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The intensity
Training it's an easy word to say but to train like warrior I don't think what we see in Dragonball even come close to expressing how hard it is, Mayuu is about to show them that, they've never really trained before...
We start of at Mayuu home he lay next to his partner staring at her, meeting were coming and the though of the z fighters arrival had excited him it had been so long since his first intense training when he'd just emerged, soon Gohan would be put through the same thing, Mayuu hoped he was ready he had been prepare most of his life for this power since he first met his guide, since the instance he'd met his soul-mate, he knew what was coming he never had a unreasonable fear but now looking at her thinking about his world, he found he'd always feared this day but he also had learned through experience that you can't let fear hold you back, and it was this lesson which is hardest of most to learn.
"Chris?" she said with out turning round. "Yeah" he answered quickly, "what is it?" "it's time for you to go, I'll be at the training point waiting for you" she said softly as she started to rise her bare back glistened in the morning glow, her light hair running the length of her spine, wild and uncontrollable. "thanks I'm sure most of them will appreciate it" he said as he to rose, taking his neatly folded clothes of the chair near the cupboard, got changed and ran slowly to the garden pyramid (running slowly it only took 5 seconds to get there and this is a big place with no lifts much to this annoyance of most of the guests he got) Once there he grabbed the fruit off a tree and took a bite out of it before winking out of this reality.
Goku's house not usually known for its tranquillity was rather peaceful considering Chichi learning of Gohan and Goku's immanent departure had started a screaming match which in the end Goku one. Chichi was not happy. When Krillin turned up early in the morning she nearly went ballistic again but she retain her composure and realising she may have more early guests began work on breakfast. The next fighter to turn up was Piccalo who apparently had been sitting on the roof for a couple of hours, until Gohan noticed him as soon as he woke up. "Chichi i'm hungry please can't I at least have an apple?" said Goku painfully as a growl from his stomach which was accompanied by Tein's arrival. "No Goku you not to have anything till 10 who knows when you'll get fed next, so I want you to eat at late as possible" she replied hastily. "Need a hand chichi?" asked Mayuu sincerely this caused chichi to scream loudly. "I hate it when you do that!" shouted chichi. "Sorry where are my manners" Mayuu faded out, there was a knock at the door Tien answered it to find no one there. "Is that better?" Mayuu asked chichi causing her to scream again this time accompanied by a group of smashing plates. "Guess not, huh?" said Mayuu to him self as he waved his hand and the smashed plates, reformed and flew to the table. "What are you doing here so early?" questioned Goku smiling broadly but trying to hide it from his exasperated wife. "I thought I come by help chichi cook breakfast, so she knows she doesn't have to worry about you starving while you're gone," he replied cheerily, "so what can I do to help?" "Well... you could pour the porridge and they can start on that" she said returning to work. Mayuu took up the bowl and instantly regretted it, burning his hands he poured out the porridge then quickly ran out the house yelling "ow, ow, ow, ow, ow". When he returned their was a sight like that of a confused mental patients painting, Goku was already finished his bowl Gohan was putting what looked like an entire pot of honey into his, Krillin was stuffing his face and Tien was using a fork (Mayuu asked him later why and he replied "it develops patience", to which Mayuu reply "it develops sour milk") chichi had a massive frying pan which she was tossing high into the air while also cooking toast with her feet, Piccalo seen to be sitting on the ceiling and Yamcha must of arrived as he'd ran out the door, he looked completely normal eating his porridge with a spoon with this chaos going on around him. Mayuu once again picked up the bowl and began refilling Goku, Krillin and Gohan's bowls. It was currently half ten so when Vegeta arrived at eleven with Trunks and Bulma it was time to go, they all gathered outside as Mayuu stood waiting for them to say good bye. "So how do we get to this stupid world of yours?" asked Vegeta with a grin. Mayuu ignored the dig and replied "through this" Mayuu gathered his energy and formed a small door the size of a playing card it was made of light, he placed this down on the ground in front of him. "How do you expect to get me through that, I doubt you'd even get Kakarot's brain through that" Vegeta snapped. "Thanks Vegeta, wait..." Goku looked confused and scratched his head, this made everyone laugh. Mayuu smiled grabbed the top edge of the door and pulled (it change size like an object in a drawing program) when it was done it looked like an average pulsating door. One by one the z fighters walked through, "bye guys, train hard ok" said Bulma as all but Mayuu went though. Mayuu eyes flashed, the door was gone in a flash of sparks and he yelled "bye" before disappearing.
Goku having been the first inside the door was the first to exit as the light faded from his eyes Goku looked out on a desolate world crates and ravines filled his view. Vegeta was the next out but because of the light on his eyes he didn't see Goku still standing there and preceded to trip over each other leaving a mangled mess in front of the portal, "for god sake Kakarot get you foot out of my nose, it stinks!" Vegeta thundered. "To bad it wasn't you mouth" said Goku detaching himself form Vegeta but too slowly as Yamcha and Tien both came through at near enough the same time and fell over making an even worse pileup than before. "hey watch it!" yelled Yamcha, "ow, my eye!" popped Tien, "ka-ka-rot!" yelled mumbled Vegeta Goku's foot this time in his mouth. "Sorry Vegeta" Goku said as he took his foot out Vegeta's mouth. Piccalo was next but he knew what happened so tried to jump over them, when Tien suddenly got up knocking Piccalo off balance making him fall on top of them all. Krillin was next but luckily the pile up had worked out what to do and got out of the way in time to prevent another mess Gohan was last and as he exited looking at the dirt and bruises said "no fair you always start without me" the door behind him closed to revel a young woman who had been standing behind the door watching them, she was giggling. "Hi I'm c... Mayuu's soul mate and wife, my name is Talaina" at the end she gave a small curtsey. She was fairly tall slim with, light brown-blond hair tie in two long pig tails (like Ruri from Nadesico). She wore a sleeveless jet black top and a long black skirt, but it was her eyes that caught the z fighters attention they looked warm and full of love, deep blue in colour they seem to stare straight into your soul and make you want to be better...
An arm wrapped around her waist and said "sorry I meant to tell you that once you exit to get out of the way of those behind you" it was Mayuu, he kissed his wife, whispered something in her ear then said "welcome to my stage one training world. Krillin, Tien and Yamcha you'll all train here with Talaina. The rest of you grab on we need to teleport to my stage two training world" "Why can we train there to?" asked Krillin. "Because not to be rude, but your not strong enough yet Talaina will explain more." He spoke but in didn't come out as rude as he thought, luckily. Goku, Piccalo, Vegeta and Gohan grabbed on to Mayuu and with a fleeting kiss to his wife disappeared, Vegeta's only thought was no way is that woman a super-Saya-jin. After their departure Talaina turned to the others and said "listen I know you want to go but Mayuu's right your not strong enough to train at their level yet but if you want to be then lets get started this is one of Mayuu's favourite training grounds because of this" she went over to a small metal pillar on this was a digital dial set to one. (That's right the entire planet was a gravity training room) She turned the dial to two but forgot to change. (The skirt she was wearing was rather loose and as soon as the dial was turned her skirt fell down revealing a pair of lace red knickers, luckily she caught them at her knees and changed into trousers with a flash of her eyes.) No one noticed as they were all to busy with the gravity change. "Okay first of all show me what you've got I'll be your opponent" Talaina said. The guys laughed and Krillin said "listen Mayuu's been really nice to us we really don't pay him back, by beating his wife into a pulp I mean you don't seem very strong" "What you have to learn is that appearances are deceptive." Talaina smiled coolly the same cool smile as Mayuu.
Mayuu landed with the z fighters on stage two he knew that on this world their was extra strong gravity fluctuations, violent volcanic eruptions, time-space distortions, freezing blizzards, explosions and basically it is the most extreme planet he's ever found. "Don't tell me, this pile of scrap is your home world" smirked Vegeta. "Actually this is your new home, welcome to stage two" he retorted. "And there is stage one he said pointing to a black moon in the sky." There was a massive flash and a huge power level appeared from the moon. "What the heck is that it's as strong as me!" bellowed Piccalo. "Most of it is my star," (his pet name for Talaina) "the rest is Krillin, Tien and Yamcha getting their butts whipped because they under-estimated her".
On stage one Talaina was easily playing in the gravity no matter what they did Tien and the others couldn't hit her that is until both Tien and Yamcha used K.O. Ken at the same time punching her into a rocky valley which Krillin blasted with a kamehameha blowing it up. The smoke cleared to reveal her standing completely unscathed in the crater. "you lucky" she said "if I was an android you'd already be dead" she resumed her attack hitting Tien, Yamcha and Krillin squarely with one kick each sending them into the ground next to each other barley able to stand back up. "Well..."she said tauntingly.
"What an amazing fight" Goku said "your wife's quite the little fighter" "Yeah... Now lets begin our training, Goku I think you should teach Gohan how to go super saya-jin, Piccalo will do his own thing as usual and Vegeta how about you and I have a spar?" said Mayuu. "Sure fine by me" he smirked. Just then a large gravity wave hit increasing the gravity to 105.6 times earth's gravity. "What the heck is going on...?" yelled Piccalo as he almost collapsed. "It's a gravity wave they come and go and aren't always that weak." At this all the saya-jins stared at Mayuu as if for the first time, he was showing no strain at all from this immense gravity and they believed what he said.
Next chapters going to be Vegeta versus Mayuu, also Talaina show off her home to the fighters and tells Gohan about how she and Mayuu met. Also I'd like to know what you think of my story give it a review. Please. I need the input.
The intensity
Training it's an easy word to say but to train like warrior I don't think what we see in Dragonball even come close to expressing how hard it is, Mayuu is about to show them that, they've never really trained before...
We start of at Mayuu home he lay next to his partner staring at her, meeting were coming and the though of the z fighters arrival had excited him it had been so long since his first intense training when he'd just emerged, soon Gohan would be put through the same thing, Mayuu hoped he was ready he had been prepare most of his life for this power since he first met his guide, since the instance he'd met his soul-mate, he knew what was coming he never had a unreasonable fear but now looking at her thinking about his world, he found he'd always feared this day but he also had learned through experience that you can't let fear hold you back, and it was this lesson which is hardest of most to learn.
"Chris?" she said with out turning round. "Yeah" he answered quickly, "what is it?" "it's time for you to go, I'll be at the training point waiting for you" she said softly as she started to rise her bare back glistened in the morning glow, her light hair running the length of her spine, wild and uncontrollable. "thanks I'm sure most of them will appreciate it" he said as he to rose, taking his neatly folded clothes of the chair near the cupboard, got changed and ran slowly to the garden pyramid (running slowly it only took 5 seconds to get there and this is a big place with no lifts much to this annoyance of most of the guests he got) Once there he grabbed the fruit off a tree and took a bite out of it before winking out of this reality.
Goku's house not usually known for its tranquillity was rather peaceful considering Chichi learning of Gohan and Goku's immanent departure had started a screaming match which in the end Goku one. Chichi was not happy. When Krillin turned up early in the morning she nearly went ballistic again but she retain her composure and realising she may have more early guests began work on breakfast. The next fighter to turn up was Piccalo who apparently had been sitting on the roof for a couple of hours, until Gohan noticed him as soon as he woke up. "Chichi i'm hungry please can't I at least have an apple?" said Goku painfully as a growl from his stomach which was accompanied by Tein's arrival. "No Goku you not to have anything till 10 who knows when you'll get fed next, so I want you to eat at late as possible" she replied hastily. "Need a hand chichi?" asked Mayuu sincerely this caused chichi to scream loudly. "I hate it when you do that!" shouted chichi. "Sorry where are my manners" Mayuu faded out, there was a knock at the door Tien answered it to find no one there. "Is that better?" Mayuu asked chichi causing her to scream again this time accompanied by a group of smashing plates. "Guess not, huh?" said Mayuu to him self as he waved his hand and the smashed plates, reformed and flew to the table. "What are you doing here so early?" questioned Goku smiling broadly but trying to hide it from his exasperated wife. "I thought I come by help chichi cook breakfast, so she knows she doesn't have to worry about you starving while you're gone," he replied cheerily, "so what can I do to help?" "Well... you could pour the porridge and they can start on that" she said returning to work. Mayuu took up the bowl and instantly regretted it, burning his hands he poured out the porridge then quickly ran out the house yelling "ow, ow, ow, ow, ow". When he returned their was a sight like that of a confused mental patients painting, Goku was already finished his bowl Gohan was putting what looked like an entire pot of honey into his, Krillin was stuffing his face and Tien was using a fork (Mayuu asked him later why and he replied "it develops patience", to which Mayuu reply "it develops sour milk") chichi had a massive frying pan which she was tossing high into the air while also cooking toast with her feet, Piccalo seen to be sitting on the ceiling and Yamcha must of arrived as he'd ran out the door, he looked completely normal eating his porridge with a spoon with this chaos going on around him. Mayuu once again picked up the bowl and began refilling Goku, Krillin and Gohan's bowls. It was currently half ten so when Vegeta arrived at eleven with Trunks and Bulma it was time to go, they all gathered outside as Mayuu stood waiting for them to say good bye. "So how do we get to this stupid world of yours?" asked Vegeta with a grin. Mayuu ignored the dig and replied "through this" Mayuu gathered his energy and formed a small door the size of a playing card it was made of light, he placed this down on the ground in front of him. "How do you expect to get me through that, I doubt you'd even get Kakarot's brain through that" Vegeta snapped. "Thanks Vegeta, wait..." Goku looked confused and scratched his head, this made everyone laugh. Mayuu smiled grabbed the top edge of the door and pulled (it change size like an object in a drawing program) when it was done it looked like an average pulsating door. One by one the z fighters walked through, "bye guys, train hard ok" said Bulma as all but Mayuu went though. Mayuu eyes flashed, the door was gone in a flash of sparks and he yelled "bye" before disappearing.
Goku having been the first inside the door was the first to exit as the light faded from his eyes Goku looked out on a desolate world crates and ravines filled his view. Vegeta was the next out but because of the light on his eyes he didn't see Goku still standing there and preceded to trip over each other leaving a mangled mess in front of the portal, "for god sake Kakarot get you foot out of my nose, it stinks!" Vegeta thundered. "To bad it wasn't you mouth" said Goku detaching himself form Vegeta but too slowly as Yamcha and Tien both came through at near enough the same time and fell over making an even worse pileup than before. "hey watch it!" yelled Yamcha, "ow, my eye!" popped Tien, "ka-ka-rot!" yelled mumbled Vegeta Goku's foot this time in his mouth. "Sorry Vegeta" Goku said as he took his foot out Vegeta's mouth. Piccalo was next but he knew what happened so tried to jump over them, when Tien suddenly got up knocking Piccalo off balance making him fall on top of them all. Krillin was next but luckily the pile up had worked out what to do and got out of the way in time to prevent another mess Gohan was last and as he exited looking at the dirt and bruises said "no fair you always start without me" the door behind him closed to revel a young woman who had been standing behind the door watching them, she was giggling. "Hi I'm c... Mayuu's soul mate and wife, my name is Talaina" at the end she gave a small curtsey. She was fairly tall slim with, light brown-blond hair tie in two long pig tails (like Ruri from Nadesico). She wore a sleeveless jet black top and a long black skirt, but it was her eyes that caught the z fighters attention they looked warm and full of love, deep blue in colour they seem to stare straight into your soul and make you want to be better...
An arm wrapped around her waist and said "sorry I meant to tell you that once you exit to get out of the way of those behind you" it was Mayuu, he kissed his wife, whispered something in her ear then said "welcome to my stage one training world. Krillin, Tien and Yamcha you'll all train here with Talaina. The rest of you grab on we need to teleport to my stage two training world" "Why can we train there to?" asked Krillin. "Because not to be rude, but your not strong enough yet Talaina will explain more." He spoke but in didn't come out as rude as he thought, luckily. Goku, Piccalo, Vegeta and Gohan grabbed on to Mayuu and with a fleeting kiss to his wife disappeared, Vegeta's only thought was no way is that woman a super-Saya-jin. After their departure Talaina turned to the others and said "listen I know you want to go but Mayuu's right your not strong enough to train at their level yet but if you want to be then lets get started this is one of Mayuu's favourite training grounds because of this" she went over to a small metal pillar on this was a digital dial set to one. (That's right the entire planet was a gravity training room) She turned the dial to two but forgot to change. (The skirt she was wearing was rather loose and as soon as the dial was turned her skirt fell down revealing a pair of lace red knickers, luckily she caught them at her knees and changed into trousers with a flash of her eyes.) No one noticed as they were all to busy with the gravity change. "Okay first of all show me what you've got I'll be your opponent" Talaina said. The guys laughed and Krillin said "listen Mayuu's been really nice to us we really don't pay him back, by beating his wife into a pulp I mean you don't seem very strong" "What you have to learn is that appearances are deceptive." Talaina smiled coolly the same cool smile as Mayuu.
Mayuu landed with the z fighters on stage two he knew that on this world their was extra strong gravity fluctuations, violent volcanic eruptions, time-space distortions, freezing blizzards, explosions and basically it is the most extreme planet he's ever found. "Don't tell me, this pile of scrap is your home world" smirked Vegeta. "Actually this is your new home, welcome to stage two" he retorted. "And there is stage one he said pointing to a black moon in the sky." There was a massive flash and a huge power level appeared from the moon. "What the heck is that it's as strong as me!" bellowed Piccalo. "Most of it is my star," (his pet name for Talaina) "the rest is Krillin, Tien and Yamcha getting their butts whipped because they under-estimated her".
On stage one Talaina was easily playing in the gravity no matter what they did Tien and the others couldn't hit her that is until both Tien and Yamcha used K.O. Ken at the same time punching her into a rocky valley which Krillin blasted with a kamehameha blowing it up. The smoke cleared to reveal her standing completely unscathed in the crater. "you lucky" she said "if I was an android you'd already be dead" she resumed her attack hitting Tien, Yamcha and Krillin squarely with one kick each sending them into the ground next to each other barley able to stand back up. "Well..."she said tauntingly.
"What an amazing fight" Goku said "your wife's quite the little fighter" "Yeah... Now lets begin our training, Goku I think you should teach Gohan how to go super saya-jin, Piccalo will do his own thing as usual and Vegeta how about you and I have a spar?" said Mayuu. "Sure fine by me" he smirked. Just then a large gravity wave hit increasing the gravity to 105.6 times earth's gravity. "What the heck is going on...?" yelled Piccalo as he almost collapsed. "It's a gravity wave they come and go and aren't always that weak." At this all the saya-jins stared at Mayuu as if for the first time, he was showing no strain at all from this immense gravity and they believed what he said.
Next chapters going to be Vegeta versus Mayuu, also Talaina show off her home to the fighters and tells Gohan about how she and Mayuu met. Also I'd like to know what you think of my story give it a review. Please. I need the input.