Im sorry to waste another chapter thing with this but....this story just feels like such drek! I mean...doesn't it seem so clichè and just derivative of all the other stories on here? my confidence in it is waning. its very important to me that it be fresh and that the characters have the same feel as the book and i just dont think thats happening.....im not sure what im hoping to achieve from this rant....i'll see what i can do....