HI! Long time no see, but an influx of reviews made me think about writing
again. I have been VERY busy, second semester Jr. Year is uber harsh. But I
want to get on with the story, so I have re read it and am ready to make a
crack at finishing it. You know, I've never actually finished a story.
Let's see if I can do it with this. Summer is right around the corner and I
will try to write more!
Chapter 5
The first full day of classes had finished and every one was tired out from there grueling schedules. Hermione returned to the great hall after dropping her books off in her head girl dorm. She hadn't seen or heard of Draco sense to hot scene in the broom closet (A/N: very hot, if I do say so myself)
Ron was already sitting at his usual seat at the table. He was starting to eat when she arrived. He already had food on Hermione's plate and was trying desperately to reassure himself that he was right to attempt to tell Hermione about his very obvious feelings. The tables didn't have many people sitting at them. Most people were outside because of the wonderful weather.
Hermione had changed into a new outfit, green low riders and a black low cut shirt. And she was defiantly wearing a very padded bra. She sat down and casually looked at Ron who appeared to be deep in prayer with his hands folded and his eyes closed. She glanced at his oddly and started to eat her food. Ron said "Amen" and started to eat. He concentrated at his food as Hermione looked over to the syltherian table to see if Draco was there and she was sad to see he wasn't. Crabbe saw her glancing and grunted and blew a kiss towards her. Hermione winked and licked her lips.
Ron finally got the courage, after a few awkward bits, to look at Hermione and her 'awesome beauty' (AKA her tits). Then he turned away momentarily and looked into a far off direction and started to speak like he was in a Shakespearian soliloquy to Neville who was sitting on his side trying to get peas on to his fork, not very successfully:
"See, how she puts her food upon her mouth!
O that I were a Pea upon that plate,
That I might touch that mouth! This bud of love I doth feel, by school's ripening breath,
May prove a beauteous flower when you next ignore me. But, soft! what light through yonder window breaks?
It is the east, and Hermy is the sun." He pronounced in a love stricken daze!
Hermione heard this entire confession, "Umm, Ron?" Hermione looked over at him. Ron snapped to attention, his body stiffened and his cheeks turned crimson, thinking she had heard his profession of true desire! But he was saved by Jade, who entered the hall at that moment making a large commotion. Hermione turned around quickly to see her cousin/arch enemy, and caught a glimpse of Jade walking arm and arm with Draco through the great hall to the Slytherin table. She did a slow-mo flip of her hair and she and Draco sat down with her back turned to Hermione and Ron. She started to rub his leg as He fed her.
However this isn't want Hermione was in a speechless rage over. Jade was breaking rule number uno of being a girl. SHE WAS WEARING THE SAME OUTFIT AS HERMIONE! To make matters worse, the entire Slytherian table was fawning over her, even though she is really a Gryffindor.
Steam was coming out of Hermione's ears as she saw her new outfit sit down at the Slytherian table. Ron was rubbing her back trying the whisper to Hermione that it wasn't worth it to get mad, but she wasn't having any of it. Jade had gone too far. Hermione got up and walked confidently over to Jade and tapped her on the back. As she did the entire great hall became silent. Jade slowly turned around.
"Hi cuz, wanna join me?" Jade said with a deceptively bitchy tone.
"I think you know why I'm her. Don't pretend like you don't. Who do you think you are, Whore?!?"
Hermione had pushed it too far. Jade go up and stood in front of Hermione's face as the entire Great hall looked on. "I dare you to say that again!" Jade tempted.
Hermione was defiant, "Whore, Whore, Whore, Whore, Whore, Whore-"
"You can stop now!" Jade attempted.
"No I can't... Whore, Whore, Whore, Whore, Whore, Whore, Whore, Whore. Ok, now I'm satisfied."
"FINE!"
"FINE!"
"GO!" shouted Jade at Hermione... "It this happens again you know what'll go down!"
Neville jumped on the table and shouted "CHICK FIGHT!!! WOOO!"
The entire hall fell silent and looked at Neville, you could hear the crickets in the distance.
"Ok, I'll go now" Neville mumbled as he climbed down from the table and walked out of the hall. The crickets continued until he left. Ron finally got the courage to speak up as Hermione and Jade were staring each other down.
"Hermione, we better go now." He attempted with the weakest of convictions.
"Fine Loverboy." Hermione walked over to Ron and planted a kiss on him. Ron almost fainted from excitement as the kiss was occurring. Draco's mouth was open in amazement. Jade looked disgusted. The awkward kiss ended as Hermione look over at Ron. "You know what that means..."
"DANCE BRAKE" They both shouted!
Suddenly Hermione and Ron were on cars like the Mariah Carey "Lover boy" video and they started to sing a duet.
Hermione: I got myself a lover Who loves what I like When he invites me over I come every time Oh my sugar daddy Takes me for a ride Whatever way we're going It's delirium time
He's all mine And his loving makes me high Like a taste of ecstasy All I need is him to be my loverboy
After Hermione's killer verse and awesome car driving tricks Ron came in with the Chorus
Ron: Loverboy Come on and love me Give me more Touch me and touch me I enjoy the way you rock me all night long (Baby all night long) Loverboy come on and take me Only you know how to make me Shudder with anticipation All night long (All night long)
After Ron completed the chorus he and Hermione busted out of the hall and drove their cars to the dormitory leaving the Great Hall as perplexed as they were when Neville yelled "Chick Fight"
END
Not that great but I really need to get back into the groove of writing.
Review!
Lil p
Chapter 5
The first full day of classes had finished and every one was tired out from there grueling schedules. Hermione returned to the great hall after dropping her books off in her head girl dorm. She hadn't seen or heard of Draco sense to hot scene in the broom closet (A/N: very hot, if I do say so myself)
Ron was already sitting at his usual seat at the table. He was starting to eat when she arrived. He already had food on Hermione's plate and was trying desperately to reassure himself that he was right to attempt to tell Hermione about his very obvious feelings. The tables didn't have many people sitting at them. Most people were outside because of the wonderful weather.
Hermione had changed into a new outfit, green low riders and a black low cut shirt. And she was defiantly wearing a very padded bra. She sat down and casually looked at Ron who appeared to be deep in prayer with his hands folded and his eyes closed. She glanced at his oddly and started to eat her food. Ron said "Amen" and started to eat. He concentrated at his food as Hermione looked over to the syltherian table to see if Draco was there and she was sad to see he wasn't. Crabbe saw her glancing and grunted and blew a kiss towards her. Hermione winked and licked her lips.
Ron finally got the courage, after a few awkward bits, to look at Hermione and her 'awesome beauty' (AKA her tits). Then he turned away momentarily and looked into a far off direction and started to speak like he was in a Shakespearian soliloquy to Neville who was sitting on his side trying to get peas on to his fork, not very successfully:
"See, how she puts her food upon her mouth!
O that I were a Pea upon that plate,
That I might touch that mouth! This bud of love I doth feel, by school's ripening breath,
May prove a beauteous flower when you next ignore me. But, soft! what light through yonder window breaks?
It is the east, and Hermy is the sun." He pronounced in a love stricken daze!
Hermione heard this entire confession, "Umm, Ron?" Hermione looked over at him. Ron snapped to attention, his body stiffened and his cheeks turned crimson, thinking she had heard his profession of true desire! But he was saved by Jade, who entered the hall at that moment making a large commotion. Hermione turned around quickly to see her cousin/arch enemy, and caught a glimpse of Jade walking arm and arm with Draco through the great hall to the Slytherin table. She did a slow-mo flip of her hair and she and Draco sat down with her back turned to Hermione and Ron. She started to rub his leg as He fed her.
However this isn't want Hermione was in a speechless rage over. Jade was breaking rule number uno of being a girl. SHE WAS WEARING THE SAME OUTFIT AS HERMIONE! To make matters worse, the entire Slytherian table was fawning over her, even though she is really a Gryffindor.
Steam was coming out of Hermione's ears as she saw her new outfit sit down at the Slytherian table. Ron was rubbing her back trying the whisper to Hermione that it wasn't worth it to get mad, but she wasn't having any of it. Jade had gone too far. Hermione got up and walked confidently over to Jade and tapped her on the back. As she did the entire great hall became silent. Jade slowly turned around.
"Hi cuz, wanna join me?" Jade said with a deceptively bitchy tone.
"I think you know why I'm her. Don't pretend like you don't. Who do you think you are, Whore?!?"
Hermione had pushed it too far. Jade go up and stood in front of Hermione's face as the entire Great hall looked on. "I dare you to say that again!" Jade tempted.
Hermione was defiant, "Whore, Whore, Whore, Whore, Whore, Whore-"
"You can stop now!" Jade attempted.
"No I can't... Whore, Whore, Whore, Whore, Whore, Whore, Whore, Whore. Ok, now I'm satisfied."
"FINE!"
"FINE!"
"GO!" shouted Jade at Hermione... "It this happens again you know what'll go down!"
Neville jumped on the table and shouted "CHICK FIGHT!!! WOOO!"
The entire hall fell silent and looked at Neville, you could hear the crickets in the distance.
"Ok, I'll go now" Neville mumbled as he climbed down from the table and walked out of the hall. The crickets continued until he left. Ron finally got the courage to speak up as Hermione and Jade were staring each other down.
"Hermione, we better go now." He attempted with the weakest of convictions.
"Fine Loverboy." Hermione walked over to Ron and planted a kiss on him. Ron almost fainted from excitement as the kiss was occurring. Draco's mouth was open in amazement. Jade looked disgusted. The awkward kiss ended as Hermione look over at Ron. "You know what that means..."
"DANCE BRAKE" They both shouted!
Suddenly Hermione and Ron were on cars like the Mariah Carey "Lover boy" video and they started to sing a duet.
Hermione: I got myself a lover Who loves what I like When he invites me over I come every time Oh my sugar daddy Takes me for a ride Whatever way we're going It's delirium time
He's all mine And his loving makes me high Like a taste of ecstasy All I need is him to be my loverboy
After Hermione's killer verse and awesome car driving tricks Ron came in with the Chorus
Ron: Loverboy Come on and love me Give me more Touch me and touch me I enjoy the way you rock me all night long (Baby all night long) Loverboy come on and take me Only you know how to make me Shudder with anticipation All night long (All night long)
After Ron completed the chorus he and Hermione busted out of the hall and drove their cars to the dormitory leaving the Great Hall as perplexed as they were when Neville yelled "Chick Fight"
END
Not that great but I really need to get back into the groove of writing.
Review!
Lil p