a/n: sorry it took me so long to update...here's Chapter 2 without further
ado...I'll talk afterwards lol.
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Chapter 2: The Story Begins
"I suppose you're probably wondering why I, Draco Lucius Malfoy, am holding hands with Harry James Potter. You want the real story, do you? Actually the real question is, do you have the time? I guess it all started about two years ago, back in the beginning of 7th year, before both of our lives changed forever. And the story begins..."
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a/n: Ahhh I know it's short!! Sorry!! *hides* But I am just trying to link the next chapter to the 1st one because I completely changed my whole idea for this story. I edited chapter 1 and reposted it so it might be a good idea to reread it. I suffered major writer's block this past week and I couldn't decide what to do next, but then on our way to Detroit and back, it all came to me lol. Originally, my idea was just to write that first chapter and stop, but eh I actually liked it and everyone seemed to, too. The 1st chapter was written at about 11:00 at night in my bed because I was listening to "Love Bites" and all of a sudden I saw the whole hospital scene and heard Draco's thoughts and feelings so I grabbed a piece of paper and wrote the whole chapter. Alright now about Draco's middle name that I have chosen, ok now I know we haven't found out what Draco's real middle name is but personally I love Draco Lucius Malfoy so that's what I decided lol.
I got 11 reviews for the last chapter!! Ahhh thanks to all of you!! *huggles all of them!* Now for the thank-yous and I have a ton so here ya go:
First of all, I want to thank my beta reader, Theresa Vo, for helping to edit chapter 1 and for sticking beside me on this one...love ya lots!!
Emma Barrows: My first review!!! Wee! Lol thanks a lot and I will for sure check out your story too!!
Lil'Eowyn: lol!! And yes the tables have turned and next time you will be at the top of this reviewer list as I am on yours, but someone beat you to being the first reviewer so I had to put her up there since she was so honorable!! Yet you are second so I still love ya!! Lol...and you better update soon!! You actually inspired me to hurry up and update, since I've been bugging you about you updating and then you emailing me about updating mine so yeah!! Oh everyone should sooo check out her stories esp. one of my favs: "If these walls could talk" it's another Harry/Draco!! Beautiful story!! Yay!! HARRY/DRACO FOREVER :D!!
Liene: hey sis...that's real tight that you can finally read my stories...and besides a lot of this story came from inspirations of our ideas about Harry/Draco so yeah...I would count this as almost half yours!! Almost...lol! Anyway ttyl luv ya!!
Cheetah: You're review made me almost blush...you seemed so happy and everything!! Thanks!! Keep reading!! Glad you love it!
Keladrey Vern: Thanks...and I know it is very poetic...which actually makes sense because I am extremely poetic all the time so yeah there will be PLENTY of poetic elements in this...and the song was "Love Bites" by Def Leppard by the way. And I will write more I promise!! Thanks for reviewing!!
Janet: short but sweet review and you will soon find out where it is going ;) thanks!!
Ms. Orlando Bloom: First of all, I must say, wonderful name :D lol...I love Orlando Bloom...VERY HOT!! Thanks for the review and yes sorry about all the grammar errors...it was really late at night and I was so eager to get it on the site that I didn't revise it until afterwards, which is why I reposted it and it's all fixed and better lol :D keep reading!!
Ice: thanks for the review and I will update!! :D keep reading!!
the counter: Alright this has to be the stupidest review I have ever received:
13/25 stories on this page are romances. That suggests that the Harry Potter Fanfiction Writers are horny weirdos with no life. Help fight this preduce!
Alright, first of all, did you even bother to read my story? Because if you did, you would have seen that I have absolutely NO sexual references or anything in it, at least in Chapter 1, so you had no right to just judge the story like that and besides it IS a romance because it's about love you idiot! And who cares if 13/25 stories are romances on the page?? Romance is very complex and usually is a great style of writing especially when using two juxtaposition characters like Harry Potter and Draco Malfoy, so yeah. And it doesn't mean that they are horny weirdos with no life because it just means they have a passion for writing romance so fuck off!! Next time before you judge, maybe you should read and find out first!!
Lady S: Well I am pleased to tell you that yes, there will be more :D so smile and be happy~Harry/Draco will not end here!! Keep reading and thanks for the review!!
JadeDawn: lol your review made me laugh and you will for sure find out what happens!! :D I know how you feel because I know that when I find a story that I like and the writer doesn't continue, that I get pushy too ^_^ so it's fine don't worry lol thanks for the review and keep reading!!
THANKS TO ALL REVIEWERS!! *hugs each reviewer one more time tightly!!* More Love Bites coming soon!!!!!
Love, Pat
P.S.- If any of you have aol, aim, yahoo, or msn, or want to email me, my screen names and email are below:
Aol/Aim: hpobsession33
MSN Messenger: Harry_James_Potter33@hotmail.com
Yahoo Messenger: hpobsession33
Email: Harry_James_Potter33@hotmail.com
~*~*~
Chapter 2: The Story Begins
"I suppose you're probably wondering why I, Draco Lucius Malfoy, am holding hands with Harry James Potter. You want the real story, do you? Actually the real question is, do you have the time? I guess it all started about two years ago, back in the beginning of 7th year, before both of our lives changed forever. And the story begins..."
~*~*~
a/n: Ahhh I know it's short!! Sorry!! *hides* But I am just trying to link the next chapter to the 1st one because I completely changed my whole idea for this story. I edited chapter 1 and reposted it so it might be a good idea to reread it. I suffered major writer's block this past week and I couldn't decide what to do next, but then on our way to Detroit and back, it all came to me lol. Originally, my idea was just to write that first chapter and stop, but eh I actually liked it and everyone seemed to, too. The 1st chapter was written at about 11:00 at night in my bed because I was listening to "Love Bites" and all of a sudden I saw the whole hospital scene and heard Draco's thoughts and feelings so I grabbed a piece of paper and wrote the whole chapter. Alright now about Draco's middle name that I have chosen, ok now I know we haven't found out what Draco's real middle name is but personally I love Draco Lucius Malfoy so that's what I decided lol.
I got 11 reviews for the last chapter!! Ahhh thanks to all of you!! *huggles all of them!* Now for the thank-yous and I have a ton so here ya go:
First of all, I want to thank my beta reader, Theresa Vo, for helping to edit chapter 1 and for sticking beside me on this one...love ya lots!!
Emma Barrows: My first review!!! Wee! Lol thanks a lot and I will for sure check out your story too!!
Lil'Eowyn: lol!! And yes the tables have turned and next time you will be at the top of this reviewer list as I am on yours, but someone beat you to being the first reviewer so I had to put her up there since she was so honorable!! Yet you are second so I still love ya!! Lol...and you better update soon!! You actually inspired me to hurry up and update, since I've been bugging you about you updating and then you emailing me about updating mine so yeah!! Oh everyone should sooo check out her stories esp. one of my favs: "If these walls could talk" it's another Harry/Draco!! Beautiful story!! Yay!! HARRY/DRACO FOREVER :D!!
Liene: hey sis...that's real tight that you can finally read my stories...and besides a lot of this story came from inspirations of our ideas about Harry/Draco so yeah...I would count this as almost half yours!! Almost...lol! Anyway ttyl luv ya!!
Cheetah: You're review made me almost blush...you seemed so happy and everything!! Thanks!! Keep reading!! Glad you love it!
Keladrey Vern: Thanks...and I know it is very poetic...which actually makes sense because I am extremely poetic all the time so yeah there will be PLENTY of poetic elements in this...and the song was "Love Bites" by Def Leppard by the way. And I will write more I promise!! Thanks for reviewing!!
Janet: short but sweet review and you will soon find out where it is going ;) thanks!!
Ms. Orlando Bloom: First of all, I must say, wonderful name :D lol...I love Orlando Bloom...VERY HOT!! Thanks for the review and yes sorry about all the grammar errors...it was really late at night and I was so eager to get it on the site that I didn't revise it until afterwards, which is why I reposted it and it's all fixed and better lol :D keep reading!!
Ice: thanks for the review and I will update!! :D keep reading!!
the counter: Alright this has to be the stupidest review I have ever received:
13/25 stories on this page are romances. That suggests that the Harry Potter Fanfiction Writers are horny weirdos with no life. Help fight this preduce!
Alright, first of all, did you even bother to read my story? Because if you did, you would have seen that I have absolutely NO sexual references or anything in it, at least in Chapter 1, so you had no right to just judge the story like that and besides it IS a romance because it's about love you idiot! And who cares if 13/25 stories are romances on the page?? Romance is very complex and usually is a great style of writing especially when using two juxtaposition characters like Harry Potter and Draco Malfoy, so yeah. And it doesn't mean that they are horny weirdos with no life because it just means they have a passion for writing romance so fuck off!! Next time before you judge, maybe you should read and find out first!!
Lady S: Well I am pleased to tell you that yes, there will be more :D so smile and be happy~Harry/Draco will not end here!! Keep reading and thanks for the review!!
JadeDawn: lol your review made me laugh and you will for sure find out what happens!! :D I know how you feel because I know that when I find a story that I like and the writer doesn't continue, that I get pushy too ^_^ so it's fine don't worry lol thanks for the review and keep reading!!
THANKS TO ALL REVIEWERS!! *hugs each reviewer one more time tightly!!* More Love Bites coming soon!!!!!
Love, Pat
P.S.- If any of you have aol, aim, yahoo, or msn, or want to email me, my screen names and email are below:
Aol/Aim: hpobsession33
MSN Messenger: Harry_James_Potter33@hotmail.com
Yahoo Messenger: hpobsession33
Email: Harry_James_Potter33@hotmail.com