at five sound good?" "Great!" Goten said. 'Oh crap. I forgot that I made plans with Trunks tomorrow to train with him. "See ya till then" Said Taki who was now walking away. " Alright!" 'Great, how do I explain this one?' Goten thought as he was walking down town. He hadn't told anyone that he has a new girlfriend. Well, not yet anyway. He was strolling down the streets when he accidentally ran into a person. "Sorry about that." he said as he gazed at the person he bumped into a teen who didn't looked too much older then himself. He was slightly taller, by a couple inches, had spiked brown hair, and wore a strange white armor. "Your family needs you at Gohan's house." The boy said in a monotonous voice. Goten looked at this boy wondering how he knows his family. "You might want to get there now." Goten looked at him and quickly ran into the next ally. He made sure nobody saw him as he flew towards the direction of his brother's house.
Kain sensed Goten as he flew. "Just one hour to go." He said as he looked at the clock in the window of a building. The time now is 5:00. Taki was walking across the street when she heard a voice (Taki, the time has come. The arrival is in two hours. Don't get too attached to that boy, you must remember your mission.) She heard this and told the voice in her mind (I will not fail you sir.)
Goten arrived there in twenty minutes and landed in front of the house. He entered and saw everyone there his, family and friends. He saw who they were surrounding, his niece, pan. "Wha- what happened?!" He stuttered. "Somebody ambushed her" said Gohan. She was being laid on Videls lap, as she had somber eyes. Gohan continued, "Now that everyone's here this is what happened."
Flashback
"You seem to have a good spirit." Said the boy who looked at Gohan. "Hm, tell ya what. I'll give you until 6:00 to spend time with her. Then, I'll come to take her." With that, he vanished.
Goten's heart sank as he heard this. Piccolo stepped up and said, "Whoever did this must be powerful. Know one could have taken her out that quickly. "Buu crush bad man!" exclaimed the pink rubber type man. Uub said "Well, we don't even know who did it." Hercule, still an idiot, shouted in a loud triumphant voice,"Well I'll show him if he rears his ugly head again!"
Goten cleared his throat and said, "You said the guy wore white armor and a cape."Gohan looked at him and answered, "Yea, why?" "Goten then said, " You're not going to believe it, but I ran into a person who wore the exact same thing." "What?!" The whole crew exclaimed. As if on cue, the clock rang. It was six. Goku felt horrible power as it rang. He and the others started going through the front door. "Chi-Chi, I want you and the others to stay and watch over Pan." Chi-chi nodded her head and said "Be careful."
Outside stood Kain. He watched as he saw 6 fighters come out through the front door. It was Goku, Gohan, Goten, Trunks, Vegeta, and Piccolo. " So, this is the freak who threatens your family?" asked Vegeta in an over confident tone. "That's him" said Gohan. "Vegeta smirked and said, "Heedoesn't look tough to me." Goku said" No, he is powerful, I can sense it. The Saiyan prince glared at Goku and said "What's the matter Kakarot? You turning into a wuss?" Goku replied,"I'm not, I'm just saying we should be careful."
"All right!" Kain shouted. "You all know why I'm here. And judging by the looks of your eyes, I can tell you all want a fight." The warriors just glared at him while he was talking. "Well, if it'll satisfy you, then I guess I have no choice but to accept. The winner of this fight determines the fate of Pan."
Pan started opening her eyes as she moaned. She was in deep pain. "Where am I?" Videl started crying as she hugged Pan. "Oh I was so worried about you!" "MOM, I'm Fine!" She yelled as Videl hugged her tightly. Everyone inside started crowded her to see if she was okay. Pan asked, "What happened?" Uub replied, "You were knocked out." It all came back to her, Kain. She felt something outside. It was him. She jumped off the couch and ran to the front door. Krillin yelled, "No Pan don't! It's not safe!" But too late she was outside.
"I forgot to introduce myself. My name is Kain." Smirked the teen. " But Pan already knows that, don't you Pan?" Everyone turned around and saw Pan who was wide awake. Pan glared at Kain and asked, "Why does this crystal matter to you?" Kain answered" It's none of your concern."
Taki was walking into the forest and stopped. (You've done a good job. Place the key in front of the stone. The portal will open here.) Taki obeyed as she placed a strange skeleton key in front of the boulder. (Get out of here before you're discovered) With that, Taki vanished into thin air.
All right well the second chapter's done. Stay tuned for my Third Chapter: The Arrival. Please review. I will really appreciate it if you do.
' 'means thoughts ( ) means telepathy
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the Dragonball Series. I do own this story though, and any of my created characters.
Chaos Judgment Chapter 2: Confrontations
" I had a great time, Taki." Said a familiar teenage demi-saiyan. " I had a great time to, Goten" said a beautiful brown haired girl. " So, when's the next time we could meet?" Asked Goten, who was really blushing as he gazed at her. Taki said "Does tomorrow at five sound good?" "Great!" Goten said. 'Oh crap. I forgot that I made plans with Trunks tomorrow to train with him. "See ya till then" Said Taki who was now walking away. " Alright!" 'Great, how do I explain this one?' Goten thought as he was walking down town. He hadn't told anyone that he has a new girlfriend. Well, not yet anyway. He was strolling down the streets when he accidentally ran into a person. "Sorry about that." he said as he gazed at the person he bumped into a teen who didn't looked too much older then himself. He was slightly taller, by a couple inches, had spiked brown hair, and wore a strange white armor. "Your family needs you at Gohan's house." The boy said in a monotonous voice. Goten looked at this boy wondering how he knows his family. "You might want to get there now." Goten looked at him and quickly ran into the next ally. He made sure nobody saw him as he flew towards the direction of his brother's house.
Kain sensed Goten as he flew. "Just one hour to go." He said as he looked at the clock in the window of a building. The time now is 5:00. Taki was walking across the street when she heard a voice (Taki, the time has come. The arrival is in two hours. Don't get too attached to that boy, you must remember your mission.) She heard this and told the voice in her mind (I will not fail you sir.)
Goten arrived there in twenty minutes and landed in front of the house. He entered and saw everyone there his, family and friends. He saw who they were surrounding, his niece, pan. "Wha- what happened?!" He stuttered. "Somebody ambushed her" said Gohan. She was being laid on Videls lap, as she had somber eyes. Gohan continued, "Now that everyone's here this is what happened."
Flashback
"You seem to have a good spirit." Said the boy who looked at Gohan. "Hm, tell ya what. I'll give you until 6:00 to spend time with her. Then, I'll come to take her." With that, he vanished.
Goten's heart sank as he heard this. Piccolo stepped up and said, "Whoever did this must be powerful. Know one could have taken her out that quickly. "Buu crush bad man!" exclaimed the pink rubber type man. Uub said "Well, we don't even know who did it." Hercule, still an idiot, shouted in a loud triumphant voice,"Well I'll show him if he rears his ugly head again!"
Goten cleared his throat and said, "You said the guy wore white armor and a cape."Gohan looked at him and answered, "Yea, why?" "Goten then said, " You're not going to believe it, but I ran into a person who wore the exact same thing." "What?!" The whole crew exclaimed. As if on cue, the clock rang. It was six. Goku felt horrible power as it rang. He and the others started going through the front door. "Chi-Chi, I want you and the others to stay and watch over Pan." Chi-chi nodded her head and said "Be careful."
Outside stood Kain. He watched as he saw 6 fighters come out through the front door. It was Goku, Gohan, Goten, Trunks, Vegeta, and Piccolo. " So, this is the freak who threatens your family?" asked Vegeta in an over confident tone. "That's him" said Gohan. "Vegeta smirked and said, "Heedoesn't look tough to me." Goku said" No, he is powerful, I can sense it. The Saiyan prince glared at Goku and said "What's the matter Kakarot? You turning into a wuss?" Goku replied,"I'm not, I'm just saying we should be careful."
"All right!" Kain shouted. "You all know why I'm here. And judging by the looks of your eyes, I can tell you all want a fight." The warriors just glared at him while he was talking. "Well, if it'll satisfy you, then I guess I have no choice but to accept. The winner of this fight determines the fate of Pan."
Pan started opening her eyes as she moaned. She was in deep pain. "Where am I?" Videl started crying as she hugged Pan. "Oh I was so worried about you!" "MOM, I'm Fine!" She yelled as Videl hugged her tightly. Everyone inside started crowded her to see if she was okay. Pan asked, "What happened?" Uub replied, "You were knocked out." It all came back to her, Kain. She felt something outside. It was him. She jumped off the couch and ran to the front door. Krillin yelled, "No Pan don't! It's not safe!" But too late she was outside.
"I forgot to introduce myself. My name is Kain." Smirked the teen. " But Pan already knows that, don't you Pan?" Everyone turned around and saw Pan who was wide awake. Pan glared at Kain and asked, "Why does this crystal matter to you?" Kain answered" It's none of your concern."
Taki was walking into the forest and stopped. (You've done a good job. Place the key in front of the stone. The portal will open here.) Taki obeyed as she placed a strange skeleton key in front of the boulder. (Get out of here before you're discovered) With that, Taki vanished into thin air.
All right well the second chapter's done. Stay tuned for my Third Chapter: The Arrival. Please review. I will really appreciate it if you do.