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Robert swung open the door of Ray and Debra's house. Marie grabbed him. "Oh good Robbie, you're back! Did you get the gift? Good. Now hurry up and hide, Raymond will be back any minute! We're all going to jump out, and say, 'Congratulations! Surprise!' Okay? Come on, Robbie! Move it! Get behind the sofa, quick!" Marie commanded. Robert muttered a couple curse words under his breath as he squatted behind the sofa. "Everybody loves Raymond, but not for long!" Robert whispered as he patted the gun in his pocket.
Suddenly the door opened. It was Ray and Debra, what do you know. "Surprise! Congratulations!" Marie, Frank, Robert, and the kids screamed as they hopped out from their hiding places. "Oh wow! This is great!" Ray exclaimed. "Oh wow, this is great," Robert mimicked Raymond in a high- pitched, squeaky, sissy voice.
"I made some pancakes for you, dear," Marie said, bringing in a steaming hot plate from the kitchen. "Oh, we just ate," Debra said. "Oh, that's not food. Come Raymond dear, eat," Marie replied. Debra gave Marie a dirty look. Frank handed Ray a bag of golf clubs and patted his son's back. "Here son. Good job with your column," Frank said. "We made cards for you, Daddy!" Allie and the twins said simultaneously. "Awww, thanks kids," Ray said. Robert snorted. "You're just jealous of me!" Ray said as he stuck out his tongue at his big brother. "Why would I be jealous of a dead guy?" Robert mumbled. "What?" "Nothing. Ray, come out here for my present," Robert said. The two brothers headed out the back door. "Okay," Raymond said as he followed. "This is it!" Robert thought.
Disclaimer: I don't own any characters in my story.
Robert swung open the door of Ray and Debra's house. Marie grabbed him. "Oh good Robbie, you're back! Did you get the gift? Good. Now hurry up and hide, Raymond will be back any minute! We're all going to jump out, and say, 'Congratulations! Surprise!' Okay? Come on, Robbie! Move it! Get behind the sofa, quick!" Marie commanded. Robert muttered a couple curse words under his breath as he squatted behind the sofa. "Everybody loves Raymond, but not for long!" Robert whispered as he patted the gun in his pocket.
Suddenly the door opened. It was Ray and Debra, what do you know. "Surprise! Congratulations!" Marie, Frank, Robert, and the kids screamed as they hopped out from their hiding places. "Oh wow! This is great!" Ray exclaimed. "Oh wow, this is great," Robert mimicked Raymond in a high- pitched, squeaky, sissy voice.
"I made some pancakes for you, dear," Marie said, bringing in a steaming hot plate from the kitchen. "Oh, we just ate," Debra said. "Oh, that's not food. Come Raymond dear, eat," Marie replied. Debra gave Marie a dirty look. Frank handed Ray a bag of golf clubs and patted his son's back. "Here son. Good job with your column," Frank said. "We made cards for you, Daddy!" Allie and the twins said simultaneously. "Awww, thanks kids," Ray said. Robert snorted. "You're just jealous of me!" Ray said as he stuck out his tongue at his big brother. "Why would I be jealous of a dead guy?" Robert mumbled. "What?" "Nothing. Ray, come out here for my present," Robert said. The two brothers headed out the back door. "Okay," Raymond said as he followed. "This is it!" Robert thought.