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Story Weaver1: The sibling rivalry is inspired by my evil little sister, and me. Although this is NOT a self insert, just a bit of sisterly fun! Maybe there might be StitchAngel stuff later...wink wink Thank you for the review!
DanMat6288: Okay, I get it. You voiced your opinion, but the chapter's ain't gonna change. Thank you for the review! (Or verbal beating, I don't know which -.-)
Koriku: Thank you!!! I try to write the best of my abilities, I'm glad people notice! Writing in character is pretty hard, but I enjoy it. Sometimes, when I'm writing a long Jumba or Jakee part, I start to talk like them! . Thanks for the review!
Tyler Buckland: Aww! I will continue this! And thankies for the review!!!
Okay! Jakee, care to do the honors?
JAKEE: Lilo and Stitch are not belonging to Kixstana. So all Lawyers go take short walk off of long pier.
Don't you mean...?
JAKEE: Oh yes! Shimmer is my creation, but is belonging to Kixstana!
Oy. .-
Kokaua Town Beach
9:00 P.M.
Yes, Yes. All was going according to plan. My beautiful creation, with the help of Gantu's captured experiments, were running a muck!
I was well aware that it was nighttime, and we would have to retire to bed soon, but I was having too much fun!
Our first priority was to gather up all the experiments-gone-good and turn them back to evil. The chip I implanted into 624 was giving me total control of her mind. Of course she could still think for herself, but she had no will power!
I cackled as I watched the ignorant humans run in fear. Such weaklings. They didn't even try to save themselves. This race would be simple to conquer.
Ah, we were on the beach. 624 then lead us to a strange purple experiment with four arms. He was obviously male. Perfect.
Turning a dial on my controller, I commanded 624 to take the sneaky route.
She smoothed out her fur and sauntered up to him, "Gabugi, Kixx."
Interesting. Her memory bank still stored the names of all the experiments that she had changed. This would be even easier than I thought.
The purple experiment stopped attacking a bag long enough to glance and wave, "Hya! Angel!" He grinned in ignorance.
Batting her eyes, she held on one of his many arms and sang:
Acoota Chimeeto,
Egata Nomootah,
Naga Te Nala,
Echube Teduca.
I could tell the spell was working on him, for his cheerful face had become a scowl. He was a valuable recruit, for we needed some muscle.
"Excellent 624. Now, we seemed to have gathered most of the formally good ones. Now let us see...." I thought for a moment when a paper hit me in the face.
Curse my height.
I peeled it off and stared at the header.
CRIME SPREE CROOKS WILL BE SPRUNG
Below the header, were pictures of......experiments? One was a green female, the other a yellow male. I skimmed the print and found out that the two would be released for good behavior.
Yech. We'll soon change that!
I leaped onto the purple ones back, and pointed to the town jail. We were going to bust out those two, and turn them back to evil. Whether they liked it or not.
When we arrived, I jumped onto the ground and used one of my high-tech binoculars to scan the area for their body signatures. What luck, they were on the first floor, right in front of us!
Ordering 'Kixx' to punch the wall, I stepped back and watched him work. With only three impacts, the structure collapsed.
I peered inside, and spotted the two staring at the hole in the wall. The male had growled and his mechanical arm turned into a laser. He pointed it at us while standing protectively in front of the female.
The green experiment poked her head out from behind him, "Look bubs, we don't wants any troubles, a'ight?"
Pfft. I rolled all four of my eyes and snapped my fingers. 624 bounded into the cell and sang once more. This time it had an interesting effect.
The male fell under it instantly, but the female, she just raised a brow and crossed her arms. "Nice pipes toots, but me and Clyde don't fall for cheap lullaby's. Right big guy?"
She looked up at him expectantly. A worried frown appeared, "Clyde? Yello? Youse still home?" She waved a paw in his face, yet got no reaction.
"Interesting. I thought it was only for the hair eater, but 624's song doesn't seem to affect you either."
624 giggled flirtatiously and grabbed the yellow males arm. He had a stupid grin on his face and followed her out like an obedient puppy.
The green one stood shocked, "Huh?" Trying to hide her disappointment, she shook her fist at us as we left, "OH YEAH! Well youse can take the crummy balooka! He ain't nuthin' but trouble! Youse joiks!"
I lifted a note pad and pencil out of my pocket, and scribbled her description down. It was a list of all the experiments that were not affected by 624's song. So far I had; the yellow hair eater, the gray dog- like barker, the blue water sprayer, and the green criminal.
I pondered at this turn of events. They all had something in common, but what? As we trudged along to a slushy stand I couldn't help but feel that these resisting experiments, were not just a coincidence.
Lilo's House
8:30 A.M.
It was cold and lonely in the laundry basket. I missed Shimmer. The way she used to snuggle up to me....
Whoa! Waaaaaaay off topic here! The point was that I was sleeping in a laundry basket!
It was getting to late and all we could do was see if Jakee could build the stupid ray remember thingy. So I vouched we went to bed.
I got the laundry basket.
The little tyke and 626 went to sleep in their room, since it was their house n' all. Doc and the noodle went into their room, while Shim and Jakee shared the big girls room.
Turn's out she wasn't home.
They left and I tried to get Shim to sleep with me. (Not in that way sicko's!) But she nearly bit my arm off!
So here I was, way to early in the mourning, awake. In a laundry basket. With no sandwiches. And the babe was mad at me. Perfect mourning to a perfect predicament.
Having nothing to do, I got up to see if they had any sandwich stuff. I walked into the kitchen, but all they had in the cupboards was canned ravioli. Ah well, it was better than nothing.
I spooned it out and walked into the living room, just to drop my can. In the room were four chick experiments layin' around the couch. And in the middle of it all was Shimmer.
"What the heck is going on here!?"
They woke up in a flash, each looking for some sort of monster or something. I guess I did yell kinda loud.
Shimmer jumped up and had her claws out, growling in my direction. She stopped and stared, then realized it was me, and began to growl again.
A green one that came up to my chest, rolled up the fur on her arm. "Hey, dis da guy that's been buggin' youse Shim?"
She scratched her head in confusion. "Uh, yes."
The rest of the girls got up and cornered me. Normally I'd like it, except they all had scowls.
"Laidies, Ladies, I'm sure we can work something out?"
I doubted it.
A sharp whistle came from the doorway, and Jakee was standing there wearing a bathrobe and an angry look on her face. Picking up each of them up, she placed them all in a row on the couch.
"Now that ve are all comfy-like, vill you qvit all the noisy making!?"
She pulled on her hair and I could tell she was majorly stressing. There were small rings under her eyes and her already frizzy hair was a mess.
Shimmer's ears flopped down and she crawled over to where Jakee was standing. She led her to a recliner chair and patted her arm.
Smiling at the Shim, the purple bounty hunter cleared her throat. "Okay, vhy are you all being here?"
A blue experiment that had tentacles sloshed up to speak for them. Her strange bubbly voice was hard to understand, but I could catch what she was saying.
"That strange pink experiment came and tried to turn us to evil. Yin fell under the spell, but I did not. Why is this?" she scratched her head with a tentacle.
Jakee rubbed two of her eyes and sighed, "Just as I vas to be thinking. My little pimple of a sister started to be changing the males."
A yellow ball of hair jumped up and chirped, "Why didn't it bother us? Huh, huh, huh?"
Oh goody, a hyper active clipper. Just what we needed. Not only was she annoying, but blonde too.
I rolled my eyes and slapped my forehead. "Ain't it obvious fuzzy? You are girls; the ones sweet-cheeks took were guys! Her song don't work on you!"
The little fuzz ball stopped bouncing around and began to sniffle. A weird little dog-like-thing came up and patted her on the back.
"SWEET CHEEKS!!!???"
Uh oh. I think I made her...........
I turned around just to see a green blur come strait at me. Holding up my arms for protection, I tensed and waited for the pain.
But it never came.
"Ya ya ya! Keep pulling, do not let her being escaping!"
Instead I heard her growling right in my ear. Opening one of my eyes, I was looking strait into her mouth. Holding her back was Stitch and his family. They could barely hold her.
"YOU KNEW ABOUT HER AND YOU DIDN'T TELL ME!? WHAT ELSE HAVE YOU LIED ABOUT, HUH!? WHAT ELSE HAVEN'T YOU TOLD MEEEE!?"
Shimmer was trying to claw at me, and she had tears in her eyes. I felt like a real heel then. I should have told her in the beginning.
"You lied, you lied...." She moaned in between sobs. Looking away from me, she curled up into a little ball, and Jumba was holding her in his hands.
"I am thinking, you have done enough."
All the girl experiments crowded around her, and I heard the random 'We'll get him for ya' and 'Please don't cry'.
Jakee walked up behind me and patted my shoulder. "Maybe you should come and help me vith the remembering ray."
She pulled my arm gently and I was dragged away from Shimmer's sobbing body.
When she stopped, I was in for it.
Yellow boy vas very much vorried.
The poor little creature paced around-and-round the room vhile I vas trying to vork on the remembrance-ray. He kept looking at door like 624 vas going to jump in and tear him limb from limb!
HAHA! Oh no, vait. That vould be a bad thing.
Bounty hunter habits are to be dying hard.
I vas turning knob on ray vhen I felt furry paw on my thigh.
"Uh, Jakee? You know Shimmer, right? She won't stay mad for long, will she?" He twiddled his thumbs.
"624 vas for to be a protector of the universe. I did not specifically-like design her feelings. If she had any, it vas to be her choice."
His ears drooped lower than they already vere being. I patted his head to comfort him.
"But, do not to be vorrying, 625. If she is normal female, she vill be forgiving in.....vhen ever you are to be apologizing like you never have before! Hehe!"
"Hey! It ain't funny!"
Coughing to cover up laughing, I put on strait face. "I know, 625, but you must learn. Every base like structure for relationships is communication."
He nodded his head, "Right, right......" they his eyes popped open, "WHAT!? Relationship? Hey, I know what you're thinking, but me an Shim got nuthin going on between us!"
"Uh huh......."
I could be telling he did not believe my answer. It vas to be made unbelievable.
"If you are not in relationy-ship, then how come you are to being fighting over her vith other males."
His little eyes videned, "She told you about that, huh?"
"Oh yes. She tells me everything. I am like a mothery-thing to her. We have a certain bondage."
"Uhh, did she tell you anything.....embarrassing?"
I looked into the barrel of ray gun, then scrunched my face. I vas not to be thinking that I had heard anything humiliating. Not that I could be remembering.
"No."
His yellow face brightened again, and he smiled. "Few! Anyway, do you think this ray'll really work?"
I vas about to answer, when a bright light flashed in my eyes and I felt my toes and fingers tingle. I think I vas screaming, but I could not tell. All I heard when I vas falling was 625 shouting my name.
I soon voke up to a yellow hand waving in front of my eyes. My head vas throbbing, and hurt like dickens. My fingers still vere tingling, and I sat up.
"Oh man, Jakee! I thought you were fried! What happened!"
"The ray vent off. All that I am remembering is 624 telling me about your gas problem."
His little eyes bugged out, like little...buggy's, "Hey! You said that she didn't say anything embarrassin'!"
It hurt to move, but I stood up, and almost fell down in shockiness. "No, I did not be recalling! Vhich means..."
He jumped up vith me "It worked! The ray worked!"
Just then, little girl barged into room, crying. I forgot about pain, and rushed over to her, picking up the sad Lilo.
"Vhat? Vhat happened?"
Vith a big snort, she vas viping her eyes and crying on my shoulder. I patted her back until she calmed down.
"Shimmer and Stitch." She hiccupped.
"Yes?"
"They took the other experiments!"
Me and yellow boy looked at each other. He vas vorried as I vas.
"Vhere, Lilo!? VHERE!?"
Little girl wailed in my arms, "They went to go and fight Julee!"
Ah, Blisnak.
Story Weaver1: The sibling rivalry is inspired by my evil little sister, and me. Although this is NOT a self insert, just a bit of sisterly fun! Maybe there might be StitchAngel stuff later...wink wink Thank you for the review!
DanMat6288: Okay, I get it. You voiced your opinion, but the chapter's ain't gonna change. Thank you for the review! (Or verbal beating, I don't know which -.-)
Koriku: Thank you!!! I try to write the best of my abilities, I'm glad people notice! Writing in character is pretty hard, but I enjoy it. Sometimes, when I'm writing a long Jumba or Jakee part, I start to talk like them! . Thanks for the review!
Tyler Buckland: Aww! I will continue this! And thankies for the review!!!
Okay! Jakee, care to do the honors?
JAKEE: Lilo and Stitch are not belonging to Kixstana. So all Lawyers go take short walk off of long pier.
Don't you mean...?
JAKEE: Oh yes! Shimmer is my creation, but is belonging to Kixstana!
Oy. .-
Kokaua Town Beach
9:00 P.M.
Yes, Yes. All was going according to plan. My beautiful creation, with the help of Gantu's captured experiments, were running a muck!
I was well aware that it was nighttime, and we would have to retire to bed soon, but I was having too much fun!
Our first priority was to gather up all the experiments-gone-good and turn them back to evil. The chip I implanted into 624 was giving me total control of her mind. Of course she could still think for herself, but she had no will power!
I cackled as I watched the ignorant humans run in fear. Such weaklings. They didn't even try to save themselves. This race would be simple to conquer.
Ah, we were on the beach. 624 then lead us to a strange purple experiment with four arms. He was obviously male. Perfect.
Turning a dial on my controller, I commanded 624 to take the sneaky route.
She smoothed out her fur and sauntered up to him, "Gabugi, Kixx."
Interesting. Her memory bank still stored the names of all the experiments that she had changed. This would be even easier than I thought.
The purple experiment stopped attacking a bag long enough to glance and wave, "Hya! Angel!" He grinned in ignorance.
Batting her eyes, she held on one of his many arms and sang:
Acoota Chimeeto,
Egata Nomootah,
Naga Te Nala,
Echube Teduca.
I could tell the spell was working on him, for his cheerful face had become a scowl. He was a valuable recruit, for we needed some muscle.
"Excellent 624. Now, we seemed to have gathered most of the formally good ones. Now let us see...." I thought for a moment when a paper hit me in the face.
Curse my height.
I peeled it off and stared at the header.
CRIME SPREE CROOKS WILL BE SPRUNG
Below the header, were pictures of......experiments? One was a green female, the other a yellow male. I skimmed the print and found out that the two would be released for good behavior.
Yech. We'll soon change that!
I leaped onto the purple ones back, and pointed to the town jail. We were going to bust out those two, and turn them back to evil. Whether they liked it or not.
When we arrived, I jumped onto the ground and used one of my high-tech binoculars to scan the area for their body signatures. What luck, they were on the first floor, right in front of us!
Ordering 'Kixx' to punch the wall, I stepped back and watched him work. With only three impacts, the structure collapsed.
I peered inside, and spotted the two staring at the hole in the wall. The male had growled and his mechanical arm turned into a laser. He pointed it at us while standing protectively in front of the female.
The green experiment poked her head out from behind him, "Look bubs, we don't wants any troubles, a'ight?"
Pfft. I rolled all four of my eyes and snapped my fingers. 624 bounded into the cell and sang once more. This time it had an interesting effect.
The male fell under it instantly, but the female, she just raised a brow and crossed her arms. "Nice pipes toots, but me and Clyde don't fall for cheap lullaby's. Right big guy?"
She looked up at him expectantly. A worried frown appeared, "Clyde? Yello? Youse still home?" She waved a paw in his face, yet got no reaction.
"Interesting. I thought it was only for the hair eater, but 624's song doesn't seem to affect you either."
624 giggled flirtatiously and grabbed the yellow males arm. He had a stupid grin on his face and followed her out like an obedient puppy.
The green one stood shocked, "Huh?" Trying to hide her disappointment, she shook her fist at us as we left, "OH YEAH! Well youse can take the crummy balooka! He ain't nuthin' but trouble! Youse joiks!"
I lifted a note pad and pencil out of my pocket, and scribbled her description down. It was a list of all the experiments that were not affected by 624's song. So far I had; the yellow hair eater, the gray dog- like barker, the blue water sprayer, and the green criminal.
I pondered at this turn of events. They all had something in common, but what? As we trudged along to a slushy stand I couldn't help but feel that these resisting experiments, were not just a coincidence.
Lilo's House
8:30 A.M.
It was cold and lonely in the laundry basket. I missed Shimmer. The way she used to snuggle up to me....
Whoa! Waaaaaaay off topic here! The point was that I was sleeping in a laundry basket!
It was getting to late and all we could do was see if Jakee could build the stupid ray remember thingy. So I vouched we went to bed.
I got the laundry basket.
The little tyke and 626 went to sleep in their room, since it was their house n' all. Doc and the noodle went into their room, while Shim and Jakee shared the big girls room.
Turn's out she wasn't home.
They left and I tried to get Shim to sleep with me. (Not in that way sicko's!) But she nearly bit my arm off!
So here I was, way to early in the mourning, awake. In a laundry basket. With no sandwiches. And the babe was mad at me. Perfect mourning to a perfect predicament.
Having nothing to do, I got up to see if they had any sandwich stuff. I walked into the kitchen, but all they had in the cupboards was canned ravioli. Ah well, it was better than nothing.
I spooned it out and walked into the living room, just to drop my can. In the room were four chick experiments layin' around the couch. And in the middle of it all was Shimmer.
"What the heck is going on here!?"
They woke up in a flash, each looking for some sort of monster or something. I guess I did yell kinda loud.
Shimmer jumped up and had her claws out, growling in my direction. She stopped and stared, then realized it was me, and began to growl again.
A green one that came up to my chest, rolled up the fur on her arm. "Hey, dis da guy that's been buggin' youse Shim?"
She scratched her head in confusion. "Uh, yes."
The rest of the girls got up and cornered me. Normally I'd like it, except they all had scowls.
"Laidies, Ladies, I'm sure we can work something out?"
I doubted it.
A sharp whistle came from the doorway, and Jakee was standing there wearing a bathrobe and an angry look on her face. Picking up each of them up, she placed them all in a row on the couch.
"Now that ve are all comfy-like, vill you qvit all the noisy making!?"
She pulled on her hair and I could tell she was majorly stressing. There were small rings under her eyes and her already frizzy hair was a mess.
Shimmer's ears flopped down and she crawled over to where Jakee was standing. She led her to a recliner chair and patted her arm.
Smiling at the Shim, the purple bounty hunter cleared her throat. "Okay, vhy are you all being here?"
A blue experiment that had tentacles sloshed up to speak for them. Her strange bubbly voice was hard to understand, but I could catch what she was saying.
"That strange pink experiment came and tried to turn us to evil. Yin fell under the spell, but I did not. Why is this?" she scratched her head with a tentacle.
Jakee rubbed two of her eyes and sighed, "Just as I vas to be thinking. My little pimple of a sister started to be changing the males."
A yellow ball of hair jumped up and chirped, "Why didn't it bother us? Huh, huh, huh?"
Oh goody, a hyper active clipper. Just what we needed. Not only was she annoying, but blonde too.
I rolled my eyes and slapped my forehead. "Ain't it obvious fuzzy? You are girls; the ones sweet-cheeks took were guys! Her song don't work on you!"
The little fuzz ball stopped bouncing around and began to sniffle. A weird little dog-like-thing came up and patted her on the back.
"SWEET CHEEKS!!!???"
Uh oh. I think I made her...........
I turned around just to see a green blur come strait at me. Holding up my arms for protection, I tensed and waited for the pain.
But it never came.
"Ya ya ya! Keep pulling, do not let her being escaping!"
Instead I heard her growling right in my ear. Opening one of my eyes, I was looking strait into her mouth. Holding her back was Stitch and his family. They could barely hold her.
"YOU KNEW ABOUT HER AND YOU DIDN'T TELL ME!? WHAT ELSE HAVE YOU LIED ABOUT, HUH!? WHAT ELSE HAVEN'T YOU TOLD MEEEE!?"
Shimmer was trying to claw at me, and she had tears in her eyes. I felt like a real heel then. I should have told her in the beginning.
"You lied, you lied...." She moaned in between sobs. Looking away from me, she curled up into a little ball, and Jumba was holding her in his hands.
"I am thinking, you have done enough."
All the girl experiments crowded around her, and I heard the random 'We'll get him for ya' and 'Please don't cry'.
Jakee walked up behind me and patted my shoulder. "Maybe you should come and help me vith the remembering ray."
She pulled my arm gently and I was dragged away from Shimmer's sobbing body.
When she stopped, I was in for it.
Yellow boy vas very much vorried.
The poor little creature paced around-and-round the room vhile I vas trying to vork on the remembrance-ray. He kept looking at door like 624 vas going to jump in and tear him limb from limb!
HAHA! Oh no, vait. That vould be a bad thing.
Bounty hunter habits are to be dying hard.
I vas turning knob on ray vhen I felt furry paw on my thigh.
"Uh, Jakee? You know Shimmer, right? She won't stay mad for long, will she?" He twiddled his thumbs.
"624 vas for to be a protector of the universe. I did not specifically-like design her feelings. If she had any, it vas to be her choice."
His ears drooped lower than they already vere being. I patted his head to comfort him.
"But, do not to be vorrying, 625. If she is normal female, she vill be forgiving in.....vhen ever you are to be apologizing like you never have before! Hehe!"
"Hey! It ain't funny!"
Coughing to cover up laughing, I put on strait face. "I know, 625, but you must learn. Every base like structure for relationships is communication."
He nodded his head, "Right, right......" they his eyes popped open, "WHAT!? Relationship? Hey, I know what you're thinking, but me an Shim got nuthin going on between us!"
"Uh huh......."
I could be telling he did not believe my answer. It vas to be made unbelievable.
"If you are not in relationy-ship, then how come you are to being fighting over her vith other males."
His little eyes videned, "She told you about that, huh?"
"Oh yes. She tells me everything. I am like a mothery-thing to her. We have a certain bondage."
"Uhh, did she tell you anything.....embarrassing?"
I looked into the barrel of ray gun, then scrunched my face. I vas not to be thinking that I had heard anything humiliating. Not that I could be remembering.
"No."
His yellow face brightened again, and he smiled. "Few! Anyway, do you think this ray'll really work?"
I vas about to answer, when a bright light flashed in my eyes and I felt my toes and fingers tingle. I think I vas screaming, but I could not tell. All I heard when I vas falling was 625 shouting my name.
I soon voke up to a yellow hand waving in front of my eyes. My head vas throbbing, and hurt like dickens. My fingers still vere tingling, and I sat up.
"Oh man, Jakee! I thought you were fried! What happened!"
"The ray vent off. All that I am remembering is 624 telling me about your gas problem."
His little eyes bugged out, like little...buggy's, "Hey! You said that she didn't say anything embarrassin'!"
It hurt to move, but I stood up, and almost fell down in shockiness. "No, I did not be recalling! Vhich means..."
He jumped up vith me "It worked! The ray worked!"
Just then, little girl barged into room, crying. I forgot about pain, and rushed over to her, picking up the sad Lilo.
"Vhat? Vhat happened?"
Vith a big snort, she vas viping her eyes and crying on my shoulder. I patted her back until she calmed down.
"Shimmer and Stitch." She hiccupped.
"Yes?"
"They took the other experiments!"
Me and yellow boy looked at each other. He vas vorried as I vas.
"Vhere, Lilo!? VHERE!?"
Little girl wailed in my arms, "They went to go and fight Julee!"
Ah, Blisnak.