Red: Hey peoples! I'd like to do the review responses now! This chappie is
based on my poem, death. (which I own!) Oh yeah, sorry for Hiei being ooc.
Disclaimer: Red does not own anything besides the poem and plot of story.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hiei hater # 34: I know killing off my friend was wrong, but it was for the sake of the plot! Besides, it wasn't a one-shot. She will be reincarnated in this chappie, ^-^
Darkangel27: Thankies!
Nikaru: Thank You! The only reason I needed three reviews was because I wanted to see if people wanted to leave it a one-shot, or to continue the story, but thanks for the tip just the same!
?????ionno?????: Thankies! ^_^
Julianna-Fizzerald: ^_^ I'm glad you like the lyrics! Thank you!
Tique: Was that supposed to be a flame? Please! My sister makes better insults then that! T_T
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Hiei felt tears flow from his eyes. He hopped into the tree outside her window. Hiei watched the ambulance take the body away. It had been two hours since Karen's suicidal death. He called the hospital and told them what had happened.
//As twilight arrives, hunger thrives, a starvation with passion, lingers in my pathetic soul, while I grow tiered weary and old,//
Hiei ran to Koenma's castle. Tear gems falling down to the ground. He was going to find out if he could revive Karen. 'He must say yes!' he thought. "Please Koenma if you can hear me, take her in to live again!" he said quietly to himself.
//As the sensation of death creeps near, it controls my movements, it stalks my body and ruins my thoughts, and look at the gifts death has brought,//
When he arrived, Koenma was standing over a new-coming soul. "Koenma!" Hiei shouted. He raced to see the in-coming soul was Karen. As she slowly opened her eyes she frowned. "You again? Leave me alone! You were the one who got me into this mess!" she said averting his gaze.
// It makes us delusional, see obstacles that aren't really there, as we wonder of these things, it gets closer, sending shivers down our spine//
Hiei felt more tears arrive at the corners of his crimson red eyes. "Karen, I'm sorry, please don't hate me!" he said. Karen raised an eyebrow. "Why do you think I hate you? You already know I love you ya baka. Remember? Then you turned me down, cruelly, and coldly." She said remembering the incident.
// the pleasure it receives for stealing our souls, can never be compared, so as we wait for death to claim us, we think about only fear, death may be good for some, for others a curse,//
She clenched her fists tightly as Hiei looked at his feet. 'Why can't I just tell the baka onna?' he thought. He looked up again and took a deep breath. "I'm s-s-sorry, and I do l-l-l-love you. Ai s-s-s-shiteru Karen." He said. Karen gasped. "Then why did you....?" Karen trailed off.
// When you experience death, tell me, what is worse?//
"Then why did you turn me down?" she finished. Hiei looked at his feet. "Because, believe it or not, I was scared. Scared to admit I believed in human emotion." He said sadly. She smiled. Koenma coughed and began to speak. "Karen, as it seams, you are wanted back on Earth by many so, we will revive you."
// Life in the dark, no warmth for our souls, or death in the light, were there is no time? You can live forever if it weren't for the fact, that death I death, it is fate, fate cannot be changed.//
Karen felt her spirits lift happily as she threw her arms around Hiei's neck. "Thank you Koenma-sama!" she shouted with a smile. Hiei took the information well and gave a small smile. "Come on Hiei. Let's go home!" she said taking his hand. Little did they know, the body was already buried.....
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`` Red: oh cliffhanger! Should I continue or ne? Tell me in the review!
Karen: Well, at least I'm gonna be revived!
Red: Yep! Oh Yeah! Happy Birthday Karen! ^-^ See ya later ppls!
Disclaimer: Red does not own anything besides the poem and plot of story.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hiei hater # 34: I know killing off my friend was wrong, but it was for the sake of the plot! Besides, it wasn't a one-shot. She will be reincarnated in this chappie, ^-^
Darkangel27: Thankies!
Nikaru: Thank You! The only reason I needed three reviews was because I wanted to see if people wanted to leave it a one-shot, or to continue the story, but thanks for the tip just the same!
?????ionno?????: Thankies! ^_^
Julianna-Fizzerald: ^_^ I'm glad you like the lyrics! Thank you!
Tique: Was that supposed to be a flame? Please! My sister makes better insults then that! T_T
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Hiei felt tears flow from his eyes. He hopped into the tree outside her window. Hiei watched the ambulance take the body away. It had been two hours since Karen's suicidal death. He called the hospital and told them what had happened.
//As twilight arrives, hunger thrives, a starvation with passion, lingers in my pathetic soul, while I grow tiered weary and old,//
Hiei ran to Koenma's castle. Tear gems falling down to the ground. He was going to find out if he could revive Karen. 'He must say yes!' he thought. "Please Koenma if you can hear me, take her in to live again!" he said quietly to himself.
//As the sensation of death creeps near, it controls my movements, it stalks my body and ruins my thoughts, and look at the gifts death has brought,//
When he arrived, Koenma was standing over a new-coming soul. "Koenma!" Hiei shouted. He raced to see the in-coming soul was Karen. As she slowly opened her eyes she frowned. "You again? Leave me alone! You were the one who got me into this mess!" she said averting his gaze.
// It makes us delusional, see obstacles that aren't really there, as we wonder of these things, it gets closer, sending shivers down our spine//
Hiei felt more tears arrive at the corners of his crimson red eyes. "Karen, I'm sorry, please don't hate me!" he said. Karen raised an eyebrow. "Why do you think I hate you? You already know I love you ya baka. Remember? Then you turned me down, cruelly, and coldly." She said remembering the incident.
// the pleasure it receives for stealing our souls, can never be compared, so as we wait for death to claim us, we think about only fear, death may be good for some, for others a curse,//
She clenched her fists tightly as Hiei looked at his feet. 'Why can't I just tell the baka onna?' he thought. He looked up again and took a deep breath. "I'm s-s-sorry, and I do l-l-l-love you. Ai s-s-s-shiteru Karen." He said. Karen gasped. "Then why did you....?" Karen trailed off.
// When you experience death, tell me, what is worse?//
"Then why did you turn me down?" she finished. Hiei looked at his feet. "Because, believe it or not, I was scared. Scared to admit I believed in human emotion." He said sadly. She smiled. Koenma coughed and began to speak. "Karen, as it seams, you are wanted back on Earth by many so, we will revive you."
// Life in the dark, no warmth for our souls, or death in the light, were there is no time? You can live forever if it weren't for the fact, that death I death, it is fate, fate cannot be changed.//
Karen felt her spirits lift happily as she threw her arms around Hiei's neck. "Thank you Koenma-sama!" she shouted with a smile. Hiei took the information well and gave a small smile. "Come on Hiei. Let's go home!" she said taking his hand. Little did they know, the body was already buried.....
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`` Red: oh cliffhanger! Should I continue or ne? Tell me in the review!
Karen: Well, at least I'm gonna be revived!
Red: Yep! Oh Yeah! Happy Birthday Karen! ^-^ See ya later ppls!