Ok I forgot to mention in chapter 1 this story takes place back in old japan and if you think it should be...imagined otherwise review and tell me because I need to correct my flaws like before...oh and im changing the reason she couldn't hang around Yunsung k? so definitely read. Chapter 2 (repost)
It was dark when they reached a big wall leading into the Sword Village. He hopped up and offered his hand to her and she took it as she was pulled up off the ground.
She was on her feet again when he set her down at the top of the wall. They walked along it until they came to a Sakura tree and they climbed down. He took her hand again and ran through the streets and came to a small hut. He opened the door and led her in.
"This is where you live?" Talim said surprised how nice it looked in there. All tidy and everything.
"Yah...my parents are gone too so I learned how to take care of my self." Yunsung said hanging his head down.
Talim walked over to him. She put her arms around his waist in a comfort hug. "I'm sorry...I didn't know your parents were gone...I guess that makes both of us huh?"
He put his arms around her. "I guess...I do miss them...I bet you miss yours huh?"
"Not really... I mean they were cool until...the sepration...my clan just stood there lecturing me and my parents just watched without a say..."
Yunsung's heart pained. Those jerks made her separate from me and she didn't want to and her parents were no help whatsoever. "You should have said something to me."
"Nah no one would listen to me because they all know that I would probably make up some excuse saying I wouldn't fall in love."
"Jerks..."
"You can say that again...they wouldn't even let me just be your friend."
"Well you don't have to worry about them anymore ok? You can live here with me!" He said making her smile a small smile.
Talim was getting tired "May I go to sleep? I'm worn out from the running."
"Sure" yunsung took her down the hall and to a small bedroom.
"Is this a guest room? Or yours?"
"It's a guest. Mine is across the hall if you need me k?"
"Alright...Goodnight Yun-chan."
"Night Talim..." Yun watched her close the door and walked to his room. He changed into a lose pair of cotton pants and walked into the main room. He went onto a small couch-like thing and dozed a bit.
At about 2-ish in the morning Talim came out of her room. She went into the main room and saw Yun-chan on the couch (like thing) and then turned towards the front door.
She walked out and felt the wind through her hair (which is down) blowing it in different directions. She closed her eyes and inhaled the fresh breeze.
"You know you let all the cool air in when you left the door open..." A voice broke her thoughts. It was only Yun-chan. And he was smirking.
"You scared me...I thought I was in trouble." Talim put her hand over her pounding heart.
Yunsung smiled. "Look it's almost snowy season and you might catch cold...come inside."
"Can I have a few minutes please?" Talim pleaded.
"Alright but I'm staying out here." He came up and wrapped his arms around her small form from behind. He was ONLY trying to keep her warm she was thinking over and over in her head.
After a few minutes they went inside. Talim went back to bed and Yunsung retired to his room as well.
The next day
The next day was full of snow. Talim wore a furry white and brown coat and Yunsung wore a deerskin jacket. They were walking towards the town leaders' house.
"Told you snowy seasong was coming soon!" Yunsung said in a teasing voice.
"But you didn't say tomorrow now did you?"
"Ok you caught me...Now he's usually nice but you never know when he's having a bad day so try not to upset him ok?" He instructed.
The leader of this village was none other than a man by the name of Mitsurugi. He was a very rich man and usually kind hearted. He and Yunsung had some kind of bond. They were like father and son. Apparently Yunsung was under Mitsurugi's training until he turned 17. Then Yunsung had his own stuff to do.
They entered his house and there he was sitting at a desk made out of bamboo.
"Ah Yunsung my boy! How have you been fairing son?" Mitsurugi stood up and came over to Yunsung. Talim kind of backed up behind Yunsung.
"And who is this?" Mistsurugi looked over Yunsung's shoulder.
"This is Talim. She is from the Wind village but she wants to be a member of this village."
"Well I don't know how well trained is she?"
"Very well trained. Heck she got me on my back in pain." Yunsung replied.
Mitsurugi cocked an eyebrow. "Really...Well let's see if we can find a spot for her to live-- "
"Actually she can live with me since I did bring her here. After all I have an extra room and all..." he trailed off with a blush.
"I see... well she can do that then. But tell me Lady Talim...I need some information. I'll just ask you them now." Talim nodded.
"Ok, how old are you?"
"15"
And the interview went on.
Later
"Well it seems that you convinced him that you could stay here." Yunsung said staring up at the snowing sky."
"Hmmm..." Talim responding looking down.
Yunsung looked at her. She seemed down. He walked over to her and put his arm around her shoulder. "Is something bugging you?"
"No...I mean it's just I'm happy and all that I'm not forced to do anything here but they will look for me you know."
"Well we wont let them take you away alright?"
They stopped walking by the sakura tree they were at last night.
"It's just...my masters going to be furious and if he finds me then he'll probably move the ceremonyup. I don't want to marry that pompous jerk. He doesn't care what I think." She started crying, tears flowing harder as she kept talking. "He didn't just take you away...he took away all my friends, even the girls and I was forced to read and meditate all day and then at night I had to get a good nights rest. She was crying even harder making it hard to talk and hear her speak.
Yunsung hugged her close and let her cry. He rubbed small circles on her back with his hand to calm her down and put his cheek on her head. When she started to calm down she looked up at him.
"You wanna go home?" he asked.
"Not really...may we sit here for a while." She pointed down by the bottom of the tree.
"Course. We can go when you want." He sat down with her in his lap.
"Yun-chan?"
"Hmmm?"
"Thank you...for letting me cry on your shoulder. For being there for me to comfort me."
"No problem...I wont ever let him or anyone take you away Talim." He whispered to her in her ear. She shivered at the feeling of his breath on her neck.
"Turn around Talim."
She did so to be greeted by his lips on hers. She opened her eyes wide and then closed them kissing him back.
When they broke apart she smiled at him.
"Did you know that was my first kiss."
"Oh really?"
"Yup!"
"lets go k? I'm freezing my buns off." He smiled at his childish sentence. Along with him she giggled slightly.
They walked in the house and both went to their rooms to change. She came out in a long sleeve blue mid-drift shirt and black fighting capris.
Yunsung came out in a green vest and long poofy black pants.
"Wow that's a-a-a really tight top Talim...Not like it looks bad it's nice...umm you want to train?"
"Where? I didn't see a training ring anywhere." She tilted her head to the side in confusion.
"Grab a pair of your elbow swords and follow me." He went back into his room and grabbed his new sword. She grabbed her crescent blades and followed him to the side of his house. There was a tool shed. He opened it and inside was nothing but a rope and pulley. He stepped in and she did the same. It was small so they were squished together. Not that they minded or anything.
He then untied the rope and lowered the floor of the shed. They went underground to a small gym/arena looking thing.
"Like it? I built it with help from Mitsurugi. We used to train here. Now you and I can train here. And guess what? We can hide here incase of attacks to strong for us and all. There's a bedroom too."
Talim gazed at the training court. It was nice and neat the ceiling was wooden to hold up the roof of the cave arena.
"It's wonderful...Well we should get started shouldn't we?"
So they began to train.
It started off with a warm up practice where they did their own moves to warm themselves up for a fight with each other.
After that they had small hand-to-hand combat with out weapons. Then they went to fight with their blades. They both learned new moves from each other.
Later
Once again Talim found herself on the floor with Yunsung over her.
"Ok so you got me down a 5th time...Come on now, off!" She pushed at him. But he wouldn't budge.
"Talim... I... I have to tell you something."
"What is it?" She looked up at him.
"I love you...I always have...Since we were apart I thought of you but I had to train so it soon slipped away and I only saw you in my dreams...sometimes I prayed that if I was strong enough I would see you again." His face inched towards her.
She just stayed rooted to the spot (not like she had anywhere to go).
"Let me get this straight...you love me...you have but you had to forget me, so you could only remember me in dreams?"
"Umm...yah that's what I said." His face was closer than before.
"Oh...well I have something to say. I love you too." He reached her face.
They shared a heated kiss. His tongue slipped throughout her mouth and battled with her tongue. They broke apart to breath and he got up pulling her up with him. They went into the elevator thing her in his arms.
When they got up they went to the front to find the front door knocked down.
"Well, well Talim what do we have here?" a voice said out of the darkness of the house.
ok so how was that for a recovery? I edited it out so its shorter and ill be sure to have ch3 out...so who could this mysterious person be? Lol
Until next time,
Meeh
It was dark when they reached a big wall leading into the Sword Village. He hopped up and offered his hand to her and she took it as she was pulled up off the ground.
She was on her feet again when he set her down at the top of the wall. They walked along it until they came to a Sakura tree and they climbed down. He took her hand again and ran through the streets and came to a small hut. He opened the door and led her in.
"This is where you live?" Talim said surprised how nice it looked in there. All tidy and everything.
"Yah...my parents are gone too so I learned how to take care of my self." Yunsung said hanging his head down.
Talim walked over to him. She put her arms around his waist in a comfort hug. "I'm sorry...I didn't know your parents were gone...I guess that makes both of us huh?"
He put his arms around her. "I guess...I do miss them...I bet you miss yours huh?"
"Not really... I mean they were cool until...the sepration...my clan just stood there lecturing me and my parents just watched without a say..."
Yunsung's heart pained. Those jerks made her separate from me and she didn't want to and her parents were no help whatsoever. "You should have said something to me."
"Nah no one would listen to me because they all know that I would probably make up some excuse saying I wouldn't fall in love."
"Jerks..."
"You can say that again...they wouldn't even let me just be your friend."
"Well you don't have to worry about them anymore ok? You can live here with me!" He said making her smile a small smile.
Talim was getting tired "May I go to sleep? I'm worn out from the running."
"Sure" yunsung took her down the hall and to a small bedroom.
"Is this a guest room? Or yours?"
"It's a guest. Mine is across the hall if you need me k?"
"Alright...Goodnight Yun-chan."
"Night Talim..." Yun watched her close the door and walked to his room. He changed into a lose pair of cotton pants and walked into the main room. He went onto a small couch-like thing and dozed a bit.
At about 2-ish in the morning Talim came out of her room. She went into the main room and saw Yun-chan on the couch (like thing) and then turned towards the front door.
She walked out and felt the wind through her hair (which is down) blowing it in different directions. She closed her eyes and inhaled the fresh breeze.
"You know you let all the cool air in when you left the door open..." A voice broke her thoughts. It was only Yun-chan. And he was smirking.
"You scared me...I thought I was in trouble." Talim put her hand over her pounding heart.
Yunsung smiled. "Look it's almost snowy season and you might catch cold...come inside."
"Can I have a few minutes please?" Talim pleaded.
"Alright but I'm staying out here." He came up and wrapped his arms around her small form from behind. He was ONLY trying to keep her warm she was thinking over and over in her head.
After a few minutes they went inside. Talim went back to bed and Yunsung retired to his room as well.
The next day
The next day was full of snow. Talim wore a furry white and brown coat and Yunsung wore a deerskin jacket. They were walking towards the town leaders' house.
"Told you snowy seasong was coming soon!" Yunsung said in a teasing voice.
"But you didn't say tomorrow now did you?"
"Ok you caught me...Now he's usually nice but you never know when he's having a bad day so try not to upset him ok?" He instructed.
The leader of this village was none other than a man by the name of Mitsurugi. He was a very rich man and usually kind hearted. He and Yunsung had some kind of bond. They were like father and son. Apparently Yunsung was under Mitsurugi's training until he turned 17. Then Yunsung had his own stuff to do.
They entered his house and there he was sitting at a desk made out of bamboo.
"Ah Yunsung my boy! How have you been fairing son?" Mitsurugi stood up and came over to Yunsung. Talim kind of backed up behind Yunsung.
"And who is this?" Mistsurugi looked over Yunsung's shoulder.
"This is Talim. She is from the Wind village but she wants to be a member of this village."
"Well I don't know how well trained is she?"
"Very well trained. Heck she got me on my back in pain." Yunsung replied.
Mitsurugi cocked an eyebrow. "Really...Well let's see if we can find a spot for her to live-- "
"Actually she can live with me since I did bring her here. After all I have an extra room and all..." he trailed off with a blush.
"I see... well she can do that then. But tell me Lady Talim...I need some information. I'll just ask you them now." Talim nodded.
"Ok, how old are you?"
"15"
And the interview went on.
Later
"Well it seems that you convinced him that you could stay here." Yunsung said staring up at the snowing sky."
"Hmmm..." Talim responding looking down.
Yunsung looked at her. She seemed down. He walked over to her and put his arm around her shoulder. "Is something bugging you?"
"No...I mean it's just I'm happy and all that I'm not forced to do anything here but they will look for me you know."
"Well we wont let them take you away alright?"
They stopped walking by the sakura tree they were at last night.
"It's just...my masters going to be furious and if he finds me then he'll probably move the ceremonyup. I don't want to marry that pompous jerk. He doesn't care what I think." She started crying, tears flowing harder as she kept talking. "He didn't just take you away...he took away all my friends, even the girls and I was forced to read and meditate all day and then at night I had to get a good nights rest. She was crying even harder making it hard to talk and hear her speak.
Yunsung hugged her close and let her cry. He rubbed small circles on her back with his hand to calm her down and put his cheek on her head. When she started to calm down she looked up at him.
"You wanna go home?" he asked.
"Not really...may we sit here for a while." She pointed down by the bottom of the tree.
"Course. We can go when you want." He sat down with her in his lap.
"Yun-chan?"
"Hmmm?"
"Thank you...for letting me cry on your shoulder. For being there for me to comfort me."
"No problem...I wont ever let him or anyone take you away Talim." He whispered to her in her ear. She shivered at the feeling of his breath on her neck.
"Turn around Talim."
She did so to be greeted by his lips on hers. She opened her eyes wide and then closed them kissing him back.
When they broke apart she smiled at him.
"Did you know that was my first kiss."
"Oh really?"
"Yup!"
"lets go k? I'm freezing my buns off." He smiled at his childish sentence. Along with him she giggled slightly.
They walked in the house and both went to their rooms to change. She came out in a long sleeve blue mid-drift shirt and black fighting capris.
Yunsung came out in a green vest and long poofy black pants.
"Wow that's a-a-a really tight top Talim...Not like it looks bad it's nice...umm you want to train?"
"Where? I didn't see a training ring anywhere." She tilted her head to the side in confusion.
"Grab a pair of your elbow swords and follow me." He went back into his room and grabbed his new sword. She grabbed her crescent blades and followed him to the side of his house. There was a tool shed. He opened it and inside was nothing but a rope and pulley. He stepped in and she did the same. It was small so they were squished together. Not that they minded or anything.
He then untied the rope and lowered the floor of the shed. They went underground to a small gym/arena looking thing.
"Like it? I built it with help from Mitsurugi. We used to train here. Now you and I can train here. And guess what? We can hide here incase of attacks to strong for us and all. There's a bedroom too."
Talim gazed at the training court. It was nice and neat the ceiling was wooden to hold up the roof of the cave arena.
"It's wonderful...Well we should get started shouldn't we?"
So they began to train.
It started off with a warm up practice where they did their own moves to warm themselves up for a fight with each other.
After that they had small hand-to-hand combat with out weapons. Then they went to fight with their blades. They both learned new moves from each other.
Later
Once again Talim found herself on the floor with Yunsung over her.
"Ok so you got me down a 5th time...Come on now, off!" She pushed at him. But he wouldn't budge.
"Talim... I... I have to tell you something."
"What is it?" She looked up at him.
"I love you...I always have...Since we were apart I thought of you but I had to train so it soon slipped away and I only saw you in my dreams...sometimes I prayed that if I was strong enough I would see you again." His face inched towards her.
She just stayed rooted to the spot (not like she had anywhere to go).
"Let me get this straight...you love me...you have but you had to forget me, so you could only remember me in dreams?"
"Umm...yah that's what I said." His face was closer than before.
"Oh...well I have something to say. I love you too." He reached her face.
They shared a heated kiss. His tongue slipped throughout her mouth and battled with her tongue. They broke apart to breath and he got up pulling her up with him. They went into the elevator thing her in his arms.
When they got up they went to the front to find the front door knocked down.
"Well, well Talim what do we have here?" a voice said out of the darkness of the house.
ok so how was that for a recovery? I edited it out so its shorter and ill be sure to have ch3 out...so who could this mysterious person be? Lol
Until next time,
Meeh