For ladyvirgo, in response to her review:
First of all, I'd really rather not get into an argument with you because I read your bio and according to it, you're only twelve. I just turned forty- four in January, though must people would say I act like I'm twelve – not the point. I want to thank you for taking the time to review my story, thus far only one chapter, but your conclusion was much appreciated. As for the rest of your review – no, my story has nothing to do with the Bakers – I never said it would. Baker's dozen is a term used by bakers (i.e. cake makers, bread bakers, those kinds of bakers) meaning 13, and this story is about my husband and I – we have thirteen children. Perhaps you're right; maybe I should put my story on FictionPress, but it isn't your business. I will put it where I want to. And school – well, I don't go there anymore, but no, there were no Akiras there, and I can't recall any of my kids ever making reference to a student named Akira at their schools. But I have an almost-six-year-old daughter named Akira. I named her that. She is a real person. I suppose you'll have something to say about my youngest daughter's name as well – her name is Thyra Renée – my husband picked it out. And Tommi – she was named after my favorite uncle Tommy who died when I was a kid. I apologize if my attraction to unique names offends you – if so, please discontinue reading my story. You may die of a heart attack when you read that my son's ex-girlfriend's name is Katarina.
First of all, I'd really rather not get into an argument with you because I read your bio and according to it, you're only twelve. I just turned forty- four in January, though must people would say I act like I'm twelve – not the point. I want to thank you for taking the time to review my story, thus far only one chapter, but your conclusion was much appreciated. As for the rest of your review – no, my story has nothing to do with the Bakers – I never said it would. Baker's dozen is a term used by bakers (i.e. cake makers, bread bakers, those kinds of bakers) meaning 13, and this story is about my husband and I – we have thirteen children. Perhaps you're right; maybe I should put my story on FictionPress, but it isn't your business. I will put it where I want to. And school – well, I don't go there anymore, but no, there were no Akiras there, and I can't recall any of my kids ever making reference to a student named Akira at their schools. But I have an almost-six-year-old daughter named Akira. I named her that. She is a real person. I suppose you'll have something to say about my youngest daughter's name as well – her name is Thyra Renée – my husband picked it out. And Tommi – she was named after my favorite uncle Tommy who died when I was a kid. I apologize if my attraction to unique names offends you – if so, please discontinue reading my story. You may die of a heart attack when you read that my son's ex-girlfriend's name is Katarina.