CatNamedZane- I don't care what you think of
my story. Don't tell me to discontinue anything. It was nice of you to
recommend that site but my spelling is good. I checked it myself if you
are talking about the Spanish yeah I suck at that but at least I know what
the words mean and the reason it is all dialogue now is because those are
like a prequel to the beginning of the whole story okay. But this part will
be more descriptive I think this part the drama starts to break when I
introduce a new character. Who is sure to start chaos and havoc. Anyways
like I was saying I will continue this story I like it and some others do
too. But I am guessing you are a nerd because you use big words and don't
like slang either and you have your own how to site.
DegrassiFreak2- I will be continuing the story and thanks for saying that at least some ppl appreciate my work!
Oxnard- I think I will do that it will add some fights to my story. So thanks for the Idea.
Manny was walking down the halls to get to her lunch period she was getting their late as usual. She was walking at a fast pace not letting anything get in her way. Just then a Voice called her.
"Manuela wait up!" the voice screamed
"If you have anything to say to me than walk up to me and say it" Manny said in a Snotty tone
"Do you talk to everyone like that or just me?" The voice said
"You know what? You better-"Manny was turning around to say to the person what she felt but she saw the voice and stopped talking. Her mouth dropped and her eyes got big.
"Manuela where are your manners" the person said Just then the person ran up to Manny and hugged her.
"Crystal what are you doing here!?" Manny said with such excitement.
"Oh just checking the school out you know. After all I will be going here from now on" Crystal said with a cheek to cheek smile.
Crystal Mendez. She has long wavy dark chocolate brown hair. She has big hazel eyes and a beauty mark on the top of her right cheek. She had very long eyelashes and thin yet thick eyebrows that were in perfect shape. She had a piercing in her right ear cartilage two holes on each ear and the mid ear thing that sticks out, also she had a piercing on her tongue and belly. She was wearing a black baby tee belly shirt and the collar was a half circle shape. On her shirt it said "It is cute how you think I 'm listening" in hot pink words and a little pink Bunny right next to the words with a smile on. She had medium coloured denim pants on. Crystal had black and pink Chuck Taylor's Converse sneakers on. Crystal was a party girl with some what of an attitude problem. But yet still people liked her. Crystal was the meaning of the word Beautiful. She was beautiful in every sense of the word. She was 5'4 and in Grade 11. She also had dimples every time she grinned, smiled or laugh.
"OMG! What made your mum come here?" Manny said still so shocked.
"Well New York City wasn't the best place for my party animal style." Crystal said look down while shifting her weight to one foot to the other.
"Oh well Mr. Raditch sent you to lunch?" Manny said and her face went back to happen.
"Yeah he did" Crystal said
"Well um you can meet my crew so when you come here tomorrow you will at least know some ppl. "Manny said
"Okay!" said Crystal grinning and her dimples were showing.
(After School detention) Monday October 25th 2004 3:05
"Okay at 5:00 I will come back here to dismiss you. Until then you will sit and do nothing except thinking about your behavior in my class today." Mrs.Linion (Lee-Nee-On) said the teacher who put Ellie and Spinner in detention.
DegrassiFreak2- I will be continuing the story and thanks for saying that at least some ppl appreciate my work!
Oxnard- I think I will do that it will add some fights to my story. So thanks for the Idea.
Manny was walking down the halls to get to her lunch period she was getting their late as usual. She was walking at a fast pace not letting anything get in her way. Just then a Voice called her.
"Manuela wait up!" the voice screamed
"If you have anything to say to me than walk up to me and say it" Manny said in a Snotty tone
"Do you talk to everyone like that or just me?" The voice said
"You know what? You better-"Manny was turning around to say to the person what she felt but she saw the voice and stopped talking. Her mouth dropped and her eyes got big.
"Manuela where are your manners" the person said Just then the person ran up to Manny and hugged her.
"Crystal what are you doing here!?" Manny said with such excitement.
"Oh just checking the school out you know. After all I will be going here from now on" Crystal said with a cheek to cheek smile.
Crystal Mendez. She has long wavy dark chocolate brown hair. She has big hazel eyes and a beauty mark on the top of her right cheek. She had very long eyelashes and thin yet thick eyebrows that were in perfect shape. She had a piercing in her right ear cartilage two holes on each ear and the mid ear thing that sticks out, also she had a piercing on her tongue and belly. She was wearing a black baby tee belly shirt and the collar was a half circle shape. On her shirt it said "It is cute how you think I 'm listening" in hot pink words and a little pink Bunny right next to the words with a smile on. She had medium coloured denim pants on. Crystal had black and pink Chuck Taylor's Converse sneakers on. Crystal was a party girl with some what of an attitude problem. But yet still people liked her. Crystal was the meaning of the word Beautiful. She was beautiful in every sense of the word. She was 5'4 and in Grade 11. She also had dimples every time she grinned, smiled or laugh.
"OMG! What made your mum come here?" Manny said still so shocked.
"Well New York City wasn't the best place for my party animal style." Crystal said look down while shifting her weight to one foot to the other.
"Oh well Mr. Raditch sent you to lunch?" Manny said and her face went back to happen.
"Yeah he did" Crystal said
"Well um you can meet my crew so when you come here tomorrow you will at least know some ppl. "Manny said
"Okay!" said Crystal grinning and her dimples were showing.
(After School detention) Monday October 25th 2004 3:05
"Okay at 5:00 I will come back here to dismiss you. Until then you will sit and do nothing except thinking about your behavior in my class today." Mrs.Linion (Lee-Nee-On) said the teacher who put Ellie and Spinner in detention.