Chapter 4- Raven........
hello...again so I have the fourth chapter getting a going and as promised Raven....drool sry I love him not in that kind of way but ya....o well back to what I was saying I bring u the fourth chapter to my never ending story hey who knows maybe it will end sometime in the near future but I can guarantee (almost) that this will be a long yet exciting story pleez review ppl and tell the other people bout my story cuz it shall be much appreciated but ne ways I give u my story
from our last chapter
"This is my home, this is where I belong, and this zoid will bring forth the new world." Kiyoku smiled. The last piece of the puzzle was now complete she could put her plan into action. With that Kiyoku and her newly awakened liger ran off with Sano and shadow falcon flying close above.
now chapter 4
As the whole gang set off running amuck night began to fall. I love the word amuck...
"Shadow falcon it is time to do your part in my plan. You must go off and find a weakness in the guardian force. They will be our only interruptions," Kiyoku said.
With that shadow falcon turned and flew away.
"He will report to us sano don't worry," replied Kiyoku as sano growled a low mumble asking if shadow falcon leaving was even a good idea.
Just then the liger growled low and a beeping noise was herd on the screen. Kiyoku looked down to see a little dot AKA zoid on the radar.
"I see we have some company. Maybe they might be of intrest to us. Or maybe we should kill them," smirked Kiyoku.
The liger stopped with a low warning growl then Kiyoku's eyes widened as she realized the zoid in front of her.
"Genobreaker..." was all that she whispered and flipped open the cockpit and flew out of the zoid running at the genobreaker almost like it was going to blow up or something.
Just then too busy worrying about the zoid she ran head-on to a guy about her age with amazing jet black hair and a red mark resembling a fancy 7 with a dot on the end. He was just about her height a little bit taller and had amazing purple grayish eyes.
"Sorry....but is that your zoid," Kiyoku said as she pointed up to the genobreaker.
"Yes," said the guy, "Why wouldn't it be?" "Well I am so sorry," Kiyoku said sarcastically. "Hey when your zoid was the genosaurer was it by any chance revived by some other zoid possibly an organoid?"
"Yea......how did you know that?"
"Simple it's red."
Well she did have a point there. The genobreaker was a jet red except for some parts like the guns, teeth, claws, ect... but it would look weird if it was all red I mean come on what did you expect?
"Yea...no duh it has been red since I can remember... is that a bad thing?" said the guy.
"Well depends really I mean if you can't handle the zoid's true power then no but if it evolved to give you more power then you must have some enemies cause they weakened it...greatly."
"What do mean!?"
"What's your name?" asked Kiyoku.
"Stop randomly changing the subject!" he yelled.
"Ok."
"My name's Raven...and yours would be...?"
"Isn't that a bird?"
"Shut it! I was given that name when I was little I can't remember my real name...the guy that gave it to me said that my hair reminded him of a raven."
Kiyoku burst out laughing. Raven was getting ticked off really fast and he was just about turn to go to his genobreaker to smash her to pieces when the girl stopped laughing and said something.
"Kiyoku my name is Kiyoku."
Raven turned around. "Well then Kiyoku I guess that you could possibly be kind enough to tell me what's up with my zoid couldn't you?"
"That's simple whoever revived your zoid changed the zoid core in a way that would weaken the zoid. You have a limit to how long your zoid can fight at full strength right?"
"Yes 180 seconds...how are you knowing all of this?"
"Why do you care?"
"Who wouldn't?" "Sano."
"Sano...who's that?"
"My organoid over there," she said as she pointed at her blade liger.
"Hey that's a blade liger I hate blade ligers."
"That wasn't very nice Raven...why do you hate blade ligers?"
"Because my worst enemy has one."
"Who's that?"
"Van...your blade liger is black....since when are they black?"
"Mine is an evolved blade liger besides it looks better black then red trust me on that one."
"How can it be evolved without changing its looks?"
"Magic..."
"Who's magic?"
"Mine."
"What?"
"I can alter zoid cores to how I want them to be that's my magic."
"Oh..."
"I can fix your zoid if you really want me to."
"Ok sure why not."
With that Kiyoku stood up dusted herself off and flew up into the air. Muttering some ancient zoidian that creepy eerie black light glowed around her body and formed around her hands showing the outline of them in white. With a smirk the 2 black jets flew straight down and hit the zoid core. With that the genobreaker was engulfed fancy sounding in a large reddish like color forming a shinning crystal (for those of you who actually watch zoids looks like the genosaurer going through its evolution to the genobreaker).
As Kiyoku flew down and sat on the ground next to Raven she began picking up the conversation. "Where does Van live?"
"I dunno he works for guardian force."
"Really!! That's perfect!"
"Why"
"Because in order to rebuild the planet I have to take it over but the guardian force will no doubt get in my way."
"How do you know all of this?"
"That's a good question."
sweat drop
"No really it is I am a zoidian princess and I was trapped in this pod thing for like a while...and then I got released and these guys named Kevin and Arnold were there and I took their zoids and then I noticed that their zoids belonged to the guardian force and they got in my way so I figured the rest of the guardian force would get in my way too. That really doesn't matter though because I took their zoids and sent them to guard the place where my blade liger was all locked up just incase I needed a hideout or something and it gave me an excuse to get rid of them...Then I ran into you and here I am," Kiyoku inhaled deeply.
"...................." was Raven's reply.
"So you like want to pair up and then we can destroy Van and blow up the rest of the guardian force?" asked Kiyoku.
"Sure why not," said Raven trying not to sound happy but really he was because just having that useless conversation made him realize that he was beginning to like Kiyoku more than he actually wanted to......
Yay end of story! I am sooooooooo sorry bout not updating so I figured I would try to make this chapter a good one so you people who are reading this wont be mad and Emily san how many times must I tell u not to think perverted thoughts!! Sorry I needed to say that but continuing on now I am here by going to TRY to update this story every Sat. but I can't promise you anything yet cause some chapters might take longer to plan out than others and I want the story to be just right cuz I do and don't forget to r and r ppl o and I might not add a chapter this sat (may 22) cuz it's my Bday!! Yay o well consider this your present for my bday and have a nice day o and if you want some characters in the story or have ne good ideas pleez don't hesitate to write to me at emiliaallisonyahoo.com till whenever!
hello...again so I have the fourth chapter getting a going and as promised Raven....drool sry I love him not in that kind of way but ya....o well back to what I was saying I bring u the fourth chapter to my never ending story hey who knows maybe it will end sometime in the near future but I can guarantee (almost) that this will be a long yet exciting story pleez review ppl and tell the other people bout my story cuz it shall be much appreciated but ne ways I give u my story
from our last chapter
"This is my home, this is where I belong, and this zoid will bring forth the new world." Kiyoku smiled. The last piece of the puzzle was now complete she could put her plan into action. With that Kiyoku and her newly awakened liger ran off with Sano and shadow falcon flying close above.
now chapter 4
As the whole gang set off running amuck night began to fall. I love the word amuck...
"Shadow falcon it is time to do your part in my plan. You must go off and find a weakness in the guardian force. They will be our only interruptions," Kiyoku said.
With that shadow falcon turned and flew away.
"He will report to us sano don't worry," replied Kiyoku as sano growled a low mumble asking if shadow falcon leaving was even a good idea.
Just then the liger growled low and a beeping noise was herd on the screen. Kiyoku looked down to see a little dot AKA zoid on the radar.
"I see we have some company. Maybe they might be of intrest to us. Or maybe we should kill them," smirked Kiyoku.
The liger stopped with a low warning growl then Kiyoku's eyes widened as she realized the zoid in front of her.
"Genobreaker..." was all that she whispered and flipped open the cockpit and flew out of the zoid running at the genobreaker almost like it was going to blow up or something.
Just then too busy worrying about the zoid she ran head-on to a guy about her age with amazing jet black hair and a red mark resembling a fancy 7 with a dot on the end. He was just about her height a little bit taller and had amazing purple grayish eyes.
"Sorry....but is that your zoid," Kiyoku said as she pointed up to the genobreaker.
"Yes," said the guy, "Why wouldn't it be?" "Well I am so sorry," Kiyoku said sarcastically. "Hey when your zoid was the genosaurer was it by any chance revived by some other zoid possibly an organoid?"
"Yea......how did you know that?"
"Simple it's red."
Well she did have a point there. The genobreaker was a jet red except for some parts like the guns, teeth, claws, ect... but it would look weird if it was all red I mean come on what did you expect?
"Yea...no duh it has been red since I can remember... is that a bad thing?" said the guy.
"Well depends really I mean if you can't handle the zoid's true power then no but if it evolved to give you more power then you must have some enemies cause they weakened it...greatly."
"What do mean!?"
"What's your name?" asked Kiyoku.
"Stop randomly changing the subject!" he yelled.
"Ok."
"My name's Raven...and yours would be...?"
"Isn't that a bird?"
"Shut it! I was given that name when I was little I can't remember my real name...the guy that gave it to me said that my hair reminded him of a raven."
Kiyoku burst out laughing. Raven was getting ticked off really fast and he was just about turn to go to his genobreaker to smash her to pieces when the girl stopped laughing and said something.
"Kiyoku my name is Kiyoku."
Raven turned around. "Well then Kiyoku I guess that you could possibly be kind enough to tell me what's up with my zoid couldn't you?"
"That's simple whoever revived your zoid changed the zoid core in a way that would weaken the zoid. You have a limit to how long your zoid can fight at full strength right?"
"Yes 180 seconds...how are you knowing all of this?"
"Why do you care?"
"Who wouldn't?" "Sano."
"Sano...who's that?"
"My organoid over there," she said as she pointed at her blade liger.
"Hey that's a blade liger I hate blade ligers."
"That wasn't very nice Raven...why do you hate blade ligers?"
"Because my worst enemy has one."
"Who's that?"
"Van...your blade liger is black....since when are they black?"
"Mine is an evolved blade liger besides it looks better black then red trust me on that one."
"How can it be evolved without changing its looks?"
"Magic..."
"Who's magic?"
"Mine."
"What?"
"I can alter zoid cores to how I want them to be that's my magic."
"Oh..."
"I can fix your zoid if you really want me to."
"Ok sure why not."
With that Kiyoku stood up dusted herself off and flew up into the air. Muttering some ancient zoidian that creepy eerie black light glowed around her body and formed around her hands showing the outline of them in white. With a smirk the 2 black jets flew straight down and hit the zoid core. With that the genobreaker was engulfed fancy sounding in a large reddish like color forming a shinning crystal (for those of you who actually watch zoids looks like the genosaurer going through its evolution to the genobreaker).
As Kiyoku flew down and sat on the ground next to Raven she began picking up the conversation. "Where does Van live?"
"I dunno he works for guardian force."
"Really!! That's perfect!"
"Why"
"Because in order to rebuild the planet I have to take it over but the guardian force will no doubt get in my way."
"How do you know all of this?"
"That's a good question."
sweat drop
"No really it is I am a zoidian princess and I was trapped in this pod thing for like a while...and then I got released and these guys named Kevin and Arnold were there and I took their zoids and then I noticed that their zoids belonged to the guardian force and they got in my way so I figured the rest of the guardian force would get in my way too. That really doesn't matter though because I took their zoids and sent them to guard the place where my blade liger was all locked up just incase I needed a hideout or something and it gave me an excuse to get rid of them...Then I ran into you and here I am," Kiyoku inhaled deeply.
"...................." was Raven's reply.
"So you like want to pair up and then we can destroy Van and blow up the rest of the guardian force?" asked Kiyoku.
"Sure why not," said Raven trying not to sound happy but really he was because just having that useless conversation made him realize that he was beginning to like Kiyoku more than he actually wanted to......
Yay end of story! I am sooooooooo sorry bout not updating so I figured I would try to make this chapter a good one so you people who are reading this wont be mad and Emily san how many times must I tell u not to think perverted thoughts!! Sorry I needed to say that but continuing on now I am here by going to TRY to update this story every Sat. but I can't promise you anything yet cause some chapters might take longer to plan out than others and I want the story to be just right cuz I do and don't forget to r and r ppl o and I might not add a chapter this sat (may 22) cuz it's my Bday!! Yay o well consider this your present for my bday and have a nice day o and if you want some characters in the story or have ne good ideas pleez don't hesitate to write to me at emiliaallisonyahoo.com till whenever!