A/N - I updated sooner! Yay! Knock on wood...This one is a bit longer. Try to enjoy it, even though it's Marissa. :P LOL Read and Review, Family! =)
HOTTERTHNU - Damn straight the madness is back, LOL! Glad to see you are as well! =)
BlueStarGirl - Thanks, it's good to know I haven't lost it. =)
s - Okay...that's cool. Hope you like my story...
ally - Aw, I'm so glad you missed it! Love ya!
benzbabidoll - It's so flattering...you said I have "the touch"...LOL Thanks
JoyJuice - Cool SN...and thanks for your review! One of the nicest I've gotten! You ROCK!
fanficgirl1 - Summer break rocks my world! One more year to go!
Kierens25 - Reading ALL the OC fanfics? That's mad ambitious...Mine's one of the best? Really? Awesome! Thanks! Let me know what others to read! =)
(Marissa's POV)
So Sum and I went shopping today
Apparently, it's apalling to only own six bikinis
I guess if you live in Orange County,
It is
But it's not like I've had time to go shopping or anything
Between losing my virginity and trying to kill myself
Anyway
We went shopping
And we were walking through the mall together
And all of a sudden, Sum just stops
Like that time we were in Brownies
And we were on our nature hike,
And Summer spotted a deer in the trail up ahead of us
And came to a dead halt
That's what it was like
When she saw Luke
I hadn't seen him since the accident
And apparently she hadn't either
He looked pretty bad...even two months later
He still had his arm in a cast
Which made it sort of hard for him to use the metal crutches he had
He still had an eyepatch on
He was teetering on the crutches
In front of Baby Bjorn
His healthy eye blinked back tears
And his scarred lip trembled
He lightly tapped his good fist on the window
Quickening with each blow, until finally
He brought his hand down to his side
And looked at the floor
He sighed, and ambled away
He never saw us
As he hobbled away from us
I felt like I was watching a stranger
He just looked like a sad boy
With a heart as broken as the rest of him
HOTTERTHNU - Damn straight the madness is back, LOL! Glad to see you are as well! =)
BlueStarGirl - Thanks, it's good to know I haven't lost it. =)
s - Okay...that's cool. Hope you like my story...
ally - Aw, I'm so glad you missed it! Love ya!
benzbabidoll - It's so flattering...you said I have "the touch"...LOL Thanks
JoyJuice - Cool SN...and thanks for your review! One of the nicest I've gotten! You ROCK!
fanficgirl1 - Summer break rocks my world! One more year to go!
Kierens25 - Reading ALL the OC fanfics? That's mad ambitious...Mine's one of the best? Really? Awesome! Thanks! Let me know what others to read! =)
(Marissa's POV)
So Sum and I went shopping today
Apparently, it's apalling to only own six bikinis
I guess if you live in Orange County,
It is
But it's not like I've had time to go shopping or anything
Between losing my virginity and trying to kill myself
Anyway
We went shopping
And we were walking through the mall together
And all of a sudden, Sum just stops
Like that time we were in Brownies
And we were on our nature hike,
And Summer spotted a deer in the trail up ahead of us
And came to a dead halt
That's what it was like
When she saw Luke
I hadn't seen him since the accident
And apparently she hadn't either
He looked pretty bad...even two months later
He still had his arm in a cast
Which made it sort of hard for him to use the metal crutches he had
He still had an eyepatch on
He was teetering on the crutches
In front of Baby Bjorn
His healthy eye blinked back tears
And his scarred lip trembled
He lightly tapped his good fist on the window
Quickening with each blow, until finally
He brought his hand down to his side
And looked at the floor
He sighed, and ambled away
He never saw us
As he hobbled away from us
I felt like I was watching a stranger
He just looked like a sad boy
With a heart as broken as the rest of him