A/N: I thank everyone one for the recent reviews. I apologize for the slow
progress and the appearance that the chapters may seem lazily put together
but between school, work and this, this is my last priority. But not
worries. School's almost over (three weeks) and I've quite my job (I still
have two weeks left of that.)
For some people who seem to not like the names before their quotes I will change. I personally think it's easier to understand what's going on when it's the way I've been going, but it could be more dramatic if it was like an actual story outline. Starting with this chapter I will be using an actual story outline and will fix the previous pages in the summer. I'm not lazy, just don't have the time to put effort into these chapters. Schools almost over and the story will be adjusted.
On a happier note, I am on the verge to writing this story more on a professional level and seeing where it would go. Probably not far. Also, my WebPages. I have created one but it hasn't turned out very well so I've tried many times to cancel it. I'm still going to create a website based on this story though.
Thank you for the reviews and suggestions, sorry this note was long. Keep reading and reviewing. :x
Chapter 5 – God and Heaven's Power
The city of Kasteroam is the biggest city that Mako Enterprise owns. It is where the Head Quarters of the Enterprise used to be. The average building stands 70 stories high (roughly 600 feet). It is the richest city on the planet, along with Mako Enterprise being the richest company on the planet. 10 million people live in the city alone. The biggest building there is, of course, the old Mako Enterprise HeadQuarters building. Since Head Quarters moved to the moon, where Mako's new city exists, the old Head Quarters is now the Second Base of Mako Enterprise called "God's House". All the other companies that M.E. owns communicate with God's House. God's House is the only building HeadQuarters communicates with. The building is not as tall as the average building in Kasteroam, but is longer than any other building. It stands 10 stories high and stretches more than 500 feet long. It is more of a laboratory building. Inside the building are tests done to see if how well Mako supports life. Experiments from Mako versus plants to Mako versus human. 300-year-old plants and trees are grown inside the building and supported by Mako. Sick people who believed to not be able to survive a disease they carry are treated with little bits of Mako. Tests with humans have not yet succeeded entirely. Tests from nature have succeeded more than failed. The walls inside the building are all white in symbolism of God and Heaven's power. The scientists and employees in the building are trying to save the humanity and the earth before it is destroyed.
A man walks through a wide, white corridor with a blue trench coat on. Behind him are scientists and technicians. The group walks through large doors with a sign above that said "Sick Division" and into a glass room. On the other side of the glass room is another white room where people are dressed in Contamination gear to prevent contamination of the diseases that are inside the room. Tons of Men, women and children suffer from their sickness. As the man in the blue trench coats stares through the glass window, he notices a little girl lying in bed. Doctors and scientists surround her. She is dying. She suffers from Leukemia, an unbeaten cancer in which all organs in the body discontinue to function. He watches with determination for her to live. The doctors inject Mako into her. He heard the news of her life threatening to die away. He knew this little girl. He knew many of the patients that lay inside that room. He wanted her to live. The little girl, that was about to die, reminded him of his daughter he lost to heart cancer. He wanted so much to help her but her couldn't. He watches as the doctors move away. One of the doctors enters the decontamination room. The man in the trench coat approaches the woman doctor as she enters the glass room. "How's the experiments coming along, Dr. Kesha?" he asks with determination for improvement. "The results are no different than a month ago. But they are not getting any worse. The Mako energy seems to keep them stable but it's not curing them. We can't have them suffer like this forever. They want to be free from pain, Charles. I've had one request to die. It was Olivia." She replied. She wanted so much for the patients to be healed, but she didn't want them to suffer. "How is Olivia? How much longer does she have?" He asked her. His heart hurt from watching her suffer. He's been seeking more power to try and cure her and the other patients. "Olivia has only a matter of months." With this, Charles' heart fell. He needed more time to find a cure. A tear fell from the corner of his right eye. He then walked out of the room with only the sound of his shoes echoing off the walls. Dr. Kesha watched him in silence. There was nothing she could do. The scientists that were following him to the room followed him out. His assistant walked beside him. She was a bright girl who knew not to interfere with his personal life. She respected him and wanted to help him in every way possible. When she got to her office she talked to a friend of hers who worked in Mako Enterprise HeadQuarters, on the moon. "Hello, Athel? Hi, It's Marah. I just got back from a visitation with Commander Charles. We went to the Sick Division and you know his little friend, Olivia? Yeah, the one who reminds him of his daughter, well, she only has months to live. He's getting very depressed and into an insanity stage. Could you get Sir Mortever to find a way to help." She waited for a reply from her friend. "Thank you so much, Athel. Call me back when you get some feedback from him. Bye." She hung up the phone.
Back at the Sick Division, Dr. Kesha and her crew record information from the patients and try to come up with a better solution. Dr. Kesha is with Olivia, writing down her side effects of Mako and her symptoms of Leukemia. Her workers have been researching and studying for days without sleep. They had the hardest job out of the whole building. They had to stay on top of the patients or the patients would die. A worker approaches Dr. Kesha. "Doctor, I've got some new symptoms from the last couple. Do you need any help with Olivia?" "No, you can rest for a couple hours. You've worked hard for the past week. Thank you." She answered with respect. She was a dedicated worker and knew what it was like to not rest. She allowed one worker to rest for a few hours at a time. She still needed a few to keep an eye on the patients. The workers got more sleep than she did. The worker went into the decontamination chamber and into the glass room where he ate and rested for a couple hours. Dr. Kesha kept a close eye on Olivia. She knew what she meant to Commander Charles. Olivia was ten years old and had the most glorious face. When her eyes are open they are a deep mysterious green. The most beautiful colour Dr. Kesha has ever seen on anyone. Her deep green eyes matched the solid brown hair she had. Olivia's hair was fair and at the length of her shoulders. Dr. Kesha admired her and imagined how she would look when she was grown up. Her imagination made Dr. Kesha more determined to help her. She placed a hand on Olivia's forehead. "I'm going to do my best to make you better, Olivia." She said to her. Even though she was a sleep her conscience could hear her. Olivia is a bright and happy little girl. She had to live. "Charles is going to his best to help me make you better. Just hang in there, Olivia. You're a strong girl, I know you are. Just hang in there." Dr. Kesha stared at her a little while longer and then continued jotting down more notes on her reports. Once she finished, she called one of the nurses to watch Olivia while she toured around the room and did more reports on other patients.
Charles sits at his desk with his face in his hands. A picture of his wife and daughter sits beside his lamp on his desk. They are all happy, living a normal life. He has another picture of his daughter smiling. The resemblance of his daughter and Olivia are very close. The two girls are about the same age. His daughter has her mother's blue eyes and blond hair. There is another picture of him and his wife. His wife was a scientist who was working for Mortever. Apparently, there was an explosion which killed her and 10 other scientists and nurses. It happened when God's House used to be the HeadQuarters. An experiment went wrong and destroyed a section of the building. It was the section his wife was working in. She was studying the reactions of plants and trees with Mako. Charles took a bottle of whisky and a few too many painkillers. His head was hurting him thinking about the tragedy he puts up with in his life. He went through a mental breakdown after his wife had died. He totally lost his reality in life when his daughter died. He found Olivia on the streets of Kasteroam. He took her as his own and found a happier life within the little girl. When he found out she had Leukemia he began to lose it again. Now, they're not sure she's going to survive with Mako and he may breakdown harder than he ever had.
A/N: We are getting closer and closer to the more exciting stuff people. Just so you know everything in this chapter is all that I made up; The Mako Enterprise, Commander Charles, Dr. Kesha, Olivia, Mortever. I hope it's an interesting chapter. It does play a crucial part of the story. So give me some feedback. Is the story idea better than the script idea that I've done for the past 4 chapters?
For some people who seem to not like the names before their quotes I will change. I personally think it's easier to understand what's going on when it's the way I've been going, but it could be more dramatic if it was like an actual story outline. Starting with this chapter I will be using an actual story outline and will fix the previous pages in the summer. I'm not lazy, just don't have the time to put effort into these chapters. Schools almost over and the story will be adjusted.
On a happier note, I am on the verge to writing this story more on a professional level and seeing where it would go. Probably not far. Also, my WebPages. I have created one but it hasn't turned out very well so I've tried many times to cancel it. I'm still going to create a website based on this story though.
Thank you for the reviews and suggestions, sorry this note was long. Keep reading and reviewing. :x
Chapter 5 – God and Heaven's Power
The city of Kasteroam is the biggest city that Mako Enterprise owns. It is where the Head Quarters of the Enterprise used to be. The average building stands 70 stories high (roughly 600 feet). It is the richest city on the planet, along with Mako Enterprise being the richest company on the planet. 10 million people live in the city alone. The biggest building there is, of course, the old Mako Enterprise HeadQuarters building. Since Head Quarters moved to the moon, where Mako's new city exists, the old Head Quarters is now the Second Base of Mako Enterprise called "God's House". All the other companies that M.E. owns communicate with God's House. God's House is the only building HeadQuarters communicates with. The building is not as tall as the average building in Kasteroam, but is longer than any other building. It stands 10 stories high and stretches more than 500 feet long. It is more of a laboratory building. Inside the building are tests done to see if how well Mako supports life. Experiments from Mako versus plants to Mako versus human. 300-year-old plants and trees are grown inside the building and supported by Mako. Sick people who believed to not be able to survive a disease they carry are treated with little bits of Mako. Tests with humans have not yet succeeded entirely. Tests from nature have succeeded more than failed. The walls inside the building are all white in symbolism of God and Heaven's power. The scientists and employees in the building are trying to save the humanity and the earth before it is destroyed.
A man walks through a wide, white corridor with a blue trench coat on. Behind him are scientists and technicians. The group walks through large doors with a sign above that said "Sick Division" and into a glass room. On the other side of the glass room is another white room where people are dressed in Contamination gear to prevent contamination of the diseases that are inside the room. Tons of Men, women and children suffer from their sickness. As the man in the blue trench coats stares through the glass window, he notices a little girl lying in bed. Doctors and scientists surround her. She is dying. She suffers from Leukemia, an unbeaten cancer in which all organs in the body discontinue to function. He watches with determination for her to live. The doctors inject Mako into her. He heard the news of her life threatening to die away. He knew this little girl. He knew many of the patients that lay inside that room. He wanted her to live. The little girl, that was about to die, reminded him of his daughter he lost to heart cancer. He wanted so much to help her but her couldn't. He watches as the doctors move away. One of the doctors enters the decontamination room. The man in the trench coat approaches the woman doctor as she enters the glass room. "How's the experiments coming along, Dr. Kesha?" he asks with determination for improvement. "The results are no different than a month ago. But they are not getting any worse. The Mako energy seems to keep them stable but it's not curing them. We can't have them suffer like this forever. They want to be free from pain, Charles. I've had one request to die. It was Olivia." She replied. She wanted so much for the patients to be healed, but she didn't want them to suffer. "How is Olivia? How much longer does she have?" He asked her. His heart hurt from watching her suffer. He's been seeking more power to try and cure her and the other patients. "Olivia has only a matter of months." With this, Charles' heart fell. He needed more time to find a cure. A tear fell from the corner of his right eye. He then walked out of the room with only the sound of his shoes echoing off the walls. Dr. Kesha watched him in silence. There was nothing she could do. The scientists that were following him to the room followed him out. His assistant walked beside him. She was a bright girl who knew not to interfere with his personal life. She respected him and wanted to help him in every way possible. When she got to her office she talked to a friend of hers who worked in Mako Enterprise HeadQuarters, on the moon. "Hello, Athel? Hi, It's Marah. I just got back from a visitation with Commander Charles. We went to the Sick Division and you know his little friend, Olivia? Yeah, the one who reminds him of his daughter, well, she only has months to live. He's getting very depressed and into an insanity stage. Could you get Sir Mortever to find a way to help." She waited for a reply from her friend. "Thank you so much, Athel. Call me back when you get some feedback from him. Bye." She hung up the phone.
Back at the Sick Division, Dr. Kesha and her crew record information from the patients and try to come up with a better solution. Dr. Kesha is with Olivia, writing down her side effects of Mako and her symptoms of Leukemia. Her workers have been researching and studying for days without sleep. They had the hardest job out of the whole building. They had to stay on top of the patients or the patients would die. A worker approaches Dr. Kesha. "Doctor, I've got some new symptoms from the last couple. Do you need any help with Olivia?" "No, you can rest for a couple hours. You've worked hard for the past week. Thank you." She answered with respect. She was a dedicated worker and knew what it was like to not rest. She allowed one worker to rest for a few hours at a time. She still needed a few to keep an eye on the patients. The workers got more sleep than she did. The worker went into the decontamination chamber and into the glass room where he ate and rested for a couple hours. Dr. Kesha kept a close eye on Olivia. She knew what she meant to Commander Charles. Olivia was ten years old and had the most glorious face. When her eyes are open they are a deep mysterious green. The most beautiful colour Dr. Kesha has ever seen on anyone. Her deep green eyes matched the solid brown hair she had. Olivia's hair was fair and at the length of her shoulders. Dr. Kesha admired her and imagined how she would look when she was grown up. Her imagination made Dr. Kesha more determined to help her. She placed a hand on Olivia's forehead. "I'm going to do my best to make you better, Olivia." She said to her. Even though she was a sleep her conscience could hear her. Olivia is a bright and happy little girl. She had to live. "Charles is going to his best to help me make you better. Just hang in there, Olivia. You're a strong girl, I know you are. Just hang in there." Dr. Kesha stared at her a little while longer and then continued jotting down more notes on her reports. Once she finished, she called one of the nurses to watch Olivia while she toured around the room and did more reports on other patients.
Charles sits at his desk with his face in his hands. A picture of his wife and daughter sits beside his lamp on his desk. They are all happy, living a normal life. He has another picture of his daughter smiling. The resemblance of his daughter and Olivia are very close. The two girls are about the same age. His daughter has her mother's blue eyes and blond hair. There is another picture of him and his wife. His wife was a scientist who was working for Mortever. Apparently, there was an explosion which killed her and 10 other scientists and nurses. It happened when God's House used to be the HeadQuarters. An experiment went wrong and destroyed a section of the building. It was the section his wife was working in. She was studying the reactions of plants and trees with Mako. Charles took a bottle of whisky and a few too many painkillers. His head was hurting him thinking about the tragedy he puts up with in his life. He went through a mental breakdown after his wife had died. He totally lost his reality in life when his daughter died. He found Olivia on the streets of Kasteroam. He took her as his own and found a happier life within the little girl. When he found out she had Leukemia he began to lose it again. Now, they're not sure she's going to survive with Mako and he may breakdown harder than he ever had.
A/N: We are getting closer and closer to the more exciting stuff people. Just so you know everything in this chapter is all that I made up; The Mako Enterprise, Commander Charles, Dr. Kesha, Olivia, Mortever. I hope it's an interesting chapter. It does play a crucial part of the story. So give me some feedback. Is the story idea better than the script idea that I've done for the past 4 chapters?