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The Moon Flower
Everyone knows it but no one says it. Deep in the dark forests of Peru is a flower that controls the guider of the night, the moon, and the bewitched ones. The flower is known as the moon flower. The bewitched get their life and power from the black flower. It is protected by the twins, Kinek and Keraven. One protects is by day, Kinek, while the other, Keraven sleeps. By night fall they switch and their powers grow. Travelers, florist and many other people have tried to capture and claim the dark moon flower but none have come back victorious. Actually none have come back at all. They say Craven is the vicious tormenting one, she will kill you swiftly. Kinek is the peaceful one who is patient and loving. She warns the people who try and capture the dark flower of her twin sister Keraven but they never listen. She is always lonely for all her friends by day are killed by her sister Karaven kills at night. This tale will tell on how someone gets a little to close to one of the sisters.
"Why do you even bother Kenny?" Tyson asked eating an apple "No one has ever captured the flower."
"Well I don't want to capture it, I just want to study it," Kenny explained to his friend.
"Oh, well I bet your wasting your time," Tyson chimed.
"Tyson be quiet and let Kenny do whatever he wants," Rae said standing up for Kenny. "Oliver and Enrique will be with him."
"Why?" Tyson asked in a gruff voice.
"Because Max and I will be hiking most of the time, you'll probably be stuffing your face and Kai will be," Rae thought for a moment. "Doing whatever Kai does best."
"And that is?" Tyson asked making a face.
"I'm not sure and I'm not going to be the one to ask either," Rae said with a laugh. "Well Max and I are going to be going now, bye."
"Yah see you guys later," Max said coming out of a room.
"Wait for me, I want to go check out the computers downstairs," Tyson said running up to them.
"You're going to check out computers?" Both Rae and Max asked. "Yah I have a life other than eating," Tyson answered.
"Well who would have thought?" Max said to Rae as they laughed and shut the door.
"Shut up guys," was all you could here from Tyson down the hallway.
"Finally some quiet time. Now all I have to do is meet Enrique and Oliver at the forest," Kenny thought to himself as he got up. "I'll leave Dizzy here so she can get some rest."
Kenny met up with Oliver and Enrique at the beginning of the forest. They were warned many times but they kept on going. When they finally got to the middle of the forest, there was nothing.
"It's supposed to be right there," Kenny told Oliver while pointing at the map.
"Well where can it be?" Oliver said to himself.
"Maybe we should go ask for some directions," Enrique offered. "I'll stay behind and wait for you guys."
"Okay," Kenny said. "That's a great idea."
"Yes, we shouldn't be long," Oliver said turning around. "Now don't get into any trouble." Oliver smiled.
"Yah whatever," Enrique said shrugging the smile and sarcasm off. He got to an open field and saw nothing.
"I wonder how the flower looks anyways." Enrique thought to himself. His eyes were shut. He kept on walking and was so into his thoughts that he didn't notice that the forest got darker. When he finally opened his eyes he noticed he had trailed off.
"Uh oh," Enrique said rubbing his head. "What should I do Amphisbaena?"
"I will guide you but what's that over there?" His bitbeast Amphisbaena responded. Past a few trees and bushes was a black flower. Its nectar looked white and its stem was grown wildly.
"Is that it?' Enrique asked himself. It was. He couldn't believe that he had found the flower. But beside it was a beautiful lady. She had long silky yellow hair. Her skin was beautifully tanned and she had gorgeous orange eyes.
"Um hello?" Enrique said with a stutter. "Who are you?"
"Hello," She said in a pleasant voice. "My name is Kinek, who are you?"
"This must be one of it's protectors," Enrique thought. His eyes darted to her. "But she can't be the evil one. The tales even say so."
"Hi, I'm Enrique," he said in a slick voice.
"Oh hello, will you be my friend?" Kinek asked in a lovely soft voice. "Sure," Enrique answered with a smile. They talked for hours till it got really late and the sun began to go down.
"You must leave now or my sister will kill you," Kinek said to Enrique. Her face filled with fear.
"Ok," Enrique said getting up.
"But please come back tomorrow?" Kinek asked her eyes filled with sorrow.
"She looks so lonely. But it is dangerous to come back," Enrique thought. But he gave in.
"Ok I will come," Enrique said as Kinek smiled and disappeared. Enrique started to walk back but was stopped by another lady. This one had dark blue hair and pale skin. Her dark gray eyes filled with anger. This was Keraven.
"You will leave and never come back or I will kill you!" Keraven yelled. Enrique panicked and started to run.
"Leave, leave, leave!" She screamed at him. He kept running till he came back to the open field and ran into Oliver.
"Where were you?" Oliver asked. He looked angry. "We were worried about you."
"Hurry, let's leave before Keraven comes," Enrique told him.
"You found the flower?" Kenny asked as his eyes sparkled.
"Yes but if we go back Keraven will kill us," Enrique said to them as the sparkle in his eyes disappeared.
"Well let's leave then," Oliver said and Kenny agreed. When they finally got back Enrique told them all what happened. Kenny and the rest were amazed that he survived.
"But why did she let you go?" Rae asked thinking hard.
"Well aren't you glad I'm alive?" Enrique said in sarcasm.
"Yes I am but it's just a mystery," Rae said. "Isn't she the one who kills everyone?"
"Yah she is," Tyson said eating a muffin.
"How would you know?" Max asked putting his hands on his hips.
"Because I read it," Tyson said taking another bite of his muffin. "on the computer."
"Ok...." Max said looking away and was pretty amazed that Tyson actually did something either than eat all day.
"Well you should get some rest," Kenny said to Enrique.
"Yah I guess," Enrique agreed and went to his room. All night all he thought about was Kinek. How beautiful she was and how much he wanted to see her again tomorrow. But then he thought of her sister Keraven and how she would kill him if he went back. He finally decided after three hours of thinking about it that he would go see her again and try and talk to Keraven.
The next day he told the rest of the guys he was going to stay in all day. Around 6:00 o'clock after they were all gone he left. It took him two hours in a half to get there and then he saw Kinek. She was just as beautiful as she was the day before. He walked up to her and tapped her on her shoulder. She quickly turned around.
"What are you doing here?" she asked him in a shocked voice.
"I told you I'd come back," Enrique said with a smile.
"But my sister Keraven told you she would kill you if you came back," Kinek said but then disappeared. Then a tree beside Enrique started to move. He looked at it hard and was about to touch it when it opened. Inside was Keraven. She opened her eyes to Enrique and grinned.
"Why are you back here?" Keraven demanded.
"I want to tell you that I love your sister Kinek," Enrique said in his defense.
"That's too bad because if you don't leave you will get killed," Keraven said pulling out a crystal.
"Well kill me then and take my soul," Enrique argued as he shut his eyes. He waited for pain to fill his body but nothing. He opened his eyes to see Keraven looking at him with a smile.
"But Enrique, I don't kill people," Keraven said deviously.
"What? They said you were vicious," Enrique said now confused and taking small steps back.
"No, she is," Keraven said pointing to her sister Kinek who had an evil smile upon her face. "They must have gotten us mixed up."
Then with a swift spell his soul was trapped into the crystal and then into the dark moon flower and was gone forever.
Whoops, did I also say Keraven was the evil one? Sorry. I must have gotten mixed up to..................
THE END!In the after life.... being killed was the best thing to actually happen to Enrique. In the dark flower he found love with a lovely young lady who was also trapped inside the flower and later both souls were set free.
My names Flaller! How are you? Well I hope you guys liked the story! It was short but I made it all on my computer class time! So yes it may be sloppy because I did it in a hour and 15 mins but please leave a good review! And thanks for the compliments you guys! Oh and I have another story I'll be posting up on Friday! So check that out too! AND I'll be making a part 2 to the Karma story, (it's a main story so it's long) It'll be up hopefully! By next Friday! Ok? Well I gtg now! PLEASE REVIEW!!!!!!!
