Disclaimer: I don't own Gilmore Girls, plain and simple.
A/N: This is a short chapter.
From: Bolero()
Ok, you're holding your fic hostage until you get six reviews a chapter? Great, here's hoping I'm the last one you get. First of all, learn how to write a proper sentance. Learn how to fill a plot line. Learn how to write a comprehensive story line. Jumping from POV every other line is more than just annoying, its distracting. Mind you, theres not much worth getting distracted from. You're writing a fic with Tristan in it and you dont even know his last name. It's called research, either do it, or give up. Even better is you stated you don't really like writing Gilmore Girls, I suggest you stop now. Quite frankly... this is the crappest thing I've ever read.
First of all Bolero, learn how to freaking spell and use proper grammar. My sentences are proper. You can't even spell sentence. Second of all, I am filling a plot line and the little "holes" in my storyline are questions that are going to be answered later when you have all the pieces of the puzzle. "Jumping from POV" gives my story variety and different perspectives of my story, and if I got farther on in my story you would understand why I need the different POV's. And Tristan's last name isn't even important. I don't need to do stupid research for my story, it's not gonna follow the Gilmore Girls plot line because how would you differentiate it from the actual story, also that would be plagiarism. And you know what? No one forced you to read this. Quite frankly I would have more respect for your review if you had an account or some stories. You don't even have an account here. If your used to the normal clichéd stories then its not my fault. I don't unhesitatingly acquiesce to writing the same perspective and the same twists and turns as a lot of Gilmore Girls writers. Quite frankly, your review was the crappiest and the stupidest review, I have ever gotten.
Chapter 3~ Trouble brewing
***Rory's POV***
Rory ran not even bothering to look behind her as she made her way to Lane's. She had meant to go back to Tristan, but had surprised herself when she started heading the other way. She stopped dead in her tracks when she heard a voice.
"Baby, put that down. You have no clue where that picture was? Put it down now! Come on, put it down!" the mom yelled. Rory walked up to the woman and helped her release the picture form the boy's clasp.
"Where did you get this?" Rory demanded staring at the picture. "Where did you get this?"
"Sweetie, do you know the man in the picture?" the woman asked. "Sweetie?"
Rory looked at her, confused, and she took off, continuing to Lane's house.
***Jess's POV***
He walked up to the boy and spun him around. "How do you know Rory?" he demanded
"Who are you?" Tristan asked.
"How do you know Rory?" Jess asked again.
"What's it to you lover-boy?" Tristan asked.
"How do you know her?" Jess demanded pushing Tristan.
"She went to my school, weirdo." Tristan retorted.
"Ass!" Jess yelled punching Tristan.
***Lane's POV***
She paced back and forth wondering where she could have dropped it, when she saw Rory running towards her house, holding something in her hand. "What the.." Lane spoke out loud, perplexed.
A/N: Told you it was short, review and tell me what you thought.