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will be better because there will be more stuff happening. More regulars
will be introduced, including my fav, Will Turner! Yay! Ok, on with the
story.
Felicity woke up in a corner of the fort, her neck kinked and her back sore.
"What a night," she said with a sigh. 'I wonder if Father saw me here. I don't think he'd care, though.' (A/N: the '' are thoughts.)
A million thoughts raced through her mind, the most important being the safety of Will and Elizabeth. She stood up and dusted herself off. She left the fort and went to look for her father and Elizabeth. Felicity found the streets in much disarray; barely anything was left of the town. People were clearing out dead bodies from the streets in wheel barrows, repairing their shops and trying to get back to their normal routine.
"Those pirates sure did a good job of destroying this place," muttered Felicity.
She walked a little bit further, keeping an eye out for Elizabeth.
"Will!" she shrieked.
And there he was, lying on the ground, motionless. Felicity ran over to him, panicking.
"Will! WILL! Wake up!" shouted Felicity. 'Please don't be dead. I don't know what I would do without you.'
Felicity shook his shoulders as her heart rate quickened and her face began to lose color. Will opened his eyes, slowly sat up and rubbed his head.
"Felicity!" said Will, surprised, putting his fingers over her mouth, "Your yelling in my ear does not help the monstrous headache I have."
"Sorry, I thought you were dead!"
"And yelling my name will bring me back to life?" teased Will, a smile on his face.
"Don't get smart with me, Will Turner," said Felicity, as she stood up. "Do you know what happened to Elizabeth? I haven't seen her since last night."
Will's face turned grim as they started walking along the road.
"They took her. The pirates," he said scornfully.
"What!? Why?!"
"I'm not entirely sure. Your father is probably doing everything he can to find her."
"He better be searching every ship in the Caribbean and questioning every pirate in the jail!" Felicity exclaimed.
"I sure hope so. It must be awful for her, to be on a filthy ship with even filthier pirates."
Felicity closed her eyes and shuddered at the thought of what the pirates might be doing to her sister.
"Don't worry. Elizabeth will be fine," comforted Will.
They walked a little farther until they spotted the governor, commodore, and other military officers pouring over a map. Felicity ran up to them, with Will right on her heels.
"Where's Elizabeth? Do you know anything yet? What are you doing to find her?" questioned Felicity.
"We are doing everything we can to find her-" replied Governor Swann.
"And what is that, looking at a map?!" interrupted Felicity angrily, "That is not going to rescue her!"
"Have you talked to that Jack Sparrow? He might know of that ship that took Elizabeth," suggested Will.
"He did say something about 'The Black Pearl,'" replied one of the officers.
"Well, ask him where it is! He could lead us to it!" cried Felicity.
"The pirates that raided the city left Sparrow in jail, therefore they are not his allies," responded Norrington.
"But he could still know where it's going; he's a pirate! We could ask him anyway! It can't hurt to try; what if he does know?" Felicity exclaimed.
"Felicity, stay out of this. My men and I are assessing the situation and are handling this efficiently. It is not your job to rescue your sister, so don't worry about her. Now, I want you to head back to the manor and supervise the cleaning. Make sure those good for nothing servants don't filch any valuables that were not already stolen," scoffed Governor Swann.
"Don't worry? DON'T WORRY! HOW CAN I NOT WORRY ABOUT ELIZABETH! SHE'S MY DAMN SISTER FOR HEAVEN'S SAKE! SHE COULD BE DEAD BY NOW! AND YOU HAVE BARELY MADE AN EFFORT TO SAVE HER! SOME FATHER YOU ARE! AND DON'T EVEN THINK FOR ONE SECOND THAT I AM GOING TO LISTEN TO YOU EVER AGAIN!" raged Felicity.
And with that, her father smacked her across the cheek. As Felicity touched her rosy cheek, her father spoke again.
"Felicity Swann, I am your father and will NOT tolerate this behavior. Get out of my sight; you've humiliated yourself enough."
"Don't treat her like that!" Will said as he stepped towards the governor.
"I advise you stay out of this, Mr. Turner. It may cost you your job, and God knows you need it," remarked the governor, eyeing Will's apparel in disgust.
"How dare you say that about Will. He is a better man than you will EVER be," retorted Felicity. She turned to Will and grabbed his arm. "Come on Will, let's go."
Whatcha think? Don't forget to R&R! Is Felicity coming off as too mary-sue- ish? Are these chapters too short? Let me know. More adventure to come in the next chapter.
Felicity woke up in a corner of the fort, her neck kinked and her back sore.
"What a night," she said with a sigh. 'I wonder if Father saw me here. I don't think he'd care, though.' (A/N: the '' are thoughts.)
A million thoughts raced through her mind, the most important being the safety of Will and Elizabeth. She stood up and dusted herself off. She left the fort and went to look for her father and Elizabeth. Felicity found the streets in much disarray; barely anything was left of the town. People were clearing out dead bodies from the streets in wheel barrows, repairing their shops and trying to get back to their normal routine.
"Those pirates sure did a good job of destroying this place," muttered Felicity.
She walked a little bit further, keeping an eye out for Elizabeth.
"Will!" she shrieked.
And there he was, lying on the ground, motionless. Felicity ran over to him, panicking.
"Will! WILL! Wake up!" shouted Felicity. 'Please don't be dead. I don't know what I would do without you.'
Felicity shook his shoulders as her heart rate quickened and her face began to lose color. Will opened his eyes, slowly sat up and rubbed his head.
"Felicity!" said Will, surprised, putting his fingers over her mouth, "Your yelling in my ear does not help the monstrous headache I have."
"Sorry, I thought you were dead!"
"And yelling my name will bring me back to life?" teased Will, a smile on his face.
"Don't get smart with me, Will Turner," said Felicity, as she stood up. "Do you know what happened to Elizabeth? I haven't seen her since last night."
Will's face turned grim as they started walking along the road.
"They took her. The pirates," he said scornfully.
"What!? Why?!"
"I'm not entirely sure. Your father is probably doing everything he can to find her."
"He better be searching every ship in the Caribbean and questioning every pirate in the jail!" Felicity exclaimed.
"I sure hope so. It must be awful for her, to be on a filthy ship with even filthier pirates."
Felicity closed her eyes and shuddered at the thought of what the pirates might be doing to her sister.
"Don't worry. Elizabeth will be fine," comforted Will.
They walked a little farther until they spotted the governor, commodore, and other military officers pouring over a map. Felicity ran up to them, with Will right on her heels.
"Where's Elizabeth? Do you know anything yet? What are you doing to find her?" questioned Felicity.
"We are doing everything we can to find her-" replied Governor Swann.
"And what is that, looking at a map?!" interrupted Felicity angrily, "That is not going to rescue her!"
"Have you talked to that Jack Sparrow? He might know of that ship that took Elizabeth," suggested Will.
"He did say something about 'The Black Pearl,'" replied one of the officers.
"Well, ask him where it is! He could lead us to it!" cried Felicity.
"The pirates that raided the city left Sparrow in jail, therefore they are not his allies," responded Norrington.
"But he could still know where it's going; he's a pirate! We could ask him anyway! It can't hurt to try; what if he does know?" Felicity exclaimed.
"Felicity, stay out of this. My men and I are assessing the situation and are handling this efficiently. It is not your job to rescue your sister, so don't worry about her. Now, I want you to head back to the manor and supervise the cleaning. Make sure those good for nothing servants don't filch any valuables that were not already stolen," scoffed Governor Swann.
"Don't worry? DON'T WORRY! HOW CAN I NOT WORRY ABOUT ELIZABETH! SHE'S MY DAMN SISTER FOR HEAVEN'S SAKE! SHE COULD BE DEAD BY NOW! AND YOU HAVE BARELY MADE AN EFFORT TO SAVE HER! SOME FATHER YOU ARE! AND DON'T EVEN THINK FOR ONE SECOND THAT I AM GOING TO LISTEN TO YOU EVER AGAIN!" raged Felicity.
And with that, her father smacked her across the cheek. As Felicity touched her rosy cheek, her father spoke again.
"Felicity Swann, I am your father and will NOT tolerate this behavior. Get out of my sight; you've humiliated yourself enough."
"Don't treat her like that!" Will said as he stepped towards the governor.
"I advise you stay out of this, Mr. Turner. It may cost you your job, and God knows you need it," remarked the governor, eyeing Will's apparel in disgust.
"How dare you say that about Will. He is a better man than you will EVER be," retorted Felicity. She turned to Will and grabbed his arm. "Come on Will, let's go."
Whatcha think? Don't forget to R&R! Is Felicity coming off as too mary-sue- ish? Are these chapters too short? Let me know. More adventure to come in the next chapter.