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Letty's POV:
"Mia!", I scream as I hold up the halter top she just handed me before walking out of the room. I hear her giggling in the hall quietly before she walks back in the room and smiles innocently at me. "Yes?", she says as she walks into the room and gives me her best innocent look. The one she is always giving her dad to get out of trouble. I hold it up in front of her face and shake my head. "I'm not wearing this," I say as she walks over to her closet and returns with a white mini skirt. She just grins and picks up a pair of white heels off the floor. "Yes. You are," she says, "You want to make a good impression, don't you?"
I hate the way she knows me so well but I still don't say anything. Sometimes I think Dom is the only one who doesn't notice the way I watch him all the time. She leaves the room without asking me anymore questions. I slip out of my clothes and then put on the white mini skirt, the red halter-top she had shown me first and her white heels. I feel so...naked. I stand up and walk slowly over to her full-length mirror. My mouth drops open as I stare at myself in the mirror. I can't leave here looking like this. I look like one of those skanky girls that are constantly hanging all over Dom, Vince and Leon.
I turn around quickly as Mia walks into the room. I roll my eyes as she walks around me looking me over slowly and carefully. "Letty, you look great!" she says as she faces me, "Perfect". I sit down on a chair by her bed and let her do my hair and make up. It takes her almost an hour to finish my hair because she keeps changing her mind about what she wants to do. She finally decides to just leave it down and then we hear Dom and Vince greeting some of the first people to arrive for my party.
I walk downstairs with Mia and outside. Instantly hating all the stares that I start to get from some of the guys around the back door. I look around the backyard only looking for one guy. I finally see him. He's sitting at the picnic table with Cami Tran on his lap. I glare at him for a second before turning to walk into the house and find myself face to face with Hector. "Letty! You look great!" he says before putting his arm around my shoulders and leading me back out into the backyard. I put on a fake smile and let him lead me through my party and away from everyone else. He sits down on a crate and pulls me down onto his lap as he slips his arm possessively around my waist.
I can smell alcohol on his breath and start wandering how much he's had as he pulls me closer to him. "Did you do this all for Dom?" I glance up quickly and look at his face as he moves his hand down to my lap and begins to play with the hem of the skirt. I look away and look back towards the party, watching Dom and Cami. She's still on his lap but now she's kissing his neck too. "Do what for him? Why would I do anything for him?" I whisper back. "Letty, everybody knows you like him," he says before I stand up annoyed. "Shut up, Hector," I say quickly before walking back to the party and sitting between Vince and Leon on the steps.