Authors note: I did this again to make it easier to read.

Chapter 3

Lily came round into the great hall, followed by her flock of friends. They walked over to the Gryffindor table. The turned sat in the seats next to the boys. Lily began to seethe. But she kept cool calm and collected, as the sorting was about to start.

The hat was placed on the stool and began to sing:

"Four people

Four houses

Four founders

Each a person

In ones own right.

Bravery and determination

Of the Great Godric Gryffindor

Never will give up

Cunning and Sly

The Snake of Slytherin

Planning and plotting

Thought not to be clever

But loyal none the less

The great Helga Huffelpuff.

The cleverest of them all

A wise woman true seer

called Rowena Ravenclaw

Though separate houses

We all are one

One race of humans

We must stick together

And not fight

We are all one school'

This shocked a lot of the people, as the hat usually rhymed, the usual clapping followed and the fist years trundled up.

"When I call you name, come and place the hat on your head" Came Professor McGonagalls voice over all of the people.

"Andrews Paul"

Gryffindor"

Bert Penolpe "

"Ravenclaw"

Lily and her friends tuned out at this time. Lily sat and studied her nails.

Callian Mary"

"Huffelpuff"

"Dernet Samuel"

"Slytherin"

"Far John"

"Huffelpuff,"

"Gewte Sarah"

"Ravenclaw"

"Lonta Vera"

"Slytherin,"

To Lily's shock:

"Malfoy Ignus"

"Gryffindor"

This shocked Lily, as the Malfoys were known for the "Pure Blood" nonsense. The Malfoys always called Lily a mud blood.

She blocked out the rest of the sorting to look at James and Sirius.

James was tallish with untameable deep brown almost black hair and a cocky grin. His body was quite muscular after so much quidditch training. His eyes quite studious, a deep hazel colour behind circular glasses. His hair was so messy all the time he had tried everything to stop it moving around, well in first year he did. He then just messed it up on purpose. But he had grown up lot.

Sirius was tall and had a slow sexy smile and when he wanted a slow sexy drawl. He had sexy blue eyes framed by a few dark eyelashes. His body was so muscular because he constantly worked out and played quidditch. His hair was just over his eyes and a dark brown hair. He was known as the 'ladies man'

She wondered why he had been called that. Okay He liked to chat girls up but she knew he was still a virgin because they had got quite close over the last few years. But she new he was a good person. He just was a bit mad. Okay very Mad.

Remus Lupin was also quite muscular but this was because of a different reason. He couldn't play his favourite sport quidditch because of it and he hated his curse. He had long dark blonde hair gently tied back in a ponytail and gentle blue eyes that reminded Lily of the beach.

Peter was a fat round little boy and hadn't got any muscles. He had a slight mop of browny blond hair that came down to his ears which were as pasty as his face. He had a look of a rat.

She hadn't noticed that the plates in front of her had filled up magnificently. She stared at the food. Plates of potatoes: roast, new potatoes oozing with butter, creamy mash potatoes, boiled potatoes and baked ones. There was many meats: pork lamb beef chicken and turky. The house elves had out done them sleves.

"Hey Lily have you tried this?" Becca Shouted, pointing at the tomato soup.

"NO I will though. Thank you."

Her friends were all pretty.

Anna was medium height about 5ft4 with dark hair that waved and ended around her chin. Her sheet white face laced with few freckles over the bridge of her nose. The only colour was her eyes. She had deep blue eyes and a nice bust, her legs were very long.

Becca was small and quite round, not fat but in a sweet way. She had a heart shaped face with diamond eyes. Her skin was a rosy pink and her hair a dark blonde. Her lips were a deep pink. She wore quite baggy tops so no- one knew about her bust.

Gemma was tall and had a dark brown hair. Her face was slightly tanned and her hair came down to her shoulders where it flicked out. Her eyes were brown. She wore tight tops to show off her bust. She was the prettiest and many of the guys liked her.

Phoebe was medium height about the same as Anna. Her hair was short.(if you have ever seen the new charmed Phoebes hair at the moment) and looked sweet. Her face was lightly browned and her eyes chocolate pools. She wasn't fat she showed off her bust sometimes but not often.

Lily was tall, not as tall as her friends had rounded hips and nice curves. Her hair was so long it came down to her waist and a deep red, she tied it up in a bun most of the time. Her eyes were sparkling emerald almonds set in her head she was fond of these eyes and new that they made her look very clever, not that she needed to look clever.

Lily heard fragments of a conversation with her friends. But was not really paying much attention.

She heard someone say

"Sniverless, it has to be sniverless"

"Not so loud" said some one else.

Lily flicked her wand towards them and performed a charm to make it louder so only she could hear.

"okay I think we should hex him with the confudius charm and then hit him with the tickling one"

"And then hang him upside down from the ceiling."

"Ok cool we will do it after dinner in the hallway. You know as well as I do that he and his friends pig out for ages. We will wait."

This enraged Lily as she hated it when the marauders beat up Snape for no reason. Yea he was a mean and slimy git but he didn't deserve that.

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I did it again.

I hope his is easier to read. Read my next chapter please.

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